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Denak Kalamari
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Posted - 2014.02.10 23:06:00 -
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Well, guess I should dip my head into this then, here goes nothing:
Name: Denak Kalamari Sex: Male Race: Gallente Bloodline: Intaki Personality: Polite, sometimes ruthless, straightforward and quiet, Denak focuses on getting the job done quickly and efficiently without hassling.
Appearance: Frame of reference here. Denak is quite well built and stands naturally at 6' 1" in his leisure clone, and often wears a black vest with a grey t-shirt, black combat pants and boots.
Other notes: - Anti-Federation and very pro-Intaki in his opinions - Exclusively operates in Gallente scout suits, mostly with shotguns and remote explosives
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Denak Kalamari
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Posted - 2014.02.10 23:34:00 -
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steadyhand amarr wrote:started to have me worried for a sec their Denak :P. anyone else who wants to join in you got till 20:00 EvE time tomorrow What? You were worried that I'd call out your story as horrible?
Really, aside the grammatical errors which are rampant, you've made the post pretty well. The only change I'd make would be to switch uplinks for Clone Reanimation Units. Uplinks use wormhole technology to move you short distances within a battle, and your body is already constructed when you spawn in an uplink. A clone reanimation unit is used for interstellar jumpclone transit, where your body, and any armor or clothing you have are constructed.
EDIT: Denak has no prior experience with Blood Raiders, other than having read about their habits. He doesn't really care of them, he's mostly in it for the reward.
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Denak Kalamari
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Posted - 2014.02.11 08:35:00 -
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steadyhand amarr wrote:Pre battle chit chat is fine :-).
And denak uplinks where correctly used and im glad someone will notice the small details :-P I always notice the small details. And I'm still the supporter of the idea that uplinks are only used for short-range transport, not interstellar travel(unless conspiracy theories).
But anyway, if you want to do small talk with Denak Kador, go ahead.
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Denak Kalamari
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Posted - 2014.02.11 17:26:00 -
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Sounds neat.
And as a small note, I'd recommend that any OOC talk or questions should be directed to this thread rather than the one in the IGS, just to keep it clean and neatly organized.
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Denak Kalamari
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Posted - 2014.02.11 20:38:00 -
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I think you are referring to this, it's mostly RP guidelines in general for DUST and EVE.
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Denak Kalamari
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Posted - 2014.02.11 22:44:00 -
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Jaysyn Larrisen wrote:steadyhand amarr wrote:Hi guys right iv been working on this story for a few weeks now and i think its ready.
the basic idea is this to allow us to explore the combat side of our characters in like a mission. allow a bit more live banter and the such and what it would be like going up normally mortals the targets of the day. blood raiders as i think everyone and race will be happy to kill them
im still writing the intro post as my English suuucckks it takes me a while proof read them.
so if your interested sign up here. while i make the intro post which should be up by the end of the day use the following template just so everyone knows what their dealing with.
Character Name Sex race bloodline personality
looks ("free text")
other items of note.
Still got room? Name- Jaysyn Larrisen Sex- male Race / bloodline - Caldari. Mixed Civire and Gallente blood; some family on Caldari prime. Personality - easy going, confident air about him...quick wit sprinkled with a does of snark and gallows humor. The informal manner masks a razor sharp tactical mind and innovative problem solver...Jaysyn was well respected up and coming officer in the Ishakone Watch Special Operations Directorate before becoming a Duster. Ishakone spirited him away to Mordu's Legion with several other early Caldari Dusters before the initial purge. Since then he has built a solid rep as goto problem solver in numerous contracts across the 4 empires and the occasional freelance contract with other entities in New Eden. Jaysen is often hired for tactical command positions or deep reconnaissance and high value target strikes operations. Looks - a bit above average height, brown hair with grey highlights frame his light skinned face. The smile, or rather smirk, that routinely hangs on his face stops at his eyes. Often the grey/green of his eyes seem more like robotic optics boring into you no matter how loud he laughs or the seemingly friendly tone of his voice. On occasion, the cold eyes are replaced with an electric fire of emotion that feels like a rail gun charging...this usually indicates things are about to get sporty. Other notes - Jaysyn runs a CalAssault optimized for high regen shield tanking, excellent scanning, and operates a hard hitting Kaalikiota Rail rifles, Core Locus grenades, and his trusty Ishakone Assault SMG. Just a small note about your RP Jaysyn, it's been bugging me ever since you started visiting the IGS.
The corporation is Ishukone, with a u, not Ishakone. Also it's Kaalakiotta, you should look up the megacorp names from EVElopedia, it's been bugging me that you always write them wrong.
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Denak Kalamari
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Posted - 2014.02.12 08:43:00 -
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steadyhand amarr wrote:Sorry skare got to draw the line at somepoint however i will be running others right after this one.
On a unrealted note u guys are assholes to mortals :-P I was just showing indifference to the tech, it wasn't my intention!
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Denak Kalamari
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Posted - 2014.02.12 10:18:00 -
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True Adamance wrote:Am I cool to share some Blood Raider Hunting tips or are you keen on doing that Steady? I'd prefer to check with Dagger Two first just to make sure we have the Blood Raider style nailed down. If my opinion weighs anything, I'd say your assumptions about the Blood Raiders are correct. The only Blood Raider vessels in EVE Online all focus on capacitor vampires(taking your target's energy and adding to yours) and stasis webifiers(slowing down target ships), and the EVElopedia articles suggest at them being highly aggressive in combat.
They obviously want subjects to be alive, if barely, so they can extract blood for their rituals, so they'd use tranquilizing weapons for capturing, although they would obviously use lethal weapons on armored opponents like dusters and podders. Clone blood is especially valuable for the Blood Raiders, so they would take extra effort in capturing them alive, thus making them even more aggressive. Offing yourself and waking up in a new body in case of being captured by the Blood Raiders seems like the way to go, as they are going to use whatever means necessary to keep you alive. Suicide bombing tactics could also work.
