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True Adamance
Praetoriani Classiarii Templares Praetoria Imperialis Excubitoris
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Posted - 2015.06.27 15:23:00 -
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ill re-up in main thread tomorow
Em shah tey et naGÇÖemsaer ek rahvi, amarr osedah gasi ubday pahk. Ekin tey vahka ijed div ema ziel. Et tey vamatal em.
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Maximus Mobius
Fatal Absolution
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Posted - 2015.06.28 00:39:00 -
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Y'know, reading back, the combat scenes are clunky and clumsy as hell. Maybe we could avoid it or just skip it altogether because we usually have too much or too little in the way of detail.
#Fallout4
Licensed Fallout lore master
"I really love sitting on my own dick, bicycle style." -B1ack Ice
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True Adamance
Praetoriani Classiarii Templares Praetoria Imperialis Excubitoris
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Posted - 2015.06.28 01:10:00 -
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Meh I'm more or less happy with how they are coming out. It's not like this is a work that really merits several revisions it's just for fun.
Em shah tey et naGÇÖemsaer ek rahvi, amarr osedah gasi ubday pahk. Ekin tey vahka ijed div ema ziel. Et tey vamatal em.
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Jakar Umbra
Altyr Initiative
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Posted - 2015.06.28 22:05:00 -
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So I kind of opened up that bottom floor room since technically it's barred off in the game and can't be accessed. Figured if Bethesda didn't want to use it I will.
Author of Umbra's Short Stories
Sisters of EVE Initiate.
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True Adamance
Praetoriani Classiarii Templares Praetoria Imperialis Excubitoris
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Posted - 2015.06.28 23:15:00 -
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Jakar Umbra wrote:So I kind of opened up that bottom floor room since technically it's barred off in the game and can't be accessed. Figured if Bethesda didn't want to use it I will.
???
Em shah tey et naGÇÖemsaer ek rahvi, amarr osedah gasi ubday pahk. Ekin tey vahka ijed div ema ziel. Et tey vamatal em.
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Jakar Umbra
Altyr Initiative
639
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Posted - 2015.06.28 23:18:00 -
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True Adamance wrote:Jakar Umbra wrote:So I kind of opened up that bottom floor room since technically it's barred off in the game and can't be accessed. Figured if Bethesda didn't want to use it I will. ??? I'm playing New Vegas so I figured I'd check which rooms are technically available at the motel. The one I chose here in the RP is closed off in the game, so I opened it for the RP.
Author of Umbra's Short Stories
Sisters of EVE Initiate.
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True Adamance
Praetoriani Classiarii Templares Praetoria Imperialis Excubitoris
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Posted - 2015.06.29 00:06:00 -
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Jakar Umbra wrote:True Adamance wrote:Jakar Umbra wrote:So I kind of opened up that bottom floor room since technically it's barred off in the game and can't be accessed. Figured if Bethesda didn't want to use it I will. ??? I'm playing New Vegas so I figured I'd check which rooms are technically available at the motel. The one I chose here in the RP is closed off in the game, so I opened it for the RP.
I bet that's a room someone used for modding.
Em shah tey et naGÇÖemsaer ek rahvi, amarr osedah gasi ubday pahk. Ekin tey vahka ijed div ema ziel. Et tey vamatal em.
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Jakar Umbra
Altyr Initiative
639
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Posted - 2015.06.29 00:11:00 -
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Could be. I wouldn't know. I don't have the pleasure of playing on PC.
Author of Umbra's Short Stories
Sisters of EVE Initiate.
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True Adamance
Praetoriani Classiarii Templares Praetoria Imperialis Excubitoris
19
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Posted - 2015.06.29 00:49:00 -
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I'm pretty sure I'll be transitioning to it later this year. Doesn't matter than I have my pre-ordered Fallout 4 on PS4. I'd rather use a new PC for writing and more intensive large scale open world PC games.
Em shah tey et naGÇÖemsaer ek rahvi, amarr osedah gasi ubday pahk. Ekin tey vahka ijed div ema ziel. Et tey vamatal em.
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Maximus Mobius
Fatal Absolution
495
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Posted - 2015.06.29 17:32:00 -
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=ƒÿ¢
#Fallout4
Licensed Fallout lore master
"I really love sitting on my own dick, bicycle style." -B1ack Ice
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True Adamance
Praetoriani Classiarii Templares Praetoria Imperialis Excubitoris
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Posted - 2015.06.29 22:17:00 -
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ITS A SQUARE!
Em shah tey et naGÇÖemsaer ek rahvi, amarr osedah gasi ubday pahk. Ekin tey vahka ijed div ema ziel. Et tey vamatal em.
