Miyuki-Chan in Wonderland:

I love anime. I love Alice's Adventures in Wonderland. This is gonna be fun. Wait, it turns all of the characters into girls who want to have their way with Alice (Miyuki)? This is going to be a lot of fun. Though just two OVAs, I did enjoy myself. The art clearly shows how old it is, but well, it's Alice in Wonderland. Hard to screw up that formula. Especially, since this follow the story pretty closely. The second OVA is Miyuki-Chan in Mirrorland, and that one was even more fun.

The characters have zero depth. The plot is pretty straightforward. The animation, and art is dated, BUT that music though. Through almost the entire thing there's background music that just makes the whole thing really funny. I would definitely suggest Miyuki-Chan in Wonderland if you have 25 minutes to spare.

I got a Kail Mako*ver* on that forums, so I'll be working on fixing up that script, then by tonight begin editing.

And I'm pretty much prepared to start adding animations, just need to find an animator now.

who did you consider a strong human cast member?

There was that omniyoji girl, but as competent of a fight as she was... she wasn't competent at anything else, lol. xD

also, you're a better reviewer then I am, lol.

Nura question/discussion:
Does the age of the characters help or hurt the show? In my opinion, having the characters be 13 is just too young; first off, it severely hurts the romantic side of the show as you can't really believe that a serious pairing is going to occur in the near future. This is a shame as one of the best parts of the show was the growing rivalry between Tsurara and Kana. Secondly, it's to hard to suspend your disbelief enough to think that a 7th-grader would really be able to recognize and come to terms with his place in the world at such a young age.

Honestly, if they had made the characters two or three years older--wherein they're rapidly approaching becoming actual adults--it would have made things much easier to accept.

Side question--having watched the OVAs, am I the only one getting a sense of dread that Tsurara isn't going to find a happy ending, just like her mother?

So I talked to some people - this may be harder then I thought...

And to do it myself properly, I apparently need an eletric pen and pad... which normally costs $100

So it may be a while before i ever get hosts, lol.

Dude seriously. I remember sending an email to the Anime Empire email account you provided. Send the scripts to that address, and I'll rework any of your scripts you feel need to be ironed out. I notice that you like to use words that don't happen to exist. At least, not to my knowledge. Don't worry, I'll still keep all of your opinions in tact.

Oh, and I just realized something. Remember how we wanted to find a place to voice chat? Well, I just remembered that PSN actually has a chat room service that you can set to voice chat. We all probably have a PS3 so we could use that. If we just manage to pick a time to all show up it should work. I'll be sending my friend request to you later Sota, so be expecting that.

Oh, I see the problem.

since youtube banned it I stopped checking and have converted everything to [email protected]

But from now on, for you, and the rest of the people in here, send everything to [email protected], I do my bills with this account so I'll for sure see it.

Also my PS3 exploded, but i still have PS4, :(

I may of fixed Teamspeak, need to test it.

Right, all set up then. Oh, I do wonder though. Is the chat room feature only for PS3 to other PS3s? Since both are on the PSN I think they should be able to use it together. This will be something we have to test.

Got your mail I'll send you a copy as soon as I finish fleshing out the Yokai side of things, it's pretty much 90% done.

I got your mail, but I realized something. I don't actually know what I'm supposed to do. Should I send you a copy of your review that I rewrote, or just send you a mail pointing out some things I don't think go over so well?

I brain farted what some of those additions were, I have a note here to remind me, but I forgot to detail what it was, useless damn note.

So I sent you what I have, whatever I forgot, it was nothing but details and a few lines.

OH IT WAS THE YOKAI LOVE INTEREST! I FORGOT TO MENTION HER! >,<

i'll re-watch the last episode for your first post, I think it just uses a ton of CG, a lot of budget went into this episode.

And this post though, the show says it itself: You're an adult at 13 in the Yokai world.

How well he's adapting is indeed strange, but it's answerable because his Yokai half seems to have his own will and understanding, and through him he gets most of his growth.

I figured you'd mention the age of adulthood thing. Let me ask this way, then--would the show have been better off if the age of adulthood had been changed to 16?

Actually gave up on the second season after five episodes as it just seemed too repetitive; much of those focused on Rikuo's grandfather and the formation of the Nura clan...but the three leader's of the Nura clan are all pretty much indistinguishable in terms of appearance and power. Also thrown off by how characters age--or don't--in the show. In the OVA, for example, we see Tsurara join up with Rikuo's father as a young child, while the rest of Rikuo's supporting cast don't look much different as compared to now. Yet by the start of the show she looks to be roughly the same age/size as Rikuo while the other guardians look no different.

I took a look at your script SoTa. I made some modifications to it, and sent you the rewritten script. I added in the "Da-Da-Da" intro, fixed a bunch of typos, removed a few redundancies, and reworded a few parts so they flowed better. You can choose to use it or not, or even combine it with yours.

I will not stop harping on how much I hate the numbers rating system. However, if you insist on giving it a rating I would recommend simply putting the numbers on screen, and then saying your outro or whatever over it. Saying all of those numbers out loud both feels and sounds weird.

I better stay away from reviewing Nura S2. I have so many issues, and S2 actually makes S1 worse.

It's as if everything in S1 was pointless, the only theme they kept was there morales, all the development of S1 not only DOESN'T MAKE SENSE NOW, it actually goes as far to put a few more holes into both plots.

With even further inconsistent animation, a few characters whose voice actors didn't make any sense, and development more focused on raising power levels then developing a plot, wtf went wrong? S1 was doing well enough, all S2 had to do was expand upon it.

Instead, backed with the same **** choreography, every fight ending in 1 damn swing, it takes a step backwards in story telling while continuing to be sub-par in the other fields.

The only notable improvement was music, loved it. And the new Omnyoji's they added - great characters, that didn't get enough screen time, and we know nothing about.

The only interesting part reveals itself and ends just as quickly at the end.

There was a second season?

EDIT: Hm, I think I did see it. Thought it was all one season though. Its been awhile since I watched this.