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Denak Kalamari
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Posted - 2014.02.12 20:37:00 -
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True Adamance wrote:steadyhand amarr wrote:sorry my bad i thought i made it clear we were still on the station will remember for next time, as of right now your still in and around IGS, your characters have around 24 hours to get ready before the ship must leave.
if your ever confused ask here. im still a bit rusty :) True is ready and like all combat operations will remain on standby until deployment. As to your question Ermac if no one has any qualms I will compose Kador's summary and analysis of Blood Raider hunting and combat doctrine, and make the announcement. This is likely to be a full post, and entirely speech based. I'm also waiting for you to reply to my post, I've been waiting all day. :|
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Denak Kalamari
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Posted - 2014.02.12 21:27:00 -
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I'm UTC + 2, I live in Finland.
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Denak Kalamari
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Posted - 2014.02.13 09:45:00 -
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I was kind of expecting you to reply to my actions before but, this works too. At least I'll have something to do for the day.
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Denak Kalamari
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Posted - 2014.02.13 12:38:00 -
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steadyhand amarr wrote:For sake of saving everyone editing we seem to be having a small get together before we board the dropship. Wait, dropship? How is that going to work, they're not for interstellar travel, or even entering an atmosphere, they're open vehicles with no sealed compartments whatsoever. You mentioned previously that we're all still in the Summit, which would be in Yulai, at the core of highsec. Not even Blood Raiders are dumb enough to assault through dozens of jumps in Amarr/Minmatar highsec to get into Yulai, CONCORD's home system.
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Denak Kalamari
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Posted - 2014.02.13 13:15:00 -
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Hawk-eye Occultus wrote:It could be similar to how the troops on the "Immortal" trailer (at 1:18 - 1:40) were deployed. It can be clearly seen that the smaller troop transport deployed from the larger Jump Capable "mothership" before entering the atmosphere. Also, just pointing this out now rather than later, I'm fairly sure that all our dropsuits are suable for use in a hard vacuum. My understanding has always been that dropsuits have filtration systems to make toxic airs breathable, but they don't have oxygen tanks to survive in a vaccuum.
And the "mothership" is a Coercer destroyer, attacked by Minmatar Rifter frigates. It's hardly even mothership size when compared to Titans, or any supercap. And the smaller craft attached to it seems like an Amarr shuttle or transport ship, but it isn't any existing model in the game. In any case, that's more along the lines what I was thinking, where we would be picked up by a shuttle which we would use to reach the destination. There isn't a need for a larger ship, as all spaceships have warp capability, prime method of travel between star systems for non-capital ship classes is done by the use of jumpgates, which rely on external technology.
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Denak Kalamari
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Posted - 2014.02.13 15:54:00 -
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steadyhand amarr wrote:Amarr class dropship in the style of the one in templar one book. The ones we use in game are in atmosphere varents.
Where we are right now is important to story. If u think the whole thing stinks please say so. I have on purpose made the whole thing strange.
noone thought that station could be knockrd offline till an elder fleet showed up one day.
My story telling style is desgined to get players talking and exploreing whats going on i made this thread because i knew as we progressed at some point you guys will try and work out whats going on.
I encourage you to debate it :-)
I'm not really saying the story sucks, I'm just arguing the incorrect use of a term for what it implies when added with the rest of what we know of this story. From what I can tell, it just doesn't make sense to use a dropship, because Raiders can't and won't go all the way to Yulai, unless we use interstellar travel which can't be done using dropships. But since you addressed my concerns, I'll let it pass.
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Denak Kalamari
Intaki Liberation Front Intaki Prosperity Initiative
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Posted - 2014.02.13 21:24:00 -
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Just to clarify from my latest post to both Kador and Steady, it happened after Steady and Denak had their message conversation, and before the Gallente woman told of them having an hour to be deployed. It seemed to make the most sense.
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Denak Kalamari
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Posted - 2014.02.13 22:21:00 -
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steadyhand amarr wrote:removing timelocks on when things need to be done. feels too restrictive and not fair on people who might be busy will let everyone catch up as some others are not getting as much "screen time" :D as us. remember da shooting starts tomorrow :) I have no life, naturally I get and deserve more screen time.
But jokes aside, I just like posting a lot when I have something to post, but I'd be happy to let someone else have the spotlight, so to speak. :3
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Denak Kalamari
Intaki Liberation Front Intaki Prosperity Initiative
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Posted - 2014.02.14 02:34:00 -
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I don't know why I'm awake at 4:30 AM, but apparently at that time I can write very good posts on my smartphone.
Oh yeah, it wouldn't be impossible for me and Heathen to be teamed up as a very loose pair to increase our reconnaissance effectiveness or just help keep each other alive. In any case Denak has to return to the main group every once in a while to stock on ammunition.
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Denak Kalamari
Intaki Liberation Front Intaki Prosperity Initiative
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Posted - 2014.02.14 03:42:00 -
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Jacques Cayton II wrote:I like how Jacques is the only one getting all prepped in the dropship ^-^. And I wander if the depleted uranium would glow? Meh I'd brather it be a slightly lighter gray Denak peformed his preps during the briefing, and in the far corner of the landing bay area.
Speaking of which, I think everyone is about ready to board the dropship and move on with the mission? If everyone is ready Steady can advance the plot earlier.
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Denak Kalamari
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Posted - 2014.02.14 04:00:00 -
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21yrOld Knight wrote:Ermac naturally my charcter would go well with your due to the fact he only cares about isk. He would not like you due to that fact that molon took i think 4 districts from pradox. Personally I don't hate you, heck i barely know you but because my character cares about isk so much when he sees your tags he will not really like you. You need to be here a little more often if you want to be involved in the story. If you post just once a few days, you're going to be horribly left behind.
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Denak Kalamari
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Posted - 2014.02.14 13:08:00 -
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Ermac Vesely wrote:what do you mean with 30 second pre battle thought steady? And with pairings you mean you also put them in a fitting team in your eyes is that right? What he meant is that before we finally get deployed into battle, Steady is going to have a short speech.
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Denak Kalamari
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Posted - 2014.02.14 20:59:00 -
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I call dibs on first post after Steady is done!
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Denak Kalamari
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Posted - 2014.02.14 21:10:00 -
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Oh yeah, for those wondering, this is the map the fight is taking place, use your in-game memories of the map to operate around.
Also working on a reply now, should be up in an hour or two.
