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sammus420
Goonfeet Special Planetary Emergency Response Group
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Posted - 2014.11.09 05:16:00 -
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Alright, so I've got s bunch of isk and no real use for it, so I'm going to give 100 million isk to whoever writes the best story meeting the following requirements:
I want an action packed story of brothership in battle with homoerotic undertones staring Dexter Peabody and Moronic Farce of Goonfeet, set on Manus Peak.
Also if I get a lot of entries and some of them are particularly good, 50 million to second place and 25 to third. I'll even accept multiple entries for multiple prizes. |
Jacques Cayton II
Fatal Absolution General Tso's Alliance
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Posted - 2014.11.09 05:39:00 -
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Dexture peabody shows up at manus peak. He sees hot guy dancing with a unicorn. Kills both with mass driver parts go everywhere. Saves new eden becomes hero. Then rides a titan into a blavk hole never to be seen again.
We fight for the future of the State not our
personal goals
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sammus420
Goonfeet Special Planetary Emergency Response Group
427
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Posted - 2014.11.09 06:05:00 -
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Nice, but that's not really much of a story. Humorous though. |
True Adamance
Praetoriani Classiarii Templares Praetoria Imperialis Excubitoris
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Posted - 2014.11.09 10:17:00 -
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sammus420 wrote:Alright, so I've got s bunch of isk and no real use for it, so I'm going to give 100 million isk to whoever writes the best story meeting the following requirements:
I want an action packed story of brothership in battle with homoerotic undertones staring Lionshead Nebula and Moronic Farce of Goonfeet, set on Manus Peak.
Also if I get a lot of entries and some of them are particularly good, 50 million to second place and 25 to third. I'll even accept multiple entries for multiple prizes.
edit: I just had to change one of the names since Dex says he never wants to be associated with me again.
How long does it have to be?
And what are their accents like? From there I can decide who is pitcher and who is catcher.....
"HeGÇÖs sorry. ThatGÇÖs his sorry faceGǪ. Just keep quiet for now and maybe you'll get through this."
-Kador Ouryon
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sammus420
Goonfeet Special Planetary Emergency Response Group
427
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Posted - 2014.11.09 23:10:00 -
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I don't want to put a maximum length on anyone's story, because there is no limit to art. How about 750 word minimum?
Also, no more details about the characters, except Farce often plays a heavy. |
Galm Fae
Eskola Ergonomics
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Posted - 2014.11.09 23:35:00 -
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I'll... See what I can do....
Would it be... Odd if I said this isn't that far out my specialty?
Kirjuun! Uakan!
Teknikiara!
Kanpai kameitsamuu!
Ra ra ra!
> --Confirmed Badguy Cera YC116--
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Galm Fae
Eskola Ergonomics
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Posted - 2014.11.09 23:37:00 -
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HOW homoerotic do you want it? I can go full on smut, talking dirty, mild awkward tension, sever awkward tension, blatant innuendos, oblivious innuendos...
I can do all of these.
Kirjuun! Uakan!
Teknikiara!
Kanpai kameitsamuu!
Ra ra ra!
> --Confirmed Badguy Cera YC116--
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True Adamance
Praetoriani Classiarii Templares Praetoria Imperialis Excubitoris
14339
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Posted - 2014.11.09 23:43:00 -
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Galm Fae wrote:HOW homoerotic do you want it? I can go full on smut, talking dirty, mild awkward tension, sever awkward tension, blatant innuendos, oblivious innuendos...
I can do all of these.
If it doesn't make you cringe with every letter you type you aren't doing it right.
"HeGÇÖs sorry. ThatGÇÖs his sorry faceGǪ. Just keep quiet for now and maybe you'll get through this."
-Kador Ouryon
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sammus420
Goonfeet Special Planetary Emergency Response Group
427
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Posted - 2014.11.09 23:45:00 -
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True Adamance wrote:Galm Fae wrote:HOW homoerotic do you want it? I can go full on smut, talking dirty, mild awkward tension, sever awkward tension, blatant innuendos, oblivious innuendos...
I can do all of these. If it doesn't make you cringe with every letter you type you aren't doing it right.
True Adamance gets it. |
Galm Fae
Eskola Ergonomics
345
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Posted - 2014.11.09 23:49:00 -
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This is going to be interesting... But by the Allfather, I'll give it my best shot.
Kirjuun! Uakan!
Teknikiara!
Kanpai kameitsamuu!
