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True Adamance
Praetoriani Classiarii Templares
Praetoria Imperialis Excubitoris
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Posted - 2014.02.16 20:57:00 -
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Denak Kalamari wrote:Blood pens are those places where the Raiders lock up slaves and slowly bleed them to death. Conditions are inhumane at best, Kador knows the better details, they're hidden somewhere in the thread and I can't be bothered to search through it.
Also, you don't really need to ask me where you can move your character Ermac, it's your character and we'll see where it ends up.
I also volunteer to go into the blood pens.
Gimme 10, gotta do some humanitarian work.
"Just know that though our enemies may only #YOLO, through God's grace we can #YOLF at his side." - Disciple of Kesha
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steadyhand amarr
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Posted - 2014.02.16 21:01:00 -
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True Adamance wrote:Jacques Cayton II wrote:My character will go into the pens but seeing all that torture may make him........ Go overboard Take it easy mate, we have a chance to really get a horror vibe going. Don't rush the Pen's section, also don't necessarily turn it into another battlefield. We can get some meaningful dialogue going.
hense why i dont want you guys rushing in. i was expecting lots of short quick posts for combat and we move on, not the epic stuff you guys have given me, im rewritting inside the lab to give each of your characters stuff to explore so i dont mind you guys free styling the combat.
as a rough number their would be a round 200 more combatants busy regrouping. im basing this off the size of the base the number killed allready and roughly how many raiders would crew a curser
"i dont care about you or your goals, just show me the dam isk"
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Ermac Vesely
Molon Labe.
General Tso's Alliance
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Posted - 2014.02.16 21:04:00 -
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steadyhand amarr wrote:True Adamance wrote:Jacques Cayton II wrote:My character will go into the pens but seeing all that torture may make him........ Go overboard Take it easy mate, we have a chance to really get a horror vibe going. Don't rush the Pen's section, also don't necessarily turn it into another battlefield. We can get some meaningful dialogue going. hense why i dont want you guys rushing in. i was expecting lots of short quick posts for combat and we move on, not the epic stuff you guys have given me, im rewritting inside the lab to give each of your characters stuff to explore so i dont mind you guys free styling the combat. as a rough number their would be a round 200 more combatants busy regrouping. im basing this off the size of the base the number killed allready and roughly how many raiders would crew a curser
almost 200? my god where are they hiding them? |
Jacques Cayton II
Providence Guard
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Posted - 2014.02.16 21:04:00 -
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i wasnt goin to barge in i was simply stating when that time comes I would join Kador
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steadyhand amarr
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Posted - 2014.02.16 21:15:00 -
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Ermac Vesely wrote:steadyhand amarr wrote:True Adamance wrote:Jacques Cayton II wrote:My character will go into the pens but seeing all that torture may make him........ Go overboard Take it easy mate, we have a chance to really get a horror vibe going. Don't rush the Pen's section, also don't necessarily turn it into another battlefield. We can get some meaningful dialogue going. hense why i dont want you guys rushing in. i was expecting lots of short quick posts for combat and we move on, not the epic stuff you guys have given me, im rewritting inside the lab to give each of your characters stuff to explore so i dont mind you guys free styling the combat. as a rough number their would be a round 200 more combatants busy regrouping. im basing this off the size of the base the number killed allready and roughly how many raiders would crew a curser almost 200? my god where are they hiding them?
running around and regrouping, its a huge base have you ever walked around the map and seen all the shutters and doors you cant walk though, there is a whole garage we cant go in for example
"i dont care about you or your goals, just show me the dam isk"
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Jaysyn Larrisen
OSG Planetary Operations
Covert Intervention
745
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Posted - 2014.02.16 21:34:00 -
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True Adamance wrote: Anyone want to dive into my horribly demented and most certainly ****** up ideal of what the Blood Pens are like? Willing to take volunteers to raid them if required, post me extracting Steady's, or not extracting depending on my dice roll, children.
I might be able to give you a hand.