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Denak Kalamari
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Posted - 2014.02.14 21:55:00 -
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Okay, post I screwed up and accidentally clicked post, I'll quickly finish it, just hang on! For a better understanding of how Denak moved within the map, he initially landed on the L9 grid on the map, making his way within the silo where A would usually be, then into the supply depot room to hack it and deploy the initial set of uplinks.
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Denak Kalamari
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Posted - 2014.02.14 22:12:00 -
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Okay, post is finished. Type away!
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Denak Kalamari
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Posted - 2014.02.15 03:14:00 -
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Heathen Bastard wrote:Hope I wasn't too over the top with my post. It was good, although it felt kind of empty after I had to cut down my post for the character limit in comparison(which I also tried to make realistic, hope I succeeded!) ^^
I'll get set on working a reply in a few hours.
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Denak Kalamari
Intaki Liberation Front Intaki Prosperity Initiative
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Posted - 2014.02.15 03:46:00 -
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That's why I tried to keep my engagement small and controlled, as to not be too over the top and made Denak appear like some demigod. I was going under the guise that the Raiders were still confused and couldn't gove much resistance on the initial moments of the deployment, until they reorganized themselves. I do have full expectations for Denak to die many, many times during the entire operation, and I already have scenarios planned for them.
Also, I might cook up one where Denak has to rely on Kador's help, more towards the end of the operation.
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Denak Kalamari
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Posted - 2014.02.15 07:23:00 -
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Okay Heathen, made a post and basically gave you two options:
1. Heathen goes and starts disrupting the forces 2. Heathen stays with Denak defending the supply depot room
Either way, there's going to be some bloody fighting coming up on the next post!
Also, I used a scanner several times, it should display the locations of red dots for a handful of seconds in your next post, so keep that in mind.
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Denak Kalamari
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Posted - 2014.02.15 13:34:00 -
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steadyhand amarr wrote:Denaka when that unit come for you, you are going to find they use slaves to run in first, like run in their and tell us what we are dealing with if you make it back. sort of strat.
the raiders know you are here, adjust their fighting style to reflect numbers and discipline expected of royal commandos (UK) amry rangers (US)
also you will have steady as back up in sec :D Quite funny how Steady was supposedly the first one to deploy, but the last one to actually do anything when everyone else has already trumped on and had their first engagements.
Anyway, are these slaves armored, do they have weapons? How many are there? Are they willing slaves or forced, as in can I tell them to shut up and take cover while dispatching the raiders? From what you said I assume these slaves would be very expendable, with light armor and cheap low-grade weapons and willing slaves, but clarification would be nice.
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Denak Kalamari
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Posted - 2014.02.15 14:48:00 -
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Well that's a relief.
Anyway, I'll wait for Heathen to make a post first before making my reply.
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Denak Kalamari
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Posted - 2014.02.15 16:41:00 -
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Heathen Bastard wrote:I dunno, they can't scan me, that seems to catch a lot of people by surprise. Well, you could do well if you limited your engagements to just small groups and not take on full platoons, that is quite manageable. I've always imagined the scenario where a scout with cloak just kills one person from a group, recloaks and waits for the paranoia to strike in before repeating the process, I should do that at some point. :3
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Denak Kalamari
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Posted - 2014.02.15 18:03:00 -
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Okay, after struggling with the stupid character limit not displaying information correctly, I have managed to write out my post. I am half-expecting Kador to use his detonator and activate Denak's remaining explosives, as the Raiders on the north end of the having pretty much overran Denak by now.
Also, the south doorway leading into the supply depot room is underground in the J5 grid, and the northern doorway in the H5 grid, in case people were confused.
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Denak Kalamari
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Posted - 2014.02.15 20:38:00 -
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When I'm reading through all this, my character suddenly feels very weak when compared to others. Denak dispatches a group of four with a clever tactic and gets overwhelmed by suicide charging and barely armored slaves. Meanwhile others go on four tank killing sprees and slaughter platoons of enemies. :/
Then again Denak might be the most sane person around, in contrast.
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Denak Kalamari
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Posted - 2014.02.15 20:49:00 -
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I guess one factor might be the fact that I focus more on Denak's personal thoughts and reactions rather than direct action. I get more enjoyment out of the detailed descriptions of what is happening, rather than the oohs and aahs of going on a massacre on the enemies. What Denak excels at is adaptability, quick thinking and able to anticipate events well, so depending on what Kador and Steady does, Denak's next spawn could involve a lot more stealthy ninja combat.
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Denak Kalamari
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Posted - 2014.02.15 20:52:00 -
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Also, Denak can volunteer up for the hacking duty of the lab door, hacking is at 5 and he happens to have a fit with a complex codebreaker to maximize the efficiency of a hack. :3
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Denak Kalamari
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Posted - 2014.02.15 21:08:00 -
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True Adamance wrote:Denak Kalamari wrote:When I'm reading through all this, my character suddenly feels very weak when compared to others. Denak dispatches a group of four with a clever tactic and gets overwhelmed by suicide charging and barely armored slaves. Meanwhile others go on four tank killing sprees and slaughter platoons of enemies. :/
Then again Denak might be the most sane and professional person around, in contrast. I killed a civilian and a single raider..... either way Kador will be dying in his next post. Well, I consider Kador to be the sanest of everyone, Denak has his own detachment issues and the occasional streak of cold ruthlessness.
We can logically deduct from this that there is a direct correlation in your sanity level and your killing efficiency. All the best killers have secretly gone 514.
Also, looking forward to your post!
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Denak Kalamari
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Posted - 2014.02.16 06:10:00 -
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Hawk-eye Occultus wrote:Out of interest, where is the rally point? Or is that yet to be established? The rally point is the supply depot room underground, just outside A on the K5 grid. Currently it's being assaulted by heavy Raider forces, so depending what Kador does, and how well Steady can fend off the remaining forces, you will either successfully help defend the room or be forced to relocate to another rally point.
Reading Heathen's post, he seemed to have place the uplink on the D7 grid for a fallback point if the supply depot room is lost, we could use some clarification on that from Heathen.
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Denak Kalamari
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Posted - 2014.02.16 11:42:00 -
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So, I guess I'll have to wait for steady to finish his post before I can start woeking on mkne then? I've already got a rough outline for what Denak will do next
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Denak Kalamari
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Posted - 2014.02.16 17:05:00 -
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Yay. I had my post just about finished and then internet failures made it all go away. >.<
Sigh, I'll try to rewrite it as soon as possible, sorry guys.
