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Xavier Hastings
ZionTCD Legacy Rising
246
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Posted - 2013.04.02 22:49:00 -
[811] - Quote
[OOC]Please forgive my absence, everyone. At least you all have been somewhat busy...
All right, time to unleash my inner Xavier...[/OOC]
Failure. Failure. The mission was completely unsuccessful. Fate herself even showed, yet he was not amazed. He did not even have the need to blink his old, wise eyes. Se froze time in its place, and even spoke to him, and still, he was not fazed. What a strong man. A strong man of will. Dare say a stubborn man. But, he tried to do what was right. For his people. For himself. And Xavier respected this. The populace of Lucia was Xavier's life. His soul. His essence. The thought that he knew they were free, and safe, empowered him. The power he had over them, strengthened him. In fact, he could not tell any more what he desired the most, power, or the joy of freedom. Xavier was confused. Nexhawk was not. This is how the respect was won.
The man simply turned, and walked away. Not very far, mind, just to, Xavier presumed, the royal stables. What was the color? Take a guess? Crimson! Yes, crimson! The stables were much more fine then that, though. The crimson flowers Xavier had seen on his walk to the palace were quite abundant, and were clinging gracefully to the beam that supported the stable. Many strange symbols were engraved on the stable, except they moved. They seemed to all swirl in a clockwise direction, and at the same pace. They glowed with a, wait for it, crimson hue, as if warding off some evil.
The beasts were more beautiful then the stables, however. At first glace, all you saw were impossibly large eggs. The eggs were surprising not crimson, but were a pure white with black spots surrounding it. Then the magic happened. The beasts could hatch at will, and it was extraordinary! The shells would crack fiercely, as if it had a purpose. Crack. Crack. Crack. Strange crimson hues would emit from these crevices, which then would overtake the whole egg. After a few seconds, the lights would subside, and a large, majestic bird would appear in its place, the egg not to be seen. It seemed to be made of pure fire (which was in a visibly recognizable shape of a very large bird). The fire on the bird was ever flowing, and it was so detailed and precise that you could see every single feather. It was a surprise that Nexhawk did not get burned.
Nexhawk spoke of going to the enemy, and asked if Xavier would like to join him.
"Nay, comrade. I can not go to the heart of the beast. It would not be wise with the book," he thumped it twice, "and the very different views of my own."
Nexhawk nodded to him, and appeared to be wanting to make his bird sour.
"Remember, Nexhawk, the carriage cannot be driven if the conductor is dead. Heed this warning, Nexhawk, and may you persuade them to join The Cause."
[OOC]Remember to drop what you think your character alignment would be. So far we have: Collective (I think): True Neutral
Alixenus: You mentioned something about be Neutral-Good, with a little Lawful mixed in, so I'll put you in the Lawful-Neutral category.
Xavier: He is most likely Chaotic Good.
Is there anyone else I missed? Remember, Character Alignmentsaid your character, not hinder them.
[/OOC] |
Sandromin Hes
Sand Mercenary Corps Inc.
223
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Posted - 2013.04.02 23:02:00 -
[812] - Quote
Xavier Hastings wrote:[OOC]Please forgive my absence, everyone. At least you all have been somewhat busy... All right, time to unleash my inner Xavier...[/OOC] Failure. Failure. The mission was completely unsuccessful. Fate herself even showed, yet he was not amazed. He did not even have the need to blink his old, wise eyes. Se froze time in its place, and even spoke to him, and still, he was not fazed. What a strong man. A strong man of will. Dare say a stubborn man. But, he tried to do what was right. For his people. For himself. And Xavier respected this. The populace of Lucia was Xavier's life. His soul. His essence. The thought that he knew they were free, and safe, empowered him. The power he had over them, strengthened him. In fact, he could not tell any more what he desired the most, power, or the joy of freedom. Xavier was confused. Nexhawk was not. This is how the respect was won. The man simply turned, and walked away. Not very far, mind, just to, Xavier presumed, the royal stables. What was the color? Take a guess? Crimson! Yes, crimson! The stables were much more fine then that, though. The crimson flowers Xavier had seen on his walk to the palace were quite abundant, and were clinging gracefully to the beam that supported the stable. Many strange symbols were engraved on the stable, except they moved. They seemed to all swirl in a clockwise direction, and at the same pace. They glowed with a, wait for it, crimson hue, as if warding off some evil. The beasts were more beautiful then the stables, however. At first glace, all you saw were impossibly large eggs. The eggs were surprising not crimson, but were a pure white with black spots surrounding it. Then the magic happened. The beasts could hatch at will, and it was extraordinary! The shells would crack fiercely, as if it had a purpose. Crack. Crack. Crack. Strange crimson hues would emit from these crevices, which then would overtake the whole egg. After a few seconds, the lights would subside, and a large, majestic bird would appear in its place, the egg not to be seen. It seemed to be made of pure fire (which was in a visibly recognizable shape of a very large bird). The fire on the bird was ever flowing, and it was so detailed and precise that you could see every single feather. It was a surprise that Nexhawk did not get burned. Nexhawk spoke of going to the enemy, and asked if Xavier would like to join him. "Nay, comrade. I can not go to the heart of the beast. It would not be wise with the book," he thumped it twice, "and the very different views of my own." Nexhawk nodded to him, and appeared to be wanting to make his bird sour. "Remember, Nexhawk, the carriage cannot be driven if the conductor is dead. Heed this warning, Nexhawk, and may you persuade them to join The Cause." [OOC]Remember to drop what you think your character alignment would be. So far we have: Collective (I think): True NeutralAlixenus: You mentioned something about be Neutral-Good, with a little Lawful mixed in, so I'll put you in the Lawful-Neutral category. Xavier: He is most likely Chaotic Good. Is there anyone else I missed? Remember, Character Alignmentsaid your character, not hinder them. [/OOC]
Neutral Good for Sandromin.
