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Vinsarrow
New Eden Blades Of The Azure
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Posted - 2013.10.27 19:21:00 -
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First of all I'm male in real life but I don't mind describing my main btw I made my main female because of the "Make an army trailer." (Also CCP makes some of the best trailers ever) that aside here we go.
Gender: Female Age: 24 Description: Long red hair, piercing silver eyes, pale skin, black lipstick, height 5'7. facial features determind yet subttule. Wears the AUR purchased Amarr Prototype Neo Assault ak.0 Dropsuit red eyes white camo & black in design. Homeworld: Unknown yet. Roles: CEO of New Eden Blades Of The Azure, Acts as jack of all trades but specializes in Assault & healing in unison. Ration: For KD & WL - 1.0+ Favorite Vehicle: Tank Best prefered loadout choice: Amarr Basic Prototype ak.0, with Duvolle Assault Rifle & Militia SMG modules unknown. Back story. A open minded yet loyal Amarrian learned in the scriptures is known to be giving yet ruthless to enemies & betrayers, became a clone soldier to experience more & to gain a sense of immortality she is also known to be deeply philosophical, yet little is known of her childhood other then showing great promise & skill. She has traveled much of New Eden as she has a deep love for both travel as well as the universe she was born in. As such she has traveled many worlds & ecountered each race. She once stated her 2nd favorite race besides the Amarr was the gallente. She also likes the Minmitar though she rejects they're hatred towards her race but understands them. She also likes the Caldari's style but rejects they're dictatorship. Although never directly involved in a war she does act as a Ringer on rare occasion for the varying reasons usually for her allies & friends also indirectly involed. Founded the corporation to keep New Eden fun & fair to all it's inhabitant's through self example as in being a role model to all. (btw alot of this is actually my views, likes & etc.) |
AccursedZero
New Eden Blades Of The Azure
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Posted - 2013.10.28 20:57:00 -
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Gender: Male Race: Gallente Age: Unknown Height: 5'9 Weight: Average in appearance Appearance: Unknown, generally masked Dropsuit: Wears The Amarr Wolfman Dropsuit & Amarr Neo Assault Dropsuit bought with AUR Favorite Vehicle: Tank Best prefered loadout: Unknown BackStory: Little to next to none is known of the 1 by the name of AccursedZero the name suggests 2 things. Accursed definition - used to express strong dislike of or anger toward someone or something or under a curse. Zero definition - no quantity or number; naught; the figure 0 or set the sights of (a gun) for firing. All that is truely known is the secrecy of his beliefs in justice & vengeance involved in the Assassination of the corrupt as well as known to participate in battles considered to be worthy in cause. Believed to have ties & connections to a deep networks of informantion both official & illegal in likeness. His supporters sponsor him in varying ways from ISK, Information, contacts, targets to public support but always all his supporters remain fully anonymous to this date. The record of his first Academy battle is staggering, he led a squad of 1 - just himself & achieved 2000+ War Points near reaching a orbital single handedly, destroyed multiple LAV's, 1 installation, 23 kills & 2 Deaths. Once holding a KD & WL ratio of 2.0+ now down to 1.0+ & 1000+ kills in the first month alone, this is all we have according to the records to date. He is near nomadic in nature but holds great value in the freedom liberties & philosophy of his race the Gallente Federation, the culture he thrived in taking advantage of the varying cultures & it's profitable economy becoming something self suffcient. That is all the little gathered on this individual. (Back story behind the name it actually belonged to a member that joined our clan called by a different name in another game, I liked the name so much I asked if I could use it as my secondary in Dust 514 & the first AccursedZero said 'yes' btw this is Vinsarrow) |
Demel Derpovsky
Derringer Defenses
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Posted - 2013.10.29 04:56:00 -
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Galm Fae wrote:I decided to give Niina her own dossier:
no offense, but perhaps you could have made Niina a merc? You don't need to grind on her or anything, just helps with the story if you have a separate oc for separate characters. Just a suggestion! Take it with some thought. |
Demel Derpovsky
Derringer Defenses
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Posted - 2013.10.29 04:59:00 -
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True Adamance wrote: (More inbound)
Nice! Love reading these bios, feels like everybody is opening up to everybody else -sniff- getting emotional -dramatic tissue blow-.
