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Dreis ShadowWeaver wrote:

Mighty was he whose greatness knew no bounds,
Whose boots offered green Gallentean gleam,
Whose path deterred by no trifling wounds,
Whose Matari gloves would hungrily teem
With insatiable desire to dispense
The hoards and swarms of Rail Rifle rounds
And Scrambler shots, a flurry sure intense,
To silence the jesters and fools and clowns.
Those who tolerated his delight must
Have certes laughed as they laid him in DUST.

Oh noble hero, what became of you?
Your spirit had never before quivered,
But for such an abominable coup
We don't blame your life force for the shiver.
Oh fie, oh fie, oh woe, woe and woe;
Such a tragedy ne'er predicted,
Ne'er foresawn. By your resounding 'No!',
Dragons would stare in awe, for selected
Are those who are optimistic by Gods,
Yet even they can't bear the wrath of Mods

Sweet hero, whose head surrounded by a wreath
Of brilliant, fragrant purple thistle!
Undeniable is the painful grief
Of lovers, but these we give dismissal,
For from your ashes springs bountiful life,
Or perhaps a celestial surge of light
Promising rebirth, free of laggy strife.
Noble hero, restored shall be your might.
Even bees, the little almsmen of spring-bowers,
Know there is richest juice in poison-flowers.

Just something I banged out in about 45 mins. Made up my own little stanza structure too: A-B-A-B-C-D-C-D-E-E. I've been reading the works of John Keats in my Literature class, which I think has influenced this poem. I've added a little nod to him at the end, with the last two lines taken directly from his poem Isabella.

And yes, I did rhyme 'bounds' with 'wounds' (pronounce it as 'wownds'), 'rounds' with 'clowns', 'quivered' with 'shiver', and 'predicted' with 'selected'. I've learnt that in poetry, you can be a little lenient with the pronunciation.

You know, I quite enjoyed writing that. I might write some more poetry. Big smile

