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Dreis ShadowWeaver
0uter.Heaven Back and Forth
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Posted - 2015.04.19 19:21:00 -
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I know that most of you guys don't visit the Intergalactic Summit, so I thought I'd just put the link here.
This is the pilot chapter for some Dust 514 fanfiction I've been working on. Please leave comments, thoughts, and if you'd like me to write more!
https://forums.dust514.com/default.aspx?g=posts&m=2732019#post2732019
Creator of the 'Nova Knifers United' channel
Caldari blood, Minmatar heart <3
Day 3/30 exclusively Minja
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Golden Day
Corrosive Synergy Rise Of Legion.
1368
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Posted - 2015.04.19 19:23:00 -
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Dreis ShadowWeaver wrote: Whats the point of role playing??
It isnt as important as EVE players role playing
I once headshot sgit kirk with a sniper rifle once you know
If you ask him he would say im a true Caldari ( -á° -ƒ+ä-£ -í°)
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Dreis ShadowWeaver
0uter.Heaven Back and Forth
2856
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Posted - 2015.04.19 19:25:00 -
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Golden Day wrote:Dreis ShadowWeaver wrote: Whats the point of role playing?? It isnt as important as EVE players role playing For fun???
Do you know what fun is???
Creator of the 'Nova Knifers United' channel
Caldari blood, Minmatar heart <3
Day 3/30 exclusively Minja
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Ahkhomi Cypher
Opus Arcana
804
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Posted - 2015.04.19 19:30:00 -
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Sometimes roleplaying can add a new a refreshing twist to something you already like to do.
No Skill Required
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Isa Lucifer
Praetoriani Classiarii Templares Praetoria Imperialis Excubitoris
196
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Posted - 2015.04.19 19:33:00 -
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Don't listen to him. We at PIE enjoy RP. Thank you for posting the link. I am at work, will let you know in around 8 hours
Amarr Victor
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Dreis ShadowWeaver
0uter.Heaven Back and Forth
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Posted - 2015.04.19 22:26:00 -
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This needs some more feedback lol.
Do you want me to continue? Do you have any ideas?
#stealthbump
Creator of the 'Nova Knifers United' channel
Caldari blood, Minmatar heart <3
Day 3/30 exclusively Minja
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Golden Day
Corrosive Synergy Rise Of Legion.
1374
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Posted - 2015.04.19 22:38:00 -
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I just don't see the point of Role playing besides fun...
I once headshot sgit kirk with a sniper rifle once you know
If you ask him he would say im a true Caldari ( -á° -ƒ+ä-£ -í°)
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Dreis ShadowWeaver
0uter.Heaven Back and Forth
2887
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Posted - 2015.04.19 22:39:00 -
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Golden Day wrote:I just don't see the point of Role playing besides fun...
I don't see the point of playing this game besides fun.
Your move.
Creator of the 'Nova Knifers United' channel
Caldari blood, Minmatar heart <3
Day 3/30 exclusively Minja
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True Adamance
Praetoriani Classiarii Templares Praetoria Imperialis Excubitoris
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Posted - 2015.04.19 22:41:00 -
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Dreis ShadowWeaver wrote:Golden Day wrote:I just don't see the point of Role playing besides fun...
I don't see the point of playing this game besides fun. Your move.
Pretty much. Half the reason I like this game is because of the RP work I've done to create my character, etc.
GÇ£That is not dead which can eternal lie,
And with strange aeons even death may die.GÇ¥
-The Nameless City
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True Adamance
Praetoriani Classiarii Templares Praetoria Imperialis Excubitoris
18353
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Posted - 2015.04.19 22:47:00 -
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If I had to provide feed back, and I don't mean this as anything other than an objective critique, I don't feel like there is any story here besides the loud and clear statement of "I am a veteran. Do what I tell you. I have a higher Win/Loss than you."
Perhaps in edits or follow up chapters you could go into what Kor Azor wants done, why they need logistical support, who is attacking their assets, why, what is the state of the district, who lives there, is it all as simple as you think it is, who are you with, etc.
Plus you never really developed who Dries is. As a reader I want to know who the main character is.
GÇ£That is not dead which can eternal lie,
And with strange aeons even death may die.GÇ¥
-The Nameless City
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Dreis ShadowWeaver
0uter.Heaven Back and Forth
2887
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Posted - 2015.04.19 22:51:00 -
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True Adamance wrote:If I had to provide feed back, and I don't mean this as anything other than an objective critique, I don't feel like there is any story here besides the loud and clear statement of "I am a veteran. Do what I tell you. I have a higher Win/Loss than you."
Perhaps in edits or follow up chapters you could go into what Kor Azor wants done, why they need logistical support, who is attacking their assets, why, what is the state of the district, who lives there, is it all as simple as you think it is, who are you with, etc.
Plus you never really developed who Dries is. As a reader I want to know who the main character is. Thanks for the feedback!
Since this is my first fanfic, I'm just going to keep it simple. If I'm requested to write more chapters, it will go into how the match plays out, with some cool action scenes and what-not
But I like your idea! If people enjoy my writing, I'd love to go into some RP about my character's background
O7
Edit: AND IT'S DREIS!!!
Do you have any feedback on the writing quality and style?
Creator of the 'Nova Knifers United' channel
Caldari blood, Minmatar heart <3
Day 3/30 exclusively Minja
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Golden Day
Corrosive Synergy Rise Of Legion.
1374
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Posted - 2015.04.19 22:52:00 -
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True Adamance wrote:Dreis ShadowWeaver wrote:Golden Day wrote:I just don't see the point of Role playing besides fun...
