I was just going to post this...I know you get likes and fame for these threads but is it worth the corp morale? I wouldnt post anymore of these if I were in your position.

"Downfall"

Defeat after defeat, setback after setback. Now that the 7th day of the war had ended and 2nd day after the failed evac of Sver Prime. We are at a lost. There were confirmed reports of large masses of Sver soldiers laying down their weapons, against Quicks orders to stand and fight. Even many members of his Guard refuse to fight or has already died honorably in battle. The IMPs had pushed into half of the city of the capital where many still loyal to the cause of Sver still reside. With about half of the Quicks Generals either are dead or plan a munity and insubordination behind his back, many of the traitors had been posted outside Boluva District and executed under treason. Only a few loyal and under experienced F/C's still remain, later in history this will be named The Great Purge. Unofficial reports state that some True Bloods are even removing their tags to leave safety with their families through IMP occupied land. With insubordination and young inexperienced men now occupying the lines it is clear Sver Prime will fall. In a last ditch effort to evacuate civilians, Quickgloves seceded land to 187 in exchange for the evacuation of the remaining civilians and safe passage for them to Unclaimed space. Sver Prime will fall, all have been ordered to its defiance defense, the wounded, the young, and the old. "If we are to go into hell, then will we take as many of them down to the gates with us." your Daddy God Architect told his men at the battle for Sver Prime. "That's picture is you isn't it, Daddy?" Jessica pointed at the picture of me in the book. "Daddy was very young back then. Now go to bed!" I told my daughter and I stood and walked to the door, "Did you win, Daddy?" she asked me, and I gave a distance smile. "Night baby!"

"Executive Order 296"
June 5th is a day I'll remember. It was the day Executive Order 296 went into effect. "Hereby all Svers, you are to disengage all combat operations on Sver Prime effective immediately. We're giving up our home!" The radio blasted as Daddy sat in his trench inside the capital. "It was 3 years ago, but I remember it like it was yesterday!" I told my daughter. "So we lost, Daddy?" she asked and I nod my head. "No! No! Daddy!" she screamed pulling on my shirt. "That isn't how the story is supposed to end! We are supposed to win! We are proud, we are True Bloods we don't run! Daddy you don't run from a fight! Neither did Mommy!" I just stare at her holding back my tears. "Sometimes, baby surviving is a victory itself. I made it so I can be with you today!" I told her. I remember falling back to the Bunker and confronting Quick as the order was being delivered. He puts he's hand on my shoulder and tells me, "Our home may burn! But we'll be back! This is not the end!" He took his hand off my shoulder and turns away as soldiers around him burn the intel and leave the Bunker saluting Quick.

I run back to my trench and see the soldiers around me staring at me with dirtied faces. They asked many questions that we are really giving up and I confirmed it. "I won't become an IMP prisoner, sir!" A young private told me. "These Bloods don't run! another shouted. I turn to my 2nd in command and she's smiles and tells me, "The boys are right, sir. If we are to die then we would like to at our home before the IMPs take it from us!" I look up and shout, "Who else feels the same?" The majority of my unit raised their hands. "We'll be back boys! That I promise, but now I need you to comply with this order!" I screamed.

I pull my men back to the bunker as many of the soldiers gathers around the Military District. I gain elevation as the IMP army approaches the few thousand men that still remain. I watch as the IMP army surrounds the men and a soldier throws is rifle down and the other Svers soon followed. I hurry and run back to the bunker, once I open the door many soldiers aim their weapons at me and then lowers them. I shout, "The battle is over. We are giving up Sver Prime!" Immediately after I said that some of the men point weapons at their heads and commits suicide including my 2nd in command. "Was that Mommy who died?" she asked. "Daddy lost her and lot of good friends, but we live on for the ones who cannot!" I told my daughter before I put her to bed. "Will you tell me more about her?" she asked. "When you're older!"

"Downfall"

Defeat after defeat, setback after setback. Now that the 7th day of the war had ended and 2nd day after the failed evac of Sver Prime. We are at a lost. There were confirmed reports of large masses of Sver soldiers laying down their weapons, against Quicks orders to stand and fight. Even many members of his Guard refuse to fight or has already died honorably in battle. The IMPs had pushed into half of the city of the capital where many still loyal to the cause of Sver still reside. With about half of the Quicks Generals either are dead or plan a munity and insubordination behind his back, many of the traitors had been posted outside Boluva District and executed under treason. Only a few loyal and under experienced F/C's still remain, later in history this will be named The Great Purge. Unofficial reports state that some True Bloods are even removing their tags to leave safety with their families through IMP occupied land. With insubordination and young inexperienced men now occupying the lines it is clear Sver Prime will fall. In a last ditch effort to evacuate civilians, Quickgloves seceded land to 187 in exchange for the evacuation of the remaining civilians and safe passage for them to Unclaimed space. Sver Prime will fall, all have been ordered to its defiance defense, the wounded, the young, and the old. "If we are to go into hell, then will we take as many of them down to the gates with us." your Daddy God Architect told his men at the battle for Sver Prime. "That's picture is you isn't it, Daddy?" Jessica pointed at the picture of me in the book. "Daddy was very young back then. Now go to bed!" I told my daughter and I stood and walked to the door, "Did you win, Daddy?" she asked me, and I gave a distance smile. "Night baby!"

