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Zyanic
BetaMax.
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Posted - 2013.08.03 01:08:00 -
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Today i brought back over 20 million ISK from a series of battles against League of Infamy (LoI) as my team was brutally ambushed and nearly slaughtered. Fighting for days my unit's clones were completely depleted and we began to sweat in the dreary armor for hours. No one could truly say they weren't thinking about dying that night as the sun went down and the horizon shattered with tanks crossing the mountain top to our camp. I could feel my heart drop as the enemy came to strike us for the last time.... unfortunately, my mind blanked out and i lost consciousness. All i could remember was the non-stop firing of machine guns and rifles in the air with the red dust rising every time my boots hit the ground. Losing my sight and becoming blind after surviving the battle i was inducted into Alpha Wolf Pack's (AWP) Recovery Institute.
Unable to see, i struggled to adapt to this new ideal sense of hearing without seeing. Soon enough i was debriefed by a Roy Hanlen who wanted me to explain what i heard, saw, thought, knew, and everything else. With a massacre of 100K soldiers they wanted to earn of how the enemy assaulted our position.
I saw a surviving soldier with the keen eyes of a hawk but the hazel eyes of a snake. Living through hell he fought and lost his last few memories of battling a Pirate Corporation after our latest fight against LoI. My Division was to investigate every angle of this endeavor and to find which group assaulted us. He was just a kid though, being about 13, he was deployed to the training grounds and then sent to the fronts for his 12th fight. Reading up on his file i learned all about him; his family, life, home planet, even his everyday hobbies. The Pack ordered me to inquire him more the next day until he escaped without notice. 3 guards knocked out, 12 dead, and 1 disabled indefinitely.
My men reported no Ship was taken, nor LAV, or Tank meaning he was still in the vicinity. No longer could we just interrogate a blind kid, orders changed, "You are to secure him inside a cell this time..." were my orders. As such we needed to find him quickly. Before leaving my quarters to search for the soldier, i glanced over his file for his name... Ethan Anaya.
12 squads dispatched to search for Ethan and no sign of him for hours as we lost him in our own base. Cameras and Active Scanners could not track his position. We soon began to think of him as a double-agent working for LoI or the Pirate Corporation. The next morning, a report came in about ISK being stolen from our funds and then our vehicles blown up one by one. Soon enough we were unable to get off the planet. Stuck on this red planet our group starved to death day by day losing at least 20 clones every 13 hours.
Ethan was gone and undetectable for a long while... leaving us to die and suffering like he did when our forces were told to kill him and his entire team. We thought his group wasn't needed after completing their mission. Unfortunately for us, we were the true liability. |
Zyanic
BetaMax.
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Posted - 2013.08.03 01:11:00 -
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If anyone still reads deez things... i would like to ask for ur advice or comments on each of my stories. |
Athena Mirito
Sinq Laison Gendarmes
Gallente Federation
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Posted - 2013.08.03 12:22:00 -
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I can't really give you advice. Your grammar is solid and stories interesting.
Comments, however, I can do. I enjoy your stories would like to see more from you. |
Zyanic
BetaMax.
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Posted - 2013.08.04 04:06:00 -
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Athena Mirito wrote:
I can't really give you advice. Your grammar is solid and stories interesting.
Comments, however, I can do. I enjoy your stories would like to see more from you.
thx for ur comment... imma br trying for more and see wat i come up with |
Zealot Devaurous
Chatelain Rapid Response
Gallente Federation
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Posted - 2013.08.15 03:28:00 -
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Hey!
Would you be my writing partner? Got a few ideas. :-]
Email ---- [email protected] |
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