I barely ever see other Scouts nowadays. And I only ever see Proto Gal Scouts, never Advanced or Standard.

I'm not so sure that Gal Scouts are still the most popular either.

As before, please give thoughts and feedback. I'm gonna write a bit more, but I thought I'd split the posts up so you wouldn't have to read a massive text wall. Enjoy!


Azel despaired over the three copper coins that rested heavily in the palm of his hand: it would only cover the dues of one person, with none left over to buy bread. Mok hadnGÇÖt given him an equal cut of the money from last nightGÇÖs events.

You were ******* useless. I said to get the man first, and you go and get friendly with his *****. What were you thinking? Azel had developed a bruise where Mok had thrusted the four measly coins into his chest. Remembering the icy glare Jaman, who was bruised and bloodied from the manGÇÖs fist, had pierced him with, Azel reproached himself over his blunder.

I donGÇÖt know, Azel had thought silently. I donGÇÖt know. I was scared.

Woe was written all over CaraGÇÖs face, who stood gazing up at Azel. She knew something was wrong from his expression. Looking at CaraGÇÖs tear-filled eyes, AzelGÇÖs heart melted for the billionth time: she was too innocent for this world.

Gently taking CaraGÇÖs tiny right hand in his left, Azel turned it palm-upwards; even Azel, who himself was small, dwarfed her. Looking into her unfathomably bottomless blue eyes, the coins clinked into her hand.

GÇÿBig brother Azi, you donGÇÖtGǪ ButGǪGÇÖ Cara trailed, shaking her head. Despite her age, she knew what would happen to Azel if he couldnGÇÖt pay his dues to Scorpion.

GÇÿI donGÇÖt care what happens to me. All I care about is keeping you safe, Cara. You remember that, ok?GÇÖ Azel said. Cara tightly pressed her lips together. GÇÿOk?GÇÖ Almost imperceptively, she nodded her head, but she wasnGÇÖt looking at him: she was looking behind him. A chill spread over Azel when a hushed silence fell over the other guild members. Anxiously turning, he saw Scorpion march into the room, one side of which the guild runts hurriedly gathered at. Azel led Cara to join them.

Pls give feedback. It really makes me feel sad when I don't know what people think. I won't know if what I'm doing is any good. I won't know what needs improving.

I barely ever see other Scouts nowadays. And I only ever see Proto Gal Scouts, never Advanced or Standard.

I'm not so sure that Gal Scouts are still the most popular either.

If you don't mind, I'd like to copy and paste your work into a text format for reading. I will then give you a thorough amount of feedback.
Edit: Also then I can forward to my spouse to get here views on it as well. She has a very good eye for writing.

Updating the firmware for the ps4 now. Thinking about buggin moody a little for some planetside

I like how you say it so casually.

Many of us have never even had the opportunity to talk to him.

I barely ever see other Scouts nowadays. And I only ever see Proto Gal Scouts, never Advanced or Standard.

I'm not so sure that Gal Scouts are still the most popular either.

Lmfao... Wow. Like, you guys have seriously graduated to straight copper foil hattery, man. This is a stretch even for The Barbershop.

So, Sgt Kirk, Arkena Wrynspire, Cat Merc, and I are all the same person, huh..? That is rich. Yeah, we all started within 12 minutes of each other because - oh my god - we were just soooo excited to get into Dust 514 and jump at the opportunity to finally play the game..... on Tranquility. Yanno, because January 10th was, if memory serves, the day Dust 514 went over to the live server and it was the final character wipe. -ANY- closed beta veteran started around that time and a lot of us (including #TeamGreen) marked the date on our calender (despite having little to no interaction with each other at that time).

And Shotty, please get off the whole "Omg he was pro BAR and now he's not wth". People's opinions change and I already explained - in depth - my standpoint on why I felt the way I did at the time (if you remember it had to do with the fact that Assault Rifles are designed for Gallentean high damage and Breach was supposed to emulate Rail Rifles which... had high range). Again, if the BAR was supposed to be balanced in accordance with design philosophy of both high damage (AR) and high range (RR) it should have had -EXCRUCIATING- hip-fire recoil as a result. But I digress.