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Denak Kalamari
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Posted - 2014.02.16 17:19:00 -
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Heathen Bastard wrote:Denak Kalamari wrote:Yay. I had my post just about finished and then internet failures made it all go away. >.<
Sigh, I'll try to rewrite it as soon as possible, sorry guys. that's why I save mine on my hard drive before posting if they're really long. Yeah, I should have realized to make a backup of it, I'll keep that in mind next time.
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Denak Kalamari
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Posted - 2014.02.16 18:42:00 -
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Everyone is suppose to be gathering at the CRU as Steady ordered, so yes you should.
Also, I completed my post now. I added a few paragraphs of it into my previous post to save space, so do read the previous one too!
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Denak Kalamari
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Posted - 2014.02.16 19:47:00 -
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Ermac Vesely wrote:thanks Denak edit: ehm can you please tell me where your char is right now on the map? Or are you waiting for someone specific? If you're talking about me, Denak is currently at E11, and the rally point CRU is at B9 under the roof.
The rest are either spawning there or heading that way, except Heathen who is also around the area, I think.
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Denak Kalamari
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Posted - 2014.02.16 20:29:00 -
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Ermac Vesely wrote:okay that means that I could move him behind the generator block to get the guys on the elevated position on D7 under fire which can give someone else enough time to flank them from behind while they are occupied with Ermac or did I get that wrong with the position of the enemys? Wait, move Denak behind a reactor block to shoot at people 100 meters away with a shotgun? I didn't mention any specifics for the locations of enemies, I just told that there were still a bunch around the CRU area.
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Denak Kalamari
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Posted - 2014.02.16 20:45:00 -
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Blood pens are those places where the Raiders lock up slaves and slowly bleed them to death. Conditions are inhumane at best, Kador knows the better details, they're hidden somewhere in the thread and I can't be bothered to search through it.
Also, you don't really need to ask me where you can move your character Ermac, it's your character and we'll see where it ends up.
I also volunteer to go into the blood pens.
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Denak Kalamari
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Posted - 2014.02.16 20:55:00 -
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Make stuff up about enemy locations, think of a scenario where you can best take advantage of your intended role on the battlefield. Team up with Kador on a tank and kill everything in sight, get a sniper rifle and snipe the **** out of the dudes firing from D7, you don't have to always rely on what others say to get some cool things done.
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Denak Kalamari
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Posted - 2014.02.16 21:45:00 -
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Can we just set a rule that you can't do a pause when there's three other ones used before you? This is starting to get a little ridicilous.
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Denak Kalamari
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Posted - 2014.02.17 03:12:00 -
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As a slightly off-topic note, I've always wondered how do you pilot HAVs in this game. I've always imagined this pseudo-capsuleer like interface, where you hook up your suit/brain into the tank's CPU and control it with your mind.
Neural integrations aren't unheard of with Amarr dropsuits, so perhaps tanks use a similar mechanic. Maybe you could feel the rumble of the engines in your stomach, the coolness of the shield systems on your skin, the thumping/pain of incoming fire while you operate a tank, especially one made for dusters. This might be impossible to do as this goes close to capsuleer neural uplinks, and only people with the right genetic markers can pull that off, and none of the dusters have those markers.
But it would be cool if you climbed up into a pit where you stay suspended, hooking up your suit to the CPU and controlling it with your own movements. The traditional pilot cockpit seems kind of dull and boring for a scifi world 20 000 years in the future, and something designed more for baseliners.
But back on topic, looking forward to Kador's post!
Also another note, if anyone happens to come across Denak, his suit would be slightly bloodied from his brief snap period.
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Denak Kalamari
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Posted - 2014.02.17 12:21:00 -
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steadyhand amarr wrote:iv been doing for this warhammer alliance was still a thing so dont worry Ermac you got a talent with practise you will be awesome at it :) tbh i think True and Denaka are better at writting than me and im faltered they put up with my writting.
also im gunna try narrated post at some point next week to see if its better than me writing as i have awsome diction to make up for the fact i cant write apprently.
EDIT: the SCR for example will instantly cook anyone fireing it, and the assult rifle kicks out so much radation when it fires it would kill a mortal in seconds :P A little late on this, but I'll say that it's not really your writing per se, the plot is excellent and the scenarios are well thought out. Conveying that plot into text is what you're struggling here with in my opinion. I can still get the point you're trying to make in your writing.
And really, Kador is waaaaaay ahead of me in his writing ability, I mostly just put fluff around my actions and don't pre-plan much anything. That's why I end up doing half a billion edits to everything I write. I do try though, and try to always keep my actions as authentic to the lore as possible.
Speaking of which, scrambler rifles don't instantly kill unprotected users, the problem arises when it overheats. Non-duster versions have a safety to prevent overheating, but it is removed from our versions, causing lethal amounts of heat on the user.
Also, an assault rifle's massive recoil doesn't kill a mortal. It rips their arms off and they bleed to death, but they don't die to it directly.
Ermac Vesely wrote:Can I use the Pause command again or do I have to wait for True. I'm asking because I don't want to be punished ya know? You should rather wait, Kador could do something that can affect you directly, and it would just end up in an endless edit war.
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Denak Kalamari
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Posted - 2014.02.17 21:24:00 -
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Not really much to say until Kador finishes his post or Steady does his whole Detailed-Post-Habits thingGäó
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Denak Kalamari
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Posted - 2014.02.17 22:01:00 -
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I want the special edition box-copy with unreleased concept art and a making-of film!
GOD DAMMIT I WANT MY PIGEONS!!!
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Denak Kalamari
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Posted - 2014.02.18 08:00:00 -
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Well, Kador finished the first part of his story now, and I really like it, I'll be waiting eagerly for the next part!
Also, I'd imagine that the entire battlefield would freeze for a moment or two to look at a massive ball of fire raining down from the sky very close to them. If anything, it would be a good moment for exposition, or just some narration that didn't involve combat.
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Denak Kalamari
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Posted - 2014.02.18 08:09:00 -
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True Adamance wrote:Denak Kalamari wrote:Well, Kador finished the first part of his story now, and I really like it, I'll be waiting eagerly for the next part!