I don't see the point of playing this game besides fun. Your move. Pretty much. Half the reason I like this game is because of the RP work I've done to create my character, etc. What exactly does RP do??
I could rp but I suck at it
And I think my name is apporiate for role playing
I once headshot sgit kirk with a sniper rifle once you know
If you ask him he would say im a true Caldari ( -á° -ƒ+ä-£ -í°)
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True Adamance
Praetoriani Classiarii Templares Praetoria Imperialis Excubitoris
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Posted - 2015.04.19 23:14:00 -
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Golden Day wrote:True Adamance wrote:Dreis ShadowWeaver wrote:Golden Day wrote:I just don't see the point of Role playing besides fun...
I don't see the point of playing this game besides fun. Your move. Pretty much. Half the reason I like this game is because of the RP work I've done to create my character, etc. What exactly does RP do?? I could rp but I suck at it And I think my name is apporiate for role playing
Nothing but give you context and a purpose within New Eden. All of my favourite games are story driven RPG's each one gives a great plot but also a sense of purpose and sometimes the freedom to pursue goals how I want to, in Dust this is very much the same.
E.g- You sign up and are a player.
I signed up and joined PIE Inc. PIE Inc is a decade old EVE alliance founded on RP for the Amarr Empire. In terms of lore we're a paramilitary organisation that serves the Empire in a variety of ways, was involved in the establishment of CVA in Providence, and now represents the 24th Crusade in FW.
Beyond that were pretty much a close group of pilots and Dusters who spends their time fighting for the Amarr and uses RP to justify that as opposed to being Pirates or invested in Null Sec/Incursions/Industry/etc.
GÇ£That is not dead which can eternal lie,
And with strange aeons even death may die.GÇ¥
-The Nameless City
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Golden Day
Corrosive Synergy Rise Of Legion.
1376
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Posted - 2015.04.19 23:58:00 -
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True Adamance wrote:Golden Day wrote:True Adamance wrote:Dreis ShadowWeaver wrote:Golden Day wrote:I just don't see the point of Role playing besides fun...
I don't see the point of playing this game besides fun. Your move. Pretty much. Half the reason I like this game is because of the RP work I've done to create my character, etc. What exactly does RP do?? I could rp but I suck at it And I think my name is apporiate for role playing Nothing but give you context and a purpose within New Eden. All of my favourite games are story driven RPG's each one gives a great plot but also a sense of purpose and sometimes the freedom to pursue goals how I want to, in Dust this is very much the same. E.g- You sign up and are a player. I signed up and joined PIE Inc. PIE Inc is a decade old EVE alliance founded on RP for the Amarr Empire. In terms of lore we're a paramilitary organisation that serves the Empire in a variety of ways, was involved in the establishment of CVA in Providence, and now represents the 24th Crusade in FW. Beyond that were pretty much a close group of pilots and Dusters who spends their time fighting for the Amarr and uses RP to justify that as opposed to being Pirates or invested in Null Sec/Incursions/Industry/etc. I would like to join PIE
But im waitting till Dust FW is taken seriously.
I once headshot sgit kirk with a sniper rifle once you know
If you ask him he would say im a true Caldari ( -á° -ƒ+ä-£ -í°)
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Dreis ShadowWeaver
0uter.Heaven Back and Forth
3007
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Posted - 2015.04.23 16:55:00 -
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The second chapter has been completed and is now publicly available!
https://forums.dust514.com/default.aspx?g=posts&m=2738332#post2738332
Creator of the 'Nova Knifers United' channel
Caldari blood, Minmatar heart <3
Day 6/30 exclusively Minja
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DUST Fiend
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Posted - 2015.04.23 17:44:00 -
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I cant read it right now, ill try to check it out later though. I have some of my own fan fiction in my sig if youre bored though
"My bitter is showing. I must retreat to the berry patch."
STUFF
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Immortal John Ripper
27551
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Posted - 2015.05.13 14:58:00 -
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Dreis ShadowWeaver wrote: loaded this up onto my tablet and heading to the bathroom. You got my full undivided attention for the next few minutes.
EPIC SAXonmish for CPM.
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Regnier Feros
Pielords
367
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Posted - 2015.05.13 15:29:00 -
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Dreis ShadowWeaver wrote:Golden Day wrote:Dreis ShadowWeaver wrote: Whats the point of role playing?? It isnt as important as EVE players role playing For fun??? Do you know what fun is??? I wanna know what fun issssssssssssssss XD
"You're like a she-male.. hates gym, doesn't know how to be alpha.. you'll stay in the friendzone for life" -Senpai
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SLENDER M4N
Murphys-Law General Tso's Alliance
427
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Posted - 2015.05.13 15:54:00 -
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Regnier Feros wrote:Dreis ShadowWeaver wrote:Golden Day wrote:Dreis ShadowWeaver wrote: Whats the point of role playing?? It isnt as important as EVE players role playing For fun??? Do you know what fun is??? I wanna know what fun issssssssssssssss XD Ummm reggie get your hands outta mah pantaloons
Roman said he would give me candy, I recieved a rainbow trout from his fishing trips instead. Am disappoint
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LUGMOS
Corrosive Synergy Rise Of Legion.
3951
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Posted - 2015.05.13 15:55:00 -
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*Smacks people with epeen*
Sniper Rifles are for Nitrogenous Dioxide Borons
First to PM me with common name wins
(no Hyansaru, u win too much ;P)
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