You guys seriously need to call an ambulance about those paint chips in your stomachs. That or lay off the aspartame.

Lmfao... Wow. Like, you guys have seriously graduated to straight copper foil hattery, man. This is a stretch even for The Barbershop.

So, Sgt Kirk, Arkena Wrynspire, Cat Merc, and I are all the same person, huh..? That is rich. Yeah, we all started within 12 minutes of each other because - oh my god - we were just soooo excited to get into Dust 514 and jump at the opportunity to finally play the game..... on Tranquility. Yanno, because January 10th was, if memory serves, the day Dust 514 went over to the live server and it was the final character wipe. -ANY- closed beta veteran started around that time and a lot of us (including #TeamGreen) marked the date on our calender (despite having little to no interaction with each other at that time).

And Shotty, please get off the whole "Omg he was pro BAR and now he's not wth". People's opinions change and I already explained - in depth - my standpoint on why I felt the way I did at the time (if you remember it had to do with the fact that Assault Rifles are designed for Gallentean high damage and Breach was supposed to emulate Rail Rifles which... had high range). Again, if the BAR was supposed to be balanced in accordance with design philosophy of both high damage (AR) and high range (RR) it should have had -EXCRUCIATING- hip-fire recoil as a result. But I digress.

You guys seriously need to call an ambulance about those paint chips in your stomachs. That or lay off the aspartame.

Into a text format...? What does that mean? I take it you don't mean text-speak? (Posting privileges removed) Are you saying that you're going to put it into a word document? Or are you saying that you need to wait till I write more?

Yes WordGǪ and I just want to ask permission before I do. Aslo wanted to be sure you were okay with my spousal unit reading it. Since you posted to the forums you probably don't mind but you writers can be a temperamental lot

I said id never come back to this barren wasteland but damn that was hilarious on so many levels.

Thanks Aeon for linking this, I needed a good laugh today.

o7

I like how you say it so casually.

Many of us have never even had the opportunity to talk to him.

You're replying to yourself.

Ill have to log in to all my alts and pretend to have a full on all out internet make out session or just a chat with my self one day to troll everyone :P

Way more fun when you argue with yourselfGǪ trust me I know

I said id never come back to this barren wasteland but damn that was hilarious on so many levels.

Thanks Aeon for linking this, I needed a good laugh today.

o7

Lmfao... Wow. Like, you guys have seriously graduated to straight copper foil hattery, man. This is a stretch even for The Barbershop.

So, Sgt Kirk, Arkena Wrynspire, Cat Merc, and I are all the same person, huh..? That is rich. Yeah, we all started within 12 minutes of each other because - oh my god - we were just soooo excited to get into Dust 514 and jump at the opportunity to finally play the game..... on Tranquility. Yanno, because January 10th was, if memory serves, the day Dust 514 went over to the live server and it was the final character wipe. -ANY- closed beta veteran started around that time and a lot of us (including #TeamGreen) marked the date on our calender (despite having little to no interaction with each other at that time).

And Shotty, please get off the whole "Omg he was pro BAR and now he's not wth". People's opinions change and I already explained - in depth - my standpoint on why I felt the way I did at the time (if you remember it had to do with the fact that Assault Rifles are designed for Gallentean high damage and Breach was supposed to emulate Rail Rifles which... had high range). Again, if the BAR was supposed to be balanced in accordance with design philosophy of both high damage (AR) and high range (RR) it should have had -EXCRUCIATING- hip-fire recoil as a result. But I digress.

You guys seriously need to call an ambulance about those paint chips in your stomachs. That or lay off the aspartame.

Musturd and I are a tag-team the likes of which I've never seen before. I think it's rather symbolic that he got 1 more kill than I did.

Perhaps it's also symbolic that I died 8 times less though.

He's just messing around, running base HP with Myo's and a Flaylock, but even then he's good.

LMFAO That's so many pages back. Did Cat Merc link you to it?

You do know that there are inside jokes about musturd right? Like his KDR in his matches being bad, somebody is playing for him. I don't really think that, and I know he most likely doesn't care Quite being so butthurt about trolls.