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steadyhand amarr
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Posted - 2014.02.18 23:59:00 -
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yeh was thinking that i really like that idea ok two posts one of steady actions and one big plot post and a bit of downtime recovery time before the next bit :)
"i dont care about you or your goals, just show me the dam isk"
winner of EU squad cup
GOGO power rangers
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Jacques Cayton II
Providence Guard
Templis CALSF
615
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Posted - 2014.02.19 01:38:00 -
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Hawkeye why you no mention me in your post booooo
We fight for the future of the State not our
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Hawk-eye Occultus
Omega Elite Mercs INC.
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Posted - 2014.02.19 01:45:00 -
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I was too busy hiding behind a reactor while my leg almost melted.
Plus, for all I know, you are doing this at the exact same time that I go up the stairs...
Intelligence without ambition; is a bird without wings...
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Ermac Vesely
Molon Labe.
General Tso's Alliance
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Posted - 2014.02.19 02:15:00 -
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Well seems like I should have taken done that one little bastard while I had the chance now im screwed |
Jaysyn Larrisen
OSG Planetary Operations
Covert Intervention
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Posted - 2014.02.19 02:33:00 -
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Just got back in fellows. Getting caught up on the story and weill get my post up this evening...I've got some ground to make up!
"Endless money forms the sinews of War." - Cicero
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True Adamance
Praetoriani Classiarii Templares
Praetoria Imperialis Excubitoris
7301
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Posted - 2014.02.19 03:14:00 -
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You know Ermac I think cowards do make excellent characters, shameful ones sure, but by far the more interesting.
"Just know that though our enemies may only #YOLO, through God's grace we can #YOLF at his side." - Disciple of Kesha
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Ermac Vesely
Molon Labe.
General Tso's Alliance
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Posted - 2014.02.19 03:28:00 -
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I could make one but I think he/she would turn out as the whipping boy/girl of karma |
Jacques Cayton II
Providence Guard
Templis CALSF
615
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Posted - 2014.02.19 04:51:00 -
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ok im done with posting until someone sees a vehicle inside the compound or outside
We fight for the future of the State not our
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Jaysyn Larrisen
OSG Planetary Operations
Covert Intervention
749
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Posted - 2014.02.19 05:21:00 -
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Post is up. I dealt the most of the guys shooting down on us from the second floor and revenged Jacques death in the stairwell.
huzzah.
"Endless money forms the sinews of War." - Cicero
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Jacques Cayton II
Providence Guard
Templis CALSF
615
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Posted - 2014.02.19 05:23:00 -
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Jaysyn Larrisen wrote:Post is up. I dealt the most of the guys shooting down on us from the second floor and revenged Jacques death in the stairwell.
huzzah.
o7
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Denak Kalamari
Intaki Liberation Front
Intaki Prosperity Initiative
1136
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Posted - 2014.02.19 08:12:00 -
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Okay, post has been finished. Just so Kador knows what's going on, at the very end when Denak was banging on the hatch of the top turret to distract the Harbinger pilot, a shot from the Raiders on the bridge managed to scrape by Denak's head, the resulting shock knocking Denak unconscious, and off the tank. There were still eight Raiders left on the bridge, the Harbinger was unharmed and the Bloodsport had a part of its engine exposed. The tank traps had also been destroyed, allowing access to the facility again.
Grahisha of ILF // Writer of Thoughts of a Clone Soldier // Latest entry published Feb. 10th
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True Adamance
Praetoriani Classiarii Templares
Praetoria Imperialis Excubitoris
7312
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Posted - 2014.02.19 10:51:00 -
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Okay most recent post is up now but I don'tfeel its up to my usual quality, I'll edit it tomorrow morning, with an end to those two HAV, and the Adamance moving up to Denak.
"Just know that though our enemies may only #YOLO, through God's grace we can #YOLF at his side." - Disciple of Kesha
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Denak Kalamari
Intaki Liberation Front
Intaki Prosperity Initiative
1137
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Posted - 2014.02.19 11:08:00 -
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I found it good, considering the space restrictions I constantly have to struggle with(I think I've had to edit each one of my posts to meet the character limit).
