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True Adamance
Praetoriani Classiarii Templares Praetoria Imperialis Excubitoris
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Posted - 2015.08.23 20:59:00 -
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Ugh I know..... finding two hours to sit down and write out the siege is really hard at the moment between Amarr RP which has taken off to insane levels post assassination of the Empress, weekend socialising, etc.
I'll try to have one part done today.
Em shah tey et naGÇÖemsaer ek rahvi, amarr osedah gasi ubday pahk. Ekin tey vahka ijed div ema ziel. Et tey vamatal em.
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Spademan
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Posted - 2015.09.02 21:37:00 -
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True Adamance wrote:Ugh I know..... finding two hours to sit down and write out the siege is really hard at the moment between Amarr RP which has taken off to insane levels post assassination of the Empress, weekend socialising, etc.
I'll try to have one part done today. Speaking of Amarr RP, what's the deal with the whole Empress being dead thing?
What're you looking at me like that for? I'll shank you I will.
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sir RAVEN WING
RabbitSwarm
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Posted - 2015.09.12 16:00:00 -
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Bump, and True, pick up the pace, will you?
You've had weeks now, I expect something to be finished soon.
Finally in EVE IGS now!
Co-Founder of RabbitSwarm
"They can't top our sidetrackin'" - VAHZZ
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sir RAVEN WING
Kinsho Swords Caldari State
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Posted - 2015.09.24 02:11:00 -
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KADOR I SUMMON THEE UPON THE NAME OF THE DEAD EMPRESS.
I likely butchered that, but come on guys.
Co-Founder of RabbitSwarm
"They can't top our sidetrackin'" - VAHZZ
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True Adamance
Praetoriani Classiarii Templares Praetoria Imperialis Excubitoris
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Posted - 2015.09.24 03:39:00 -
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sir RAVEN WING wrote:KADOR I SUMMON THEE UPON THE NAME OF THE DEAD EMPRESS.
I likely butchered that, but come on guys.
I can't be responsible for writing an epic siege scene right now between my own personal writing, DnD Lost Mines of Phandelver Campaign, RP over the Weekends with Thal, weekend raids, work, etc. I'll just write a short synopsis and expand on it later.
Em shah tey et naGÇÖemsaer ek rahvi, amarr osedah gasi ubday pahk. Ekin tey vahka ijed div ema ziel. Et tey vamatal em.
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Vash Warren
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Posted - 2015.10.02 12:56:00 -
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This is just going to be a little something as I feel as I abandon this thread and I don't want to do that. I just real not into Dust any more but this is still to much fun.
Caldari Body, Caldari Core, But Amarr with my Soul.
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sir RAVEN WING
RabbitGang 13 COILS
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Posted - 2015.10.03 04:36:00 -
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Vash Warren wrote:This is just going to be a little something as I feel as I abandon this thread and I don't want to do that. I just real not into Dust any more but this is still to much fun. I want to keep it alive, but we have a point where we are all waiting on Kador and he just is slacking off.
I SAW YOU IN THE OUT OF POD EXPERIENCE THREAD
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Vash Warren
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Posted - 2015.10.05 00:56:00 -
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Johnny quick question. I would like to see what you think of a Tal-Artugian hybrid. I would like to give just a little more reason to hate me.
Also True. What rank is Shuri'den'shalvys in Mur systems? Like is that the queen or something along those lines. Just wondering as if Grey fell for her, would it be appropriate, and if she would reject I imagine he would be called back.
Caldari Body, Caldari Core, But Amarr with my Soul.
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True Adamance
Praetoriani Classiarii Templares Praetoria Imperialis Excubitoris
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Posted - 2015.10.05 02:58:00 -
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Shuri'den'shalvys....... is both name and title.
Culturally speaking all Mur names are broken into two parts, the reason being is that when written in their languages script the characters appear to have a basis in symmetry.
However to answer your question she has no official authority within Mur society, her position within society is purely spiritual. As you might remember the Mur are descendants from the former island nation of Shalvys and as such amongst their people those whom can trace their bloodlines directly back to Shalvys are afforded special positions within their society, hence the unique appearance Shuri'den bears in comparison to her kin. This is actually a hormonal change within her body, much like you have all seen in the Southern Murfolk who now live with the Artugian whose skin lightened in colour and took on a more green hue, nothing magical and has a chance to occur almost 30% of the Mur population.
She also happens to be one of the most powerful Shaper's known to the Folk in Skadia whose authorities physically manifest in the world despite her trying to contain them, another mark of respect amongst her people.
Thus far the Mur are of the opinion that their species is unable to breed without any outside entity as no know instances of successful pregnancies and births between species have been recorded. This may or may not be true as the Mur have not been truly present in a continental sense for more than a year or so, and rather than me not having been considered the subject too deeply is it more logically that outside of Artugia social views have not yet changed enough to really allow relationships to form to the point of inter breeding.