No but really Adamance, pleaaase do not exceed, but I mean I guess you can go ahead and do so.... I just don't want an overwhelming amount of bios flying around the place where you'll have to jump around in a noodled- patchwork of them. |
Demel Derpovsky
Derringer Defenses
23
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Posted - 2013.10.29 05:01:00 -
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True Adamance wrote: Dammit Galm in light of this we both fell into the Mary Sue character Archetype Trap. Shame on us as story tellers.
Ah....the Mary Sue Archetype! Should have made your character androgynous.... or an around 8 feet tall muscular woman....
bleh, out of the ordinary is my kind of thing :)
I don't think your character is very Mary Sue. You do a good job of portraying him. He certainly isn't an oddball or the type to stand out, but your writing does. Very formal and sort of graceful. Good job!
Not saying your definition is wrong, but can i ask what's yours? |
Niina Eskola
Commando Perkone Caldari State
1
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Posted - 2013.10.29 05:13:00 -
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Demel Derpovsky wrote:Galm Fae wrote:I decided to give Niina her own dossier:
no offense, but perhaps you could have made Niina a merc? You don't need to grind on her or anything, just helps with the story if you have a separate oc for separate characters. Just a suggestion! Take it with some thought. Way ahead of you bro-chan!
Fair bit of warning, I've used a character similar to Niina in the past and people have described her as a bit "bubbley." I can assure you, this wasn't planned. Niina actually acts a lot more like myself than Galm does.
Strength. Beauty. Quality. Eskola Ergonomics.
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Demel Derpovsky
Derringer Defenses
23
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Posted - 2013.10.29 05:28:00 -
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Niina Eskola wrote: Way ahead of you bro-chan!
Fair bit of warning, I've used a character similar to Niina in the past and people have described her as a bit "bubbley." I can assure you, this wasn't planned. Niina actually acts a lot more like myself than Galm does.
Hah! Nice! :)
Yeah I feel like Demel is a "playful" and "lascivious" version of me representing joy, emotion, and half or so of the human sins while Maximia is more "thoughtful" and "blunt" representing the seclusive, knowledgeable,and the other sins, not that I a creep irl, then again, I really doubt we'll know what each other actually are like in real life.
Just an idea, keep an open mind at what each other are like, your character can reflect who you are, but it doesn't mean it is you...
(Felt like saying that cause when I rp on other sites, stuff like that flies around like crazy, it's just....gross) |
Demel Derpovsky
Derringer Defenses
24
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Posted - 2013.10.29 05:29:00 -
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really like these bios guys, :) good job! |
Galm Fae
Guardian Solutions DARKSTAR ARMY
129
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Posted - 2013.10.29 05:31:00 -
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Demel Derpovsky wrote:Niina Eskola wrote: Way ahead of you bro-chan!
Fair bit of warning, I've used a character similar to Niina in the past and people have described her as a bit "bubbley." I can assure you, this wasn't planned. Niina actually acts a lot more like myself than Galm does.
Hah! Nice! :) Yeah I feel like Demel is a "playful" and "lascivious" version of me representing joy, emotion, and half or so of the human sins while Maximia is more "thoughtful" and "blunt" representing the seclusive, knowledgeable,and the other sins, not that I a creep irl, then again, I really doubt we'll know what each other actually are like in real life. Just an idea, keep an open mind at what each other are like, your character can reflect who you are, but it doesn't mean it is you... (Felt like saying that cause when I rp on other sites, stuff like that flies around like crazy, it's just....gross) I get what you mean. In a lot of ways Galm and Niina are different aspects of a whole. |
True Adamance
PIE Inc. Praetoria Imperialis Excubitoris
3772
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Posted - 2013.10.30 03:23:00 -
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Galm Fae wrote:Demel Derpovsky wrote:Niina Eskola wrote: Way ahead of you bro-chan!