"Executive Order 296"
June 5th is a day I'll remember. It was the day Executive Order 296 went into effect. "Hereby all Svers, you are to disengage all combat operations on Sver Prime effective immediately. We're giving up our home!" The radio blasted as Daddy sat in his trench inside the capital. "It was 3 years ago, but I remember it like it was yesterday!" I told my daughter. "So we lost, Daddy?" she asked and I nod my head. "No! No! Daddy!" she screamed pulling on my shirt. "That isn't how the story is supposed to end! We are supposed to win! We are proud, we are True Bloods we don't run! Daddy you don't run from a fight! Neither did Mommy!" I just stare at her holding back my tears. "I miss Mommy! I miss her so much. You look a lot like her you know that? Sometimes, baby surviving is a victory itself. I made it so I can be with you today!" I told her. I remember falling back to the Bunker and confronting Quick as the order was being delivered. He puts his hand on my shoulder and tells me, "Our home may burn! But we'll be back! This is not the end!" He took his hand off my shoulder and turns away as soldiers around him burn the intel and leave the Bunker saluting Quick.

I run back to my trench and see the soldiers around me staring at me with dirtied faces. They asked many questions that we are really giving up and I confirmed it. "I won't become an IMP prisoner, sir!" A young private told me. "These Bloods don't run! another shouted. I turn to my 2nd in command and she's smiles and tells me, "The boys are right, sir. If we are to die then we would like to at our home before the IMPs take it from us!" I look up and shout, "Who else feels the same?" The majority of my unit raised their hands. "We'll be back boys! That I promise, but now I need you to comply with this order!" I screamed.

I pull my men back to the bunker as many of the soldiers gathers around the Military District. I gain elevation as the IMP army approaches the few thousand men that still remain. I watch as the IMP army surrounds the men and a soldier throws is rifle down and the other Svers soon followed. I hurry and run back to the bunker, once I open the door many soldiers aim their weapons at me and then lowers them. I shout, "The battle is over. We are giving up Sver Prime!" Immediately after I said that some of the men point weapons at their heads and commits suicide including my 2nd in command. "Was that Mommy who died?" she asked. "Daddy lost her and lot of good friends, but we live on for the ones who cannot!" I told my daughter before I put her to bed. "Will you tell me more about her?" she asked. "When you're older!"

"Kane's War"
Kane hired IMPs to engage us over saying that we were in the way. Peace talks fell apart starting the Northern War. The 1st day STB both won and lost battles after that STB starting losing hard. Mainly due to the same plans that didn't work before. STB elites started to wine and give up whoever were left we to fight and losing war due to lag, insubordination, etc., etc.. The war lasted 9 days (Sver Prime will fall). Tomorrow Sver Prime will fall and STB is defeated and pushed from their home. The Northern War is over, we lost. All hostility are to end Friday June, 7. This was Kane's and Quick's war.

The aftermath of The Great Purge has left a dark shroud over the surface of Sver Prime. Smoke reaches for the sky from the fires that still burn underneath all of the destruction. Ash pours from the sky coating everything they touch like swift brush strokes of grays and black on a torn weathered canvas. Gasping for air to breathe, a faint glow emits from the flames that creep up ever so slightly bound by the objects that try to smother them. All that remains of this once thriving city are the corpses of the few, brave and loyal Blood's that refused to surrender their home. They were born here, they grew up here, started families here, and they died here.

The IMPS mop up what few straggling civilians and soldiers remain as efficiently as a broom collecting crumbs on a tiled floor. What will become of these prisoners is uncertain at this time, but truth be told, most will end up in slave labor camps or detention facilities, fending for scraps just to survive. It becomes more and more certain to those that look over what used to be their home; that those who died defending it to the last clone, got off easy. As they are now free from the shackles that tear at the flesh of those restrained, finally at peace from the inevitable war.

So - it's okay to ignore the lore as long as you enjoy the read?

Are you serious? He's writing like every soldiers death is there real one. Even mentions suicides.

You can't RP and ignore the lore - that's not being lazy - that's just plain stupid. Try this in any forum RP and they'll remove your post or ask you to fix it. Lucky for him this isn't a forum RP so the GM's don't care if he makes mistakes.

But that doesn't mean someone can't call him out for doin' a poor representation of the games real lore.