I'll be looking forward to what you'll be writing tomorrow morning.
Grahisha of ILF // Writer of Thoughts of a Clone Soldier // Latest entry published Feb. 10th
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Ermac Vesely
Molon Labe.
General Tso's Alliance
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Posted - 2014.02.19 12:13:00 -
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We are still missing one thing here what happend to hawkeye and "princess"? |
Hawk-eye Occultus
Omega Elite Mercs INC.
45
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Posted - 2014.02.19 16:15:00 -
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Oh, I'm still working on that scene.
It'll be a short cut from having to spend 10 minutes hacking into the lab (however, I will need someone else to decide if my "method" worked, to avoid self-bias)
Needless to say, 'Princess' will be having a VERY bad day...
Intelligence without ambition; is a bird without wings...
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Denak Kalamari
Intaki Liberation Front
Intaki Prosperity Initiative
1137
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Posted - 2014.02.19 16:20:00 -
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I don't think you have any hurry with that Hawkeye, considering Steady still has three posts to write, and me and Kador are still in the middle of a scene.
Grahisha of ILF // Writer of Thoughts of a Clone Soldier // Latest entry published Feb. 10th
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Jacques Cayton II
Providence Guard
Templis CALSF
616
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Posted - 2014.02.19 17:19:00 -
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Hawkeye if you want bring princess to Jacques he can help with the little talk you'll have
We fight for the future of the State not our
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Hawk-eye Occultus
Omega Elite Mercs INC.
46
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Posted - 2014.02.19 17:20:00 -
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Jacques Cayton II wrote:Hawkeye if you want bring princess to Jacques he can help with the little talk you'll have
Shh... I'm busy interrogating 'Princess'.
He'll be screaming soon...
Intelligence without ambition; is a bird without wings...
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Ermac Vesely
Molon Labe.
General Tso's Alliance
26
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Posted - 2014.02.19 17:41:00 -
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Hawk-eye Occultus wrote:Jacques Cayton II wrote:Hawkeye if you want bring princess to Jacques he can help with the little talk you'll have Shh... I'm busy interrogating 'Princess'. He'll be screaming soon...
Hawk you are such a damn tease |
steadyhand amarr
TeamPlayers
Negative-Feedback
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Posted - 2014.02.19 18:05:00 -
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Note for story reasions A i rader will die before giving up codes fan+átics are just like that B. I cant have u break in ahead of time for story reasions.
As a personal note i would prefere if u didnt do graphic toucher scenses as i have personal issues with due to ****** up personal history. However i cant stop you its matter of personal taste.
Before you ask ******* someone up in combat not equal to tortcher
"i dont care about you or your goals, just show me the dam isk"
winner of EU squad cup
GOGO power rangers
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Denak Kalamari
Intaki Liberation Front
Intaki Prosperity Initiative
1137
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Posted - 2014.02.19 18:13:00 -
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Don't forget the fact that graphic content can be against the rules of the forums, so I recommend you don't do that. Heck, I planned to make my brief snapping period with Denak much longer, and much more graphic than originally intended, but decided against it and cut it down a lot.
Nomming with excessive violence and gore doesn't really make interesting stories, and should be left out of this place, in my opinion.
Grahisha of ILF // Writer of Thoughts of a Clone Soldier // Latest entry published Feb. 10th
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Ermac Vesely
Molon Labe.
General Tso's Alliance
26
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Posted - 2014.02.19 18:22:00 -
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now im hoping that he is not overdoing it.... |
steadyhand amarr
TeamPlayers
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Posted - 2014.02.19 18:26:00 -
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Yeh i got that vibe which is why i spoke up. I have a small ammount of hope that once were done i can pass it along to logibro as like a featcher item but i cant do that if this goes over pg13 :-P
"i dont care about you or your goals, just show me the dam isk"
winner of EU squad cup
GOGO power rangers
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True Adamance
Praetoriani Classiarii Templares
Praetoria Imperialis Excubitoris
7317
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Posted - 2014.02.19 19:10:00 -
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As Steady said.....you cant break fanatics via physical torture.