Also, I'd imagine that the entire battlefield would freeze for a moment or two to look at a massive ball of fire raining down from the sky very close to them. If anything, it would be a good moment for exposition, or just some narration that didn't involve combat. If you feel I am missing something please let me know I feel I rushed this past a little too much....so if anyone has suggestions I am all ears. I'll need another hour to finish the second part. It's great, nothing else to add so far! I was thinking though that when Denak realizes that it's Kador's tank falling to the ground, he could head towards the southern gate and assist Kador in the form of an extra pair of eyes and maybe even blow up some tanks with him. :3
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Denak Kalamari
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Posted - 2014.02.18 08:45:00 -
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True Adamance wrote:There are a decent number of guys I just wont have the time or piece of mind to deal with. I mean accidentally rolling into rear of three HAV, even in Game is not a positive thing...... I mean Kador is his lore, now that I have had to revise it has dealt with Blood Raider HAV before, compared to Standard Amarrian HAV, they have significantly more powerbehind their lasers....and Three wiped out almost two full armoured Tracks back on Iesa III.
That's 4 of 6 HAV, as each Amarrian Track is 3 machines. Then Denak will have to start getting creative with remote explosives...
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Denak Kalamari
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Posted - 2014.02.18 09:00:00 -
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True Adamance wrote:Denak Kalamari wrote:True Adamance wrote:There are a decent number of guys I just wont have the time or piece of mind to deal with. I mean accidentally rolling into rear of three HAV, even in Game is not a positive thing...... I mean Kador is his lore, now that I have had to revise it has dealt with Blood Raider HAV before, compared to Standard Amarrian HAV, they have significantly more powerbehind their lasers....and Three wiped out almost two full armoured Tracks back on Iesa III.
That's 4 of 6 HAV, as each Amarrian Track is 3 machines. Then Denak will have to start getting creative with remote explosives... Many thanks, even being a pretty decent tankers, its goddamn hard to drop 3 enemy HAV without AV or HAV help. You're welcome.
It would be a great moment of exposition between the two, when suddenly one of the Blood Raider HAVs goes up in flames and the two others get crippled to be easy pickings. Kador helped Denak, so it's time for him to return the favor.
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Denak Kalamari
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Posted - 2014.02.18 09:28:00 -
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True Adamance wrote:Dodge a bolt or two of friendly laser fire and I'm sure you will make it....depending on how my two special dice develop the scenario. Well, Denak would mostly be using his cloak to approach the HAVs, climb on them and set explosives on critical points to kill them. I can also surrender to the wits of the dice, since we're both working on this together.
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Denak Kalamari
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Posted - 2014.02.18 10:38:00 -
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True Adamance wrote:Let me know how this sounds
Results
Kador is locked out of the compound as road blocks activated in one of the bastions prevent him from proceeding. There is a 50/50 chance of the road block being the in South west or south east gate house.
3 tanks are outside.
Dice rolls determined 2 Raiders entered the south west bastion, 5 entered the south east.
There are 2 HAV in the field since True got a critical rear armour shot, however his subsequent hits all resulted in failures or critical failures.
I have personally determined which gate house the switch to lower the tank traps in in.
Could you, if you are willing to take a test, attempt to write a post which allows True access to the main facility. You could go about it anyway you choose.
Hit the gate houses? Blow the tank traps directly, take out the HAV, or infantry, or any other scenario you desire.
Otherwise I am open to suggestions. To clarify, by Tank traps you mean the barriers that block access into the facility? The southwest and southeast directions are also a little hazy to me, so could you provide grid coordinates so I know for sure where they are(I'm assuming you're meaning the two blocks on M8 and M10 grids)?
Anyway, I'll see if I can come up with different scenarios to be rolled by the dice. I've never done this before so your guidance would be appreciated.
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Denak Kalamari
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Posted - 2014.02.18 12:08:00 -
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Well, apparently Kador logged off and I'm still clueless as to what to do exactly. :/
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Denak Kalamari
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Posted - 2014.02.18 20:16:00 -
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Okay, after a bit of reconsidering, I've made half a post ready, saving the other part for the time when Kador finishes his post so I can get moving.
Yeah, I know, I shouldn't have done that. At least I have half a post ready when the time comes.
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Denak Kalamari
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Posted - 2014.02.18 21:22:00 -
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Alright, I got a post done right up to the point where Denak starts helping out Kador by the gatehouses, which is when I met my dreaded nemesis Character Limit. Once I get things settled with Denak, I'll create another post which details the engagement of the tanks and infantry between Kador and Denak, and perhaps some dialogue afterwards
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Denak Kalamari
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Posted - 2014.02.18 21:31:00 -
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True Adamance wrote:Denak Kalamari wrote:Alright, I got a post done right up to the point where Denak starts helping out Kador by the gatehouses, which is when I met my dreaded nemesis Character Limit. Once I get things settled with Denak, I'll create another post which details the engagement of the tanks and infantry between Kador and Denak, and perhaps some dialogue afterwards Which gate house did you enter? Southwest or south east. I didn't get to that part yet, I ended up just outside of it and debated which one to take.
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Denak Kalamari
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Posted - 2014.02.18 21:42:00 -
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Come to think of it, I didn't really do anything in my post that would affect Kador's combat too significantly until I made a continuation post. So, I decided to finish the edit and start working on a following one once Kador is done with his.
And if I'm going to be utilizing the dice mechanic, I'd like for you to do that for me Kador. I've never done it before and I don't really know what scenarios I should be trying to choose with the dicerolls.
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Denak Kalamari
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Posted - 2014.02.18 21:50:00 -
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True Adamance wrote:Just dont hold it against me if I drop you into deep ****. As you can see from my rolls, its hard to get positive results. I'm willing to work with it, it's not the first time I've been rolled bad dice results and ended up with five critical failures in a row.
And yeah, I've been subject to dice rolls before, but I've never made one myself.
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Denak Kalamari
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Posted - 2014.02.18 22:34:00 -
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Well, perhaps my participation is pleasing to the Dice Gods and will start giving favourable results. I'll also head to bed soon, so any dice results you want to make, you should do soon so I can start working on a post before morning.