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Dreis ShadowWeaver ZEN KILL Society 9216	Posted - 2016.05.29 00:40:00 - [1] - Quote Mighty was he whose greatness knew no bounds, Whose boots offered green Gallentean gleam, Whose path deterred by no trifling wounds, Whose Matari gloves would hungrily teem With insatiable desire to dispense The hoards and swarms of Rail Rifle rounds And Scrambler shots, a flurry sure intense, To silence the jesters and fools and clowns. Those who tolerated his delight must Have certes laughed as they laid him in DUST Oh noble hero, what became of you? Your spirit had never before quivered, But for such an abominable coup We don't blame your life force for the shiver. Oh fie, oh fie, oh woe, woe and woe; Such a tragedy ne'er predicted, Ne'er foresawn. By your resounding 'No!', Dragons would stare in awe, for selected Are those who are optimistic by Gods, Yet even they can't bear the wrath of Mods Sweet hero, whose head surrounded by a wreath Of brilliant, fragrant purple thistle! Undeniable is the painful grief Of lovers, but these we give dismissal, For from your ashes springs bountiful life, Or perhaps a celestial surge of light Promising rebirth, free of laggy strife. Noble hero, restored shall be your might. Even bees, the little almsmen of spring-bowers, Know there is richest juice in poison-flowers. Just something I banged out in about 45 mins in the Ottava Rima stanza structure. I've been reading the works of John Keats in my Literature class, which I think has influenced this poem. I've added a little nod to him at the end, with the last two lines taken directly from his poem Lamia. And yes, I did rhyme 'bounds' with 'wounds' (pronounce it as 'wownds'), 'rounds' with 'clowns', 'quivered' with 'shiver', and 'predicted' with 'selected'. I've learnt that in poetry, you can be a little lenient with the pronunciation. You know, I quite enjoyed writing that. I might write some more poetry. News, lads! our wars are done. The desperate tempest hath so bang'd the Amarr, That their designment halts (get r3kt)
Radiant Pancake3 Y.A.M.A.H 4680	Posted - 2016.05.29 02:19:00 - [2] - Quote Now write me one you filthy animule. "A quantum super computer, calculating for a thousand years, could not even approach the number of fucks I do not give."
Cloak Dog Horizons' Edge The-Office 1205	Posted - 2016.05.29 02:27:00 - [3] - Quote Showin off huh? U wanna fite m8. I extremely like this poem SHAMELESS *Knife is love. Knife is life.*
Dreis ShadowWeaver ZEN KILL Society 9220	Posted - 2016.05.29 08:39:00 - [4] - Quote CCP Rattati His forums were catty So much so that he went cold turkey And became much more lurky. General John Ripper Didn't do up his zipper. It caused much a farce When he whipped out his Vahzz. Regnier Feros Suffered from hair loss. Upon finding it made him unwelcome, He resided to only say 'hmm'. Gunman Stylze For miles and miles Had travelled Ed and Barry and Tim To come and laugh at him. Kaze Eyrou Challenged the status quo Soft as a marshmallow Was his waifu love pillow. Radiant Pancake Had such a backache His arse had been breached After his black rights speech. Written in clerihew form (rhyme scheme A-A-B-B). The point of it is to poke fun at a famous person. Anyone wanna do me? News, lads! our wars are done. The desperate tempest hath so bang'd the Amarr, That their designment halts (get r3kt)
Zai Ebes Adam LEGION 15	Posted - 2016.05.29 09:07:00 - [5] - Quote Dreis ShadowWeaver wrote: Mighty was he whose greatness knew no bounds, Whose boots offered green Gallentean gleam, Whose path deterred by no trifling wounds, Whose Matari gloves would hungrily teem With insatiable desire to dispense The hoards and swarms of Rail Rifle rounds And Scrambler shots, a flurry sure intense, To silence the jesters and fools and clowns. Those who tolerated his delight must Have certes laughed as they laid him in DUST. Oh noble hero, what became of you? Your spirit had never before quivered, But for such an abominable coup We don't blame your life force for the shiver. Oh fie, oh fie, oh woe, woe and woe; Such a tragedy ne'er predicted, Ne'er foresawn. By your resounding 'No!', Dragons would stare in awe, for selected Are those who are optimistic by Gods, Yet even they can't bear the wrath of Mods Sweet hero, whose head surrounded by a wreath Of brilliant, fragrant purple thistle! Undeniable is the painful grief Of lovers, but these we give dismissal, For from your ashes springs bountiful life, Or perhaps a celestial surge of light Promising rebirth, free of laggy strife. Noble hero, restored shall be your might. Even bees, the little almsmen of spring-bowers, Know there is richest juice in poison-flowers. Just something I banged out in about 45 mins. Made up my own little stanza structure too: A-B-A-B-C-D-C-D-E-E. I've been reading the works of John Keats in my Literature class, which I think has influenced this poem. I've added a little nod to him at the end, with the last two lines taken directly from his poem Isabella. And yes, I did rhyme 'bounds' with 'wounds' (pronounce it as 'wownds'), 'rounds' with 'clowns', 'quivered' with 'shiver', and 'predicted' with 'selected'. I've learnt that in poetry, you can be a little lenient with the pronunciation. You know, I quite enjoyed writing that. I might write some more poetry. This is mighty. =ƒÆû Hello. My Chemical Romance
Dreis ShadowWeaver ZEN KILL Society 9228	Posted - 2016.05.29 11:46:00 - [6] - Quote Jadek Menaheim Known by many a name The more popular being runt, *****, , and **! Dusty5678 He whom I do hate Just as the bumblebee Hates the sweet flowers on the tree <3 News, lads! our wars are done. The desperate tempest hath so bang'd the Amarr, That their designment halts (get r3kt)
StarVenger Horizons' Edge The-Office 347	Posted - 2016.05.29 15:04:00 - [7] - Quote tldr AKA Meisterjager Jagermeister L1 FW GallAss to the CORE---Founder of Serpentis UNION of the SNAKE Horizons' Edge FTW
Dreis ShadowWeaver RIP DUST 514 9251	Posted - 2016.05.30 14:04:00 - [8] - Quote With a final wheeze and cough, the dank tomb Shut, and every thought in my mind darkness, Would mercilessly and quickly consume. For me, there would be no sweet katharsis, and void of all else, came rushing in seawater, thudding against my ears like my own heart pounded away in my chest, a slaughter of my sense of self, tearing me apart. Tell me, what number of tissues ply four Will dry up such a torrential downpour? This time, the tears were pure; they weren't salty but they flowed freely, as I was taunted: 'The servers will be up again shortly.' My once-proud Merc Quarters are now haunted, And I imagine on Heimatar V, The confused spirit of Dreis there resides Cutting the mercless, dusty air with knives; He would find naught on Manus Peak's hillsides. There were none to hear his agonised cries When he learnt the sun would no longer rise. Linky News, lads! our wars are done. The desperate tempest hath so bang'd the Amarr, That their designment halts (get r3kt)
The Noob Destroyer Pradox One Proficiency V. 1471	Posted - 2016.06.09 01:46:00 - [9] - Quote Dreis ShadowWeaver wrote: General John Ripper Didn't do up his zipper. It caused much a farce When he whipped out his Vahzz. This was quite erotic. The Original Professor Pop and Lock.
Lex DOCIEL Mikramurka Shock Troop Minmatar Republic 279	Posted - 2016.06.09 06:19:00 - [10] - Quote That is official, Dust has become our inaccessible btch, to whom we write poetry in order to evacuate the frustration for not being able to land our dirty hands on her. haha x) PS: good poem thou Proud player of the most strategic and addictive massively-multiplayer FPS in the world.*

