DUST Search - Kill-Squad RP interest check/ooc

Denak Kalamari wrote:

Sergamon Draco wrote:

And denak how do you know that,i am not law enforcer/intelligent officer/sisters of eve agent etc etc

Because those are reserved for CCP actors, not you. The point of RP isn't to explain how your character is a super-awesome demigod with your endless explanations for your deus ex machina plot devices, there's no fun in that and it makes your character boring. What makes a character interesting, and roleplaying that character in general, is his or her unique flaws or shortcomings, and how he or she overcomes those flaws.

And I just have to be frank with you right now, you're a horrible roleplayer. Your character is as bland and dime-a-dozen as one can get with the plain old nightmares-from-past-traumas flaw. I could understand it if you at least wrote your posts well, but you seem to barely put any effort into them without even doing basic proofreading or even adding question marks. On top of that your RP is barely skimming on the edge of IC and reasonable, so overall I recommend you take a good hard look on your RP and improve on it. Honestly said it's crap right now.

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Sergamon Draco Rautaleijona 436	Posted - 2014.04.04 21:11:00 - [271] - Quote Denak Kalamari wrote: Sergamon Draco wrote: And denak how do you know that,i am not law enforcer/intelligent officer/sisters of eve agent etc etc Because those are reserved for CCP actors, not you. The point of RP isn't to explain how your character is a super-awesome demigod with your endless explanations for your deus ex machina plot devices, there's no fun in that and it makes your character boring. What makes a character interesting, and roleplaying that character in general, is his or her unique flaws or shortcomings, and how he or she overcomes those flaws. And I just have to be frank with you right now, you're a horrible roleplayer. Your character is as bland and dime-a-dozen as one can get with the plain old nightmares-from-past-traumas flaw. I could understand it if you at least wrote your posts well, but you seem to barely put any effort into them without even doing basic proofreading or even adding question marks. On top of that your RP is barely skimming on the edge of IC and reasonable, so overall I recommend you take a good hard look on your RP and improve on it. Honestly said it's crap right now. Ok sorry if i touch your nerve about this,you should try taking care about job and taking care of 2 kids in real life and then try to find time read everything in evelopedia and other places. Fck the kdr,i`m going in
Denak Kalamari Intaki Liberation Front Intaki Prosperity Initiative 1442	Posted - 2014.04.04 21:16:00 - [272] - Quote Alright, after recalling my memory and skimming through both Blood Hunt and Rabbit Hole, I'll give my general thoughts: Hawk-eye, I'd say you've nailed your character pretty well. The relaxed attitude your character portrays is done good, and the writing execution is mostly correct aside the occasional slip-up. However, bringing an HMG to a meeting, even a non-functioning one, makes me scratch my head. Those things are incredibly heavy, and impossible to carry without the specialized exoskeleton of a heavy dropsuit, and the whole concept of bringing a weapon for a meeting for any reason is silly to me. Ermac, your character is done good too in my opinion, although I'm not sure if you're playing him as a Caldari loyalist or a general mercenary. There is still some room for improvement on the writing part too. Lack of punctuation and line breaks makes reading your texts a chore at times, Grahisha of ILF // Writer of Thoughts of a Clone Soldier // Latest entry published Apr. 1st