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Denak Kalamari
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Posted - 2014.02.18 22:44:00 -
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True Adamance wrote:Denak Kalamari wrote:Well, perhaps my participation is pleasing to the Dice Gods and will start giving favourable results. I'll also head to bed soon, so any dice results you want to make, you should do soon so I can start working on a post before morning. What roles do you need made. Well, I was thinking one for if Denak chooses the south-west or south-east building, how successful he is at destroying the two remaining HAVs(damaged, moderately damaged, disabled, destroyed etc.), and finally how badly injured Denak gets in the process.
On top of that, knowing which building has the controls for the tank trap would help a bunch.
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Denak Kalamari
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Posted - 2014.02.18 22:49:00 -
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True Adamance wrote:Denak Kalamari wrote:True Adamance wrote:Denak Kalamari wrote:Well, perhaps my participation is pleasing to the Dice Gods and will start giving favourable results. I'll also head to bed soon, so any dice results you want to make, you should do soon so I can start working on a post before morning. What roles do you need made. Well, I was thinking one for if Denak chooses the south-west or south-east building, how successful he is at destroying the two remaining HAVs(damaged, moderately damaged, disabled, destroyed etc.), and finally how badly injured Denak gets in the process. On top of that, knowing which building has the controls for the tank trap would help a bunch. Oh I know, but you don't, you have to guess. I meant that as an OOC information, because my post would be awfully short when I'd have to wait for your post to tell me if the choice was correct.
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Denak Kalamari
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Posted - 2014.02.18 23:04:00 -
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My body is prepared.
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Denak Kalamari
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Posted - 2014.02.18 23:12:00 -
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So, to summarize.
Denak enters the SE gate, fights the people in it and tries to find the trap controls(is it in SE or SW?). Afterwards he attempts to destroy both tanks, but did not succeed, and instead gets injured in the process.
At least he didn't die, I can live with this.
I guess he could chuck nades and divert their attention to him, giving enough time for Kador to retreat or finish them off.
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Denak Kalamari
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Posted - 2014.02.18 23:39:00 -
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True Adamance wrote:Denak Kalamari wrote:So, to summarize.
Denak enters the SE gate, fights the people in it and tries to find the trap controls(is it in SE or SW?). Afterwards he attempts to destroy both tanks, but did not succeed, and instead gets injured in the process.
At least he didn't die, I can live with this.
I guess he could chuck nades and divert their attention to him, giving enough time for Kador to retreat or finish them off.
Also, what's that: "Denak enters Result 6" mean? You enter the even number assigned gate house...in this case the wrong one...., your minor victory means you win the fight against the 2 raiders but alert the others to your presence. The Vehicle attempts mean, any attempt you make to destroy the HAV deals minor damage or fails. You however are free to do as you will outside the rolls to allow True entry to the complex.....destroy walls, the traps directly, or hit the other bunker. Yeah, I got the vehicle part, but I was just wondering why there was suddenly a 6 in the middle when 11 was already added previously, which I assumed to be the dice result for the gates.
In any case, I'll wait for you to finish your post before writing my second one
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Denak Kalamari
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Posted - 2014.02.19 08:12:00 -
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Okay, post has been finished. Just so Kador knows what's going on, at the very end when Denak was banging on the hatch of the top turret to distract the Harbinger pilot, a shot from the Raiders on the bridge managed to scrape by Denak's head, the resulting shock knocking Denak unconscious, and off the tank. There were still eight Raiders left on the bridge, the Harbinger was unharmed and the Bloodsport had a part of its engine exposed. The tank traps had also been destroyed, allowing access to the facility again.
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Denak Kalamari
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Posted - 2014.02.19 11:08:00 -
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I found it good, considering the space restrictions I constantly have to struggle with(I think I've had to edit each one of my posts to meet the character limit).
I'll be looking forward to what you'll be writing tomorrow morning.
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Denak Kalamari
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Posted - 2014.02.19 16:20:00 -
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I don't think you have any hurry with that Hawkeye, considering Steady still has three posts to write, and me and Kador are still in the middle of a scene.
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Denak Kalamari
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Posted - 2014.02.19 18:13:00 -
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Don't forget the fact that graphic content can be against the rules of the forums, so I recommend you don't do that. Heck, I planned to make my brief snapping period with Denak much longer, and much more graphic than originally intended, but decided against it and cut it down a lot.
Nomming with excessive violence and gore doesn't really make interesting stories, and should be left out of this place, in my opinion.
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Denak Kalamari
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Posted - 2014.02.19 20:04:00 -
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Ermac Vesely wrote:Maybe you can chug them into the world of the carebears that could be enough to break him. Oh and before I forget it, I hope I'm not getting worse with my writing. Was the attack by the Raider too predictable? Or is my combat description getting boring? Is what I write still okay or is it under the average? And do I get that Blood Raider feeling with the dialouge and description of how they look or is it far too off from the typical idea of a Raider?
I think you're doing well. There's still a lot of room for improvement, but you're getting there!
Also, I assume you'll create a new post to pick me up and finish off the two tanks Kador?
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Denak Kalamari
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Posted - 2014.02.19 20:31:00 -
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True Adamance wrote:Denak Kalamari wrote:Also, I assume you'll create a new post to pick me up and finish off the two tanks Kador? Aye expect edits in bound. I have the words clear in my mind now. Cool stuff, looking forward to it!
And by the way, Denak's dropsuit is charred and has holes in many places, along with a part of his helmet cracked open, revealing a part of a burnt and shrapnel covered face, all taken from the gunfire he endured while helping Kador out. Just thought you would know what he looked like if/when Kador arrived to pick his (yet) unconscious body. Armour repairers can do wonders in fixing holes and cracks.
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Denak Kalamari
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Posted - 2014.02.20 06:49:00 -
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Can't you just make your post so I can make mine? This is getting a little off-topic
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Denak Kalamari
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Posted - 2014.02.20 16:55:00 -
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Hawk-eye Occultus wrote:Well, Jaques left 8 people on the balcony alive. I killed 3 of them when I took 'Princess' for a trip; so there should be a 5 person squad left in the complex.
There are also, however, still an unknown number of people in the gatehouse near Denak and the Truest Adamance.
EDIT: Fixed the numbers. There's a total of 8 Raiders left around the gatehouse, Denak and (mostly) Kador can deal with them. It'll be interesting to see what he posts.