"Endless money forms the sinews of War." - Cicero
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Hawk-eye Occultus
Omega Elite Mercs INC.
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Posted - 2014.02.16 21:36:00 -
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Jacques Cayton II wrote:I meant overboard as in torture any raiders left in the area not crazy killing everyone. I mean that first guy wasn't the last of course.
Did someone say torture!?
I have such a "wonderful" idea for a torture scene that I have had in my head for a while. It is exotic, and so; SO delicious...
I may make my next, or the one after with it. Not really posted much in the main thread; so this is a nice change of pace >:D.
Intelligence without ambition; is a bird without wings...
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Denak Kalamari
Intaki Liberation Front
Intaki Prosperity Initiative
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Posted - 2014.02.16 21:45:00 -
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Can we just set a rule that you can't do a pause when there's three other ones used before you? This is starting to get a little ridicilous.
Grahisha of ILF // Writer of Thoughts of a Clone Soldier // Latest entry published Feb. 10th
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True Adamance
Praetoriani Classiarii Templares
Praetoria Imperialis Excubitoris
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Posted - 2014.02.16 22:04:00 -
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Denak Kalamari wrote:Can we just set a rule that you can't do a pause when there's other ones paused before you? I don't mind there being a few pauses at a time, but this is starting to get a little ridicilous.
I would simply say don't post until the pauses before you have posted. I cant always keep up with you all due to TZ and work, I try though, and I cant keep having to read ahead to accommodate something someone else has done.
Pause means a pause until a post can be made. At worst a pause will extend a couple of hours, that is not a massive wait.
"Just know that though our enemies may only #YOLO, through God's grace we can #YOLF at his side." - Disciple of Kesha
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Jaysyn Larrisen
OSG Planetary Operations
Covert Intervention
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Posted - 2014.02.16 22:21:00 -
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Sorry, guys I just posted. I'll hold till everyone's cycled some posts in....I hope I'm not pushing the pace too much.
BLUF: Me and Jacques are now at the A7 sally port and have let Heathen know we are out there and a few Raiders are trying to get in as well. It's a good spot to us to hold and let everyone get to the Rally spot (or deal with a dozen kids!).
"Endless money forms the sinews of War." - Cicero
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steadyhand amarr
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Posted - 2014.02.16 22:40:00 -
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as true has said please respect pause system, and only due it when you sure you can fit your post in within the hour or two it just keep things moving smoothly i dont want to have to go to posting orders as it makes everything to formal :)
"i dont care about you or your goals, just show me the dam isk"
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True Adamance
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Praetoria Imperialis Excubitoris
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Posted - 2014.02.16 22:48:00 -
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steadyhand amarr wrote:as true has said please respect pause system, and only due it when you sure you can fit your post in within the hour or two it just keep things moving smoothly i dont want to have to go to posting orders as it makes everything to formal :)
I want to keep moving things but quality would drop of significantly. Unless pace is slowed I have to withdraw from the thread as I will be left behind with too much to write and be out of your guys timezone.
I understand pace needs to be maintained but you all have to respect that my TZ is what it is, and my pauses cannot be completed within every hour I post them.
"Just know that though our enemies may only #YOLO, through God's grace we can #YOLF at his side." - Disciple of Kesha
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Jaysyn Larrisen
OSG Planetary Operations
Covert Intervention
745
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Posted - 2014.02.16 22:54:00 -
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Fair point guys. As i noted we'll hold to let everyone catch up.
"Endless money forms the sinews of War." - Cicero
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Ermac Vesely
Molon Labe.
General Tso's Alliance
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Posted - 2014.02.16 22:56:00 -
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my post is done now I hope I didn't ruin something |
True Adamance
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Posted - 2014.02.16 23:48:00 -
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Ermac Vesely wrote:my post is done now I hope I didn't ruin something oh and sorry for taking so long I accidentaly made a quote there and thought well I could use this edited a pause and then did I had no idea but now it's up in all it's violent glory.
