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Gods Architect
Pradox One
735
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Posted - 2013.10.15 09:13:00 -
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A New Hope
The strategy of the war thus far has occurred. On the third day of the war Public Disorder organized a near impenetrable blockade over the from Besateoden to Almur. OH and AE lost many ships in an attempted to break the blockade with little success. Kujo and Radar have deployed a plan of mastery and deception on Day 4 of the war. They send large forces of men and supplies to attack the blockade head on. With very little success of clearing a breach the men of both corporations performed the impossible.
With OH 3rd Fleet they sent the best and brightest to engaged the TP blockade that hovers over Almur. The men of OH headed straight into battle with orders only to hold the line in Sakulda and Hedaleolfrarber. With a successful landing in Sakulda the 33rd Sver Tactical Detachment was wiped out. Also OH 92nd Infantry Division and 5th Fleet battled with survivors of Pradox One 3rd Expeditionary Fleet over Hedaleolfarber III.
Next the daring generals of AE slammed into the Northern Blockade outside of Sver's Industrial Colonies. Public Disorder engaged the AE invaders. AE's 112th Logistic Fleet under a fierce and unwavering commander were able to breach a gap into blockade. Once over Mimiror the 77th Special Operations dropped in using assault pods. Once on the ground they clear the AA and anti-ship battery hammering the 112th. Once clear the men on the ground hold the line as MCC's enter the orbit under the escorts of the 23rd Aviation Tactical fighter Wing. Though out number they 23rd exacts heavy casualties on the air forces around the MCC landing zones, but this is did not come easy. The 23rd took 70% losses but still at this moment control air superiority.
For the Battle of Muttokon II the tide was turning. Sver exacted a heavy blow the PX1 and AE on the planet. They turn what was going to be a bad fight to winning one. With PX1 and AE endanger OH send Crusaders to our rescue, though heavy losese were taken the 72nd fell back and the Crusaders won the day.
In light of the problem in Muttokon II Public Disorder sent a few fleets that were defending Sver Prime to Muttokon II. They went through the fastest root which was the Fittakan Gap, PX1 saw this moving through the system and engaged. Details of the battle are scary at best but Molon Labe hit the flank of the PX1 fleet. With the fleet endanger of being wiped out they pulled back to Oddeluf to engaged the fleets there. PX1 performed as much damage they can, then they pull back to Bosena. Public Disorder fearing that PX1 jump to Bosena was a trapped they abandoned the mission to relieve Muttokon II and when to help TP with the blockade.
All the cards were set now. Public Disorder fell or the ruse that was the Sixaxis Offensive now that defeinse of Sver Prime was weaken a large force of OH and AE massing at Heild in the Tartatven Constellation were ready to act. With PX1 successful defense of the gap that was in Fittakan and was able to reroute the Public Disorder rescue fleet the large fleet of the two corporations move through the Fittakan Gap to Sver Prime's doorstep.
The AE/OH fleet collides with Public Disorders Elite Guards. Public Disorder had set up defensive battery on and around the planet. Even with the large fleet AE/OH was losing the fight, understanding this DocHoilday under the cover of 67th Fighter Wing and 11th Transport Brigade and landed in the batteries either destroying them or turning against the Guards Fleet. Eventually after hours of fighting they broken through.
The 1337 Special Task force angled above the planet as fleet defends them. Djinn Soul landed and took the Suave continent in just hours, under his command the Templars moving swiftly and capturing multiple cities. In the 2nd wave DJINN Marauder landed on the Suave continent with taking moderate casualties the Sver defender abandon the continent allowing the Templars to take the entire continent.
OH Crusaders have also landed on the planet. With Sver line completely collapsing 1st, 6th, 43rd Crusaders have placed the flag in the Zdowggg Memorial and the Corporate Military Operation building in Court Guard District affectively taking Sver Prime's capitol. It is unclear how Sver will respond to this rapid invasion
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Funkmaster Whale
0uter.Heaven
850
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Posted - 2013.10.15 11:03:00 -
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Tl;dr: STB is getting its **** rocked on all fronts. |
Gods Architect
Pradox One
745
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Posted - 2013.10.15 19:45:00 -
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bumb XP |
BobThe 844-1 CakeMan
Murder Cakes Of Doom
1040
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Posted - 2013.10.15 19:46:00 -
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Funkmaster Whale wrote:Tl;dr: STB is getting its **** rocked on all fronts.