Fair bit of warning, I've used a character similar to Niina in the past and people have described her as a bit "bubbley." I can assure you, this wasn't planned. Niina actually acts a lot more like myself than Galm does.
Hah! Nice! :) Yeah I feel like Demel is a "playful" and "lascivious" version of me representing joy, emotion, and half or so of the human sins while Maximia is more "thoughtful" and "blunt" representing the seclusive, knowledgeable,and the other sins, not that I a creep irl, then again, I really doubt we'll know what each other actually are like in real life. Just an idea, keep an open mind at what each other are like, your character can reflect who you are, but it doesn't mean it is you... (Felt like saying that cause when I rp on other sites, stuff like that flies around like crazy, it's just....gross) I get what you mean. In a lot of ways Galm and Niina are different aspects of a whole. You....I don't even know what to say to you. Now who will be Satja's mortal playmate? WHO? Oh its so sad...
"All things were created by the Divine, and so the glory of our faith is inherent to us all"
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True Adamance
PIE Inc. Praetoria Imperialis Excubitoris
3775
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Posted - 2013.10.30 03:24:00 -
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Demel Derpovsky wrote:really like these bios guys, :) good job!
Apparently you wont let me finish my Bio. Its something like 6 Posts long but......
"All things were created by the Divine, and so the glory of our faith is inherent to us all"
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Galm Fae
Guardian Solutions DARKSTAR ARMY
129
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Posted - 2013.10.30 04:43:00 -
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True Adamance wrote:Demel Derpovsky wrote:really like these bios guys, :) good job! Apparently you wont let me finish my Bio. Its something like 6 Posts long but...... THAT FEEEEL! I wish I had more time to work on Warrior Nine. There is a WHOLE mess of backstory I haven't even gotten the chance to touch base on. |
True Adamance
PIE Inc. Praetoria Imperialis Excubitoris
3775
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Posted - 2013.10.30 05:13:00 -
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Galm Fae wrote:True Adamance wrote:Demel Derpovsky wrote:really like these bios guys, :) good job! Apparently you wont let me finish my Bio. Its something like 6 Posts long but...... THAT FEEEEL! I wish I had more time to work on Warrior Nine. There is a WHOLE mess of backstory I haven't even gotten the chance to touch base on. Lol what are you missing?
I need to add the
Iesa Arc Blood Raiders Assault Siege of Raa Hunting the Fallen Templars Kador's Vacation and more recently the Fall of Arzad
"All things were created by the Divine, and so the glory of our faith is inherent to us all"
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Demel Derpovsky
Derringer Defenses
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Posted - 2013.10.30 05:19:00 -
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True Adamance wrote:Demel Derpovsky wrote:really like these bios guys, :) good job! Apparently you wont let me finish my Bio. Its something like 6 Posts long but......
a¦áGûâa¦á ....wtf you want to help me make a New York Times Best seller too? SHORTEN THAT! Lol just kidding....I mean.....ch....I know you won't rant...so go ahead.
I'd be taking 2 or maybe 3 if I can get a 3rd person.
BTW, what do you guys think of your ooc's theme song or a song that represents their relationship?
Demel's : Deadmau5 - Professional Griefers www.youtube.com/watch?v=QJelsOHe6xk (Demel running to the frantic pace of the beat, kicking off a wall and grappling onto another and throwing down a drop uplink onto the platform before perching himself at the top of the building and charging his advanced scrambler rifle to the backs of the enemy. "Show time....". Bullets rip through their shields while soldiers regroup at his position, the rest is not hard to see what happens...)