I like it. Nice stuff. I got take 5 mins to adjust my Solace fit, remove the extra plating to make room for these kiddies.
"Just know that though our enemies may only #YOLO, through God's grace we can #YOLF at his side." - Disciple of Kesha
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Heathen Bastard
The Bastard Brigade
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Posted - 2014.02.17 00:03:00 -
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yeah, my day ran much longer than originally envisioned, I took out my old pause and responded to what's been happening. Sorry everyone.
Currently at b-8, waiting to set off explosives, and by height I meant they had a couple guys on top of d-7, pretty common on this particular map.
If you hear the words "WORTH IT!" look about, something hilarious just happened.
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Jacques Cayton II
Providence Guard
Templis CALSF
607
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Posted - 2014.02.17 00:08:00 -
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Jaysyn Larrisen wrote:Sorry, guys I just posted. I'll hold till everyone's cycled some posts in....I hope I'm not pushing the pace too much.
BLUF: Me and Jacques are now at the A7 sally port and have let Heathen know we are out there and a few Raiders are trying to get in as well. It's a good spot to us to hold and let everyone get to the Rally spot (or deal with a dozen kids!).
I'm gonna have fun on this missile turret Jaysyn then I'm going too charge up the ramp to take Heathens position
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steadyhand amarr
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Posted - 2014.02.17 00:12:00 -
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True Adamance wrote:steadyhand amarr wrote:as true has said please respect pause system, and only due it when you sure you can fit your post in within the hour or two it just keep things moving smoothly i dont want to have to go to posting orders as it makes everything to formal :) I want to keep moving things but quality would drop of significantly. Unless pace is slowed I have to withdraw from the thread as I will be left behind with too much to write and be out of your guys timezone. I understand pace needs to be maintained but you all have to respect that my TZ is what it is, and my pauses cannot be completed within every hour I post them.
yeh dont worry True your fine tbh. my message was strongly worded so you all played attention and its logged, i run a tight ship as saves so much effort down the line, this has been one of the smoothest so far :).
its been a while since iv had a bunch of players who like doing long descriptive posts than, i shoot 5 dudes and run to the next room :P. iv adjusted the story to match this and think you will enjoy the next scene.
i follow the rule of three game design theory if your intrested which is.
set the scene... players investigate, draw conclusions ...execute scene...
you guys LOOOVEEE the middle bit and like a fast paced execute, so you should find this week is more built to this groups strengths.
im not just saying this, this is by far the best group iv had in a long time and wished and group steal you all into a corp :P
"i dont care about you or your goals, just show me the dam isk"
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True Adamance
Praetoriani Classiarii Templares
Praetoria Imperialis Excubitoris
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Posted - 2014.02.17 00:17:00 -
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steadyhand amarr wrote:True Adamance wrote:steadyhand amarr wrote:as true has said please respect pause system, and only due it when you sure you can fit your post in within the hour or two it just keep things moving smoothly i dont want to have to go to posting orders as it makes everything to formal :) I want to keep moving things but quality would drop of significantly. Unless pace is slowed I have to withdraw from the thread as I will be left behind with too much to write and be out of your guys timezone. I understand pace needs to be maintained but you all have to respect that my TZ is what it is, and my pauses cannot be completed within every hour I post them. yeh dont worry True your fine tbh. my message was strongly worded so you all played attention and its logged, i run a tight ship as saves so much effort down the line, this has been one of the smoothest so far :). its been a while since iv had a bunch of players who like doing long descriptive posts than, i shoot 5 dudes and run to the next room :P. iv adjusted the story to match this and think you will enjoy the next scene. i follow the rule of three game design theory if your intrested which is. set the scene... players investigate, draw conclusions ...execute scene... you guys LOOOVEEE the middle bit and like a fast paced execute, so you should find this week is more built to this groups strengths. im not just saying this, this is by far the best group iv had in a long time and wished and group steal you all into a corp :P
TY.