Dreis ShadowWeaver RIP DUST 514 9369	Posted - 2016.07.16 21:14:00 - [11] - Quote Deathly Assassin None would surpass 'im In him there is no malice Because really 'It was Alice!' We did it for Nigel ( ; ~;)7
Breakin Stuff Goonfeet Special Planetary Emergency Response Group 13095	Posted - 2016.07.16 21:18:00 - [12] - Quote I approve of this message and/or service Yes, I am a Goon. No, I don't care about your spacepolitik.
Heracles Porsche Eternal Beings SpaceMonkey's Alliance 708	Posted - 2016.07.18 04:49:00 - [13] - Quote Dreis Imma read these on my youtube #desperateforcontent. Videos Erry Day https://www.youtube.com/c/HeraclesPorsche
Bremen van Equis Incorruptibles 1221	Posted - 2016.07.18 15:00:00 - [14] - Quote Dust is over now. ...but not so on the forums... We all lurk down here. We all lurk down here...
DAAAA BEAST Corrosive Synergy 4337	Posted - 2016.07.18 15:05:00 - [15] - Quote This gave me a pHD in the English Language. Being Romanian is a state of mind.
DeadlyAztec11 9566	Posted - 2016.07.22 09:10:00 - [16] - Quote Breakin Stuff wrote: I approve of this message and/or service I still think you made the best Dust poem. Put your flags up in the sky. And wave them side to side. Show the world where you're from. Show the world we are one.
Breakin Stuff Goonfeet Special Planetary Emergency Response Group 13104	Posted - 2016.07.22 17:07:00 - [17] - Quote DeadlyAztec11 wrote: Breakin Stuff wrote: I approve of this message and/or service I still think you made the best Dust poem. I will attempt to compose a proper theme song for this dead game. One that encompasses all of the glorious things we love to do (sperging). Yes, I am a Goon. No, I don't care about your spacepolitik.
Heracles Porsche Eternal Beings SpaceMonkey's Alliance 710	Posted - 2016.07.24 08:41:00 - [18] - Quote Youtube video, Red Nova Knife Game, and the Poetry of Dreis Shadoweaver https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=YHwJb5QyWxA Videos Erry Day https://www.youtube.com/c/HeraclesPorsche
Dreis ShadowWeaver RIP DUST 514 9374	Posted - 2016.07.24 21:42:00 - [19] - Quote Heracles Porsche wrote: Youtube video, Red Nova Knife Game, and the Poetry of Dreis Shadoweaver https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=YHwJb5QyWxA Thank you very much for publicising my work I liked your dramatic reading I am sorry to tell you though that my name is pronounced 'Drays'. It's a very common mistake to make though. I really like the spelling of my name now, but I might have to change it in Nova... Maybe it's actually my spelling that's dodgy after all! I now worry that some of the more subtler meanings of the poems might have gone over some people's heads, so if there is demand (to convince me that the forums aren't yet dead) I will post annotations. We did it for Nigel ( ; ~;)7
Joel II X Bacon with a bottle of Quafe 10402	Posted - 2016.07.25 04:34:00 - [20] - Quote Dust now is shut down. Never again to shoot yes. Nova's not coming. *Scouts United* Gk.0s & Quafes all day.