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Thanatos 716
Isuuaya Tactical Caldari State
10
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Posted - 2013.04.02 23:15:00 -
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I would say Thanatos sways between lawful and chaotic good. I guess it depends. Maybe someone can point me in the right direction. I see Thanatos as one who prefers the laws of mortals over the laws of the gods. He sees that there is a difference between what is lawful and what is oppressive. He won't hesitate to break a law (especially an oppressive one)if it is for the greater good. He isn't Superman so he's not afraid to get his hands dirty if need be. This all changes as the character progresses. |
Xavier Hastings
ZionTCD Legacy Rising
246
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Posted - 2013.04.02 23:19:00 -
[814] - Quote
Thanatos 716 wrote:I would say Thanatos sways between lawful and chaotic good. I guess it depends. Maybe someone can point me in the right direction. I see Thanatos as one who prefers the laws of mortals over the laws of the gods. He sees that there is a difference between what is lawful and what is oppressive. He won't hesitate to break a law (especially an oppressive one)if it is for the greater good. He isn't Superman so he's not afraid to get his hands dirty if need be. This all changes as the character progresses. I would say Chaotic Good or Chaotic Neutral myself.
Also, Sandromin, the post is updated. You might also want to update the index a little, or provide a short summary of what has already happened, since this is 40 pages and all. |
Ner'Zul Nexhawk
Talos Incorporated
186
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Posted - 2013.04.02 23:21:00 -
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Xavier Hastings wrote:[OOC]Please forgive my absence, everyone. At least you all have been somewhat busy... All right, time to unleash my inner Xavier...[/OOC] Failure. Failure. The mission was completely unsuccessful. Fate herself even showed, yet he was not amazed. He did not even have the need to blink his old, wise eyes. Se froze time in its place, and even spoke to him, and still, he was not fazed. What a strong man. A strong man of will. Dare say a stubborn man. But, he tried to do what was right. For his people. For himself. And Xavier respected this. The populace of Lucia was Xavier's life. His soul. His essence. The thought that he knew they were free, and safe, empowered him. The power he had over them, strengthened him. In fact, he could not tell any more what he desired the most, power, or the joy of freedom. Xavier was confused. Nexhawk was not. This is how the respect was won. The man simply turned, and walked away. Not very far, mind, just to, Xavier presumed, the royal stables. What was the color? Take a guess? Crimson! Yes, crimson! The stables were much more fine then that, though. The crimson flowers Xavier had seen on his walk to the palace were quite abundant, and were clinging gracefully to the beam that supported the stable. Many strange symbols were engraved on the stable, except they moved. They seemed to all swirl in a clockwise direction, and at the same pace. They glowed with a, wait for it, crimson hue, as if warding off some evil. The beasts were more beautiful then the stables, however. At first glace, all you saw were impossibly large eggs. The eggs were surprising not crimson, but were a pure white with black spots surrounding it. Then the magic happened. The beasts could hatch at will, and it was extraordinary! The shells would crack fiercely, as if it had a purpose. Crack. Crack. Crack. Strange crimson hues would emit from these crevices, which then would overtake the whole egg. After a few seconds, the lights would subside, and a large, majestic bird would appear in its place, the egg not to be seen. It seemed to be made of pure fire (which was in a visibly recognizable shape of a very large bird). The fire on the bird was ever flowing, and it was so detailed and precise that you could see every single feather. It was a surprise that Nexhawk did not get burned. Nexhawk spoke of going to the enemy, and asked if Xavier would like to join him. "Nay, comrade. I can not go to the heart of the beast. It would not be wise with the book," he thumped it twice, "and the very different views of my own." Nexhawk nodded to him, and appeared to be wanting to make his bird sour. "Remember, Nexhawk, the carriage cannot be driven if the conductor is dead. Heed this warning, Nexhawk, and may you persuade them to join The Cause." [OOC]Remember to drop what you think your character alignment would be. So far we have: Collective (I think): True NeutralAlixenus: You mentioned something about be Neutral-Good, with a little Lawful mixed in, so I'll put you in the Lawful-Neutral category. Xavier: He is most likely Chaotic Good. Is there anyone else I missed? Remember, Character Alignmentsaid your character, not hinder them. [/OOC]
//OOC: EDIT: Read again through the description and changed my mind. I believe Nexhawk is close to Neutral Good, but he is extremely concerned about the Ashborn's fate overall, so we'll see where that leads him further. //End of OOC\\
Nexhawk was ready to lift in the air when something hit him. I cannot let go. Not this time, not that the book has been figuratively given into my hands. This is it, the chance to redeem my people! He addressed the Dwarf politely.
"While our intentions might not line up right now, I believe your presence in this capital of Diyad will be most crucial. You must understand Nak'Sora's motives better than anyone else, and hence your words will have the best chance of talking sense into the other leaders. I clearly understand the importance of the book you are holding, and I certainly value your desire to bring it to Spodium."
A new fire sparked in Nexhawk's eyes, a flame of determination. "How about this: for the duration or our journey to Diyad, I will offer my ultimate and utmost protection for you and the Dark Arcanum. Basically, this means that anyone other than you, Xavier, will be able to put his hands on the book over my corpse. And trust me when I say," a smirk appeared on his face, "that no demigod on Praecantaria has ever fallen to mortal weapons or something other than pure magic. I do not plan to break this tendency. So, what do you say now?" |
Xavier Hastings
ZionTCD Legacy Rising
246
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Posted - 2013.04.02 23:57:00 -
[816] - Quote
Ner'Zul Nexhawk wrote://OOC: EDIT: Read again through the description and changed my mind. I believe Nexhawk is close to Neutral Good, but he is extremely concerned about the Ashborn's fate overall, so we'll see where that leads him further. //End of OOC\\
Nexhawk was ready to lift in the air when something hit him. I cannot let go. Not this time, not that the book has been figuratively given into my hands. This is it, the chance to redeem my people! He addressed the Dwarf politely.
"While our intentions might not line up right now, I believe your presence in this capital of Diyad will be most crucial. You must understand Nak'Sora's motives better than anyone else, and hence your words will have the best chance of talking sense into the other leaders. I clearly understand the importance of the book you are holding, and I certainly value your desire to bring it to Spodium."
A new fire sparked in Nexhawk's eyes, a flame of determination. "How about this: for the duration or our journey to Diyad, I will offer my ultimate and utmost protection for you and the Dark Arcanum. Basically, this means that anyone other than you, Xavier, will be able to put his hands on the book solely over my corpse. And trust me when I say," a smirk appeared on his face, "that no demigod on Praecantaria has ever fallen to mortal weapons or something other than pure magic. I do not plan to break this tendency. So, what do you say now?" Xavier looks to Fate, the violet mist still shrouding the air and keeping the serfs frozen.