Hawk-eye Occultus Omega Elite Mercs INC. 110	Posted - 2014.04.04 21:44:00 - [273] - Quote Post is broken into two (2) sections: for Sergamon (section 1), in reply to Denak (section 2) SECTION 1: Sergamon Draco wrote: Ok sorry if i touch your nerve about this,you should try taking care about job and taking care of 2 kids in real life and then try to find time read everything in evelopedia and other places. I never said i am law enforcer/intelligent officer/sisters of eve agent, i just asked you a simple question. Ok i admitt my english grammar could be much better. You don't need to read all of EVElopedia in order to know most of the stuff he just said. The only plausible part needing such lengthy reading would be the CCP actors part (although a simple search for a single article rather than a full read would make more sense for that) Also, you may not have said that you are a law enforcer or SoE agent, but: Sergamon Draco wrote: And denak how do you know that,i am not law enforcer/intelligent officer/sisters of eve agent etc etc You *VERY HEAVILY* implied it. *<==={[=== + === + === + * * + === + === + ===]}===> (Stylish section breaks FTW!) SECTION 2: Denak Kalamari wrote:** Hawk-eye, I'd say you've nailed your character pretty well. The relaxed attitude your character portrays is done good, and the writing execution is mostly correct aside the occasional slip-up. However, bringing an HMG to a meeting, even a non-functioning one, makes me scratch my head. Those things are incredibly heavy, and impossible to carry without the specialized exoskeleton of a heavy dropsuit, and the whole concept of bringing a weapon for a meeting for any reason is silly to me. Thanks for that, I feel slightly better about myself. (^v^) With regards to the HMG in the briefing room, I seriously am looking back at that with the words "what the hell was I thinking" resonating through my noggin'. Could have been me doing a pseudo-metagame when I read about the guns several others had brought. I'll try to avoid such... Blunders... In future. I just realized, the Interstellar Kredit (ISK) is also the Icelandic Króna (ISK) ' CCP is Icelandic. Coincidence?
Roy Ventus Axis of Chaos 1584	Posted - 2014.04.04 21:49:00 - [274] - Quote D: Roy likes Sergamon. But it's not a serious relationship tho. "There once was a time when there wasn't a Roy Ventus and it wasn't much of a time at all." http://royventus.tumblr.com
Hawk-eye Occultus Omega Elite Mercs INC. 110	Posted - 2014.04.04 21:55:00 - [275] - Quote Roy Ventus wrote: D: Roy likes Sergamon. But it's not a serious relationship tho. You must make it serious! You must love him! NOW KISS! I just realized, the Interstellar Kredit (ISK) is also the Icelandic Króna (ISK) ' CCP is Icelandic. Coincidence?
Ermac Vesely Molon Labe. General Tso's Alliance 45	Posted - 2014.04.04 22:34:00 - [276] - Quote I think it's more like this http://images.fotocommunity.de/bilder/gemaelde-und-zeichnungen/malen-fotografieren-mixen/der-bruderkuss-86acc9bb-c2e8-4cd7-9dc1-f0b662380b3b.jpg
Hawk-eye Occultus Omega Elite Mercs INC. 111	Posted - 2014.04.04 22:55:00 - [277] - Quote I actually want to know what all that text says... Does anyone here know Cyrillic? (I think it's Cyrillic, anyway) I just realized, the Interstellar Kredit (ISK) is also the Icelandic Króna (ISK) ' CCP is Icelandic. Coincidence?
Ermac Vesely Molon Labe. General Tso's Alliance 45	Posted - 2014.04.04 23:02:00 - [278] - Quote Well the german text says " my god help me to survive this deadly love"
Hawk-eye Occultus Omega Elite Mercs INC. 111	Posted - 2014.04.04 23:39:00 - [279] - Quote After a painstakingly long session of google translate involving phonetic virtual keyboards, characters which looked different on the computer than the poster and the "hand write" feature for individual letters, I can conclude the German text is a translation of the -»-ª-à-à+Ç-¢-ƒ. I just realized, the Interstellar Kredit (ISK) is also the Icelandic Króna (ISK) ' CCP is Icelandic. Coincidence?
Ermac Vesely Molon Labe. General Tso's Alliance 45	Posted - 2014.04.05 00:05:00 - [280] - Quote the more you know