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Jakar Umbra
Altyr Initiative
639
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Posted - 2015.06.30 00:26:00 -
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Just figured I'd point out the last paragraph in the post I wrote where Jason approaches Lucas and Eddie.
Author of Umbra's Short Stories
Sisters of EVE Initiate.
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True Adamance
Praetoriani Classiarii Templares Praetoria Imperialis Excubitoris
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Posted - 2015.06.30 00:31:00 -
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Jakar Umbra wrote:Just figured I'd point out the last paragraph in the post I wrote where Jason approaches Lucas and Eddie.
And I lied about you being a vamp.
I'm covered.....
Em shah tey et naGÇÖemsaer ek rahvi, amarr osedah gasi ubday pahk. Ekin tey vahka ijed div ema ziel. Et tey vamatal em.
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Maximus Mobius
Fatal Absolution
505
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Posted - 2015.07.02 00:05:00 -
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Soooooooo?...........
#Fallout4
Licensed Fallout lore master
"I really love sitting on my own dick, bicycle style." -B1ack Ice
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True Adamance
Praetoriani Classiarii Templares Praetoria Imperialis Excubitoris
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Posted - 2015.07.02 02:10:00 -
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Sorry I'll be back in a day or two. Just writing out/planning some scenes for a work of fiction about my Dust character. I'm also trying to set the scene of a vineyard for an important segment later in the plot.
Em shah tey et naGÇÖemsaer ek rahvi, amarr osedah gasi ubday pahk. Ekin tey vahka ijed div ema ziel. Et tey vamatal em.
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Maximus Mobius
Fatal Absolution
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Posted - 2015.07.04 23:48:00 -
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Well...the rp has died
#Fallout4
Licensed Fallout lore master
"I really love sitting on my own dick, bicycle style." -B1ack Ice
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True Adamance
Praetoriani Classiarii Templares Praetoria Imperialis Excubitoris
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Posted - 2015.07.05 22:38:00 -
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Nope .... I just don't want to be the guy who has to start every expedition with a post. Someone else can do that.
Em shah tey et naGÇÖemsaer ek rahvi, amarr osedah gasi ubday pahk. Ekin tey vahka ijed div ema ziel. Et tey vamatal em.
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Jakar Umbra
Altyr Initiative
639
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Posted - 2015.07.08 21:42:00 -
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I am reminded once more about how reliant I am on dialogue when writing...
Author of Umbra's Short Stories
Sisters of EVE Initiate.
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True Adamance
Praetoriani Classiarii Templares Praetoria Imperialis Excubitoris
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Posted - 2015.07.08 21:52:00 -
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Jakar Umbra wrote:I am reminded once more about how reliant I am on dialogue when writing...
I'm reminded of how weak my dialogue is....and how hard consistency is.
Em shah tey et naGÇÖemsaer ek rahvi, amarr osedah gasi ubday pahk. Ekin tey vahka ijed div ema ziel. Et tey vamatal em.
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Jakar Umbra
Altyr Initiative
640
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Posted - 2015.07.08 22:06:00 -
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Tell you a secret. I was looking at the Forecaster's dialogue lines on the wiki so I could make sure it came across properly.
Tell you another secret. Kind of relying on this RP for my writing fix since I haven't written anything in an age and have lacked the will to write anything in an equally long age since I'm afraid it'll come out like crap.
Author of Umbra's Short Stories
Sisters of EVE Initiate.
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True Adamance
Praetoriani Classiarii Templares Praetoria Imperialis Excubitoris
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Posted - 2015.07.08 22:34:00 -
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Jakar Umbra wrote:Tell you a secret. I was looking at the Forecaster's dialogue lines on the wiki so I could make sure it came across properly.
Tell you another secret. Kind of relying on this RP for my writing fix since I haven't written anything in an age and have lacked the will to write anything in an equally long age since I'm afraid it'll come out like crap.
Same here though I am using the RP to attempt to write a more casual and human character. Behind the scenes I'm attempting a full ch 10+ chapters of Kador's back story from his youth to present day during which time I really want to develop his character.
The worst thing I ever did was attempt to play too much of a 'straight-man' type Templar. I always wanted to portray Kador as character who if given an inch will always take a mile, emotionally unstable, sardonic, dour, spends all his time trying to wrap himself up in duty and dogma to keep everything in line.
Em shah tey et naGÇÖemsaer ek rahvi, amarr osedah gasi ubday pahk. Ekin tey vahka ijed div ema ziel. Et tey vamatal em.
