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Void Echo
Blades of Dust
1924
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Posted - 2013.10.24 02:52:00 -
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Please keep in mind that when I have a back story for this character I will post it... but for now im just asking on what it should have. (adamance, im asking for your help here, since your the go to guy for RP) |
Galm Fae
Guardian Solutions DARKSTAR ARMY
120
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Posted - 2013.10.24 03:52:00 -
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Void Echo wrote: (adamance, im asking for your help here, since your the go to guy for RP)
Quote:(adamance, im asking for your help here
Quote:your the go to guy for RP)
Kula, baka kakkushuugista, ta parakan dai.
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Void Echo
Blades of Dust
1924
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Posted - 2013.10.24 03:53:00 -
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Galm Fae wrote:Void Echo wrote: (adamance, im asking for your help here, since your the go to guy for RP) Quote:(adamance, im asking for your help here Quote:your the go to guy for RP) Kula, baka kakkushuugista, ta parakan dai.
he and I may have our quarrels, but nothing ever goes beyond words unless were on the battlefield |
True Adamance
PIE Inc. Praetoria Imperialis Excubitoris
3567
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Posted - 2013.10.24 04:00:00 -
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Galm Fae wrote:Void Echo wrote: (adamance, im asking for your help here, since your the go to guy for RP) Quote:(adamance, im asking for your help here Quote:your the go to guy for RP) Kula, baka kakkushuugista, ta parakan dai.
I am pretty knowledgable yes.
I would tell you to make an ugly brute of a gallentean mob enforcer with no particularly nice qualities except of a mild schitzophrenic personality disorder, the occasional heart of gold, and a patriotic loyalty to his country...except most people would hate that bio.
Tell me the basic concept you want your character to represent, I have done this kind of bio coaching, and creation many times before. |
Void Echo
Blades of Dust
1924
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Posted - 2013.10.24 04:02:00 -
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True Adamance wrote:Galm Fae wrote:Void Echo wrote: (adamance, im asking for your help here, since your the go to guy for RP) Quote:(adamance, im asking for your help here Quote:your the go to guy for RP) Kula, baka kakkushuugista, ta parakan dai.
I am pretty knowledgable yes. I would tell you to make an ugly brute of a gallentean mob enforcer with no particularly nice qualities except of a mild schitzophrenic personality disorder, the occasional heart of gold, and a patriotic loyalty to his country...except most people would hate that bio.
hm, I messaged you in game, I would appreciate if you talked there, not here. |
Galm Fae
Guardian Solutions DARKSTAR ARMY
120
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Posted - 2013.10.24 05:09:00 -
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True Adamance wrote:Galm Fae wrote:Void Echo wrote: (adamance, im asking for your help here, since your the go to guy for RP) Quote:(adamance, im asking for your help here Quote:your the go to guy for RP) Kula, baka kakkushuugista, ta parakan dai.
I am pretty knowledgable yes. I would tell you to make an ugly brute of a gallentean mob enforcer with no particularly nice qualities except of a mild schitzophrenic personality disorder, the occasional heart of gold, and a patriotic loyalty to his country...except most people would hate that bio. As opposed to say... A religious fanatic? |
True Adamance
PIE Inc. Praetoria Imperialis Excubitoris
3568
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Posted - 2013.10.24 05:20:00 -
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Galm Fae wrote:As opposed to say... A religious fanatic? My character isn't a fanatic.
He is a religious reformist who serves the Sarum Family as his father did before him. He believe that non combative methods are the best way to achieve a lasting peace and to achieve the amalgamation the empire desires. |
Void Echo
Blades of Dust
1924
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Posted - 2013.10.24 05:21:00 -
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either ******* way, im trying to make a back story for my character. |
Galm Fae
Guardian Solutions DARKSTAR ARMY
120
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Posted - 2013.10.24 05:22:00 -
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True Adamance wrote:Galm Fae wrote:As opposed to say... A religious fanatic? My character isn't a fanatic. He is a religious reformist who serves the Sarum Family as his father did before him. He believe that non combative methods are the best way to achieve a lasting peace and to achieve the amalgamation the empire desires. And let's not forget his cute little slave with Stockholm syndrome. Such a love story! <3
Just poking fun, sorry. Sometimes a bit too much of Galm seeps out. |
True Adamance
PIE Inc. Praetoria Imperialis Excubitoris
3571
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Posted - 2013.10.24 07:10:00 -
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Galm Fae wrote:True Adamance wrote:Galm Fae wrote:As opposed to say... A religious fanatic? My character isn't a fanatic. He is a religious reformist who serves the Sarum Family as his father did before him. He believe that non combative methods are the best way to achieve a lasting peace and to achieve the amalgamation the empire desires. And let's not forget his cute little slave with Stockholm syndrome. Such a love story! <3 Just poking fun, sorry. Sometimes a bit too much of Galm seeps out.