Go. It will be in our benefit if others hear the truth. You have my blessing.
"Very well. Ha! The blessing of Fate and a demigod? Many men do not have as great of fortune as I!"
He eyes the white eggs in the stables. The were moving back and forth slightly, all in unison.
"But first, could you please tell me how to ride one of those?" |
Sandromin Hes
Sand Mercenary Corps Inc.
223
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Posted - 2013.04.03 00:45:00 -
[817] - Quote
At that moment, as Sandromin sat in the airship, waiting for the landing, he felt it. Something he found similar. It was akin to his own senses. As he felt it, the colors around him were changing in hue; he saw a slight yellow envelope everything. It was in fact too warm. Noticeably, it began to turn orange, and it was even at the point where Sandromin had to stop using the vision for a moment due to the numbing effects of this orange hue.
As he looked back up, he saw someone strange. Of a completely different race, he saw a blazing figure. His aura was fluctuating between red and orange, and his skin, if you could call it that, was cracked throughout, showing streaks of orange magma. His body was overall of a black obsidian color, and Sandromin instantly knew he was of the Pyromancers.
It was then that he decided to pursue the stranger, if just to simply learn his name. So Sandromin stood and followed him. Freedom saw it all... the training of Sandromin had just begun.
Alihes was waiting for the league to arrive; it seemed like eternity. So, while he waited, he decided to begin training for the upcoming adventures, starting with some swordsmanship lessons. His heightened reflexes and strength allowed him to start at the level of a Journeyman of the Sword's Guild.
It was within the walls of Arteum, and in particular the Guild of Thought, that Alihes begun the practice in the art of swordsmanship. He had found a Grandmaster of the art to train him. At first, the Grandmaster scoffed at his attempts to learn at his hands, stating that Alihes had no raw talent. But eventually, he relented and told Alihes to show him what he could already do; what he saw was something raw in its ability.
Because of this, the man decided to train Alihes within the hours they had. He spoke to him quite simply, yet with the air of a man well-experienced in his profession.
"No, like this; a jab should move with a punching force, not with a quick sweeping motion."
Facts such as these were all that he spoke of during this training. Eventually, Alihes had become a professional; he was able to hold his own in a duel with the master.
"You fight well, like I was in my youth; you hold the swiftness of a scimitar with great prowess. By the way, my name is Talm, of the Sword's Guild. But what I want to know is this: why do you need such skills of the sword?"
When Alihes told him of why he needed to know how to use one, and of the quest that lay before him, the Grandmaster simply nodded at the news.
"Ah, a great quest. Well, since my work and training with you are incomplete, and I haven't been on a quest of late, I shall join you!"
This news shocked Alihes. He did not expect a person who rebuked him at the beginning to join him in the end. But, as the people of Mediterra said, the more people, the merrier the feast. |
Thanatos 716
Isuuaya Tactical Caldari State
10
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Posted - 2013.04.03 01:01:00 -
[818] - Quote
OOC: Okay are we seriously forgetting the conversation Thanatos was engaging with Sandromin and Alixenus? |
Brutus Pyrus
Forty-Nine Fedayeen Minmatar Republic
10
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Posted - 2013.04.03 02:11:00 -
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(Ooc) well, I'm bored of Brutus not doing anything, so I'm gonna do a random story in the land go the dead. (Ooc)
The city was as it had been for years, dead. The people, the buildings, the ground, even the sky above was dead. Hardly anyone ventured near the city. Stories of the city drifted around the settlements. Yes the dead littered the streets, but stories of even more horrible monsters. Krathisis, the ravaged, a giant who had become so insane he walked among the ferals. Pyg, the butcher who ate the dead and the living. But the worst of all, was the shade. He or it was a human once. No one was sure where it had come from, all any one knew was that if it took off the black cloth mask that it wore...well no one really even knew what happened then. The beast didn't even leave bodies behind to trace. It would however, fold any clothes that had been worn, and neatly stack armor and or weapons by the pile. But shoes would be missing. But the shade didn't only attack humans, oh no any thing that walked into his domain was a target. The only way you'd know where that was, was if the clothing had been left out in the open. This of course was all just a story to keep children away from the city. But that didn't matter really...the entir land was a danger anyways... |
Ner'Zul Nexhawk
Talos Incorporated
186
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Posted - 2013.04.03 02:50:00 -
[820] - Quote
Thanatos 716 wrote:OOC: Okay are we seriously forgetting the conversation Thanatos was engaging with Sandromin and Alixenus?
//OOC: Well, apparently no one has any questions about your rebirth. Maybe we are already eager to land in Diyad. :D//End of OOC\\
Nexhawk heartily laughed at Xavier's question. "Phoenixes are creatures of incredible intelligence. Normally, the bird would form a mind link with its Ashborn master for the purpose of finding out destinations and performing moment-to-moment actions. Of course, the same can be reached by just speaking to a phoenix, but in situations like aerial battles thoughts prove to carry information faster than words that were derived from that thought. Since there will be no such link between you and the mount, your phoenix will just be told to follow mine, and you will not need to control it in any way. Just hold on tight."
