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Dreis ShadowWeaver
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Posted - 2015.04.19 19:21:00 -
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I know that most of you guys don't visit the Intergalactic Summit, so I thought I'd just put the link here.
This is the pilot chapter for some Dust 514 fanfiction I've been working on. Please leave comments, thoughts, and if you'd like me to write more! 
https://forums.dust514.com/default.aspx?g=posts&m=2732019#post2732019
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Dreis ShadowWeaver
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Posted - 2015.04.19 19:25:00 -
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Golden Day wrote:Dreis ShadowWeaver wrote: Whats the point of role playing?? It isnt as important as EVE players role playing 
For fun???
Do you know what fun is??? 
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Dreis ShadowWeaver
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Posted - 2015.04.19 22:26:00 -
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This needs some more feedback lol.
Do you want me to continue? Do you have any ideas?
#stealthbump
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Dreis ShadowWeaver
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Posted - 2015.04.19 22:39:00 -
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Golden Day wrote:I just don't see the point of Role playing besides fun...
I don't see the point of playing this game besides fun.
Your move.
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Dreis ShadowWeaver
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Posted - 2015.04.19 22:51:00 -
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True Adamance wrote:If I had to provide feed back, and I don't mean this as anything other than an objective critique, I don't feel like there is any story here besides the loud and clear statement of "I am a veteran. Do what I tell you. I have a higher Win/Loss than you."
Perhaps in edits or follow up chapters you could go into what Kor Azor wants done, why they need logistical support, who is attacking their assets, why, what is the state of the district, who lives there, is it all as simple as you think it is, who are you with, etc.
Plus you never really developed who Dries is. As a reader I want to know who the main character is.
Thanks for the feedback!
Since this is my first fanfic, I'm just going to keep it simple. If I'm requested to write more chapters, it will go into how the match plays out, with some cool action scenes and what-not 
But I like your idea! If people enjoy my writing, I'd love to go into some RP about my character's background 
O7
Edit: AND IT'S DREIS!!!
Do you have any feedback on the writing quality and style?
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Dreis ShadowWeaver
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Posted - 2015.04.23 16:55:00 -
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The second chapter has been completed and is now publicly available!
https://forums.dust514.com/default.aspx?g=posts&m=2738332#post2738332
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