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Thanatos 716
Isuuaya Tactical Caldari State
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Posted - 2013.10.07 03:46:00 -
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For the past few years I have dreaded this moment. I heard tales of this trial, and what I'd have to do, the decision that would weigh down my shoulders...
This is the year when I have been assigned to complete a long term personal project. Everyone must think of something they would like to achieve or get done and they have about seven or eight months to do so. All the while chronicling their journey in a notebook. What is the task I have selected you may ask? Simple.
Write a fantasy novel!
Now, you may be asking yourself why I have called upon you. Because I need your help. I have decided that the story would take place in the fictional realm of Dustia. A prequel to our story, specifically a history of Thanatos and origins of Diyad. What will this grand tale be called?
Diyad Historia: Plight of the King
My hopes are for this thread to become a hub of out of character interactions, for I wish to include your characters as well as your ideas into this. Part of it would be a what-if scenario, one in which we all get a hold of the Eye. This plot device would have us explore Diyad's history and the mystery of Thanatos.
All I ask of you?
Make this a place to have out of character discussions. I WILL need information from you guys so as not to portray your characters wrong. I'd also be open to ideas for situations and even new characters.
THIS IS A HUGE UNDERTAKING, AND WITH YOU ALL BY MY SIDE, WE CAN CONQUER THIS VAST LITERARY FRONTIER TOGETHER!!!
SHALL YOU ACCEPT? |
Sandromin Hes
Sand Mercenary Corps Inc. Interstellar Conquest Enterprises
352
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Posted - 2013.10.13 01:45:00 -
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WELL, let's recount the history of the great deserts...
First, we have this: Arteum's story
I'll get right on that soon... (I'll edit this post later, as I have another story to write)
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Ner'Zul Nexhawk
Forty-Nine Fedayeen Minmatar Republic
448
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Posted - 2013.10.13 02:25:00 -
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Sorry for having missed it previously, but I will gladly help with fleshing out my nation and its leader in your novel. So ask away, Thanatos, ask away! |
Brutus Pyrus
Forty-Nine Fedayeen Minmatar Republic
114
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Posted - 2013.10.13 05:03:00 -
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Oh good god what do I do? |
Galrick M'kron
Sand Mercenary Corps Inc. Interstellar Conquest Enterprises
133
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Posted - 2013.10.13 15:42:00 -
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Sorry for missing it. Well, I think you can piece the Collective's history out of the RPG thread, but tl;dr: A corporation from the precursor race's (can't remember their name) time created them as an experiment. They've mostly kept to themselves for the larger part of history, developing technology. As for mannerisms, they vary from AI to AI, but most units tend towards an analytical mindset. Also, they're horrible at social interaction with other species, coming across as cold, unsympathetic and misanthropic. The only named unit so far is the Engineer. He has a bit more social skill than average for a member of the Collective, and can interpret the tone of voice and body language of those he speaks to, to a limited degree. All in all, he's just socially awkward instead of misanthropic. Fascinated by new technology he encounters. Careful, but at times, indecisive or cowardly. And needless to say, he has the skills you'd expect an electrical/mechanical engineer to have. |
Sandromin Hes
Sand Mercenary Corps Inc. Interstellar Conquest Enterprises
352
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Posted - 2013.10.13 17:19:00 -
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Galrick M'kron wrote:Sorry for missing it. Well, I think you can piece the Collective's history out of the RPG thread, but tl;dr: A corporation from the precursor race's (can't remember their name) time created them as an experiment. They've mostly kept to themselves for the larger part of history, developing technology. As for mannerisms, they vary from AI to AI, but most units tend towards an analytical mindset. Also, they're horrible at social interaction with other species, coming across as cold, unsympathetic and misanthropic. The only named unit so far is the Engineer. He has a bit more social skill than average for a member of the Collective, and can interpret the tone of voice and body language of those he speaks to, to a limited degree. All in all, he's just socially awkward instead of misanthropic. Fascinated by new technology he encounters. Careful, but at times, indecisive or cowardly. And needless to say, he has the skills you'd expect an electrical/mechanical engineer to have.