He extended his hand and pointed at one of the eggs. Upon casting a spell, a small fireball darted to it and threw its shell open. In a glorious transformation, Xavier's phoenix erupted from its egg and looked curiously at its future rider. It than tilted its head and glanced at Nexhawk, as if listening to something inaudible to the Dwarf. The creature gawked, as if in agreement, and leaned to the ground, indicating that Xavier could mount it now. Nexhawk caught Xavier's nervous gaze and told him, "Don't worry about the flames; if you are a friend, they will not burn you. Now climb atop and tell me when you are ready to depart." _____________________________________________________________________________________________
Ignatus excused himself before Achyr and shifted his attention to the newcomer, whose magical abilities he has been probing since setting foot on the airship. "Sandromin, I presume? Your aura tells much about you, and I am quite intrigued to see that Sol'Krin bestowed the gift of the Ashflame upon one not from my kin. Would you be so kind to indulge me, however, the details of your... ascent, as well as the reasons Sol'Krin would give you these powers?" |
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Ner'Zul Nexhawk
Talos Incorporated
186
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Posted - 2013.04.03 02:53:00 -
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Brutus Pyrus wrote:(Ooc) well, I'm bored of Brutus not doing anything, so I'm gonna do a random story in the land go the dead. (Ooc)
//OOC: Well, why then did you jump from the Embershard? I think things are getting interesting on the airship. //End of OOC\\ |
Brutus Pyrus
Forty-Nine Fedayeen Minmatar Republic
10
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Posted - 2013.04.03 04:20:00 -
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Ner'Zul Nexhawk wrote:Brutus Pyrus wrote:(Ooc) well, I'm bored of Brutus not doing anything, so I'm gonna do a random story in the land go the dead. (Ooc)
//OOC: Well, why then did you jump from the Embershard? I think things are getting interesting on the airship. //End of OOC\\ (Ooc) Brutus doesn't do what Brutus does because he wants to...BRUTUS DOES WHAT BRUTUS DOES FOR THE SAKE OF BEING BRUTUS! Also, I don't think that Brutus would have been able to add any thing to the situation. (Ooc) |
Galrick M'kron
Sand Mercenary Corps Inc.
27
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Posted - 2013.04.03 04:54:00 -
[823] - Quote
OOC: The Collective is Lawful Neutral. They're highly structured, remember? |
BootStrapWill
R.I.f.t
7
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Posted - 2013.04.03 15:12:00 -
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OOC: //Sorry to interject with the story. I've been following along, but was a few days behind.
I know you all have fairly settled the matter of the Dark Arcanum, but I had a thought that might mesh the disparate stories a little better, without stepping on toes.
I see it as the DA was originally crafted by Fate as a tool for the Deathlord (capital D marking the master from the servants), and as such she imbued part of his soul into the book, along with the stolen soul of the betrayer.
This imbuing of combative souls granted the book exceptional power, and a knowledge of magic far surpassing any normal means, but also engendered an oily film of insanity as both aspects battled for eternity inside the tome.
If you'll pardon the Harry Potter reference, I see the book as a Horcrux of sorts. It functions as a part of the Deathlord's soul, and remains highly potent while disconnected from the source, but exponentially strengthens the Deathlord (AN) if/when he is reunited with the book.
This could play into the suggestions floating in Xavier's head, the book wants to be whole, even at the cost of the bearer's life to get back to the Deathlord.
Intrinsically tied to the fact that the book is a horcrux, as long as the book exists, the Deathlord will find a new host to infect with an aspect of himself, until he slowly rises to prominence again. This would give a purpose to the roving deathlords (lower case d to indicate the slave kings), as they are prowling around looking for their risen master, and performing nefarious feats as well to bide time.
As to meshing the history, the book was created by Fate, stolen by the Five, returned by the betrayer, and bound to the Deathlord. Deathlord fled Precantaeria for the other continent where he eventually died at the hands of the first hero under Freedom. Unfortunately for this hero, he was much like Isildur in his ignorance of the danger a mere "trinket" could pose, so he did not ensure that the book was destroyed. Since the book is part of the Deathlord, it willfully bonded itself to one of the hero's retinue, and became immaterial, hiding in the soul of the poor retainer. The book waited many long years before deciding the danger had passed and elected to re-materialize, crafting the idea that the scribes had "created" the book recently. The book influenced those present to decide that it would be best to spirit the book away, to keep it "safe", when in fact the book was having them move it away from the greatest danger present, the king. Thus it came to be hidden on the logipriest island long ago, and it slumbered while awaiting the rise of the true host, the next great AN.
I am not sure if this conflicts with any of the established lore, this is just what I took from reading the different origins of the book. After all, as was stated before, history is written by the victors, and in this particular instance, the real victor has been the book for an unknown length of time.
As I am not a contributing author to the world, take my suggestions with a ton of salt. I figured this would blend the two stories, and posit that the book has a malicious will of it's own, when not being directed externally by Fate to be docile. (Reason for fluctuating insanity for Xavier)
Also, everyone's story here is awesome. I would definitely pay to read your work in hard-back format. //End OOC |
Brutus Pyrus
Forty-Nine Fedayeen Minmatar Republic
10
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Posted - 2013.04.03 15:14:00 -
[825] - Quote
BootStrapWill wrote:OOC: //Sorry to interject with the story. I've been following along, but was a few days behind.
I know you all have fairly settled the matter of the Dark Arcanum, but I had a thought that might mesh the disparate stories a little better, without stepping on toes.
I see it as the DA was originally crafted by Fate as a tool for the Deathlord (capital D marking the master from the servants), and as such she imbued part of his soul into the book, along with the stolen soul of the betrayer.
This imbuing of combative souls granted the book exceptional power, and a knowledge of magic far surpassing any normal means, but also engendered an oily film of insanity as both aspects battled for eternity inside the tome.
If you'll pardon the Harry Potter reference, I see the book as a Horcrux of sorts. It functions as a part of the Deathlord's soul, and remains highly potent while disconnected from the source, but exponentially strengthens the Deathlord (AN) if/when he is reunited with the book.
This could play into the suggestions floating in Xavier's head, the book wants to be whole, even at the cost of the bearer's life to get back to the Deathlord.
Intrinsically tied to the fact that the book is a horcrux, as long as the book exists, the Deathlord will find a new host to infect with an aspect of himself, until he slowly rises to prominence again. This would give a purpose to the roving deathlords (lower case d to indicate the slave kings), as they are prowling around looking for their risen master, and performing nefarious feats as well to bide time.
As to meshing the history, the book was created by Fate, stolen by the Five, returned by the betrayer, and bound to the Deathlord. Deathlord fled Precantaeria for the other continent where he eventually died at the hands of the first hero under Freedom. Unfortunately for this hero, he was much like Isildur in his ignorance of the danger a mere "trinket" could pose, so he did not ensure that the book was destroyed. Since the book is part of the Deathlord, it willfully bonded itself to one of the hero's retinue, and became immaterial, hiding in the soul of the poor retainer. The book waited many long years before deciding the danger had passed and elected to re-materialize, crafting the idea that the scribes had "created" the book recently. The book influenced those present to decide that it would be best to spirit the book away, to keep it "safe", when in fact the book was having them move it away from the greatest danger present, the king. Thus it came to be hidden on the logipriest island long ago, and it slumbered while awaiting the rise of the true host, the next great AN.