Queen would be the most simple term. Matriarch would be more suitable. She is just a woman of eminent respect that Mur 'want' to serve.
As to whether or not she accepts Grey's advances was dependant on two things. The first being the end of the Cauti arc and a successful return to Skadia (she could possibly die though), the second being my moral misgiving about attempting to breed a race of almost 10 foot tall giant humanoids with a roughly similar species roughly half their physical size.
That borders on sadism quite frankly.
I will try to get this Siege post out tonight if I can..... 'honest injun'.
If I recall correctly the plot was that Shuri'den and her band take shelter in the fortress as the Tal'Man siege party begins it's assault. An almost 1000 heavily armoured Tal column leaves the vanguard trench works while the fortress is subject to artillery bombardment. As this occurs the Cauti forces man the defences at their commander's, a veteran of siege warfare, order.
The bombardment suppresses the Cauti allowing the Tal-Man to launch their two pronged offensive at the collapsed North Western Tower and at the Gate House. The forces upon the Tower gain the battlements sweeping the defenders from them but being cut down by gun fire now exposed on the other side of the wall. The Gate House force stalls but breaches the gates entering the fortress to join the battle.
Over time the Cauti gain the advantage in a pitched battle forcing the Tal-Man back into a retreat across the plains.
Force Arrayed ( unit names for flair)
Tal-Man Host
800 Armoured Tal Warriors /w Large-bore Rifles, Dragon-mail Fists, and Broadswords
12 Mani Siege Cannon
Cauti Forces
1200 Free Company Cauti Soldiers /w Large-bore Rifles, Small-bore Rifles, Martial Weapons
6 Pilfered Large-bore Mortar
23 Plundered Small-bore Paric and Blooder Canon
Em shah tey et naGÇÖemsaer ek rahvi, amarr osedah gasi ubday pahk. Ekin tey vahka ijed div ema ziel. Et tey vamatal em.
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sir RAVEN WING
RabbitGang 13 COILS
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Posted - 2015.10.05 04:45:00 -
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While writing, True, at the end, at the Tal-Men retreat, I would assume you are putting in that the Cauti fire at the retreating forces.
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True Adamance
Praetoriani Classiarii Templares Praetoria Imperialis Excubitoris
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Posted - 2015.10.05 05:48:00 -
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sir RAVEN WING wrote:While writing, True, at the end, at the Tal-Men retreat, I would assume you are putting in that the Cauti fire at the retreating forces.
Frankly who the hell wouldn't?
Em shah tey et naGÇÖemsaer ek rahvi, amarr osedah gasi ubday pahk. Ekin tey vahka ijed div ema ziel. Et tey vamatal em.
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sir RAVEN WING
RabbitGang 13 COILS
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Posted - 2015.10.05 05:51:00 -
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True Adamance wrote:sir RAVEN WING wrote:While writing, True, at the end, at the Tal-Men retreat, I would assume you are putting in that the Cauti fire at the retreating forces. Frankly who the hell wouldn't? Not sure, but just making sure.
The Cauti are going to take out as many men as possible so any regroup and attack will be weaker, and thus easier to repel.
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sir RAVEN WING
RabbitGang 13 COILS
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Posted - 2015.10.05 18:54:00 -
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True, your little 'pirates' are actually privateers, no?
Questioning to see if my scene was the first real 'pirate' scene.
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True Adamance
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Posted - 2015.10.05 19:40:00 -
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sir RAVEN WING wrote:True, your little 'pirates' are actually privateers, no?
Questioning to see if my scene was the first real 'pirate' scene.
Yup. Same thing really.
Em shah tey et naGÇÖemsaer ek rahvi, amarr osedah gasi ubday pahk. Ekin tey vahka ijed div ema ziel. Et tey vamatal em.
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Arkena Wyrnspire
Negative-Feedback. Negative-Feedback
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Posted - 2015.10.05 19:42:00 -
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Soon.
Arkena Wyrnspire aka "British Khorne" - Cross Atu
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Jonny D Buelle
The Warlords Legion
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Posted - 2015.10.05 19:44:00 -
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Posted the festival, finally, still waiting on when Murk and his men can enter the battle and f.ck sh.t up! Also he may or may not have a summoner with him.
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True Adamance
Praetoriani Classiarii Templares Praetoria Imperialis Excubitoris
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Posted - 2015.10.05 19:54:00 -
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Curse you lot..... every time I get back here you always make me write too much.
Writing To Do List
- DnD Play by Post - Meta Game Siege - 5 rough 1 page scenes for Kador and Satja's lives - EVE Online YC117 Fiction Contest - Project Writing I said I was going to complete 3 weeks ago - Novel Writing
You guys suck.