The Dorans. I'll get a basic historic outline of some of the peoples throughout the mythos. |
Soulja Ghostface
MCDUSTDONALDS
1595
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Posted - 2013.10.14 06:01:00 -
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A Minmatar rebel awakes in a pure amarr body. (this could be a murdered emporer or a prince helping minmatar rebels (cloning mistake when he died in a test skirmish) EDIT: He awoke with the number 514 on his forearm |
Vyzion Eyri
The Southern Legion The Umbra Combine
1467
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Posted - 2013.10.14 09:33:00 -
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Wait, so you've got the task of creating a story in 7-8 months and following the story's progress in a notebook, or are you writing a story set in a time period of 7-8 months where the narrative voice is similar to diary entries/reading from a notebook?
Or are you just writing a story with a deadline of 7-8 months?
To be honest, I don't mind letting the RPG threadnaut rest a while; a new project seems like just what we need. :D
Now, my logipriests have preferred to stay in their jungle, however I've been thinking about that old logipriest who was corrupted by the Necronomicon, Darilys, and where his life took him when he was but a wee boy...
Or maybe create new characters altogether... how exciting! :D
Any idea how lengthy your novel is going to be? |
Alixenus
ISF Marines
110
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Posted - 2013.10.14 14:21:00 -
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OOC: Yes, I'm not particularly clear on this novel-majig either, how far back in time are we talking here? and how long is it going to be? If we're doing the founding of Diyad I doubt any of our current characters (except for maybe a beta test of the Engineer or High school Sandromin) will even have been born yet. Either way, I'm going to have to shake out of my funk and contribute a whole lot more, especially since Thanatos (the character) has already stated that the Diyadians descended from Venezzians. |
Thanatos 716
Isuuaya Tactical Caldari State
120
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Posted - 2013.10.14 21:34:00 -
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Alixenus wrote:OOC: Yes, I'm not particularly clear on this novel-majig either, how far back in time are we talking here? and how long is it going to be? If we're doing the founding of Diyad I doubt any of our current characters (except for maybe a beta test of the Engineer or High school Sandromin) will even have been born yet. Either way, I'm going to have to shake out of my funk and contribute a whole lot more, especially since Thanatos (the character) has already stated that the Diyadians descended from Venezzians.
First I need to know from Sandromin how long the Second Era actually lasted, since Diyad began in the Second Era. Since I'm dealing with Diyad's conception I need my Venezzian Explorers. So I'd need to know important Venezzian leaders, figures, celebrities and technology at that time. I'd imagine that the founder of Diyad had to be affiliated with important Venezzian peoples. |
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Ner'Zul Nexhawk
Forty-Nine Fedayeen Minmatar Republic
448
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Posted - 2013.10.14 22:47:00 -
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Thanatos 716 wrote:Alixenus wrote:OOC: Yes, I'm not particularly clear on this novel-majig either, how far back in time are we talking here? and how long is it going to be? If we're doing the founding of Diyad I doubt any of our current characters (except for maybe a beta test of the Engineer or High school Sandromin) will even have been born yet. Either way, I'm going to have to shake out of my funk and contribute a whole lot more, especially since Thanatos (the character) has already stated that the Diyadians descended from Venezzians. First I need to know from Sandromin how long the Second Era actually lasted, since Diyad began in the Second Era. Since I'm dealing with Diyad's conception I need my Venezzian Explorers. So I'd need to know important Venezzian leaders, figures, celebrities and technology at that time. I'd imagine that the founder of Diyad had to be affiliated with important Venezzian peoples.
So do I understand correctly that, since the Ashborn came to Mediterra only recently, you don't really need anything from their history right now? |
Sandromin Hes
Sand Mercenary Corps Inc. Interstellar Conquest Enterprises
352
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Posted - 2013.10.14 23:31:00 -
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Thanatos 716 wrote:Alixenus wrote:OOC: Yes, I'm not particularly clear on this novel-majig either, how far back in time are we talking here? and how long is it going to be? If we're doing the founding of Diyad I doubt any of our current characters (except for maybe a beta test of the Engineer or High school Sandromin) will even have been born yet. Either way, I'm going to have to shake out of my funk and contribute a whole lot more, especially since Thanatos (the character) has already stated that the Diyadians descended from Venezzians. First I need to know from Sandromin how long the Second Era actually lasted, since Diyad began in the Second Era. Since I'm dealing with Diyad's conception I need my Venezzian Explorers. So I'd need to know important Venezzian leaders, figures, celebrities and technology at that time. I'd imagine that the founder of Diyad had to be affiliated with important Venezzian peoples.