I am not sure if this conflicts with any of the established lore, this is just what I took from reading the different origins of the book. After all, as was stated before, history is written by the victors, and in this particular instance, the real victor has been the book for an unknown length of time.
As I am not a contributing author to the world, take my suggestions with a ton of salt.
Also, everyone's story here is awesome. I would definitely pay to read your work in hard-back format. //End OOC
(Ooc) I like this guy (Ooc) |
Ner'Zul Nexhawk
Talos Incorporated
186
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Posted - 2013.04.03 15:35:00 -
[826] - Quote
BootStrapWill wrote:OOC: //Sorry to interject with the story. I've been following along, but was a few days behind.
I know you all have fairly settled the matter of the Dark Arcanum, but I had a thought that might mesh the disparate stories a little better, without stepping on toes.
I see it as the DA was originally crafted by Fate as a tool for the Deathlord (capital D marking the master from the servants), and as such she imbued part of his soul into the book, along with the stolen soul of the betrayer.
This imbuing of combative souls granted the book exceptional power, and a knowledge of magic far surpassing any normal means, but also engendered an oily film of insanity as both aspects battled for eternity inside the tome.
If you'll pardon the Harry Potter reference, I see the book as a Horcrux of sorts. It functions as a part of the Deathlord's soul, and remains highly potent while disconnected from the source, but exponentially strengthens the Deathlord (AN) if/when he is reunited with the book.
This could play into the suggestions floating in Xavier's head, the book wants to be whole, even at the cost of the bearer's life to get back to the Deathlord.
Intrinsically tied to the fact that the book is a horcrux, as long as the book exists, the Deathlord will find a new host to infect with an aspect of himself, until he slowly rises to prominence again. This would give a purpose to the roving deathlords (lower case d to indicate the slave kings), as they are prowling around looking for their risen master, and performing nefarious feats as well to bide time.
As to meshing the history, the book was created by Fate, stolen by the Five, returned by the betrayer, and bound to the Deathlord. Deathlord fled Precantaeria for the other continent where he eventually died at the hands of the first hero under Freedom. Unfortunately for this hero, he was much like Isildur in his ignorance of the danger a mere "trinket" could pose, so he did not ensure that the book was destroyed. Since the book is part of the Deathlord, it willfully bonded itself to one of the hero's retinue, and became immaterial, hiding in the soul of the poor retainer. The book waited many long years before deciding the danger had passed and elected to re-materialize, crafting the idea that the scribes had "created" the book recently. The book influenced those present to decide that it would be best to spirit the book away, to keep it "safe", when in fact the book was having them move it away from the greatest danger present, the king. Thus it came to be hidden on the logipriest island long ago, and it slumbered while awaiting the rise of the true host, the next great AN.
I am not sure if this conflicts with any of the established lore, this is just what I took from reading the different origins of the book. After all, as was stated before, history is written by the victors, and in this particular instance, the real victor has been the book for an unknown length of time.
As I am not a contributing author to the world, take my suggestions with a ton of salt. I figured this would blend the two stories, and posit that the book has a malicious will of it's own, when not being directed externally by Fate to be docile. (Reason for fluctuating insanity for Xavier)
Also, everyone's story here is awesome. I would definitely pay to read your work in hard-back format. //End OOC
//OOC: Not bad, sir... Not bad at all!
No idea about Sandromin and the rest, but I, personally, thoroughly enjoyed this explanation. One little thing, though, was a slight bit unclear to me: by "the king", do you mean Thanatos or someone else?
Also, if you ever wish to join us in writing, I think everyone would be happy about it. //End of OOC\\
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Xavier Hastings
ZionTCD Legacy Rising
246
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Posted - 2013.04.03 16:51:00 -
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BootStrapWill wrote:OOC: //Sorry to interject with the story. I've been following along, but was a few days behind.
I know you all have fairly settled the matter of the Dark Arcanum, but I had a thought that might mesh the disparate stories a little better, without stepping on toes.
I see it as the DA was originally crafted by Fate as a tool for the Deathlord (capital D marking the master from the servants), and as such she imbued part of his soul into the book, along with the stolen soul of the betrayer.
This imbuing of combative souls granted the book exceptional power, and a knowledge of magic far surpassing any normal means, but also engendered an oily film of insanity as both aspects battled for eternity inside the tome.
If you'll pardon the Harry Potter reference, I see the book as a Horcrux of sorts. It functions as a part of the Deathlord's soul, and remains highly potent while disconnected from the source, but exponentially strengthens the Deathlord (AN) if/when he is reunited with the book.
This could play into the suggestions floating in Xavier's head, the book wants to be whole, even at the cost of the bearer's life to get back to the Deathlord.
Intrinsically tied to the fact that the book is a horcrux, as long as the book exists, the Deathlord will find a new host to infect with an aspect of himself, until he slowly rises to prominence again. This would give a purpose to the roving deathlords (lower case d to indicate the slave kings), as they are prowling around looking for their risen master, and performing nefarious feats as well to bide time.
As to meshing the history, the book was created by Fate, stolen by the Five, returned by the betrayer, and bound to the Deathlord. Deathlord fled Precantaeria for the other continent where he eventually died at the hands of the first hero under Freedom. Unfortunately for this hero, he was much like Isildur in his ignorance of the danger a mere "trinket" could pose, so he did not ensure that the book was destroyed. Since the book is part of the Deathlord, it willfully bonded itself to one of the hero's retinue, and became immaterial, hiding in the soul of the poor retainer. The book waited many long years before deciding the danger had passed and elected to re-materialize, crafting the idea that the scribes had "created" the book recently. The book influenced those present to decide that it would be best to spirit the book away, to keep it "safe", when in fact the book was having them move it away from the greatest danger present, the king. Thus it came to be hidden on the logipriest island long ago, and it slumbered while awaiting the rise of the true host, the next great AN.