I wouldn't say that. Though I guess its easy to label it as such. I guess anyone would be greatful if you pulled them out of a burning plane, they were young an impressionable, educated to admire the Amarr, and subject to discrimination by your own people.
Its more of less the perfect cocktail of tragic and coincidental events that make fairytails some how work. Oh and have it got it through in my writing that she is not exactly a beauty, just some typical average person who when in the right light looks pretty, with a faint exotic charm to an otherwise conservative Amarrian. |
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Void Echo
Blades of Dust
1924
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Posted - 2013.10.24 07:13:00 -
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**** it, im free winging this ****.. hope you guys find his life interesting at the least. |
True Adamance
PIE Inc. Praetoria Imperialis Excubitoris
3571
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Posted - 2013.10.24 07:14:00 -
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Void Echo wrote:**** it, im free winging this ****.. hope you guys find his life interesting at the least. Just don't fall into the trap most RPers do and try to make your guy too well rounded and or important. |
SgtDoughnut
Red Star Jr. EoN.
321
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Posted - 2013.10.24 07:14:00 -
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Just as a side note, everyone knows you as a tank driver, you should have a quirk relating to that.... constantly playing with your keys, or checking your data pad on your current garage status. |
Void Echo
Blades of Dust
1924
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Posted - 2013.10.24 07:14:00 -
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SgtDoughnut wrote:Just as a side note, everyone knows you as a tank driver, you should have a quirk relating to that.... constantly playing with your keys, or checking your data pad on your current garage status.
that's coming within the military years. |
Void Echo
Blades of Dust
1924
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Posted - 2013.10.24 07:16:00 -
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True Adamance wrote:Void Echo wrote:**** it, im free winging this ****.. hope you guys find his life interesting at the least. Just don't fall into the trap most RPers do and try to make your guy too well rounded and or important.
like I said im free winging it, im writing what I imagine his life to be.... im focusing on his development into a hardened soldier.
but that aside, tell me how im doing so far. |
DeadlyAztec11
Gallente Federation
2329
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Posted - 2013.10.29 00:12:00 -
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True Adamance wrote:Galm Fae wrote:Void Echo wrote: (adamance, im asking for your help here, since your the go to guy for RP) Quote:(adamance, im asking for your help here Quote:your the go to guy for RP) Kula, baka kakkushuugista, ta parakan dai.
I am pretty knowledgable yes. I would tell you to make an ugly brute of a gallentean mob enforcer with no particularly nice qualities except of a mild schitzophrenic personality disorder, the occasional heart of gold, and a patriotic loyalty to his country...except most people would hate that bio. Tell me the basic concept you want your character to represent, I have done this kind of bio coaching, and creation many times before. Aww. You are describing me lol
"It's because of people like you that I became this. And you'll never give me a reason to become someone else."
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True Adamance
PIE Inc. Praetoria Imperialis Excubitoris
3695
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Posted - 2013.10.29 00:22:00 -
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DeadlyAztec11 wrote: Aww. You are describing me lol
Explains you characters mental age, though I would have played the character off in a far more criminal like manner.
"All things were created by the Divine, and so the glory of our faith is inherent to us all"
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DeadlyAztec11
Gallente Federation
2329
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Posted - 2013.10.29 01:42:00 -
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True Adamance wrote:DeadlyAztec11 wrote: Aww. You are describing me lol
Explains you characters mental age, though I would have played the character off in a far more criminal like manner. I'll just give out my bio.
Half Brutor, half Intaki. Born on Federation controlled Intaki Colony, near the outer edge of Federation Space. To protect the village I participated in an early Federation attempt at reverse engineer first generation clone implants. I saved the village. Though, I am unable to use any other implant as attempting to switch may cause DNA poisoning and permanent amnesia.
The implant has numerous side effects such as separate levels of consciousness and personalities. Occasionally sounds, texts and images emerge. Black outs have also transpired, where no one has been able to verify my location. These black outs can range anywhere from a few hours, to seven and a half months on one occasion.