Ra ra ra!
> --Confirmed Badguy Cera YC116--
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True Adamance
Praetoriani Classiarii Templares Praetoria Imperialis Excubitoris
14339
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Posted - 2014.11.09 23:51:00 -
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Galm Fae wrote:This is going to be interesting... But by the Allfather, I'll give it my best shot.
Actually scrapped my first variation of this story....... even I felt it was extreme...... it also seriously lacking in the brotherhood factor.
"HeGÇÖs sorry. ThatGÇÖs his sorry faceGǪ. Just keep quiet for now and maybe you'll get through this."
-Kador Ouryon
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Eltra Ardell
Goonfeet Special Planetary Emergency Response Group
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Posted - 2014.11.10 04:51:00 -
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There it was. Shrouded in shadows, swirling dust obscuring the view. He knew what he would find here. It was always here that those types would come. Perhaps it was the legends surrounding it that appealed to those that would usher in the apocalypse. Perhaps it was the grand view from which to witness the end. Or perhaps, it was because they wanted a challenge before the end. After all, what purpose is there in bringing the universe to an end if no one knew you were responsible? And here, where it always happened, someone would be sure to oppose them.
And tonight, that someone was Lionshead Nebula.
He landed atop the peak overlooking Manus with a thud of power, kicking up dust and dirt as he did. As the cloud settled, a voice spoke through the shadows.
"Just one? My, I feel insulted."
Lion smirked, chuckling. "Just one is all we need."
The voice soon gained shape as the air cleared. A handsome man, with a cocksure air about him. No doubt he had stolen a thousand hearts before this moment. But now Lion would "steal" his.
"I wouldn't be so sure of that," said the doomsayer, stepping aside. Beside him, a miracle appeared. The Unicorn, beast of the apocalypse, was at the man's side.
Lion blinked. "Now there's something new."
"Hah. Indeed. Now I do believe I have the upper hand."
"Don't be so sure of that," Lion said, shouldering his Mass Driver.
"What!?" Pure terror claimed the man's features, eyes wide with fear. A Mass Driver? From what pit of hell did Lion procure the weapon? The one thing that could kill a Unicorn...
"Let's dance," laughed Lion, and he began the fight that would save the world.
Explosions rocked the legendary peak, knocking tons and tons of sheer cliff tumbling down below. The two prophets of the end dodged and weaved, attempting to strike through an opening, but Lion would not relent. The Mass Driver finally struck true, purging the world of the apocalyptic beast and leaving the doomsayer mortally wounded.
"Lion," the man managed with his final breaths. "How...?"
"You fools always come here. But now no longer. The peak is gone."
The man chuckled. "Please...call me...Farce..."
"Very well Farce. Your scheme has failed. Your beast killed. What is there left for you?"
"A simple...request..." Farce gestured for Lions to approach. A good sport, the guardian of the galaxy stepped forward and knelt. "Remember...me..."
Lions nodded. "Very well." He stood his ground as the man's lips brushed his own and let out the final breath, his very soul. Lions stood, gazing the wreckage of their battle. No, he would not soon forget. He would never be able to. Here, on this damaged peak, a man attempted to topple the universe. And another stopped him. How tragic, Lions thought, that I had to kill him. In another life, I might have called him friend... |
Vash Warren
Tankers United Covert Intervention
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Posted - 2014.11.13 03:00:00 -
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Is it a requirement for the homoerotic undertones. I have a great idea for a battle (and I have nothing personal against gays) But I just have no idea how to write a good love scene. They kissed. The end of the love scene back to battle. Or mabye if I could partner up with some one else to write the other part.
Heavy's are the the moving walls of infantry that force everything else into retreat.
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sammus420
Goonfeet Special Planetary Emergency Response Group
428
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Posted - 2014.11.13 03:13:00 -
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Vash Warren wrote:Is it a requirement for the homoerotic undertones. I have a great idea for a battle (and I have nothing personal against gays) But I just have no idea how to write a good love scene. They kissed. The end of the love scene back to battle. Or mabye if I could partner up with some one else to write the other part.
I said "homo-erotic undertones." That doesn't necessarily mean gay sex turned up to the max. Do what you think is best. |
True Adamance
Praetoriani Classiarii Templares Praetoria Imperialis Excubitoris
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Posted - 2014.11.13 03:34:00 -
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sammus420 wrote:Vash Warren wrote:Is it a requirement for the homoerotic undertones. I have a great idea for a battle (and I have nothing personal against gays) But I just have no idea how to write a good love scene. They kissed. The end of the love scene back to battle. Or mabye if I could partner up with some one else to write the other part. I said "homo-erotic undertones." That doesn't necessarily mean gay sex turned up to the max. Do what you think is best.