"Just know that though our enemies may only #YOLO, through God's grace we can #YOLF at his side." - Disciple of Kesha
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Hawk-eye Occultus
Omega Elite Mercs INC.
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Posted - 2014.02.19 19:31:00 -
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I don't think it's too graphic. About the most graphic thing in it is "between solidity and mushiness".
I'm also being careful to not fall victim to self-bias; which is why I need someone else to decide the success of the scenario.
Should be up in a min.
Intelligence without ambition; is a bird without wings...
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Ermac Vesely
Molon Labe.
General Tso's Alliance
26
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Posted - 2014.02.19 19:32:00 -
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Maybe you can chug them into the world of the carebears that could be enough to break him.
Oh and before I forget it, I hope I'm not getting worse with my writing. Was the attack by the Raider too predictable? Or is my combat description getting boring?
Is what I write still okay or is it under the average? And do I get that Blood Raider feeling with the dialouge and description of how they look or is it far too off from the typical idea of a Raider?
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Hawk-eye Occultus
Omega Elite Mercs INC.
46
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Posted - 2014.02.19 19:49:00 -
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True, since you are the messenger of the dice gods, would you see if they believe that princess should talk?
Intelligence without ambition; is a bird without wings...
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Denak Kalamari
Intaki Liberation Front
Intaki Prosperity Initiative
1139
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Posted - 2014.02.19 20:04:00 -
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Ermac Vesely wrote:Maybe you can chug them into the world of the carebears that could be enough to break him.
Oh and before I forget it, I hope I'm not getting worse with my writing. Was the attack by the Raider too predictable? Or is my combat description getting boring?
Is what I write still okay or is it under the average? And do I get that Blood Raider feeling with the dialouge and description of how they look or is it far too off from the typical idea of a Raider?
I think you're doing well. There's still a lot of room for improvement, but you're getting there!
Also, I assume you'll create a new post to pick me up and finish off the two tanks Kador?
Grahisha of ILF // Writer of Thoughts of a Clone Soldier // Latest entry published Feb. 10th
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True Adamance
Praetoriani Classiarii Templares
Praetoria Imperialis Excubitoris
7318
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Posted - 2014.02.19 20:26:00 -
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Denak Kalamari wrote:Ermac Vesely wrote:Maybe you can chug them into the world of the carebears that could be enough to break him.
Oh and before I forget it, I hope I'm not getting worse with my writing. Was the attack by the Raider too predictable? Or is my combat description getting boring?
Is what I write still okay or is it under the average? And do I get that Blood Raider feeling with the dialouge and description of how they look or is it far too off from the typical idea of a Raider?
I think you're doing well. There's still a lot of room for improvement, but you're getting there! Also, I assume you'll create a new post to pick me up and finish off the two tanks Kador?
Aye expect edits in bound.
I have the words clear in my mind now.
"Just know that though our enemies may only #YOLO, through God's grace we can #YOLF at his side." - Disciple of Kesha
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Denak Kalamari
Intaki Liberation Front
Intaki Prosperity Initiative
1140
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Posted - 2014.02.19 20:31:00 -
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True Adamance wrote:Denak Kalamari wrote:Also, I assume you'll create a new post to pick me up and finish off the two tanks Kador? Aye expect edits in bound. I have the words clear in my mind now.
Cool stuff, looking forward to it!
And by the way, Denak's dropsuit is charred and has holes in many places, along with a part of his helmet cracked open, revealing a part of a burnt and shrapnel covered face, all taken from the gunfire he endured while helping Kador out. Just thought you would know what he looked like if/when Kador arrived to pick his (yet) unconscious body. Armour repairers can do wonders in fixing holes and cracks.
Grahisha of ILF // Writer of Thoughts of a Clone Soldier // Latest entry published Feb. 10th
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