Maximia's: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=4mL-WBQ-1V4 (love this one! Makes me think of a huge heavy Amarr walking on the battlefield, guns churning, flesh burning and ripping to pulp.....Maximia's happy time :D) |
Demel Derpovsky
Derringer Defenses
24
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Posted - 2013.10.30 05:20:00 -
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True Adamance wrote: I need to add the
Iesa Arc Blood Raiders Assault Siege of Raa Hunting the Fallen Templars Kador's Vacation and more recently the Fall of Arzad
OOh!!! Demel would love the Blood Raider assault :)...... 'course he'd root for the blood raiders...but bleh. |
True Adamance
PIE Inc. Praetoria Imperialis Excubitoris
3775
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Posted - 2013.10.30 05:46:00 -
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Demel Derpovsky wrote:True Adamance wrote: I need to add the
Iesa Arc Blood Raiders Assault Siege of Raa Hunting the Fallen Templars Kador's Vacation and more recently the Fall of Arzad
OOh!!! Demel would love the Blood Raider assault :)...... 'course he'd root for the blood raiders...but bleh.
Those bastards nearly killed Satja! Nearly kill half the good men and women on Iesa III.
"All things were created by the Divine, and so the glory of our faith is inherent to us all"
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Galm Fae
Guardian Solutions DARKSTAR ARMY
131
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Posted - 2013.10.30 05:53:00 -
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True Adamance wrote:Galm Fae wrote:True Adamance wrote:Demel Derpovsky wrote:really like these bios guys, :) good job! Apparently you wont let me finish my Bio. Its something like 6 Posts long but...... THAT FEEEEL! I wish I had more time to work on Warrior Nine. There is a WHOLE mess of backstory I haven't even gotten the chance to touch base on. Lol what are you missing? I need to add the Iesa Arc Blood Raiders Assault Siege of Raa Hunting the Fallen Templars Kador's Vacation and more recently the Fall of Arzad Looking forward to all of those!
Hopefully you don't care for spoilers, but I still need to write down Galm's rise from an orphan to a full fledged terrorist. Right now I get the impression from others that while he can be an ass, he isn't that dangerous. I really want to show people that in the past Galm was a pretty harsh bastard, while still painting it in a light that would make you see it all from his point of view.
There are some secondary characters that will become more important later in my RP plans, and I plan on making a tie-in to the events of Templar One (hint, Galm was still a citizen of Mordu's Legion AND a Dragonaur during the time.)
Afterwards things are really going to brought to a head during his time in the STC. I don't want to quite share what happens then yet. For now it sort of works in my favor to just tell you "it was bad." |
Satja Askarin
Vherokior Combat Logistics Minmatar Republic
6
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Posted - 2013.10.30 08:35:00 -
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Galm Fae wrote:True Adamance wrote:Galm Fae wrote:True Adamance wrote:Demel Derpovsky wrote:really like these bios guys, :) good job! Apparently you wont let me finish my Bio. Its something like 6 Posts long but...... THAT FEEEEL! I wish I had more time to work on Warrior Nine. There is a WHOLE mess of backstory I haven't even gotten the chance to touch base on. Lol what are you missing? I need to add the Iesa Arc Blood Raiders Assault Siege of Raa Hunting the Fallen Templars Kador's Vacation and more recently the Fall of Arzad Looking forward to all of those! Hopefully you don't care for spoilers, but I still need to write down Galm's rise from an orphan to a full fledged terrorist. Right now I get the impression from others that while he can be an ass, he isn't that dangerous. I really want to show people that in the past Galm was a pretty harsh bastard, while still painting it in a light that would make you see it all from his point of view. There are some secondary characters that will become more important later in my RP plans, and I plan on making a tie-in to the events of Templar One (hint, Galm was still a citizen of Mordu's Legion AND a Dragonaur during the time.) Afterwards things are really going to brought to a head during his time in the STC. I don't want to quite share what happens then yet. For now it sort of works in my favor to just tell you "it was bad."
Thing about your characters transition, and people have tried to comment on this but I have said the same thing to them. Its not hard to become whatever you want if you think you are doing the right thing. I suppose the question is did Galm think he was doing the right thing?
As for the danger thing. I tend to scoff at character that are Quote UnQuote "Openly Dangerous" it tends to be a form of over compensation. The scary ones are the ones that can just snap... like Niina seems to be telling Void about right now in the Summit halls. The kinds of characters you expect to be one way, but the slightest of rephrasing's of something proves you wrong. This is why Kador is not perceived as dangerous, he really isn't, because he doesn't ever truly doubt himself, one of the benefits of being a fanatic.