"Downfall"

Defeat after defeat, setback after setback. Now that the 7th day of the war had ended and 2nd day after the failed evac of Sver Prime. We are at a lost. There were confirmed reports of large masses of Sver soldiers laying down their weapons, against Quicks orders to stand and fight. Even many members of his Guard refuse to fight or has already died honorably in battle. The IMPs had pushed into half of the city of the capital where many still loyal to the cause of Sver still reside. With about half of the Quicks Generals either are dead or plan a munity and insubordination behind his back, many of the traitors had been posted outside Boluva District and executed under treason. Only a few loyal and under experienced F/C's still remain, later in history this will be named The Great Purge. Unofficial reports state that some True Bloods are even removing their tags to leave safety with their families through IMP occupied land. With insubordination and young inexperienced men now occupying the lines it is clear Sver Prime will fall. In a last ditch effort to evacuate civilians, Quickgloves seceded land to 187 in exchange for the evacuation of the remaining civilians and safe passage for them to Unclaimed space. Sver Prime will fall, all have been ordered to its defiance defense, the wounded, the young, and the old. "If we are to go into hell, then will we take as many of them down to the gates with us." your Daddy God Architect told his men at the battle for Sver Prime. "That's picture is you isn't it, Daddy?" Jessica pointed at the picture of me in the book. "Daddy was very young back then. Now go to bed!" I told my daughter and I stood and walked to the door, "Did you win, Daddy?" she asked me, and I gave a distance smile. "Night baby!"

"Executive Order 296"
June 5th is a day I'll remember. It was the day Executive Order 296 went into effect. "Hereby all Svers, you are to disengage all combat operations on Sver Prime effective immediately. We're giving up our home!" The radio blasted as Daddy sat in his trench inside the capital. "It was 3 years ago, but I remember it like it was yesterday!" I told my daughter. "So we lost, Daddy?" she asked and I nod my head. "No! No! Daddy!" she screamed pulling on my shirt. "That isn't how the story is supposed to end! We are supposed to win! We are proud, we are True Bloods we don't run! Daddy you don't run from a fight! Neither did Mommy!" I just stare at her holding back my tears. "I miss Mommy! I miss her so much. You look a lot like her you know that? Sometimes, baby surviving is a victory itself. I made it so I can be with you today!" I told her. I remember falling back to the Bunker and confronting Quick as the order was being delivered. He puts his hand on my shoulder and tells me, "Our home may burn! But we'll be back! This is not the end!" He took his hand off my shoulder and turns away as soldiers around him burn the intel and leave the Bunker saluting Quick.

I run back to my trench and see the soldiers around me staring at me with dirtied faces. They asked many questions that we are really giving up and I confirmed it. "I won't become an IMP prisoner, sir!" A young private told me. "These Bloods don't run! another shouted. I turn to my 2nd in command and she's smiles and tells me, "The boys are right, sir. If we are to die then we would like to at our home before the IMPs take it from us!" I look up and shout, "Who else feels the same?" The majority of my unit raised their hands. "We'll be back boys! That I promise, but now I need you to comply with this order!" I screamed.

I pull my men back to the bunker as many of the soldiers gathers around the Military District. I gain elevation as the IMP army approaches the few thousand men that still remain. I watch as the IMP army surrounds the men and a soldier throws is rifle down and the other Svers soon followed. I hurry and run back to the bunker, once I open the door many soldiers aim their weapons at me and then lowers them. I shout, "The battle is over. We are giving up Sver Prime!" Immediately after I said that some of the men point weapons at their heads and commits suicide including my 2nd in command. "Was that Mommy who died?" she asked. "Daddy lost her and lot of good friends, but we live on for the ones who cannot!" I told my daughter before I put her to bed. "Will you tell me more about her?" she asked. "When you're older!"

"Kane's War"
This was Kane's and Quick's war. Kane hired IMPs to engage us over saying that we were in the way. Peace talks fell apart starting the Northern War. The 1st day STB both won and lost battles after that STB starting losing hard. Mainly due to the same plans that didn't work before. STB elites started to wine and give up whoever were left we to fight and losing war due to lag, insubordination, etc., etc.. The war lasted 9 days (Sver Prime will fall). Tomorrow Sver Prime will fall and STB is defeated and pushed from their home. The Northern War is over, we lost. All hostilities are to end Friday June 7, 2013 0:01 Eve time.

"It's Over"
16 days after hostilities were suppose to end the war dragged on. STB endured the loss of their home. The AWOXing by former brothers and Kush's Rebellion. The True Bloods no longer have the ability to retake Sver Prime nor is there any operation preparing for it. Zion and One-Armed fell; ties with Unclaimed is strained and we have a threat of an open war with TCD. June 23, 2013 is the day the first Northern War ends and I put this story to rest. Hope you enjoyed reading the conflict. Happy hunting.