The Second Era was a blighted one. Nobody know exactly how long it lasted. Some scholars argue over the endpoint, but almost none contest the Great Firestorm started it. However, a majority of scholars define the end as what is called as the Blue Decade; in ten years, many major events happened, all of them odd and unexplained.
In the first year of the Blue Decade, two events happened: The end of the Dorian People, signifying the conclusion of higher learning for the next century, and the establishment of the first Expeditionary group.
Within the next year, the First Expedition had occurred and they began their travels. Next, the Barbarians of Barbaria invaded the Sand lands, being repelled within the first year of the invasion. Also, the conclusion of the Therisian Wars saw its end once the Therisian government saw its utter destruction, allowing for the reversion back into ferality.
The third year began with the reversion of Therisia into the Tundras of Doomgoth. [TBC] |
Ner'Zul Nexhawk
Forty-Nine Fedayeen Minmatar Republic
448
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Posted - 2013.10.15 10:58:00 -
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Sandromin Hes wrote:Thanatos 716 wrote:Alixenus wrote:OOC: Yes, I'm not particularly clear on this novel-majig either, how far back in time are we talking here? and how long is it going to be? If we're doing the founding of Diyad I doubt any of our current characters (except for maybe a beta test of the Engineer or High school Sandromin) will even have been born yet. Either way, I'm going to have to shake out of my funk and contribute a whole lot more, especially since Thanatos (the character) has already stated that the Diyadians descended from Venezzians. First I need to know from Sandromin how long the Second Era actually lasted, since Diyad began in the Second Era. Since I'm dealing with Diyad's conception I need my Venezzian Explorers. So I'd need to know important Venezzian leaders, figures, celebrities and technology at that time. I'd imagine that the founder of Diyad had to be affiliated with important Venezzian peoples. The Second Era was a blighted one. Nobody know exactly how long it lasted. Some scholars argue over the endpoint, but almost none contest the Great Firestorm started it. However, a majority of scholars define the end as what is called as the Blue Decade; in ten years, many major events happened, all of them odd and unexplained. In the first year of the Blue Decade, two events happened: The end of the Dorian People, signifying the conclusion of higher learning for the next century, and the establishment of the first Expeditionary group. Within the next year, the First Expedition had occurred and they began their travels. Next, the Barbarians of Barbaria invaded the Sand lands, being repelled within the first year of the invasion. Also, the conclusion of the Therisian Wars saw its end once the Therisian government saw its utter destruction, allowing for the reversion back into ferality. The third year began with the reversion of Therisia into the Tundras of Doomgoth. [TBC]
If I may ask, what was exactly the Great Firestorm? And does anyone know for sure the actual cause behind it, or was it simply a disaster of mysterious origins? |
Sandromin Hes
Sand Mercenary Corps Inc. Interstellar Conquest Enterprises
352
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Posted - 2013.10.15 17:15:00 -
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Ner'Zul Nexhawk wrote:Sandromin Hes wrote:Thanatos 716 wrote:Alixenus wrote:OOC: Yes, I'm not particularly clear on this novel-majig either, how far back in time are we talking here? and how long is it going to be? If we're doing the founding of Diyad I doubt any of our current characters (except for maybe a beta test of the Engineer or High school Sandromin) will even have been born yet. Either way, I'm going to have to shake out of my funk and contribute a whole lot more, especially since Thanatos (the character) has already stated that the Diyadians descended from Venezzians. First I need to know from Sandromin how long the Second Era actually lasted, since Diyad began in the Second Era. Since I'm dealing with Diyad's conception I need my Venezzian Explorers. So I'd need to know important Venezzian leaders, figures, celebrities and technology at that time. I'd imagine that the founder of Diyad had to be affiliated with important Venezzian peoples. The Second Era was a blighted one. Nobody know exactly how long it lasted. Some scholars argue over the endpoint, but almost none contest the Great Firestorm started it. However, a majority of scholars define the end as what is called as the Blue Decade; in ten years, many major events happened, all of them odd and unexplained. In the first year of the Blue Decade, two events happened: The end of the Dorian People, signifying the conclusion of higher learning for the next century, and the establishment of the first Expeditionary group. Within the next year, the First Expedition had occurred and they began their travels. Next, the Barbarians of Barbaria invaded the Sand lands, being repelled within the first year of the invasion. Also, the conclusion of the Therisian Wars saw its end once the Therisian government saw its utter destruction, allowing for the reversion back into ferality. The third year began with the reversion of Therisia into the Tundras of Doomgoth. [TBC] If I may ask, what was exactly the Great Firestorm? And does anyone know for sure the actual cause behind it, or was it simply a disaster of mysterious origins?