I am not sure if this conflicts with any of the established lore, this is just what I took from reading the different origins of the book. After all, as was stated before, history is written by the victors, and in this particular instance, the real victor has been the book for an unknown length of time.
As I am not a contributing author to the world, take my suggestions with a ton of salt. I figured this would blend the two stories, and posit that the book has a malicious will of it's own, when not being directed externally by Fate to be docile. (Reason for fluctuating insanity for Xavier)
Also, everyone's story here is awesome. I would definitely pay to read your work in hard-back format. //End OOC I always did give the impression that the Dark Arcanum (The Book) had a mind of its own, and (was) influencing Xavier's thoughts until it recently took a liking to him.
My back-story on the book is that, yes, it was crafted by Fate, but it originally was destined to be good, and help The Five mold the world into a paradise. They succeeded, but one of the Five became corrupt, greedy, and twisted the book with dark magics. He essentially made the paradise world a living hell, until all the Gods caught wind of the destruction and mayhem he caused. The Gods took to recreating the world in their hands, because they could no longer trust humans. This was, however, not a paradise, for they deemed that the punishment was too great to be put on only The Five. The severely limited the powers of the Five, and banished to specific locations in Dustia. Here is where The Five created societies that revolved around different magics, such as fire or water. To limit their ever growing knowledge, the Gods imposed a mandatory reincarnation period every 150 years, where they were forced to be reincarnated into another human being, but without the knowledge they previously possessed. This forced The Five to write down everything they have learned, so the previous life could have the same powers as they.
The evil member of the Five, the one who corrupted the world, was banished to the farthest and most desolate place in Dustia, where he would remain for all eternity. This man is the AN. The Book was also separated from him, for his powers are worthless without it.
Or so it seems...
And that is my back-story. It probably conflicts with something, I'm sure of it. But, nevertheless, here it is. How do all of you like it? |
Ner'Zul Nexhawk
Talos Incorporated
186
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Posted - 2013.04.03 17:02:00 -
[828] - Quote
Xavier Hastings wrote:BootStrapWill wrote:OOC: //Sorry to interject with the story. I've been following along, but was a few days behind.
I know you all have fairly settled the matter of the Dark Arcanum, but I had a thought that might mesh the disparate stories a little better, without stepping on toes.
I see it as the DA was originally crafted by Fate as a tool for the Deathlord (capital D marking the master from the servants), and as such she imbued part of his soul into the book, along with the stolen soul of the betrayer.
This imbuing of combative souls granted the book exceptional power, and a knowledge of magic far surpassing any normal means, but also engendered an oily film of insanity as both aspects battled for eternity inside the tome.
If you'll pardon the Harry Potter reference, I see the book as a Horcrux of sorts. It functions as a part of the Deathlord's soul, and remains highly potent while disconnected from the source, but exponentially strengthens the Deathlord (AN) if/when he is reunited with the book.
This could play into the suggestions floating in Xavier's head, the book wants to be whole, even at the cost of the bearer's life to get back to the Deathlord.
Intrinsically tied to the fact that the book is a horcrux, as long as the book exists, the Deathlord will find a new host to infect with an aspect of himself, until he slowly rises to prominence again. This would give a purpose to the roving deathlords (lower case d to indicate the slave kings), as they are prowling around looking for their risen master, and performing nefarious feats as well to bide time.
As to meshing the history, the book was created by Fate, stolen by the Five, returned by the betrayer, and bound to the Deathlord. Deathlord fled Precantaeria for the other continent where he eventually died at the hands of the first hero under Freedom. Unfortunately for this hero, he was much like Isildur in his ignorance of the danger a mere "trinket" could pose, so he did not ensure that the book was destroyed. Since the book is part of the Deathlord, it willfully bonded itself to one of the hero's retinue, and became immaterial, hiding in the soul of the poor retainer. The book waited many long years before deciding the danger had passed and elected to re-materialize, crafting the idea that the scribes had "created" the book recently. The book influenced those present to decide that it would be best to spirit the book away, to keep it "safe", when in fact the book was having them move it away from the greatest danger present, the king. Thus it came to be hidden on the logipriest island long ago, and it slumbered while awaiting the rise of the true host, the next great AN.
I am not sure if this conflicts with any of the established lore, this is just what I took from reading the different origins of the book. After all, as was stated before, history is written by the victors, and in this particular instance, the real victor has been the book for an unknown length of time.
As I am not a contributing author to the world, take my suggestions with a ton of salt. I figured this would blend the two stories, and posit that the book has a malicious will of it's own, when not being directed externally by Fate to be docile. (Reason for fluctuating insanity for Xavier)
Also, everyone's story here is awesome. I would definitely pay to read your work in hard-back format. //End OOC I always did give the impression that the Dark Arcanum (The Book) had a mind of its own, and (was) influencing Xavier's thoughts until it recently took a liking to him. My back-story on the book is that, yes, it was crafted by Fate, but it originally was destined to be good, and help The Five mold the world into a paradise. They succeeded, but one of the Five became corrupt, greedy, and twisted the book with dark magics. He essentially made the paradise world a living hell, until all the Gods caught wind of the destruction and mayhem he caused. The Gods took to recreating the world in their hands, because they could no longer trust humans. This was, however, not a paradise, for they deemed that the punishment was too great to be put on only The Five. The severely limited the powers of the Five, and banished to specific locations in Dustia. Here is where The Five created societies that revolved around different magics, such as fire or water. To limit their ever growing knowledge, the Gods imposed a mandatory reincarnation period every 150 years, where they were forced to be reincarnated into another human being, but without the knowledge they previously possessed. This forced The Five to write down everything they have learned, so the previous life could have the same powers as they. The evil member of the Five, the one who corrupted the world, was banished to the farthest and most desolate place in Dustia, where he would remain for all eternity. This man is the AN. The Book was also separated from him, for his powers are worthless without it. Or so it seems... And that is my back-story. It probably conflicts with something, I'm sure of it. But, nevertheless, here it is. How do all of you like it?
//OOC: It's quite close to the backstory that I firstly had about the book. Specifically, I said the the Nak'Sora gave the Arcanum to the Firstborn Mir in order to harness their magical potential and give them spells; later, as taint seeped into the book, the Archmage of the Life Wardens became the first Deathlord, gaining knowledge from the corrupted book. He and his people have been banished, but they managed to steal the book first and then leave Praecantaria.