Stuff like staring at his rippling back muscles laden this a thin sheen of perspiration that gave the man the physique of a god... something about the scent of which evoked a reaction in Farce...... etc, etc, etc much guy lovin'
"HeGÇÖs sorry. ThatGÇÖs his sorry faceGǪ. Just keep quiet for now and maybe you'll get through this."
-Kador Ouryon
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sammus420
Goonfeet Special Planetary Emergency Response Group
428
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Posted - 2014.11.16 15:57:00 -
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One week in, and only Eltra's entry? I do hope yal are working on glorious epics.
Also, Farce informed me he was upset I forgot to mention he also often plays a logi. Not my fault, how am I supposed to remember when he's only talks about them to say how terrible they are. |
Chime Jigme
Sinq Laison Gendarmes Gallente Federation
8
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Posted - 2014.11.25 01:54:00 -
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Is this still going on? What's the deadline? Also, where am I supposed to be now? |
sammus420
Goonfeet Special Planetary Emergency Response Group
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Posted - 2014.11.27 13:41:00 -
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Its totally still going on. There isn't really a deadline, I was hoping to get 4 or 5 stories and then pick my favorites, but so far no one's even entered besides eltra :( |
Vash Warren
Tankers United Covert Intervention
5
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Posted - 2014.11.28 00:13:00 -
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Again no idea on the tones but battle scenes I can do. Will finish mine second week of December I hope.
Heavy's are the the moving walls of one man that force everything else into retreat. Show some love for Logi Bros.
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sammus420
Goonfeet Special Planetary Emergency Response Group
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Posted - 2014.12.14 16:56:00 -
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Vash Warren wrote:where should we post something on our works?
Right here, for the good of all mankind. |
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Vash Warren
Tankers United Covert Intervention
63
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Posted - 2014.12.17 02:48:00 -
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sammus420 wrote:Vash Warren wrote:where should we post something on our works? Right here, for the good of all mankind.
Do you want it in breaks or just all in one I got a chapter or so done now.
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sammus420
Goonfeet Special Planetary Emergency Response Group
429
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Posted - 2014.12.19 02:48:00 -
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How many chapters are you trying to write? |
sammus420
Goonfeet Special Planetary Emergency Response Group
429
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Posted - 2014.12.20 08:40:00 -
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In case people are confused, I am still 100% serious about this competition, and I would love it if we could start seeing some results. I know a few of you expressed interest early on. Well pick up that pen and try to get space rich! Hell if you want I can even set it up with someone to turn it into EVE isk free of charge, if you're into that kinda thing. |
Vash Warren
Tankers United Covert Intervention
63
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Posted - 2014.12.21 19:49:00 -
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FINISHED! My master work is completed. Not he greatest so a few quick changes to grammar and such and I will post it. Also is in Little more than 2600 word count. Over six pages, very light on the undertones until end. Hope you will enjoy.
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sammus420
Goonfeet Special Planetary Emergency Response Group
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Posted - 2014.12.22 03:54:00 -
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I look forward to every word! Maybe this will inspire other artists to step forward. |
Vash Warren
Tankers United Covert Intervention
78
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Posted - 2015.01.04 15:52:00 -
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(It will help if you have a map of the game on ambush as this will be a total map battle. Areas will be given on where they are)
Farced looked out the window of the drop-ship to see the quickly passing by landscape. He reviewed the details of the mission; he had picked this contract a few days ago to help in the major push for Caldari in their fight against the Gallente, not that he really cared who one, as long as he was getting paid he was happy. He keep reading as groups of Caldari mercs were going to to be inserted throughout the boarder territories between Caldari and Gallente, but his group would be getting the fun job, they will be dropped behind the lines about 20 clicks inside enemy lines. The objective was to take a forward command post in hopes to disrupt the battle lines and allow for some quick and easy gains. But an experimental anti wormhole field would be up in the area, so no Drop up-link support. At this time in space the fleets would again clash above them in a beautiful display, it always reminded him of fire works as he watched the ships be destroyed. All the equipment over the squadron of drop -ships shut of as the key to the mission was surprise. Farced then looked past the now resting gunner to his logistic, Lionshead, he stirred intently admiring the man who always had his back, always would have his back, he made a mental note that he would have something to that Lionshead after this. The snapped back from his thoughts he realized that Lion was starring back at him, Farce flipped back to looking at the flying by scenery.