Scholars argue on that; they typically attribute it to Fate falling from the heavens, paralleling her symbolic fall, that is her fall from being a good god. |
Alixenus
ISF Marines
110
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Posted - 2013.10.16 23:26:00 -
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Okay, Dark age Venezzia. Hmmm. I'm thinking, no more water cannons, indoor plumbing, or large ships. Just Galleys, Triremes and Penteconters. Much less construction from Stone and Marble. Wood will be the prevailing material. It will be a small town, a back water, the entire thing fitting into what I called the Western district in my lore bombs, though none of the landmarks mentioned, save for the house of the broken lance and the port, exist. The land that Venezzia will cover is/was Swampy river Delta and forrest, dotted with a few noble compounds. Perhaps a farm and a Vineyard. I need to cook up some more noble families. Of course, House Vincenzo will make an appearance as they are old money. As to whether they will be as set in their ways as they are by Alixenus' time...not sure. Also, Thanatos, what was your overall idea of the founding of Diyad? Was this a deliberate migration or did a trading convoy get lost?
...aaaaaand I've realised a Ginormous plot hole with Venezzia. If the city became wealthy from trade, and the Republic only encountered the rest of you at the beginning of the first thread...who the frakk were we trading with? |
Thanatos 716
Isuuaya Tactical Caldari State
123
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Posted - 2013.10.17 00:18:00 -
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Alixenus wrote:Okay, Dark age Venezzia. Hmmm. I'm thinking, no more water cannons, indoor plumbing, or large ships. Just Galleys, Triremes and Penteconters. Much less construction from Stone and Marble. Wood will be the prevailing material. It will be a small town, a back water, the entire thing fitting into what I called the Western district in my lore bombs, though none of the landmarks mentioned, save for the house of the broken lance and the port, exist. The land that Venezzia will cover is/was Swampy river Delta and forrest, dotted with a few noble compounds. Perhaps a farm and a Vineyard. I need to cook up some more noble families. Of course, House Vincenzo will make an appearance as they are old money. As to whether they will be as set in their ways as they are by Alixenus' time...not sure. Also, Thanatos, what was your overall idea of the founding of Diyad? Was this a deliberate migration or did a trading convoy get lost?
...aaaaaand I've realised a Ginormous plot hole with Venezzia. If the city became wealthy from trade, and the Republic only encountered the rest of you at the beginning of the first thread...who the frakk were we trading with?
...Well....oh...
Game Over |
Sandromin Hes
Sand Mercenary Corps Inc. Interstellar Conquest Enterprises
353
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Posted - 2013.10.17 02:12:00 -
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EASY! Venezzia grew as a nomadic trading nation, and the Barbarians would occasionally trade along the coast line. Furthermore, Dorian artifacts allowed for superior trading with nomadic tribes in the desert and the Tundras of Doomgoth *was* an ancient nation. You can connect dots and figure out how things worked out for your early nation.
All in all, you're just another brick in the confines of this forum thread, so make a story to fit into the bigger picture. (+10 points if you saw what I did there.) |
Ner'Zul Nexhawk
Forty-Nine Fedayeen Minmatar Republic
448
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Posted - 2013.10.17 02:12:00 -
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Thanatos 716 wrote:Alixenus wrote:Okay, Dark age Venezzia. Hmmm. I'm thinking, no more water cannons, indoor plumbing, or large ships. Just Galleys, Triremes and Penteconters. Much less construction from Stone and Marble. Wood will be the prevailing material. It will be a small town, a back water, the entire thing fitting into what I called the Western district in my lore bombs, though none of the landmarks mentioned, save for the house of the broken lance and the port, exist. The land that Venezzia will cover is/was Swampy river Delta and forrest, dotted with a few noble compounds. Perhaps a farm and a Vineyard. I need to cook up some more noble families. Of course, House Vincenzo will make an appearance as they are old money. As to whether they will be as set in their ways as they are by Alixenus' time...not sure. Also, Thanatos, what was your overall idea of the founding of Diyad? Was this a deliberate migration or did a trading convoy get lost?