Thanatos, however, was strictly against it; it was understandable, for he introduced the book in the first place. Hence, I had to edit my backstory to account for the changes Sandromin made in order to resolve the argument. //End of OOC\\ |
Xavier Hastings
ZionTCD Legacy Rising
246
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Posted - 2013.04.03 17:37:00 -
[829] - Quote
Ner'Zul Nexhawk wrote:
//OOC: It's quite close to the backstory that I firstly had about the book. Specifically, I said the the Nak'Sora gave the Arcanum to the Firstborn Mir in order to harness their magical potential and give them spells; later, as taint seeped into the book, the Archmage of the Life Wardens became the first Deathlord, gaining knowledge from the corrupted book. He and his people have been banished, but they managed to steal the book first and then leave Praecantaria.
Thanatos, however, was strictly against it; it was understandable, for he introduced the book in the first place. Hence, I had to edit my backstory to account for the changes Sandromin made in order to resolve the argument. //End of OOC\\
Ah, that was a long time ago. Page Ten? Eleven? Look at how this thread has evolved! |
BootStrapWill
R.I.f.t
7
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Posted - 2013.04.03 18:02:00 -
[830] - Quote
Ner'Zul Nexhawk wrote://OOC: Not bad, sir... Not bad at all!No idea about Sandromin and the rest, but I, personally, thoroughly enjoyed this explanation. One little thing, though, was a slight bit unclear to me: by "the king", do you mean Thanatos or someone else? Also, if you ever wish to join us in writing, I think everyone would be happy about it. //End of OOC\\
My thanks kind sirs. I have been rolling around some RP ideas, but nothing solid as of yet.
As for the King, I was leaning toward Lionus, or his successor. I am not entirely clear on the timeline after Lionus defeated the AN. The book was spared by (Augustin? I have lost the post where the history identified the first hero king for Mediterra), and it went into hiding. It rematerialized during the reign of Lionus, which it recognized as a legitimate threat.
I may be muddling things up further, but perhaps this could be used to indicate Hubris on Lionus' part. Lionus didn't destroy the book, and thus it claimed the life of his reincarnation. Karmic retribution?
These are just my meager attempts to mesh history. Spitballing for lore lol |
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BootStrapWill
R.I.f.t
7
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Posted - 2013.04.03 18:14:00 -
[831] - Quote
Ner'Zul Nexhawk wrote:
Thanatos, however, was strictly against it; it was understandable, for he introduced the book in the first place. Hence, I had to edit my backstory to account for the changes Sandromin made in order to resolve the argument. //End of OOC\\
That was my intent, to bridge the remaining gap; to explain how both stories could be technically accurate. I meant no offense to Thanatos, but I saw it as the book utilizing it's corrupting influence to engender the idea that mortal hands had created it. It would use this pride to blind them to the corruption until they could no longer separate themselves from the book (much like Xavier/Gollum). I liked Thantos' story, but it seemed too simple for a malevolent energy/being/mind not to warp the reality to fit within that established text.
Plus this gives us a chance to better explore the inner workings of Xavier, the book, and any people who may have come into contact with it in the past (perhaps on this long voyage). Xavier has already shown us that the book creates a hunger, a compulsion for the knowledge, and a hunger like that would only grow if one were to brush with it and then be denied further examination. Then again, Connyr will likely face enough conflict without the need to inject any immortal hermits that once studied the Arcanum before it was lost to them. |
Thanatos 716
Isuuaya Tactical Caldari State
10
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Posted - 2013.04.03 18:15:00 -
[832] - Quote
OOC: @ Sir BootStrapWill
That is almost exactly how I had intended the book to work. The backstory was really good also, and I don't believe it actually conflicts with the book's original story, except that the book actually made it's way to Diyad after the defeat of the last AN. |
BootStrapWill
R.I.f.t
7
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Posted - 2013.04.03 18:22:00 -
[833] - Quote
OOC: @ Sir Thanatos.
I did recall that it stayed in Diyad for some time after the AN was defeated, but I wasn't clear when it migrated to the Logipriest temple. Or am I confusing story elements?
Was the temple collapse and Thanatos' death taking place around the DA on a pedestal, or some other artifact? |
Galrick M'kron
Sand Mercenary Corps Inc.
28
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Posted - 2013.04.03 18:31:00 -
[834] - Quote
OOC: Are we landing? Come on, let's get the politicking over with. |
Ner'Zul Nexhawk
Talos Incorporated
186
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Posted - 2013.04.03 18:55:00 -
[835] - Quote
BootStrapWill wrote:OOC: @ Sir Thanatos.
I did recall that it stayed in Diyad for some time after the AN was defeated, but I wasn't clear when it migrated to the Logipriest temple. Or am I confusing story elements?
Was the temple collapse and Thanatos' death taking place around the DA on a pedestal, or some other artifact?
//OOC: If I recall it correctly, the DA has always been in Thanatos' possession in that temple, and the pedestal hosted the final piece of the book's cipher instead. Upon recovering it, he conjured the book from a thread or something... Details elude me mostly now.
@Xavier: Somewhere in the middle of the 30s, there was a heated debate, and in its beginning I thought exactly in the same way. But, oh well. //End of OOC\\ |
BootStrapWill
R.I.f.t
7
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Posted - 2013.04.03 19:13:00 -
[836] - Quote
@Nexhawk I looked back, and it was indeed on page 10, the book was conjured from a thread. So we could edit to say that the book influenced the scribes to "hide" it in some pocket space, which the King (Lionus, and through him Thanatos) would be able to protect and keep from being abused. The actual reasoning would be to slowly poison the mind of the ruler, as would seem to be the case on page 9, when Thanatos was sounding similar to Xavier. Whether anyone realized that the book had engineered it's own safe-keeping is another question. Perhaps some of the scheming Secret Council knew, and wished for Thanatos to die or go crazy through exposure to the DA.
So basically, the only edit to the long post being that the book did not send itself to the logipriest island, but was slumbering in the pocket dimension represented by the thread.
Does that work?