Em shah tey et naGÇÖemsaer ek rahvi, amarr osedah gasi ubday pahk. Ekin tey vahka ijed div ema ziel. Et tey vamatal em.
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sir RAVEN WING
RabbitGang 13 COILS
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Posted - 2015.10.05 20:27:00 -
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True Adamance wrote:Curse you lot..... every time I get back here you always make me write too much.
Writing To Do List
- DnD Play by Post - Meta Game Siege - 5 rough 1 page scenes for Kador and Satja's lives - EVE Online YC117 Fiction Contest - Project Writing I said I was going to complete 3 weeks ago - Novel Writing
You guys suck.
Get that siege done and try to avoid getting nailed with such a big part.
I might try to take hold of the writing for a bit if Ark doesn't pop back in.
He is the largest procrastinator of us all... months and you haven't even made your country international.
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True Adamance
Praetoriani Classiarii Templares Praetoria Imperialis Excubitoris
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Posted - 2015.10.05 20:33:00 -
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So I just want to post a few links as I work on this post.....
Fortress
Fortress Concept and Landscape
True Fortress Lay Out
Tal Mani Host
Armoured Tal Warrior Concept #1
Armoured Tal Warrior Concept #2
Lightly Armoured Tal Warrior w/ Dragon Mail Fists
How I imagine Grey
Mani Large Bore Siege Cannon
Cauti Forces
Cauti Uniform Concept #1
Cauti Rifle Uniform Concept #2
Cauti Small-bore Cannon
Em shah tey et naGÇÖemsaer ek rahvi, amarr osedah gasi ubday pahk. Ekin tey vahka ijed div ema ziel. Et tey vamatal em.
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True Adamance
Praetoriani Classiarii Templares Praetoria Imperialis Excubitoris
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Posted - 2015.10.06 01:12:00 -
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A Wild Ria Appears!
Sia'tri used Suicidally Running into a Smoking Volcano for a Gem Stone.
It was Super Effective.
Ria is now Romanced. Ria's heartstrings we're tugged.
Ria used 'Pity Se..... Ahem..... True Love!'.
Decreased Sia'tri's Physical Attack. Ria fainted.
Sia'tri gained 1565 Exp, and has attained Level 69.
Sia'tri is evolving.......
Sia'tri evolved into....... 'A Badass'!
Em shah tey et naGÇÖemsaer ek rahvi, amarr osedah gasi ubday pahk. Ekin tey vahka ijed div ema ziel. Et tey vamatal em.
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sir RAVEN WING
RabbitGang 13 COILS
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Posted - 2015.10.06 17:23:00 -
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Well, my laptop's screen is ******.
So I am taking a leave until I can get a new one. o7 guys.
And True, that siege better be done when I get back, you'll have more than enough time. o7
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Vash Warren
SMARTCREW Smart Deploy
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Posted - 2015.10.07 03:25:00 -
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On my phone wont be to long.
Over all okay on images. I imagined more use of layered leather on defense but in a casle siege the super plate makes sense. Maybe a bit more less symbolism with sculls. Just a litte flair. More than Caldari. Lot less than Amarr. Also Grey I always imagined a slightly younger figure. Deep dark hair. In our human equviant of 30s or so. The other thing we need to finalize is Tal-Man body structure. When I started they were all 6 feet or more. Then I said 8 or 9 feet. Then True went up to some where of 10 to 12 feet tall which may be a bit excessive as that would almost make Tal-Man unable to reproduce with other species. Which would kills some creative aspects.
Caldari Body, Caldari Core, But Amarr with my Soul.
23 Mil SP, Next Adventure. Amarr Assult/ Caldari Logi
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True Adamance
Praetoriani Classiarii Templares Praetoria Imperialis Excubitoris
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Posted - 2015.10.07 03:29:00 -
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Vash Warren wrote:On my phone wont be to long.
Over all okay on images. I imagined more use of layered leather on defense but in a casle siege the super plate makes sense. Maybe a bit more less symbolism with sculls. Just a litte flair. More than Caldari. Lot less than Amarr. Also Grey I always imagined a slightly younger figure. Deep dark hair. In our human equviant of 30s or so. The other thing we need to finalize is Tal-Man body structure. When I started they were all 6 feet or more. Then I said 8 or 9 feet. Then True went up to some where of 10 to 12 feet tall which may be a bit excessive as that would almost make Tal-Man unable to reproduce with other species. Which would kills some creative aspects.
Let us know. Either way these Tal-Mani 8-9' Giants still have enormous builds if you know what I am saying......
Em shah tey et naGÇÖemsaer ek rahvi, amarr osedah gasi ubday pahk. Ekin tey vahka ijed div ema ziel. Et tey vamatal em.
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Jonny D Buelle
The Warlords Legion
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Posted - 2015.10.07 03:41:00 -
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True Adamance wrote:Vash Warren wrote:On my phone wont be to long.