Do you find my writing adequately sets a scene that you can follow, or do I need more description and less action/ internalising.
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steadyhand amarr
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Posted - 2014.02.17 00:17:00 -
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im making a quick a post so you have some steady battlechatter you can use if you want .
"i dont care about you or your goals, just show me the dam isk"
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Ermac Vesely
Molon Labe.
General Tso's Alliance
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Posted - 2014.02.17 00:22:00 -
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thank you steady for the compliment but I am still amazed that you guys keep up with the bs that I write... |
Heathen Bastard
The Bastard Brigade
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Posted - 2014.02.17 00:27:00 -
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Ermac Vesely wrote:thank you steady for the compliment but I am still amazed that you guys keep up with the bs that I write...
Well, keep in mind that the weapons we use are upscaled, safety removed, variants that would likely kill or seriously wound mortals with just their recoil from firing.
If you hear the words "WORTH IT!" look about, something hilarious just happened.
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steadyhand amarr
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Posted - 2014.02.17 00:29:00 -
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iv been doing for this warhammer alliance was still a thing so dont worry Ermac you got a talent with practise you will be awesome at it :) tbh i think True and Denaka are better at writting than me and im faltered they put up with my writting.
also im gunna try narrated post at some point next week to see if its better than me writing as i have awsome diction to make up for the fact i cant write apprently.
EDIT: the SCR for example will instantly cook anyone fireing it, and the assult rifle kicks out so much radation when it fires it would kill a mortal in seconds :P
"i dont care about you or your goals, just show me the dam isk"
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Heathen Bastard
The Bastard Brigade
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Posted - 2014.02.17 00:35:00 -
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and the laser rifle switches itself off under normal circumstances, because overheating like we do would seriously injure or kill any mortal using it. Or it might explode when it does, I forget which. maybe both.
If you hear the words "WORTH IT!" look about, something hilarious just happened.
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Jaysyn Larrisen
OSG Planetary Operations
Covert Intervention
745
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Posted - 2014.02.17 00:35:00 -
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I echo they sentiments guys.
I'm looking to add more flavor to the description of the base - I see it with Blood Raider Scripture and public display of tormented "unfaithful". Probably some unfortunates hanging from cargo chains in the ceiling....very "Blood for the Blood God!" kinda thing.
Question...is this description off? I keep reverting to the look of Chaos Cult in Warhammer 40K (Khorne specifically) but on the same same hand I can I see it as being portrayed with the same gravitas as the Amarrian faith...almost the difference between the Vatican vs urban Satanist cults. Or is it somewhere in between?
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steadyhand amarr
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Posted - 2014.02.17 00:41:00 -
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the way i see the cult is if the Vatican got taken over by Scientology and use blood instead of books :\
there not the kind to hang it out in the open, and drown in filth but at the same time 5 kid beening drainned on the wall is nothing odd either.
the base were on is oddity and it will be bloody mess at this point thanks to everyone we have killed it will have raider markings and examples on spikes, but it has a purpose rather than just messy wtf not
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steadyhand amarr
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Posted - 2014.02.17 00:45:00 -
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NO MORE POSTS TILL TRUE IS DONE :).
tis only fair
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Hawk-eye Occultus
Omega Elite Mercs INC.
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Posted - 2014.02.17 00:45:00 -
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I found this WONDERFUL chronicle on EVElopedia (it even has a pretty picture) all about the blood raiders.
I'm sure it will set the mood for inside the base...
Intelligence without ambition; is a bird without wings...
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Ermac Vesely
Molon Labe.
General Tso's Alliance
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Posted - 2014.02.17 00:47:00 -
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reminds me of the zenobytes homeworld from hellraiser with a touch of khorn flakes |
steadyhand amarr
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Posted - 2014.02.17 00:47:00 -
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^^ god damit iv been looking everywhere for that link thanks so yeh, reinforces my point, it can be really horrifc but its all with a twisted purpose
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