As for the Templar One..... yeah sure tying into cannon is a good thing, my CEO says never tie in cannon you cannot source IC (aka only cannon most people in New Eden Commonly know about) I just hope, and I know your wont, go over board with the canonical tie ins and over exaggerate Galm.
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Galm Fae
Guardian Solutions DARKSTAR ARMY
131
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Posted - 2013.10.31 00:18:00 -
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Thank you for the feedback, it really does make a world of difference and helps me out to hear from someone else's viewpoint.
I get exactly what you mean about the aggression thing. A character who walks into a public area in a heavy suit and smashes babies with his face you can take (if you forgive the term) at at face value. But speaking with Ryeon made me realize that something that walks like a human, acts like a human, and seems at a glace human tend to become unsettling at best when there is just a slight twist that makes you wonder just how much of them you're seeing.
Galm's done some horrible things in his day, but the worst part of it all is that to this day it has never occured to him that he's been the bad guy in all of this.
Likewise, Kador lies at the opposite end of the spectrum. He is one of the most genuine characters in the summit and I want him to succeed! Can't wait to hear more from him.
And don't worry about the canon tie in. It would mostly be four chapters of Galm getting his ass kicked. |
True Adamance
PIE Inc. Praetoria Imperialis Excubitoris
3817
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Posted - 2013.10.31 00:42:00 -
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Galm Fae wrote:Thank you for the feedback, it really does make a world of difference and helps me out to hear from someone else's viewpoint.
I get exactly what you mean about the aggression thing. A character who walks into a public area in a heavy suit and smashes babies with his face you can take (if you forgive the term) at at face value. But speaking with Ryeon made me realize that something that walks like a human, acts like a human, and seems at a glace human tend to become unsettling at best when there is just a slight twist that makes you wonder just how much of them you're seeing.
Galm's done some horrible things in his day, but the worst part of it all is that to this day it has never occured to him that he's been the bad guy in all of this.
Likewise, Kador lies at the opposite end of the spectrum. He is one of the most genuine characters in the summit and I want him to succeed! Can't wait to hear more from him.
And don't worry about the canon tie in. It would mostly be four chapters of Galm getting his ass kicked.
Haha succeed? Not if I can help it. Making my characters suffer makes them much more interesting.
You basically summised the basis of all modern horror in that paragraph which is why zombie horror is becoming so popular in the mainstream.
Something looks human but at its core is invariably not human is terrifying, which is why the group Sansha's Nation is of particular interest to me in New Eden, not to join or support but because the face of it is so human, but the entity itself is horrific in nature, which means when someone stands up to it, and rails against it you can see real courage and dedication.
"All things were created by the Divine, and so the glory of our faith is inherent to us all"
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Demel Derpovsky
Derringer Defenses
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Posted - 2013.10.31 00:58:00 -
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True Adamance wrote:
Those bastards nearly killed Satja! Nearly kill half the good men and women on Iesa III.
As Demel might say, "Sometimes people are made just for slaughter. We're calves to somebody at some time."
As Maximia might say, "Bad can come from good, so playing devil's advocate isn't so bad- I mean good....bad.....no wait-....urgh I can't talk..." |
True Adamance
PIE Inc. Praetoria Imperialis Excubitoris
3819
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Posted - 2013.10.31 01:08:00 -
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Demel Derpovsky wrote:True Adamance wrote:
Those bastards nearly killed Satja! Nearly kill half the good men and women on Iesa III.
As Demel might say, "Sometimes people are made just for slaughter. We're calves to somebody at some time." As Maximia might say, "Bad can come from good, so playing devil's advocate isn't so bad- I mean good....bad.....no wait-....urgh I can't talk..." Say that again Demel and I will cut our your tongue.