Hunter Junko Sebiestor Field Sappers Minmatar Republic 243	Posted - 2014.04.05 02:07:00 - [281] - Quote Denak, just got back from work, and i was wondering if you could critique my character please? still "Sorting" out the information (I.E writing down what i think would be the best way to convey said information for the RP mission)
Denak Kalamari Intaki Liberation Front Intaki Prosperity Initiative 1445	Posted - 2014.04.05 16:56:00 - [282] - Quote Hunter Junko wrote: Denak, just got back from work, and i was wondering if you could critique my character please? still "Sorting" out the information (I.E writing down what i think would be the best way to convey said information for the RP mission) I'd say you're doing quite well, aside a few hiccups, you know your lore quite well and your character seems quite unique among a group of hardened mercs. Although, there's still room for improvement on your grammar, like capital I when using it as a pronome, and using more puncutations with what you write. Other that, you're doing good. Grahisha of ILF // Writer of Thoughts of a Clone Soldier // Latest entry published Apr. 1st
Ermac Vesely Molon Labe. General Tso's Alliance 45	Posted - 2014.04.05 21:54:00 - [283] - Quote well it seems to be one of those slow days. And I have a question did Galm dissapear or did he lose his interest in this?
Hawk-eye Occultus Omega Elite Mercs INC. 112	Posted - 2014.04.05 22:49:00 - [284] - Quote I suppose I could "accidentally" open an airlock with someone in it. How overcomplicated are the consoles in the airlock control rooms? Enough that it's this? (and only one of those switches stops the airlock from opening) I just realized, the Interstellar Kredit (ISK) is also the Icelandic Króna (ISK) ' CCP is Icelandic. Coincidence?
Jacques Cayton II Eternal Beings Proficiency V. 750	Posted - 2014.04.05 22:51:00 - [285] - Quote Don't interupt my chat with family good sir We fight for the future of the State not our personal goals
Clockwork Jester Namtar Elite Gallente Federation 26	Posted - 2014.04.06 00:53:00 - [286] - Quote Ermac Vesely wrote: well it seems to be one of those slow days. And I have a question did Galm dissapear or did he lose his interest in this? sorry slowness is my fault. I got sidetracked watching the final four and went to watch the captain america movie.
Ermac Vesely Molon Labe. General Tso's Alliance 45	Posted - 2014.04.06 02:34:00 - [287] - Quote I just said it's slow I didn't say it's something bad. And don't you dare pressing the big red air lock control button Hawk, which is conveniently placed next to the black button with the skull on it which triggers the self destruction sequence of the station.
Jacques Cayton II Eternal Beings Proficiency V. 752	Posted - 2014.04.06 03:08:00 - [288] - Quote Ermac Vesely wrote: I just said it's slow I didn't say it's something bad. And don't you dare pressing the big red air lock control button Hawk, which is conveniently placed next to the black button with the skull on it which triggers the self destruction sequence of the station. Press it right meow We fight for the future of the State not our personal goals
Hawk-eye Occultus Omega Elite Mercs INC. 113	Posted - 2014.04.06 03:22:00 - [289] - Quote Ermac Vesely wrote: Don't you dare pressing the big red air lock control button Hawk, which is conveniently placed next to the black button with the skull on it which triggers the self destruction sequence of the station. Jacques Cayton II wrote: Press it right meow Hmm... Should I? It'd only take a second... No one would notice... But someone could be hurt... It'd make a lovely big bang... Someone would be thrown into the cold expanse of space, alone... It'd be funny to watch... ... I just realized, the Interstellar Kredit (ISK) is also the Icelandic Króna (ISK) ' CCP is Icelandic. Coincidence?
Clockwork Jester Namtar Elite Gallente Federation 26	Posted - 2014.04.07 11:47:00 - [290] - Quote Sorry for the delay, I have final projects due this week that have been taking up my time the last few days. I am working on a post it may just take a little bit longer.