GÇ£Eta to LZ is 5 minutes.GÇ¥(B, 4+5) Came over the headsets from the pilot, Lion checked over his gear one more time before the action started, diagnostic systems, check. nanite injector and hive, check. Remote Explosives, check. The plan had, as far as now, worked in sneaking behind the lines now it was time to make some noise. The battles along the front lines would have started a while ago so most resistance for now should be focused to the front, that's the hope at least. He thought back to when Farced was looking at him, it had made Lion some what ancy for the battle, he sometimes wondered what was going on in that big meat shields head. He tilted his head slightly each way waiting to hear each of the vertebrae in his neck crack one at a time. GÇ£Show time.GÇ¥
As the drop-ships neared the LZ The lights flicked on. GÇ£We have been picked up on, You won't be going in to hot but they know your here so move quickly and take those CRUs.GÇ¥ As soon as he finished an answering of gunfire welcomed them to hell. He looked out the windows as the gunners on the drop-ships opened fire on the defenders. Farced could see the different kinds of weapons firing on the Caldari drop-ships. Blaster turrets... forge guns... swarm launcher... With a sudden explosion that nearly took the shields to zero, the pilot had to jerk the ship out of the way to dodge another shot of the same time. The ship came back to level just in time to see the sister drop-ship fall out of the air. GÇ£Number 3 drop-ship going down everybody bail! No-GÇ¥ As the comm had been destroyed, Farced felt a strange nothingness as the men died on the drop-ship, it felt almost strange that he felt no worry about death, never would know if he would ever get use to it. GÇ£Okay over the LZ! Get out there and earn your ISK!GÇ¥ Farced took one last look at Lion, the doors opened, and then jumped. He always loved the feeling of free falling, he wished he did not even have to activate his dampener but he waited until the last possible second before activating it. Slamming into the ground with a satisfying thud. As he stood up he leveled his HMG and looked to the first objective, and then started sprinting to the point.
Lion followed Farced out of the drop-ship, he watched as his buddy fell as gracefully as a rock to the ground. Farced activated his inertia dampener at the last second, as always, and Lion followed his example. Lion looked back up to the sky, the drop-ship that had been carrying them had already sailed father down into enemy territory and wrecking defensive points and dropping troops further in enemy territory on the enemy, hoping to buy time for the first objective to be captured.(C8) He then looked after his buddy Farced and started running after him, could not let Farced get himself killed so early in the battle, that would not be any fun. As the group approached the main buildings of the first complex they would take both at the same time. :GÇ¥Okay split 20 20 with active scanners going first you know how to split up.GÇ¥ Lion followed Farced as the lined up against the wall of the door, The explosives expert ran up to the door and set 2 REs on the door and took several steps back. Click, Boom. An answering of gunfire flew out of the freshly fried door as he threw another RE in and blew it almost instantly. The gun fire stopped, now it was Farced turn, spinning into the door way Farced let his Boundless HMG tear apart the room. A flux grenade was thrown over his shoulder into the room. Taking two steps back a pair of small scouts activated their cloaks and ran in as Farced spun out of their way. After a few moments the panicked shouts, loud enough to be heard by all, as the scouts picked their way through with shotguns and nova knives. Farced then proceed to walk through hole, followed by several assault suits. They made quick work of the few who had not been killed by the scouts, this was good, hopefully the other group had secured the other building and the first objective would be complete.
Then without a warning a loud echo crossed over the valley followed by a series of thumps pounding into the ground and buildings of the nearby area. A titanic sized crashing sound shook the building followed the bombardment. GÇ£What in the verse was THAT!GÇ¥ Lionshead exclaimed after the shaking had stopped, GÇ£I believe that was a situation being solved by air support.GÇ¥
Heavy's are the the moving walls of one man that force everything else into retreat. Show some love for Logi Bros.