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Denak Kalamari
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Posted - 2014.02.20 21:38:00 -
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Post complete, decided to add some backstory for Denak to fill it up a little. Otherwise the post would have been a lot shorter. I hope you like it!
EDIT: I didn't notice that Kador had already made a post this morning, I apologize for the delay.
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Denak Kalamari
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Posted - 2014.02.20 22:04:00 -
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I noticed that, fixed to avoid further confusions.
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Denak Kalamari
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Posted - 2014.02.21 03:09:00 -
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Hawk-eye Occultus wrote:Right! Time for a quick insanity test!
REZULTZ:
Denak: Seems pretty sane to me.
Jacques: Slight tenancy of sadism.
Ermac: Hallucinates?
Steady: As the GM, you are barking mad. By law.
True: Can't see anything.
Heathen: I need to find something on this guy.
Jaysyn: Nuthin' here.
Hawkeye: Displays at least some general apathy towards life. There is a lot to Denak he doesn't show to anyone, not even Kador, that's part of his personality. Everyone he doesn't trust gets to know about him only on a need-to-know basis, and even people who are closer to Denak know little about his past. What anyone knows about his past, is the fact that he ran away young, and has lived a criminal life ever since he was a teen while working for the Intaki Syndicate, and that his decision to become a clone soldier wasn't entirely his own.
This whole "secretive of the past due to traumas" thing may seem a like a clich+¬, which I do admit it can be. But Denak has done some effed up stuff, not always by choice, and he has been grown to be a killer for the majority of his life. He can be ruthless, uncaring and apathetic if the situation demands it.
He was betrayed by those he had considered close friends, which led to him being captured by the Federation and tortured for months. Then when he was forced to become a clone soldier in the threat of a life sentence on a prison colony, where he was pushed past the breaking point even more as part of his training. He has had his own share of voices talking to him, doubts about his own humanity and questioning if he is always in control of his own body.
Denak may seem sane and calm, but that is the exterior he keeps tightly in control. When he snaps, the floodgates open and he can do all sorts of effed up stuff. And it isn't that sadistic tortureous kind of snap, but more along the lines of pure rage and dispatching everything and anyone that stands in his way snap.
I could go on about this on hours, but I'm rambling too much. Point is Denak is a lot less sane then what he lets others see, as a result of decades of murder, pain, torture and betrayal. He is very slow to trust people, and any inquiries about his past are often replied with "None of your business". First gens like Steady may be more insane than Denak will ever be, but his insanity started long before clone soldiers even existed.
Mini-ramble finished, sorry.
On another topic, I do believe Denak is either late second gen or very early third gen, considering he joined the program over a year ago before Uprising launched. I've also been thinking of adding a Multiple-Personality Disorder kind of thing for Denak, but that seems a little silly and too clich+¬, I think.
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Denak Kalamari
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Posted - 2014.02.21 15:04:00 -
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The general guideline is this:
If you were in very-very early closed beta, during Replication and Codex builds, you're first gen.
If you were around Chromosome, you're second gen.
The launch of Uprising and the whole Heth debacle marked third gen.
And right now we're probably in fourth or fifth gen under various Uprising patches, no claims on that.
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Denak Kalamari
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Posted - 2014.02.23 12:21:00 -
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Kador, maybe we can have a bit of dialogue while the Adamance heads into the complex? I'm starving of RP and it'd be a great opportunity to pass some time.
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Denak Kalamari
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Posted - 2014.02.24 00:33:00 -
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Maybe I'll write up a continuation for my previous post, have a bit of dialogue with Kador before they head back into battle.
Speaking of which, can the tank driver access the passenger compartment directly and vice versa?
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Denak Kalamari
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Posted - 2014.02.26 07:49:00 -
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I think I'll just follow Kador wherever he goes, since I am in his tank. We could still have that dialogue moment too, y'know.
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Denak Kalamari
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Posted - 2014.02.27 08:45:00 -
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True Adamance wrote:steadyhand amarr wrote:Ermac Vesely wrote:And the CONCORD dude, is he going to contact us via COM channels? and what is he going to ask? for this round concord will not have stepped in yet, you can see the trigger for concord stepping in but for now you like oh **** dropships incoming i gave true a lot more details because iv spent two years role playing steady so i want to make dam sure he gets some dam character development out of this :P. Of course, if I can I will channel him to the best of my abilities. I'm just tagging along wherever Kador goes.
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Denak Kalamari
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Posted - 2014.02.27 21:57:00 -
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So when are you going to start posting Kador? I'm just waiting for you to do something so I can respond accordingly.
Grahisha of ILF // Writer of Thoughts of a Clone Soldier // Latest entry published Feb. 10th
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Denak Kalamari
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Posted - 2014.03.01 05:23:00 -
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I'm stiiiilll waaaiiitiiin fooor Kaaadoooor.
Grahisha of ILF // Writer of Thoughts of a Clone Soldier // Latest entry published Feb. 10th
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Denak Kalamari
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Posted - 2014.03.01 17:33:00 -
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True Adamance wrote:Denak Kalamari wrote:I'm stiiiilll waaaiiitiiin fooor Kaaadoooor. Sorry I will make the post now.....what was happening? You clambered aboard the Adamance disoriented and wounded? Okay so HAV will limp back towards the city and list hard into one of the walls and a Forge Gun blasts through the side plating. The pair will then, me being unarmed and armoured, have to make it to steady and save his ass....right? That is correct, post away!
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Denak Kalamari
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Posted - 2014.03.04 15:32:00 -
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Kador.
It's been over two weeks since any major plot progression has happened. You've been saying that you'll make a post soon for two weeks now. I understand that you have a life attend to, but two weeks for a single post is just too much. Seriously, I'm getting puzzled here when nothing happens even though you're saying you'll get it done.
Either get it done or say you can't do it so we can move on, everything's halted because of you. I'm getting impatient.
Grahisha of ILF // Writer of Thoughts of a Clone Soldier // Latest entry published Feb. 10th
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Denak Kalamari
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Posted - 2014.03.05 09:51:00 -
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Okay, I made my own post now, we're still around the M10 area on the map, and we'll see where me and Kador will be heading.