Ermac Vesely Molon Labe. General Tso's Alliance 47	Posted - 2014.04.07 23:21:00 - [291] - Quote Man I feel a little bad that I have so much time for writing my posts and you guys are struggling to get just a moment to write something.
Hawk-eye Occultus Omega Elite Mercs INC. 117	Posted - 2014.04.08 00:09:00 - [292] - Quote I would write something, but I am unsure what to do, so I'm currently in the limbo room. We are all a distant echo from the explosion of an ancient star. ' And one day, you will return to a new one, possibly
Jacques Cayton II Eternal Beings Proficiency V. 755	Posted - 2014.04.08 00:31:00 - [293] - Quote I would post but Jacques is just chatting with family not to interesting on my side We fight for the future of the State not our personal goals
True Adamance Praetoriani Classiarii Templares Praetoria Imperialis Excubitoris 9311	Posted - 2014.04.08 00:57:00 - [294] - Quote Jacques Cayton II wrote: I would post but Jacques is just chatting with family not to interesting on my side I will have to respond to sergamon I guess, and Junko with Satja..... just need to know how soon we are going on the mission.... "Get thine Swag out of my face! Next you'll be writing #YOLOswagforJamyl in all your posts!" -Dagger Two
Clockwork Jester Namtar Elite Gallente Federation 26	Posted - 2014.04.08 01:02:00 - [295] - Quote ok so i'm still working on the post but it will say that there are only 10 minutes to launch and to finish preparations. On a completely different note I am just about done with one of my term projects. 24 pages on bioethics and case studies is not so much fun.
Sergamon Draco Rautaleijona 445	Posted - 2014.04.08 05:16:00 - [296] - Quote True Adamance wrote: Jacques Cayton II wrote: I would post but Jacques is just chatting with family not to interesting on my side I will have to respond to sergamon I guess, and Junko with Satja..... just need to know how soon we are going on the mission.... Yeah i have wait 3 days now,you to respond Fck the kdr,i`m going in
Galm Fae Eskola Ergonomics 265	Posted - 2014.04.08 06:07:00 - [297] - Quote Galm Fae wrote: Meanwhile I like to imagine Galm is just standing there silently right about now, getting himself mentally prepared with muffled rap music bleeding ever so slightly from his helmet. And the rap goes on and on as all the other mercenaries enter the temple. Seriously, Galm's been getting pumped this whole time! LET'S KILL SOMETHING! *"On the Leviathan's back will our civilization be carried home and the taint of the Enemy purged from our souls."*
Hawk-eye Occultus Omega Elite Mercs INC. 117	Posted - 2014.04.08 10:15:00 - [298] - Quote Galm Fae wrote: Galm Fae wrote: Meanwhile I like to imagine Galm is just standing there silently right about now, getting himself mentally prepared with muffled rap music bleeding ever so slightly from his helmet. And the rap goes on and on as all the other mercenaries enter the temple. Seriously, Galm's been getting pumped this whole time! LET'S KILL SOMETHING! I'm Pumped! We are all a distant echo from the explosion of an ancient star. ' And one day, you will return to a new one, possibly
True Adamance Praetoriani Classiarii Templares Praetoria Imperialis Excubitoris 9340	Posted - 2014.04.08 21:24:00 - [299] - Quote Hawk-eye Occultus wrote: Galm Fae wrote: Galm Fae wrote: Meanwhile I like to imagine Galm is just standing there silently right about now, getting himself mentally prepared with muffled rap music bleeding ever so slightly from his helmet. And the rap goes on and on as all the other mercenaries enter the temple. Seriously, Galm's been getting pumped this whole time! LET'S KILL SOMETHING! I'm Pumped! Yeah I'll post and finish up both dialogues I have running in a single post. "Get thine Swag out of my face! Next you'll be writing #YOLOswagforJamyl in all your posts!" -Dagger Two
Clockwork Jester Namtar Elite Gallente Federation 27	Posted - 2014.04.08 23:30:00 - [300] - Quote Ok so I posted up and moved everything forward. I'll let everyone get in a post of boarding the cruiser and finishing their preparations before we move onto boarding the exploration ship and moving into the creepy ancient battleship. Junko if you want to you can update the others with the information you have gathered.



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