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Dreis ShadowWeaver
ZEN KILL Society
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Posted - 2016.05.29 00:40:00 -
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Mighty was he whose greatness knew no bounds, Whose boots offered green Gallentean gleam, Whose path deterred by no trifling wounds, Whose Matari gloves would hungrily teem With insatiable desire to dispense The hoards and swarms of Rail Rifle rounds And Scrambler shots, a flurry sure intense, To silence the jesters and fools and clowns. Those who tolerated his delight must Have certes laughed as they laid him in DUST
Oh noble hero, what became of you? Your spirit had never before quivered, But for such an abominable coup We don't blame your life force for the shiver. Oh fie, oh fie, oh woe, woe and woe; Such a tragedy ne'er predicted, Ne'er foresawn. By your resounding 'No!', Dragons would stare in awe, for selected Are those who are optimistic by Gods, Yet even they can't bear the wrath of Mods
Sweet hero, whose head surrounded by a wreath Of brilliant, fragrant purple thistle! Undeniable is the painful grief Of lovers, but these we give dismissal, For from your ashes springs bountiful life, Or perhaps a celestial surge of light Promising rebirth, free of laggy strife. Noble hero, restored shall be your might. Even bees, the little almsmen of spring-bowers, Know there is richest juice in poison-flowers.
Just something I banged out in about 45 mins in the Ottava Rima stanza structure. I've been reading the works of John Keats in my Literature class, which I think has influenced this poem. I've added a little nod to him at the end, with the last two lines taken directly from his poem Lamia.
And yes, I did rhyme 'bounds' with 'wounds' (pronounce it as 'wownds'), 'rounds' with 'clowns', 'quivered' with 'shiver', and 'predicted' with 'selected'. I've learnt that in poetry, you can be a little lenient with the pronunciation.
You know, I quite enjoyed writing that. I might write some more poetry.
News, lads! our wars are done.
The desperate tempest hath so bang'd the Amarr,
That their designment halts (get r3kt)
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Dreis ShadowWeaver
ZEN KILL Society
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Posted - 2016.05.29 08:39:00 -
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CCP Rattati His forums were catty So much so that he went cold turkey And became much more lurky.
General John Ripper Didn't do up his zipper. It caused much a farce When he whipped out his Vahzz.
Regnier Feros Suffered from hair loss. Upon finding it made him unwelcome, He resided to only say 'hmm'.
Gunman Stylze For miles and miles Had travelled Ed and Barry and Tim To come and laugh at him.
Kaze Eyrou Challenged the status quo Soft as a marshmallow Was his waifu love pillow.
Radiant Pancake Had such a backache His arse had been breached After his black rights speech.
Written in clerihew form (rhyme scheme A-A-B-B). The point of it is to poke fun at a famous person. Anyone wanna do me?
News, lads! our wars are done.
The desperate tempest hath so bang'd the Amarr,
That their designment halts (get r3kt)
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Dreis ShadowWeaver
ZEN KILL Society
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Posted - 2016.05.29 11:46:00 -
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Jadek Menaheim Known by many a name The more popular being runt, *******, ****, and ****!
Dusty5678 He whom I do hate Just as the bumblebee Hates the sweet flowers on the tree <3
News, lads! our wars are done.
The desperate tempest hath so bang'd the Amarr,
That their designment halts (get r3kt)
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Dreis ShadowWeaver
RIP DUST 514
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Posted - 2016.05.30 14:04:00 -
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With a final wheeze and cough, the dank tomb Shut, and every thought in my mind darkness, Would mercilessly and quickly consume. For me, there would be no sweet katharsis, and void of all else, came rushing in seawater, thudding against my ears like my own heart pounded away in my chest, a slaughter of my sense of self, tearing me apart. Tell me, what number of tissues ply four Will dry up such a torrential downpour?
This time, the tears were pure; they weren't salty but they flowed freely, as I was taunted: 'The servers will be up again shortly.' My once-proud Merc Quarters are now haunted, And I imagine on Heimatar V, The confused spirit of Dreis there resides Cutting the mercless, dusty air with knives; He would find naught on Manus Peak's hillsides. There were none to hear his agonised cries When he learnt the sun would no longer rise.
Linky
News, lads! our wars are done.
The desperate tempest hath so bang'd the Amarr,
That their designment halts (get r3kt)
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Dreis ShadowWeaver
RIP DUST 514
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Posted - 2016.07.16 21:14:00 -
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Deathly Assassin None would surpass 'im In him there is no malice Because really 'It was Alice!'
We did it for Nigel ( ; ~;)7
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Dreis ShadowWeaver
RIP DUST 514
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Posted - 2016.07.24 21:42:00 -
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Thank you very much for publicising my work I liked your dramatic reading
I am sorry to tell you though that my name is pronounced 'Drays'. It's a very common mistake to make though. I really like the spelling of my name now, but I might have to change it in Nova... Maybe it's actually my spelling that's dodgy after all!
I now worry that some of the more subtler meanings of the poems might have gone over some people's heads, so if there is demand (to convince me that the forums aren't yet dead) I will post annotations.
We did it for Nigel ( ; ~;)7
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Dreis ShadowWeaver
RIP DUST 514
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Posted - 2016.08.06 02:56:00 -
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Cloak Dog wrote:Joel II X wrote:Dust now is shut down. Never again to shoot yes. Nova's not coming. Goddamn them bunnies f***ing hacking noobs jesus its snowing on mt. fuji do u evn haiku m9
We did it for Nigel ( ; ~;)7
Come play BF4 with me on PS3! PSN: AnimeLover456
Tomoko is mai waifu
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Dreis ShadowWeaver
RIP DUST 514
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Posted - 2016.08.23 12:32:00 -
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Bumpity
We did it for Nigel ( ; ~;)7
Come play BF4 with me on PS3! PSN: AnimeLover456
Tomoko is mai waifu
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Dreis ShadowWeaver
RIP DUST 514
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Posted - 2016.11.12 23:14:00 -
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Forgot all about this poem, would be a shame for it to get exiled into the murky depths of the forums.
It's already too late for my other one.
Trump x Farage <3
Retired from gaming
Tomoko is mai waifu
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Dreis ShadowWeaver
RIP DUST 514
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Posted - 2017.03.02 22:14:00 -
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Bump
EVE name: Dravos Tarimus
Tomoko is mai waifu
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