Over all okay on images. I imagined more use of layered leather on defense but in a casle siege the super plate makes sense. Maybe a bit more less symbolism with sculls. Just a litte flair. More than Caldari. Lot less than Amarr. Also Grey I always imagined a slightly younger figure. Deep dark hair. In our human equviant of 30s or so. The other thing we need to finalize is Tal-Man body structure. When I started they were all 6 feet or more. Then I said 8 or 9 feet. Then True went up to some where of 10 to 12 feet tall which may be a bit excessive as that would almost make Tal-Man unable to reproduce with other species. Which would kills some creative aspects. Let us know. Either way these Tal-Mani 8-9' Giants still have enormous builds if you know what I am saying......
Oh god, you're going to rip my people apart!
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True Adamance
Praetoriani Classiarii Templares Praetoria Imperialis Excubitoris
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Posted - 2015.10.07 04:02:00 -
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Jonny D Buelle wrote:True Adamance wrote:Vash Warren wrote:On my phone wont be to long.
Over all okay on images. I imagined more use of layered leather on defense but in a casle siege the super plate makes sense. Maybe a bit more less symbolism with sculls. Just a litte flair. More than Caldari. Lot less than Amarr. Also Grey I always imagined a slightly younger figure. Deep dark hair. In our human equviant of 30s or so. The other thing we need to finalize is Tal-Man body structure. When I started they were all 6 feet or more. Then I said 8 or 9 feet. Then True went up to some where of 10 to 12 feet tall which may be a bit excessive as that would almost make Tal-Man unable to reproduce with other species. Which would kills some creative aspects. Let us know. Either way these Tal-Mani 8-9' Giants still have enormous builds if you know what I am saying...... Oh god, you're going to rip my people apart!
Whatever. It's fine if it happens to background characters nobody cares about but if he tearsf Shuri'den in half while in the throes of passion my people are going to be the laughing stock of the entire world for centuries.
Em shah tey et naGÇÖemsaer ek rahvi, amarr osedah gasi ubday pahk. Ekin tey vahka ijed div ema ziel. Et tey vamatal em.
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Vash Warren
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Posted - 2015.10.07 12:14:00 -
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place holder
Caldari Body, Caldari Core, But Amarr with my Soul.
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True Adamance
Praetoriani Classiarii Templares Praetoria Imperialis Excubitoris
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Posted - 2015.10.07 21:20:00 -
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Okay I'll finish the Siege today but be warned that I want to do a rewrite. I'm just not happy with how it's turning out right now.
Em shah tey et naGÇÖemsaer ek rahvi, amarr osedah gasi ubday pahk. Ekin tey vahka ijed div ema ziel. Et tey vamatal em.
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Vash Warren
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Posted - 2015.10.07 21:39:00 -
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okay cool. Read that comment this morning almost spit frosted mini wheats all over my screen. Good job.
Caldari Body, Caldari Core, But Amarr with my Soul.
23 Mil SP, Next Adventure. Amarr Assult/ Caldari Logi
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True Adamance
Praetoriani Classiarii Templares Praetoria Imperialis Excubitoris
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Posted - 2015.10.07 21:45:00 -
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Vash Warren wrote:okay cool. Read that comment this morning almost spit frosted mini wheats all over my screen. Good job.
I was considering doing a satirical kill feed for heroes and world leaders in this RP as they die. Frankly I don't want it to look like this.
Tal Mani Primeminister - Age Osmari Commander - Combat Shuri'den'Shalvys - ****ed to Death Artugian Warrior - Tal Man Rifle Tal Man Slave Owner - Venom Tal Man Slave Owner - Evisceration Paric Spy - Throat Cut
Em shah tey et naGÇÖemsaer ek rahvi, amarr osedah gasi ubday pahk. Ekin tey vahka ijed div ema ziel. Et tey vamatal em.
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Jonny D Buelle
The Warlords Legion
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Posted - 2015.10.07 22:00:00 -
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True Adamance wrote:Vash Warren wrote:okay cool. Read that comment this morning almost spit frosted mini wheats all over my screen. Good job. I was considering doing a satirical kill feed for heroes and world leaders in this RP as they die. Frankly I don't want it to look like this. Tal Mani Primeminister - Age Osmari Commander - Combat Shuri'den'Shalvys - ****ed to Death Artugian Warrior - Tal Man Rifle Tal Man Slave Owner - Venom Tal Man Slave Owner - Evisceration Paric Spy - Throat Cut
Artugian Summoner - Summoning Ritual *Accidently slaps Ancestor* *Ancestor becomes Twisted* Bloody Jon Greatclaw - Twisted Ancestor Ria - Twisted Ancestor Sia'tri - Twisted Ancestor Shuum - Twisted Ancestor Rest of Artuga - Twisted Ancestor.
One small mistake and everyone on Artuga dies.
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