...aaaaaand I've realised a Ginormous plot hole with Venezzia. If the city became wealthy from trade, and the Republic only encountered the rest of you at the beginning of the first thread...who the frakk were we trading with? ...Well....oh... Game Over
Good game, well played.
On a serious note... I remember mentioning that the nations of Praecantaria had enshrouded the continent in impenetrable mist after their not-so-peaceful dealings with mortals from Mediterra. Could it be that the Venezzians of old had at first established a prosperous trade with the Mir, but later grew jealous of the latter people's abilities, tried to wage war, and were repelled and banished from the continent? We could also tie in Nak'Sora/Fate in that she, still untainted yet, made the fleeing survivors forget about their travels to Praecantaria and the fact of the continent's existence...
Oh, and Sandromin, I feel like the Firestorm also should have to do something with Praecantaria. Don't know what exactly yet, but I will think about it and flesh this idea a bit more soon.
EDIT: Did not see Sandromin's post, so your choice of what you want to do, Alixenus. My suggestion still stands, though. |
Alixenus
ISF Marines
110
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Posted - 2013.10.17 09:38:00 -
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Frankly I quite like the sound of both ideas. +1 to this thread for plugging that plot hole so quickly and so neatly. Its not beyond the realms of possibility that 'modern' Venezzia would make war on Praecantaria as I've already said they have a thing for expansion and colonialism (sorry Logipriests, no hard feelings right?). Indeed, Alixenus did want to try to make contact with the Hydromancers as a deterrent against Nexhawk. As for this Venezzia...acutally, that could work. I've already that our Venezzia is far greater in size than any Medieval city had a right to be, there's no reason that olde Venezzia couldn't still be vast enough to attempt such a foolish enterprise. And we could just write in tiny islands here and there that have been colonised. |
Thanatos 716
Isuuaya Tactical Caldari State
123
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Posted - 2013.10.17 19:19:00 -
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Alixenus wrote:Frankly I quite like the sound of both ideas. +1 to this thread for plugging that plot hole so quickly and so neatly. Its not beyond the realms of possibility that 'modern' Venezzia would make war on Praecantaria as I've already said they have a thing for expansion and colonialism (sorry Logipriests, no hard feelings right?). Indeed, Alixenus did want to try to make contact with the Hydromancers as a deterrent against Nexhawk. As for this Venezzia...acutally, that could work. I've already that our Venezzia is far greater in size than any Medieval city had a right to be, there's no reason that olde Venezzia couldn't still be vast enough to attempt such a foolish enterprise. And we could just write in tiny islands here and there that have been colonised.
...Well...oh...
Game Un-Over |
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Sandromin Hes
Sand Mercenary Corps Inc. Interstellar Conquest Enterprises
355
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Posted - 2013.10.27 22:38:00 -
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I think I know what to include next in the story of my nation... BUT FIRST an essay for American Historius II.
>A lore-weaver... a bard... a creator... a poet-warrior...
Sandromin, Champion of Arteum
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Sandromin Hes
Sand Mercenary Corps Inc. Interstellar Conquest Enterprises
355
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Posted - 2013.10.30 00:36:00 -
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Updated my post
>A lore-weaver... a bard... a creator... a poet-warrior...
Sandromin, Champion of Arteum
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Thanatos 716
Isuuaya Tactical Caldari State
137
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Posted - 2013.12.12 22:00:00 -
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Sorry, it has been a while since I used this. I have a question particularly for Nexhawk, about the nature of The Eyes of Fate.
I was wondering, since it has the ability to reveal the past, and possible future, could it possibly affect the memories of others?
Edit: Also, just to note that this book primarily exists as a hypothetical situation in which the Eyes reveal the truth of Diyad. So I may toy with the concept since it doesn't directly affect our actual story.
"Now I am become Death, the destroyer of worlds."
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