Grahisha of ILF // Writer of Thoughts of a Clone Soldier // Latest entry published Feb. 10th
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Denak Kalamari
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Posted - 2014.03.06 04:53:00 -
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True Adamance wrote:Ermac Vesely wrote:damnit jacques I can't stop laughing because of "De naked" that is frikkin gold. Where did he get that from? Denak took his helmet off and I only got set on fire? I'm also in a pilot suit....aka no weapon, or armour...otherwise I wouldn't care about the fire. Didn't you know? My secret identity is Naked Squid.
My cover has been blown!
Grahisha of ILF // Writer of Thoughts of a Clone Soldier // Latest entry published Feb. 10th
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Denak Kalamari
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Posted - 2014.03.06 20:56:00 -
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steadyhand amarr wrote:has motivation for this diead off or are you guys a bit confused what to do. i dont want my players to be stuck in a limbo i know we went though a bit of dead week due to confusion but were are really close to wrapping this one up :) I'm still kind of dependant on Kador at the moment, but I think I have recharged my patience meter for some more quality posts.
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Denak Kalamari
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Posted - 2014.03.09 13:29:00 -
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Did everyone suddenly forget the pause rule? Kador still has yet to post guys, wait.
Grahisha of ILF // Writer of Thoughts of a Clone Soldier // Latest entry published Feb. 10th
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Denak Kalamari
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Posted - 2014.03.11 21:42:00 -
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I should have a post up by tomorrow, scholl projects have been keeping me quite busy the last few days!
Grahisha of ILF // Writer of Thoughts of a Clone Soldier // Latest entry published Feb. 10th
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Denak Kalamari
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Posted - 2014.03.12 21:49:00 -
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True Adamance wrote:Has Denak posted? Started working on it right now, I was waiting for Ermac to finish his own post first.
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Denak Kalamari
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Posted - 2014.03.12 22:16:00 -
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True Adamance wrote:Right and I will edit previous post to accomodate, just some simple changes to language used and internalisation no new actions besides touch the hull of the HAV before we leave.
After which I will have a post this evening. Okay, I finished mine now. Nothing much happened though considering Denak has no intel at all without his helmet, nor not that manh features his suit would have otherwise provided. I'll see if I can write up a better post on my next turn.
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Denak Kalamari
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Posted - 2014.03.18 23:28:00 -
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Well, in any case. I'll try to work up a post tomorrow while at school to set the stage for the next people. Time to finally get some plot advanced!
Grahisha of ILF // Writer of Thoughts of a Clone Soldier // Latest entry published Mar. 18th
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Denak Kalamari
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Posted - 2014.03.19 20:11:00 -
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There, post delivered as promised. Things got in the way during the day so couldn't make a post until now.
Grahisha of ILF // Writer of Thoughts of a Clone Soldier // Latest entry published Mar. 18th
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Denak Kalamari
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Posted - 2014.03.20 08:39:00 -
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Jaysyn Larrisen wrote:Never quite caught why someone thought "cannibal" was a great name for a magic healing needle.
True...I do have Wiyrikomi needles. I'm pretty sure it could get you stabilized, mobile, and functional but it certainly wouldn't get you above say 70% capability based the injuries your describing and it would take a couple minutes to get you to that level.
The organs and other soft tissue the nanites can deal with easily; spine will take short bit.
You can take a quick dice roll on the outcome or waive me off, clone terminate, and jump back in at 100%. That might be a solid option if Denak has uplinks since I traded mine out for the needles.
Your call, brother. All Denak has is an SMG. His remote explosives were all used and his shotgun is destroyed.
Grahisha of ILF // Writer of Thoughts of a Clone Soldier // Latest entry published Mar. 18th
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Denak Kalamari
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Posted - 2014.03.24 03:41:00 -
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So where's that post?
Grahisha of ILF // Writer of Thoughts of a Clone Soldier // Latest entry published Mar. 22nd
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Denak Kalamari
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Posted - 2014.03.24 19:42:00 -
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steadyhand amarr wrote:hhhmmmm
question, how would you guys feel about doing the last bit on dust channel old school DnD style, this whole thread was one big experiment which im glad others have started to copy (as per goal of getting RP going on this forum :P)
and i think having everyone or nearly everyone their for last bit to get that battle banter that's been missing would be good.
i know timezones are a massive pain in the ass so i could split the team up via timezones and run two sessions with different objectives and then post up the results. But this last thing i really want to try and do. The chat system in DUST is awful, time consuming and very difficult to follow. If we're going to do a chat RP, I'd rather do it in an IRC rather than DUST.
Grahisha of ILF // Writer of Thoughts of a Clone Soldier // Latest entry published Mar. 22nd
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Denak Kalamari
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Posted - 2014.03.29 19:19:00 -
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Sooooooo...
That post Kador?
Grahisha of ILF // Writer of Thoughts of a Clone Soldier // Latest entry published Mar. 22nd
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Denak Kalamari
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Posted - 2014.04.12 18:39:00 -
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Ermac Vesely wrote:Well we are still working on the other story and Denak and True seem to have trouble with posting right now (if you follow the chat and the story). So we should wait until that is cleared. But I am always ready to write some more. I'll put that on my general issue of procrastination with playing a ton of HAWKEN and Dark Souls II. Although last I checked, Kador still had to write the next post in this series, don't know what happened to that.
Grahisha of ILF // Writer of Thoughts of a Clone Soldier // Latest entry published Apr. 1st
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Denak Kalamari
Intaki Liberation Front Intaki Prosperity Initiative
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Posted - 2014.04.12 19:07:00 -
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I'm nearly done with my first playthrough. I've beaten most bosses and began working my way through Shrine of Amana and Undead Crypt.
But I should really start working on my post now.
Grahisha of ILF // Writer of Thoughts of a Clone Soldier // Latest entry published Apr. 1st
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Denak Kalamari
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Posted - 2014.05.05 15:41:00 -
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I'd be fine with getting this thing going again, but I'm just concerned of Kador since he seems to have been posting everywhere except our RP threads, I think he's completely dropped interest on this and we/I am completely dependent on him for the next part. I was accompanying him after all.
Grahisha of ILF // Writer of Thoughts of a Clone Soldier // Latest entry published Apr. 1st
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