Legally I can not be employed by any public agency of the Federation, mainly due to physiological concerns. Though, in an attempt to keep me from defecting, I was offered a job in a third party corporation that is actually privately owned by the government (Chatelain Rapid Response).
I became a convert to a Khanid sect of the Amarren religion after being cured of some of my more chronic issues regarding the implant. I still follow the Intaki way, Ida, to the best of my ability, though, it is difficult regarding my job.
I went for two tours of duty in Minmatar-Amarr Space. I also served a long tour on Caldari Prime that was abruptly ended by a mistake on my part. I am currently being re-evaluated for mission tasking; I currently work as a bodyguard for field officers and as a transport of precious cargo.I also work priority operations for some independent corporations on occasion.
There's more details but I do not care to write a three essays worth of info. Though, feel free to inquire on any part of my bio.
"It's because of people like you that I became this. And you'll never give me a reason to become someone else."
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True Adamance
PIE Inc. Praetoria Imperialis Excubitoris
3702
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Posted - 2013.10.29 02:13:00 -
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You are such a heretic I don't even know what to do with you.
"All things were created by the Divine, and so the glory of our faith is inherent to us all"
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DeadlyAztec11
Gallente Federation
2329
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Posted - 2013.10.29 02:21:00 -
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True Adamance wrote:You are such a heretic I don't even know what to do with you. Such a tease
"It's because of people like you that I became this. And you'll never give me a reason to become someone else."
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True Adamance
Amarr Templars Amarr Empire
4457
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Posted - 2013.10.29 02:25:00 -
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DeadlyAztec11 wrote:True Adamance wrote:You are such a heretic I don't even know what to do with you. Such a tease Arrighty I'm off. Satja would be jealous if I spent too much time with you.
"All things were created by the Divine, and so the glory of our faith is inherent to us all"
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Mac Dac
Wraith Shadow Guards
280
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Posted - 2013.12.01 03:47:00 -
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True Adamance wrote:Galm Fae wrote:True Adamance wrote:Galm Fae wrote:As opposed to say... A religious fanatic? My character isn't a fanatic. He is a religious reformist who serves the Sarum Family as his father did before him. He believe that non combative methods are the best way to achieve a lasting peace and to achieve the amalgamation the empire desires. And let's not forget his cute little slave with Stockholm syndrome. Such a love story! <3 Just poking fun, sorry. Sometimes a bit too much of Galm seeps out. I wouldn't say that. Though I guess its easy to label it as such. I guess anyone would be greatful if you pulled them out of a burning plane, they were young an impressionable, educated to admire the Amarr, and subject to discrimination by your own people. Its more of less the perfect cocktail of tragic and coincidental events that make fairytails some how work. Oh and have it got it through in my writing that she is not exactly a beauty, just some typical average person who when in the right light looks pretty, with a faint exotic charm to an otherwise conservative Amarrian. So you got a girlfriend. AWWWWWWWW.... does she rp like you. <3
"We should take care not to make intellect our god; it has, of course, strong muscles, but no personality" Albert Einste
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True Adamance
Amarr Templars Amarr Empire
4463
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Posted - 2013.12.01 19:27:00 -
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Mac Dac wrote:True Adamance wrote:Galm Fae wrote:True Adamance wrote:Galm Fae wrote:As opposed to say... A religious fanatic? My character isn't a fanatic. He is a religious reformist who serves the Sarum Family as his father did before him. He believe that non combative methods are the best way to achieve a lasting peace and to achieve the amalgamation the empire desires. And let's not forget his cute little slave with Stockholm syndrome. Such a love story! <3 Just poking fun, sorry. Sometimes a bit too much of Galm seeps out. I wouldn't say that. Though I guess its easy to label it as such. I guess anyone would be greatful if you pulled them out of a burning plane, they were young an impressionable, educated to admire the Amarr, and subject to discrimination by your own people. Its more of less the perfect cocktail of tragic and coincidental events that make fairytails some how work. Oh and have it got it through in my writing that she is not exactly a beauty, just some typical average person who when in the right light looks pretty, with a faint exotic charm to an otherwise conservative Amarrian. So you got a girlfriend. AWWWWWWWW.... does she rp like you. <3
Don't see why she wouldn't shes more or less a side character created to symbolised True's basic values and reasons for fighting..... if I were to kill her off then that would be an issue and a means to fundamentally alter this character's psyche....which is essentially a respec for RP.
"All things were created by the Divine, and so the glory of our faith is inherent to us all"
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