Heracles Porsche Eternal Beings SpaceMonkey's Alliance 714	Posted - 2016.07.27 15:11:00 - [21] - Quote Dreis ShadowWeaver wrote: Heracles Porsche wrote: Youtube video, Red Nova Knife Game, and the Poetry of Dreis Shadoweaver https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=YHwJb5QyWxA Thank you very much for publicising my work I liked your dramatic reading I am sorry to tell you though that my name is pronounced 'Drays'. It's a very common mistake to make though. I really like the spelling of my name now, but I might have to change it in Nova... Maybe it's actually my spelling that's dodgy after all! I now worry that some of the more subtler meanings of the poems might have gone over some people's heads, so if there is demand (to convince me that the forums aren't yet dead) I will post annotations. It was my pleasure, Thankyou for the poetry, it got a really good reception on the channel. Videos Erry Day https://www.youtube.com/c/HeraclesPorsche
Cloak Dog Horizons' Edge 1237	Posted - 2016.08.05 22:33:00 - [22] - Quote Joel II X wrote: Dust now is shut down. Never again to shoot yes. Nova's not coming. Goddamn them bunnies f*ing hacking noobs jesus its snowing on mt. fuji Knife is love. Knife is life.**
Dreis ShadowWeaver RIP DUST 514 9395	Posted - 2016.08.06 02:56:00 - [23] - Quote Cloak Dog wrote: Joel II X wrote: Dust now is shut down. Never again to shoot yes. Nova's not coming. Goddamn them bunnies f***ing hacking noobs jesus its snowing on mt. fuji do u evn haiku m9 We did it for Nigel ( ; ~;)7 Come play BF4 with me on PS3! PSN: AnimeLover456 Tomoko is mai waifu
Cloak Dog Horizons' Edge 1238	Posted - 2016.08.06 03:40:00 - [24] - Quote Dreis ShadowWeaver wrote: Cloak Dog wrote: Joel II X wrote: Dust now is shut down. Never again to shoot yes. Nova's not coming. Goddamn them bunnies f*ing hacking noobs jesus its snowing on mt. fuji do u evn haiku m9 First and last haiku ever m10 Knife is love. Knife is life.**
Dreis ShadowWeaver RIP DUST 514 9449	Posted - 2016.08.23 12:32:00 - [25] - Quote Bumpity We did it for Nigel ( ; ~;)7 Come play BF4 with me on PS3! PSN: AnimeLover456 Tomoko is mai waifu
Dreis ShadowWeaver RIP DUST 514 9596	Posted - 2016.11.12 23:14:00 - [26] - Quote Forgot all about this poem, would be a shame for it to get exiled into the murky depths of the forums. It's already too late for my other one. Trump x Farage <3 Retired from gaming Tomoko is mai waifu
LOL KILLZ LulKlz 1277	Posted - 2017.02.05 16:41:00 - [27] - Quote Bump Dustkillz and chill
General Vahzz Phydra 1160	Posted - 2017.02.05 21:53:00 - [28] - Quote The Noob Destroyer wrote: Dreis ShadowWeaver wrote: General John Ripper Didn't do up his zipper. It caused much a farce When he whipped out his Vahzz. This was quite erotic. rubs my chest Sanity is a myth
Lady Hellfirer EVE'S Best 44	Posted - 2017.02.07 01:09:00 - [29] - Quote General Vahzz wrote: The Noob Destroyer wrote: Dreis ShadowWeaver wrote: General John Ripper Didn't do up his zipper. It caused much a farce When he whipped out his Vahzz. This was quite erotic. rubs my chest Loser I remember you! You was laying at me feet with your color slowly fading.
General Vahzz Phydra 1204	Posted - 2017.02.08 01:01:00 - [30] - Quote Lady Hellfirer wrote: General Vahzz wrote: The Noob Destroyer wrote: Dreis ShadowWeaver wrote: General John Ripper Didn't do up his zipper. It caused much a farce When he whipped out his Vahzz. This was quite erotic. rubs my chest Loser Misogynistic cappuccino machine Sanity is a myth



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