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1. Euryale - in DUST 514 Fiction [original thread]
lol, okay. i was asking because my stories are missing interesting dialogue and i wanted to see if u had some tips to share about like lining them up and like punctuation tht goes with it.
- by Zyanic - at 2013.09.06 15:27:00
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2. Euryale - in DUST 514 Fiction [original thread]
*sniffle* plz give me tips Umbra for my writing. uve got some good material with making dialogue... mind if i mail u on PSN for some tips?
- by Zyanic - at 2013.09.06 00:41:00
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3. Caving In Civilization (Introduction) - in DUST 514 Fiction [original thread]
This story will have 2 Chapter to it, each will be called "Caving In Civilization" as well. also, the chapters will be split by 3 days. in those 3 days i'll be either making out new material for the chapters or enjoying the forums and talking to o...
- by Zyanic - at 2013.08.27 13:57:00
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4. Caving In Civilization (Introduction) - in DUST 514 Fiction [original thread]
I grew up on stories, the real ones. Always taking place on humanity's home world, where our ancestors sprouted from and traveled far away from. The stories of a green planet with blue heavens and blue grounds, with the underworld being a sacred p...
- by Zyanic - at 2013.08.27 13:54:00
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5. 3 Lines with Neither Leading to Salvation (Short Story) - in DUST 514 Fiction [original thread]
"u hurt my feelings man..... imma quit" would be most people's response to such a blunt review, but i accept it with thanks. im still bringing up ideas to make a story where it's enjoyable nd something tht will just make Dust a little more amusing...
- by Zyanic - at 2013.08.04 14:59:00
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6. Unsightly Grounds - in DUST 514 Fiction [original thread]
My lunges inhaled smokes and fumes that hurt my throat. The slums of my world just allowed diseases to run wild and infect the old and young. I saw strong men walking around the slums carrying rifles and medicine packs for the needy. Everyday i wr...
- by Zyanic - at 2013.08.04 06:05:00
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7. True Liability (Short Story) - in DUST 514 Fiction [original thread]
Athena Mirito wrote: I can't really give you advice. Your grammar is solid and stories interesting. Comments, however, I can do. I enjoy your stories would like to see more from you. thx for ur comment... imma br trying for more and see wat...
- by Zyanic - at 2013.08.04 04:06:00
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8. True Liability (Short Story) - in DUST 514 Fiction [original thread]
If anyone still reads deez things... i would like to ask for ur advice or comments on each of my stories.
- by Zyanic - at 2013.08.03 01:11:00
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9. True Liability (Short Story) - in DUST 514 Fiction [original thread]
Today i brought back over 20 million ISK from a series of battles against League of Infamy (LoI) as my team was brutally ambushed and nearly slaughtered. Fighting for days my unit's clones were completely depleted and we began to sweat in the drea...
- by Zyanic - at 2013.08.03 01:08:00
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10. 3 Lines with Neither Leading to Salvation (Short Story) - in DUST 514 Fiction [original thread]
The moons of Essence housed some of the most idiotic, yet vibrant men in New Eden as it was said that everyone placed this godly place would have 2 paths to take with branches beyond them. To be born of the Pure Gallente race, we mercenaries thoug...
- by Zyanic - at 2013.08.02 15:05:00
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11. 3 Lines with Neither Leading to Salvation (Short Story) - in DUST 514 Fiction [original thread]
NOTICE: This is my first story... thanks to anyone reading.
- by Zyanic - at 2013.08.02 15:05:00
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