I would have brought this up in a more timely manner in the 30s, but work is so pesky and refuses to leave me alone. |
Ner'Zul Nexhawk
Talos Incorporated
186
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Posted - 2013.04.03 19:21:00 -
[837] - Quote
BootStrapWill wrote:@Nexhawk I looked back, and it was indeed on page 10, the book was conjured from a thread. So we could edit to say that the book influenced the scribes to "hide" it in some pocket space, which the King (Lionus, and through him Thanatos) would be able to protect and keep from being abused. The actual reasoning would be to slowly poison the mind of the ruler, as would seem to be the case on page 9, when Thanatos was sounding similar to Xavier. Whether anyone realized that the book had engineered it's own safe-keeping is another question. Perhaps some of the scheming Secret Council knew, and wished for Thanatos to die or go crazy through exposure to the DA.
So basically, the only edit to the long post being that the book did not send itself to the logipriest island, but was slumbering in the pocket dimension represented by the thread.
Does that work?
I would have brought this up in a more timely manner in the 30s, but work is so pesky and refuses to leave me alone.
//OOC: Hmm, I actually like your thinking. Don't know about Thanatos' intentions, but it always seemed to me that the Secret Council was quite reluctant to accept the king's rebirth. And I feel like nothing even has to be edited, for I don't believe that it was explained where the book came from. It just was transformed out of the thread, and it's original location was not described. Thus, the pocket dimension wouldn't interfere with anything from the past. But we still should wait for Thanatos' reply.
P.S. Oh, and Xavier, I'd like you to confirm your readiness for indication that I can freely send the two of us on our way to Diyad. //End of OOC\\ |
Thanatos 716
Isuuaya Tactical Caldari State
10
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Posted - 2013.04.03 19:41:00 -
[838] - Quote
OOC: I can explain the thread. The thread was simply Diyad's way of hiding the book from those who seek to use it for evil. Alkhemistry allowed Thanatos to transform the book into a long thread, so that he may carry the book with him at all times, shielding it's evil influence from others. As you may recall it almost destroyed his mind.
Edit: I'm about to fill in the gap between Diyad getting the book and where it is now. |
Thanatos 716
Isuuaya Tactical Caldari State
10
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Posted - 2013.04.03 20:14:00 -
[839] - Quote
OOC: So sometime after the book's conception and after the defeat of the first AN, it made it's way to the land of the Mortuums where a long battle would take place between them and one of there brethren. This would be Ignak the AN. He would ultimately defeat the rest and consume their souls. With him left on the vast continent the small colony of Diyad would form into a sizable nation. After receiving the saber from Fate, the 7th king, Lionus III waged war on Ignak and his undead army. After slaying Ignak, Lionus tried to destroy it. This didn't work so he hid it in a secure location outside of the nation's borders, hopefully never to be seen again. Although Diyadian history may tell you that Lionus died decades after, this is not true. Merely weeks after hiding the book, Lionus was approached by Fate who offered him eternal life so that they may be together forever. He rejected her love, not remembering a promise he made as a child. Now we have an angry goddess and a king. She wipes out his family, by stopping their hearts. She punishes Lionus by casting him into the Sea of Souls. The book lay dormant until the third era and the appearance of the amnesia-ridden Thanatos. After the Great Civil War, he becomes king once more. He does however remember the location of the book. After that, if you read back you know about his quest to find the pieces of the cipher, so that people may learn how to counteract it's evil magicks. And as we know, when Thanatos was slain, the book fell near Sandromin, but Xavier picked it up.
The book in nature is desires to become whole, often this would mean finding an AN. Xavier would be right in assuming that the book took a liking into him. In Xavier it sensed power and strength. So yes it's attraction to Xavier is unique. But do not be fooled. It only wishes to become whole.
I introduced Fate mainly to push the plot forward, but also to introduce one key element. Everyone's character is vital in the grand scheme of things. They each possess a trait, be it a goal, ambition, or belief that is so strong that it challenges the gods. This is a very essential tool that I only touched on briefly with my earlier dialogues with Fate. But I'll elaborate on this later. |
Ner'Zul Nexhawk
Talos Incorporated
186
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Posted - 2013.04.03 23:50:00 -
[840] - Quote
Thanatos 716 wrote:OOC: So sometime after the book's conception and after the defeat of the first AN, it made it's way to the land of the Mortuums where a long battle would take place between them and one of there brethren. This would be Ignak the AN. He would ultimately defeat the rest and consume their souls. With him left on the vast continent the small colony of Diyad would form into a sizable nation. After receiving the saber from Fate, the 7th king, Lionus III waged war on Ignak and his undead army. After slaying Ignak, Lionus tried to destroy it. This didn't work so he hid it in a secure location outside of the nation's borders, hopefully never to be seen again. Although Diyadian history may tell you that Lionus died decades after, this is not true. Merely weeks after hiding the book, Lionus was approached by Fate who offered him eternal life so that they may be together forever. He rejected her love, not remembering a promise he made as a child. Now we have an angry goddess and a king. She wipes out his family, by stopping their hearts. She punishes Lionus by casting him into the Sea of Souls. The book lay dormant until the third era and the appearance of the amnesia-ridden Thanatos. After the Great Civil War, he becomes king once more. He does however remember the location of the book. After that, if you read back you know about his quest to find the pieces of the cipher, so that people may learn how to counteract it's evil magicks. And as we know, when Thanatos was slain, the book fell near Sandromin, but Xavier picked it up.
The book in nature is desires to become whole, often this would mean finding an AN. Xavier would be right in assuming that the book took a liking into him. In Xavier it sensed power and strength. So yes it's attraction to Xavier is unique. But do not be fooled. It only wishes to become whole.
I introduced Fate mainly to push the plot forward, but also to introduce one key element. Everyone's character is vital in the grand scheme of things. They each possess a trait, be it a goal, ambition, or belief that is so strong that it challenges the gods. This is a very essential tool that I only touched on briefly with my earlier dialogues with Fate. But I'll elaborate on this later.
Edit: If anyone has any input feel free. I'm trying to be more open to suggestions. So I can edit earlier stuff if need be.
//OOC: I must say, this is pretty self-explanatory, and I, for one, have no questions left for now. Thus, I guess, Galrick was right - it's time to land that ship already. //End of OOC\\ |
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