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Maximus Mobius
Fatal Absolution
550
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Posted - 2015.07.08 22:47:00 -
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True Adamance wrote:Jakar Umbra wrote:Tell you a secret. I was looking at the Forecaster's dialogue lines on the wiki so I could make sure it came across properly.
Tell you another secret. Kind of relying on this RP for my writing fix since I haven't written anything in an age and have lacked the will to write anything in an equally long age since I'm afraid it'll come out like crap. Same here though I am using the RP to attempt to write a more casual and human character. Behind the scenes I'm attempting a full ch 10+ chapters of Kador's back story from his youth to present day during which time I really want to develop his character. The worst thing I ever did was attempt to play too much of a 'straight-man' type Templar. I always wanted to portray Kador as character who if given an inch will always take a mile, emotionally unstable, sardonic, dour, spends all his time trying to wrap himself up in duty and dogma to keep everything in line. Lol I guess. I dont know enough EVE lore to establish a character but I do know my Fallout lore very well. I usually draw a lot of inspiration from Ulysses and Boone respectfully. Ulysses has a very fascinating philosophy that I still can't seem to completely wrap my head around. He is near unstoppable, intelligent, a survivalist and is constantly looking for something great. A seed of a civilization using the tools of the old world to make a new nation. A new flag. I also draw inspiration from Doctor Mobius for just innocent, quirky yet so intelligent that he basically knows everything there is to know.
#Fallout4
Licensed Fallout lore master
"I really love sitting on my own dick, bicycle style." -B1ack Ice
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Jakar Umbra
Altyr Initiative
640
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Posted - 2015.07.08 23:09:00 -
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True Adamance wrote:
Same here though I am using the RP to attempt to write a more casual and human character. Behind the scenes I'm attempting a full ch 10+ chapters of Kador's back story from his youth to present day during which time I really want to develop his character.
The worst thing I ever did was attempt to play too much of a 'straight-man' type Templar. I always wanted to portray Kador as character who if given an inch will always take a mile, emotionally unstable, sardonic, dour, spends all his time trying to wrap himself up in duty and dogma to keep everything in line.
I lost the will to write stories related to this universe when that announcement regarding Legion came through at Fanfest and pretty much everyone I played with left. I had such plans for the stories I was going to write but I need something engaging with the universe and I kind of lost that when it turned out the game was more or less on the back burner. I miss writing for this universe honestly.
Doesn't help that I can't play the game properly because I have a crappy third party controller that has the worst sticks ever and the triggers aren't triggers. The person who bought it for me is kind of cheap...
Author of Umbra's Short Stories
Sisters of EVE Initiate.
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True Adamance
Praetoriani Classiarii Templares Praetoria Imperialis Excubitoris
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Posted - 2015.07.08 23:12:00 -
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Jakar Umbra wrote:True Adamance wrote:
Same here though I am using the RP to attempt to write a more casual and human character. Behind the scenes I'm attempting a full ch 10+ chapters of Kador's back story from his youth to present day during which time I really want to develop his character.
The worst thing I ever did was attempt to play too much of a 'straight-man' type Templar. I always wanted to portray Kador as character who if given an inch will always take a mile, emotionally unstable, sardonic, dour, spends all his time trying to wrap himself up in duty and dogma to keep everything in line.
I lost the will to write stories related to this universe when that announcement regarding Legion came through at Fanfest and pretty much everyone I played with left. I had such plans for the stories I was going to write but I need something engaging with the universe and I kind of lost that when it turned out the game was more or less on the back burner. I miss writing for this universe honestly. Doesn't help that I can't play the game properly because I have a crappy third party controller that has the worst sticks ever and the triggers aren't triggers. The person who bought it for me is kind of cheap...
Character and Lore is about the only think that keeps me interested in New Eden and at thing point in Kador's character creation I actually feel really attached to his story and the stories of the other characters I've created.
Em shah tey et naGÇÖemsaer ek rahvi, amarr osedah gasi ubday pahk. Ekin tey vahka ijed div ema ziel. Et tey vamatal em.
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Jakar Umbra
Altyr Initiative
641
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Posted - 2015.07.09 23:14:00 -
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So I was thinking. I hope I'm not making it hard on anyone to follow on sometimes since my character just does the whole shut down thing. He's, at the moment, more of a reactor to situations rather than an actor which is why I write him like that. I hope that isn't creating a problem.
Author of Umbra's Short Stories
Sisters of EVE Initiate.
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Maximus Mobius
Fatal Absolution
946
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Posted - 2015.08.16 18:53:00 -
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Damn this was fun...
ALL HAIL MAXSON!!
Multi-role Tanker
Tanks and turrets supplied by Caldari Steel and Ishukone!!
For The State!!
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