"All things were created by the Divine, and so the glory of our faith is inherent to us all"
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Zsan Durail
Psygod9 D.E.F.I.A.N.C.E
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Posted - 2013.10.31 03:36:00 -
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True Adamance wrote:Demel Derpovsky wrote:True Adamance wrote:
Those bastards nearly killed Satja! Nearly kill half the good men and women on Iesa III.
As Demel might say, "Sometimes people are made just for slaughter. We're calves to somebody at some time." As Maximia might say, "Bad can come from good, so playing devil's advocate isn't so bad- I mean good....bad.....no wait-....urgh I can't talk..." Say that again Demel and I will cut our your tongue.
Man Adamance you really are a bastard aren't you? |
Vinsarrow
New Eden Blades Of The Azure
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Posted - 2013.10.31 03:39:00 -
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Zsan Durail wrote:True Adamance wrote:Demel Derpovsky wrote:True Adamance wrote:
Those bastards nearly killed Satja! Nearly kill half the good men and women on Iesa III.
As Demel might say, "Sometimes people are made just for slaughter. We're calves to somebody at some time." As Maximia might say, "Bad can come from good, so playing devil's advocate isn't so bad- I mean good....bad.....no wait-....urgh I can't talk..." Say that again Demel and I will cut our your tongue. Man Adamance you really are a bastard aren't you?
No, he's just hardcore to the max but in the good way XD |
Demel Derpovsky
Derringer Defenses
24
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Posted - 2013.10.31 04:13:00 -
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True Adamance wrote: Say that again Demel and I will cut our your tongue.
It's true don't hurt me!!!.....*whimper huddle and dramatic woman-in-distress-pose* |
True Adamance
PIE Inc. Praetoria Imperialis Excubitoris
3827
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Posted - 2013.10.31 04:31:00 -
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Zsan Durail wrote:True Adamance wrote:Demel Derpovsky wrote:True Adamance wrote:
Those bastards nearly killed Satja! Nearly kill half the good men and women on Iesa III.
As Demel might say, "Sometimes people are made just for slaughter. We're calves to somebody at some time." As Maximia might say, "Bad can come from good, so playing devil's advocate isn't so bad- I mean good....bad.....no wait-....urgh I can't talk..." Say that again Demel and I will cut our your tongue. Man Adamance you really are a bastard aren't you?
(( Thanks its what I am going for, but to associate Kador's servant/ he doesn't know what she is to him yet as a person made to be sacrificed is way outta line... but I'm glad you can see how characters in RP and stories don't have to be the good guys to be interesting.))
"All things were created by the Divine, and so the glory of our faith is inherent to us all"
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True Adamance
PIE Inc. Praetoria Imperialis Excubitoris
3827
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Posted - 2013.10.31 04:33:00 -
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Demel Derpovsky wrote:True Adamance wrote: Say that again Demel and I will cut our your tongue.
It's true don't hurt me!!!.....*whimper huddle and dramatic woman-in-distress-pose*
I'm sorry.... its just that those people did not deserve it, there is no justifying what the Blood Raiders did to them.
Hoarding the mercenaries and clones up to harvest blood, cutting the limbs from the mortals just to watch them bleed, torturing the slaves who couldn't run.... it was horrific.
"All things were created by the Divine, and so the glory of our faith is inherent to us all"
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Demel Derpovsky
Derringer Defenses
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Posted - 2013.10.31 04:54:00 -
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True Adamance wrote: I'm sorry.... its just that those people did not deserve it, there is no justifying what the Blood Raiders did to them.
Hoarding the mercenaries and clones up to harvest blood, cutting the limbs from the mortals just to watch them bleed, torturing the slaves who couldn't run.... it was horrific.
I hope you do realize I was joking....I stand by what I said. It's cruel, but it's the world we live in... |
Maximia Beflas
Derringer Defenses
9
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Posted - 2013.11.05 06:16:00 -
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Maximia Beflas' biography....sort of abridged
Height: 7'6" of very muscular build (Not extremely, but enough to seem like a body builder). not very busty though Blue Eyes Slight freckles on her face, but very few. Slightly tanned skin, but of peachy color Orange "ginger" short curly hair Has her traditionl Minmatar tattoo of a black bull with vector art like flames all over her left arm with Minmatar writing all the way up to her neck and left side jaw. Has a high voice and a slight slurred way of speech, doesn't enunciate as much as the average person.