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Vash Warren
Tankers United Covert Intervention
78
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Posted - 2015.01.04 15:53:00 -
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Farced quietly said as he started to walk out the building. Everyone of the squad members where a bit shocked at the destruction they saw. The table-top had been destroyed, some massive amount of fire power must have been dropped on that Lionshead thought as he walked pass the toppled structure, crushed supply boxes, and crushed drop-suits, a slight pool of blood had formed around the body of the fallen clone. GÇ£Well it looks like our job just became a little bit harder for us , that was a good chunk of our reinforcements gone. Now we must push on to the next objective, everyone pull up your maps.GÇ¥ Everyone raised their left arms to look over the map overhead view. GÇ£Now here we are at C8, we will be moving up now to E7-9 to hit the big complexes, if we are able to capture the CRUs outside of the complexes we can get our reinforcements to move in on the last objective. Everyone rep up and resupply ammo then move out and get paidGÇ¥
Farced started to sprint up the hill, a single man they stumbled across met his ends at a nova knife. Approaching D9 the groups once again got ready to separate. GÇ£Right now 4 drop-ships are moving in over H/I 6 and will be dropping in to distract the force, after they give the signal for most to the enemy force to be distracted then we go in.GÇ¥ Farced and Lion got ready to make the push on the E7, Farced quietly sat on the sloping hill watching Lion keep guard of the group. Few minutes now and they would be again in battle and only him-self to protect Lion, he would take every shot to protect Lion. That was his true mission for this battle, to protect Lion
It was time to move again Lion heard the same time as everyone else heard it. GÇ£You are good to go we have a good number over here, make your move quickly we wo-GÇ¥ Cut off by a head shot, but it was time to move. GÇ£Farced,GÇ¥ GÇ£Yes, Lion?GÇ¥ GÇ£Try not to get your self killed this time.GÇ¥ GÇ£Maybe you can keep the Rep tool on me this time.GÇ¥ A slight smirk crossed Lion's face, dear Amarr god I am glad that he could not see my face. GÇ£You got it bud, just no hoping in front of to many guns.GÇ¥ GÇ£Fair enough, lets get to it.GÇ¥
Farced started to sprinted up the hill followed by the rest of the clones moving up the hill. As they reached the summit of the hill they were welcomed by a strange barrage of fire from a variety of weapons. Farced then proceeded to run to the CRU of the base. Slamming in to the wall of the CRU next to Farced, Vash started to hack into the CRU as well, several moments later it was switched to friendly signal. GÇ£Well, lets take this post.GÇ¥ Before Vash spun around the CRU and started to fire on the defenders. A few moments later multiple clones started to rush out of the CRU, the reinforcements had arrived. Then this battle was just about won for sure.
Lions came running up the hill, aimed down the scope of the Combat Rifle, and fired several burst in the direction of the defenders, before running up besides Farced. GÇ£So we ready to take the objective fatty?GÇ¥ Farced said nothing as he spun around on his heels, followed by a swift but painful punch to the face that stunned Lions for a moment. GÇ£I told you that's not what you call us heavies.GÇ¥ Farced said as he stared at Lion as the shields recharged. GÇ£Fair enough,GÇ¥ Lion replied, cracking his neck. I will feel that one in the next life, he thought to himself.
Farced began to turn, checking to see the repair beam hitting him, then started to face the defenders. Unleashing a hail of bullets that got two guys standing out in the open and caught a few before they scrambled into cover. He could see Vash up against the building about 20 m away. GÇ£Reloading!GÇ¥ Farced screamed as he got back behind the wall. GÇ£We are going to push on this next magazine. Get going Lion!GÇ¥ A few seconds later Lion took off to were Vash was standing, then started to heal Vash. GÇ£Lets get this done.GÇ¥ Farced said lowly before sprinting across to the same spot, where Vash and Lion had started to push into the building taking several rifle and laser shots as he crossed. Farced could here the screams of the Gallenta regulars falling at the hands of Vash and Lion, better get in there and help them out .
Lion slowly walked behind Vash and his torrent of bullets mowing down the many suits of the room. GÇ£Grenade out!GÇ¥ Lion yelled as he tossed a flux grenade down the other hall way. A peaceful explosion happened, Vash followed in behind with gun firing, killing another two Vash had almost pasted the stairs to get 1 last guy running out the door, GÇ£Vash! Up the stairs.GÇ¥ Lion yelled to Vash. He came back around and started to fire up the stairs catching another 2 guys. GÇ£Good work, I always love a good logi who can keep me repped. You ever looking for squading, I will join up with you. Here I am going to go mess with the rest of the Gallenta regulars upstairs if you don't mind me.GÇ¥ Vash said as he started to walk up the stairs before several more screams were heard upstairs.