at least i'm having fun. so many tank battles. \o/ |
Ser Tarlon
United Pwnage Service
RISE of LEGION
49
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Posted - 2013.10.15 19:48:00 -
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Keep your work up, love to read this. Also it would be nice to see all the post about the war in one thread |
1st Lieutenant Tiberius
0uter.Heaven
245
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Posted - 2013.10.15 20:02:00 -
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I tried making one myself, not as good a read as yours but heck i thought id try and write something from my corps point of view |
Ser Tarlon
United Pwnage Service
RISE of LEGION
50
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Posted - 2013.10.15 20:03:00 -
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1st Lieutenant Tiberius wrote:I tried making one myself, not as good a read as yours but heck i thought id try and write something from my corps point of view
The one with he broken comms? I thought it was pretty nice |
1st Lieutenant Tiberius
0uter.Heaven
245
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Posted - 2013.10.15 20:06:00 -
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Ser Tarlon wrote:1st Lieutenant Tiberius wrote:I tried making one myself, not as good a read as yours but heck i thought id try and write something from my corps point of view The one with he broken comms? I thought it was pretty nice
Yeah! Thanks :D its my first go at RP story posts if people think its ok maybe ill do more for the major battles that come up and try my best to tie it together with gods' and marauder's posts |
Ser Tarlon
United Pwnage Service
RISE of LEGION
50
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Posted - 2013.10.15 20:08:00 -
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1st Lieutenant Tiberius wrote:Ser Tarlon wrote:1st Lieutenant Tiberius wrote:I tried making one myself, not as good a read as yours but heck i thought id try and write something from my corps point of view The one with he broken comms? I thought it was pretty nice Yeah! Thanks :D its my first go at RP story posts if people think its ok maybe ill do more for the major battles that come up and try my best to tie it together with gods' and marauder's posts
I would read them :D |
1st Lieutenant Tiberius
0uter.Heaven
249
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Posted - 2013.10.15 20:11:00 -
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Ser Tarlon wrote:1st Lieutenant Tiberius wrote:Ser Tarlon wrote:1st Lieutenant Tiberius wrote:I tried making one myself, not as good a read as yours but heck i thought id try and write something from my corps point of view The one with he broken comms? I thought it was pretty nice Yeah! Thanks :D its my first go at RP story posts if people think its ok maybe ill do more for the major battles that come up and try my best to tie it together with gods' and marauder's posts I would read them :D
Then it shall be done!
Any tips for improvement gods architect? :) |
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Mike Ruan
Pradox One
151
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Posted - 2013.10.15 20:18:00 -
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1st Lieutenant Tiberius wrote:Ser Tarlon wrote:1st Lieutenant Tiberius wrote:I tried making one myself, not as good a read as yours but heck i thought id try and write something from my corps point of view The one with he broken comms? I thought it was pretty nice Yeah! Thanks :D its my first go at RP story posts if people think its ok maybe ill do more for the major battles that come up and try my best to tie it together with gods' and marauder's posts
Tib, you got a fan. lmao |
Ser Tarlon
United Pwnage Service
RISE of LEGION
51
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Posted - 2013.10.15 20:21:00 -
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Mike Ruan wrote:1st Lieutenant Tiberius wrote:Ser Tarlon wrote:1st Lieutenant Tiberius wrote:I tried making one myself, not as good a read as yours but heck i thought id try and write something from my corps point of view The one with he broken comms? I thought it was pretty nice Yeah! Thanks :D its my first go at RP story posts if people think its ok maybe ill do more for the major battles that come up and try my best to tie it together with gods' and marauder's posts Tib, you got a fan. lmao
Yes he does :D |
Gods Architect
Pradox One
745
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Posted - 2013.10.15 20:47:00 -
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With help from DJINN Marauder I was able to add names and units. And Tib idk how to help I wrote this in 3 in the morning with very little sleep. I just think of an overall structure of the story, just basic points and then try to tie everything together somehow without repeating exactly the same thing twice. It took me an hour to write this but I enjoyed your RP keep it up |
1st Lieutenant Tiberius
0uter.Heaven
255
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Posted - 2013.10.15 20:50:00 -
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Gods Architect wrote:With help from DJINN Marauder I was able to add names and units. And Tib idk how to help I wrote this in 3 in the morning with very little sleep. I just think of an overall structure of the story, just basic points and then try to tie everything together somehow without repeating exactly the same thing twice. It took me an hour to write this but I enjoyed your RP keep it up
Will do, thanks for the feedback.
I'd like for us to compile this somehow maybe in the future to make it easier to read all of them together in context. |
Gods Architect
Pradox One
748
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Posted - 2013.10.15 20:53:00 -
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1st Lieutenant Tiberius wrote:Gods Architect wrote:With help from DJINN Marauder I was able to add names and units. And Tib idk how to help I wrote this in 3 in the morning with very little sleep. I just think of an overall structure of the story, just basic points and then try to tie everything together somehow without repeating exactly the same thing twice. It took me an hour to write this but I enjoyed your RP keep it up Will do, thanks for the feedback. I'd like for us to compile this somehow maybe in the future to make it easier to read all of them together in context.