Maximia Beflas was raised on a Minmatar planet, lived a traditional life, and had a very care free, "Happy-go-lucky" way of life. She didn't bother to work hard, and nothing really interested her other than sleeping, eating, boxing and lifting weights, rough housing with friends, and watching shows about daring pilots and their expeditions into the far out regions of space. It was her goal in life at that clueless, innocent youth: To join the pilots in their exodus, their odyssey of science and over the walls of the known worlds, into the storming tides of the unknown. After several job applications to aid pilots and exploration corporations, she had no luck on the such. It was until she found herself an opening in a company, composed of a group of privateers...or pirates. Maximia's size, strength, and devotion made her a great candidate for an oblivious hitman, as well as an easy prey for trickery. She worked in the hangars, counting cargo and organization, and as time passed she soared through the ranks and found herself as a squad leader of a hitman crew. She never ventured to the stars, but found pleasure in elsewhere, the horrid pleasure of sadism, to reap life and to pillage. Life had opened a back door for her, seeping with blood, the flashes of gunfire, the crying of the dying or the to be dead, and there she was, climbing the mound of corpses, bullets, and riches.
As all good things happen, all good things come to end. So was the same for her life as a pirate. She was targeted by a Minmatar defense firm and all of her group was imprisoned or killed, but her. She was notorious in her life and age as a 21 year old pirate with a copious 5 million bounty on her head, not much, but for a woman of her age was intriguing. The Defense firm wanted to tame the shrewd, which wasn't hard as Maximia wasn't the type to loose focus of standards, even as a pirate. She had always kept a clean room, a tidy dress shirt, a well kept hair, and a determined focus. She was given the ultimate of joining them as a new experimental group of test subjects or death. She chose the experimental route, she was too young to die for the spoils of thievery and the defense firm made sure of her success.
Few days later, she had awoken an immortal and trained as a pilot and a heavy soldier. She had taken a liking to the forge gun, with keen eyes and a steady grip, she could pick of soldiers a mile away, and her work with the sub machine gun was equally impressive. She had always been prone to charging due to her pirate instincts of instilling fear into the enemy, which doesn't exactly work when your fighting against immortals who don't have the same views as mortals. Maximia however had gained a reputation and a nickname as "the crazed *****" or "cannibal" as she ate the flesh of some of the dead enemies, howling and shrieking with laughter, again from her pirate ways of striking fear into the enemy.
The idea of striking fear was the same way she found Demel. Demel had been placing nano hives for his squad, right when Maximia hobbled in, spinning her minigun and splattering his squad- and Demel's legs, with a volley of bullets. Demel then found himself staring at the blood thirsty Maximia, snarling and hoisting him up in the air with one hand. All he could do was laugh and clap his hands. "So you're the person that my squads been talking about!?" He smiles and extends his hand out to shake hers. Maximia had never seen this casual attitude on the battlefield, she was fairly new to the whole ordeal, and she enjoyed the intriguing, androgynous voice and body of the petite mercenary. They talked about each other's life and quizzed each other about the way of a mercenary and their raison-d'etre. After some time, Maximia learned the first rule about Demel, he's sly and a sociopath, a good one too. He had shot Maximia in the heavy with her own sub machine gun after they exchanged information.
At a certain time, we all reflect on our past, and when Maximia came to that time, she remembered the tall girl she was, curled up with friends, dreaming of the future and the world beyond their senses that pilots sought to uncover. Where was she now, now that she was surrounded by bloodshed and bullets, constant death and rebirth, where was she now? She had to make herself something, to be someone,
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Heathen Bastard
The Bastard Brigade
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since there's some minor critiquing happening in here, anyone have opinions on my conduct on the RP forums vs the presented bio here? does it seem mismatched? I'm thinking about rewriting it to be a bit less generic. |
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