Out of nowhere Lion felt a poke to his back, spinning around, throwing up his CR just to see Farced in his sight. Farced pulled of his helmet and looked directly into Lions eyes, what in the world was he doing, then without warning pulled off Lions helmet and kissed him. Lion was surprised for a second,then returned the favor by slightly pulling the heavy to his level a before grabbing his helmet and walking back out side, slipping his mask back on, I have to stay focused on the mission. Lion walked out into the court yard area, the other building had been cleared as well. Looks like a victory for the Sta-. That's when it hit him from out of no where he felt a shot, sniper , cut clean through his torso and out the other side a second one it hit him on the other side as well, Lion fired randomly into the air as he dropped to the ground.
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Vash Warren
Tankers United Covert Intervention
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Posted - 2015.01.04 15:55:00 -
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Farced flipped out his Bolt Pistol and aimed where the sniper was sitting. Bet he was not expecting to be counter sniped by a Pistol. The bastard deserved it with a quick charged shot and a single head shot he was gone. Crouching down besides Lion. GÇ£They are all out of clones in the CRU so your going to have to take a time out for a bit buddy.GÇ¥ I always knew you could never keep me alive.GÇ¥ his laughing and smile held back by the drop-suit helmet GÇ£I guess I will see in a few minutes then.GÇ¥ Then lightly tapping his forehead to Lions forehead before sliding the Bolt Pistol against his temple and held the trigger.
GÇ£They got a counter attack coming in from the main base we got to hold out or this entire operation will have been a failure.GÇ¥ Setting into defensive positions Vash and Farced stood on opposites sides of the gate, then RE set up in the door ways of the building and then a few more on the roof, a very last stand. They waited for a few minutes before the hum of LAVs could be heard incoming, this was time for the back up forge gunner to show off his worth. 4 LAVs approached the building complex 2 of the vehicles stopped out side the gate the other two came plowing in. one met its end on the forge gunner then the other never stopped and dropped off the men behind the buildings.
The defenders were getting flaked now this was not good they better have some sort of miracle come up to not lose all this progress. Maybe those prayers to that idiot god of those Amarrian idiots would pay off. Several burst ripped though most of the shields of Farced so he fell back into the building. He slowly backed up until he reached the stairs and just keep firing, GÇ£Everyone up the stairs so we can blow the RE.GÇ¥ They moved until just the 2 heavies defended the 2 entrances. GÇ£Blow them!GÇ¥ Several pops went off along with the screams of the people caught in the explosives before the heavies ran up the stairs. Then out of no where a loud crashing noise came for the skies, everyone stopped firing and started to look up. GÇ£Was that what I think it is?GÇ¥ But there was no reply from anyone else as they all looked upwards to see a star ship crashing to the planets surface his knowlegde of ship was limited so he had no idea who side it was on.
Not to far from the complex is where it was crashing, it would almost for sure kill all of them but it would also destroy the enemy Command Center and disrupt all front line battle fields. This would be a day for the State. A day the would always would be remembered. Then dropping his HMG and let the wave of first heat as he say the ship crash, now the explosion. I hot white light covered the valley and raced towards them. First he was blinded, then he was burned. In an instant he was alive again in the Caldari Command Post. And he was being congratulated on a job well done, not 100% complete but he would be paid. Now all he did would be to find Lion. That stupid Logi owed him some time... In private.
I hope you enjoyed and dropped a little fire fly reference in there for who ever else enjoyed the show. This was not the greatest story of love in war ever but the stakes are sort of lowered as you have 3-15 seconds and you are back alive. Still I hope you enjoyed this. Any comments and feed back will be reviewed and my lead to revision. Also the hardest part of this was trying to post more that the 6000 characters on the forums never writing a review on how to play. Enjoy. Vash Signing off.
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sammus420
Goonfeet Special Planetary Emergency Response Group
436
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Posted - 2015.01.05 04:00:00 -
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While we are highly appreciative of you effort, Moronic Farce had this to say:
Quote:would you be offended if I didn't read it?
And another goon:
Quote:I was hoping it would be gayer
and finally:
Quote:this writer is so bad he couldn't even get the names right
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Hynox Xitio
Molon Labe. General Tso's Alliance
1904
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Posted - 2015.01.06 04:54:00 -
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Was this thread an attempt to summon me?
The horror! The horror!
( -íº -£-û -íº)
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