Once the wars are over I put them in the Dust fanfiction in order so its easier to read and understand |
1st Lieutenant Tiberius
0uter.Heaven
255
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Posted - 2013.10.15 20:53:00 -
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Ser Tarlon wrote:Mike Ruan wrote:1st Lieutenant Tiberius wrote:Ser Tarlon wrote:1st Lieutenant Tiberius wrote:I tried making one myself, not as good a read as yours but heck i thought id try and write something from my corps point of view The one with he broken comms? I thought it was pretty nice Yeah! Thanks :D its my first go at RP story posts if people think its ok maybe ill do more for the major battles that come up and try my best to tie it together with gods' and marauder's posts Tib, you got a fan. lmao Yes he does :D
Woohoo! \o/ |
True Adamance
PIE Inc.
Praetoria Imperialis Excubitoris
3146
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Posted - 2013.10.15 23:13:00 -
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Do you all actually have fleets or are you just throwing that around...... |
Roy Ventus
Foxhound Corporation
General Tso's Alliance
537
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Posted - 2013.10.15 23:32:00 -
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Someone should have recorded the battles and then reaed these reports during the compilations. Add some background music and call up Morgan Freeman and BAM, perfection. |
Rogatien Merc
Red Star.
EoN.
1453
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Posted - 2013.10.15 23:36:00 -
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True Adamance wrote:Do you all actually have fleets or are you just throwing that around......
pretty sure it's the latter...  |
demens grimwulff
A.N.O.N.Y.M.O.U.S.
12
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Posted - 2013.10.15 23:42:00 -
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We have fleets... fleets of... stuff... that do stuff... goes boom...
Nice read man.
A.N.O.N.Y.M.O.U.S update - playing "Chocolate Rain" pre-PC as a warm-up almost got me kicked. Tension was very high until I gave in and played Illuminati's favorite song, "What what, in the..." I hear he has signed posters from that guy. |
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1st Lieutenant Tiberius
0uter.Heaven
260
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Posted - 2013.10.15 23:44:00 -
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True Adamance wrote:Do you all actually have fleets or are you just throwing that around......
I have a fleet! but thats a slight hyperbole but we have a tanker that drops OBs for us while hes in the PC with us :D
Captain Nakaya Indigene |
21yrOld Knight
Pradox One
195
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Posted - 2013.10.16 00:12:00 -
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Damnnnn I love these stories especially because i'm a fighter in them. |
Marston VC
SVER True Blood
Public Disorder.
1064
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Posted - 2013.10.16 00:14:00 -
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http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Aor6-DkzBJ0
Ive got two more lined up depending on what route we take henceforth!
Also, I like the creativity the writer of this post demonstrated. It was clever! |
Gods Architect
Pradox One
750
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Posted - 2013.10.16 01:03:00 -
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Another RP will be up tonight. enjoy |
Lucifers Chariot
Onikanabo Brigade
Caldari State
2
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Posted - 2013.10.16 02:34:00 -
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This is your best work so far keep it up bro |
RuckingFetard
Better Hide R Die
571
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Posted - 2013.10.16 03:27:00 -
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These stories would be more awesome, had there been real EvE ships fighting over the planet, for the new bunker system of OB |
True Adamance
PIE Inc.
Praetoria Imperialis Excubitoris
3169
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Posted - 2013.10.16 03:44:00 -
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1st Lieutenant Tiberius wrote:True Adamance wrote:Do you all actually have fleets or are you just throwing that around...... I have a fleet! but thats a slight hyperbole but we have a tanker that drops OBs for us while hes in the PC with us :D Captain Nakaya Indigene
Ah I see. Yeah that's a bit of artistic licence you are making use of there. Plus out in Molden Heath any fleet worth its salt is going to attract the ire of Calamitous Intent like Dead Six did back during its PC days. |
Derrith Erador
Pradox One
245
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Posted - 2013.10.16 03:46:00 -
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21yrOld Knight wrote:Damnnnn I love these stories especially because i'm a fighter in them.
Yes, I as well. |
Shadow of War88
0uter.Heaven
78
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Posted - 2013.10.16 05:44:00 -
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1st Lieutenant Tiberius wrote:I tried making one myself, not as good a read as yours but heck i thought id try and write something from my corps point of view
u captured the important stuff where we kicked ass n had to juggle timers |
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