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Galm Fae
Eskola Ergonomics
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Posted - 2015.06.21 05:16:00 -
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Attached to this post is what, I suspect, will forever destroy my credibility as a productive member of this fandom and leave reduced to what will in all likelihood be the absolute worst that this site has to offer. Ladies in gentlemen it is my honor to share a story with a far more personal touch than most are used to in standard lore, especially that of the Caldari. I present a work of fiction befitting that of a true human being rather than a living weapon, in a medium that I am certain is NOT SAFE FOR WORK.
I give you... Yurei
Kirjuun! Uakan!
Teknikiara!
Kanpai kameitsamuu!
Ra ra ra!
> --Killer of Snowfall Station--
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VAHZZ
Liquid.Hound
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Posted - 2015.06.21 05:39:00 -
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Damn....just damn...
I don't know what to say, that was just beautiful. It made me cry. You sir, you are an artisan, and this is like a masterpiece. I applaud you. I can't say enough how good that is..
GÖ¢ Soon, we shall meet again, in a galaxy far, far away. GÖ¢
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Robert Conway
Concordiat Mercenaries
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Posted - 2015.06.21 06:08:00 -
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This was my first piece of yours I have ever read. I liked it. Very much. What language were you using? Napanii? Vaanin k'Intaki? One you developed yourself? Just curious as I am very interested in the languages of New Eden. Also curious because I used some Napanii in one of my chapters in the Conway Chronicles.
Yassavi Approved. -Aero Yassavi
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Galm Fae
Eskola Ergonomics
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Posted - 2015.06.21 06:47:00 -
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Thanks, I'm glad you both enjoyed it. Needless to say it was a bit awkward for me to complete, and the fact that people actually seem to enjoy it makes it all worth it to me. I may never be in Mercury, but at least I can entertain.
As for the language, it's all Napanii with the exception of haaGÇÖke kGÇÖlen, which came from a Lonetrek dialect. I'm glad someone could identify it though, it makes me feel a whole lot better about actually spending the time to do my research.
Kirjuun! Uakan!
Teknikiara!
Kanpai kameitsamuu!
Ra ra ra!
> --Killer of Snowfall Station--
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Robert Conway
Concordiat Mercenaries
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Posted - 2015.06.21 06:58:00 -
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Galm Fae wrote:Thanks, I'm glad you both enjoyed it. Needless to say it was a bit awkward for me to complete, and the fact that people actually seem to enjoy it makes it all worth it to me. I may never be in Mercury, but at least I can entertain.
As for the language, it's all Napanii with the exception of haaGÇÖke kGÇÖlen, which came from a Lonetrek dialect. I'm glad someone could identify it though, it makes me feel a whole lot better about actually spending the time to do my research.
The only reason I knew it was because of the Napanii Primer fan made web page I was directed to for my story. I still need to translate what you wrote, because I don't know what it says. But when I'm not tired i'll track down all the Napanii in your story and translate it. It needs another read as it is to kind of piece together all the different sections. Kind of like watching a movie for the second time. Lol. In the upcoming Chapter Two of my Conway Chronicles I did two sentences of Napanii which took me two hours to create. Lol. I don't even know if it's grammatically correct, but I did my best. Anyway, was definitely nice to see a change of pace from just the battle lore and killing lore. Some love lore in New Eden was touching.
Yassavi Approved. -Aero Yassavi
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Galm Fae
Eskola Ergonomics
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Posted - 2015.06.21 07:09:00 -
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I'm really excited to read you fiction as well then. Just a massive tip when navigating the Napanii Primer online: Ctrl F is your new best friend.
Kirjuun! Uakan!
Teknikiara!
Kanpai kameitsamuu!
Ra ra ra!
> --Killer of Snowfall Station--
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Robert Conway
Concordiat Mercenaries
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Posted - 2015.06.21 19:01:00 -
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Galm Fae wrote:I'm really excited to read you fiction as well then. Just a massive tip when navigating the Napanii Primer online: Ctrl F is your new best friend.
Ehhh.... don't get too excited. Chapter Two is next in line to get posted, but i'm not the greatest writer. I did it for fun, but people might not like it because it is a bit dry right now. I have a full story arc in mind, but i just need to flesh it out. Also, if you do end up reading it, give me a fair critique. 
Yassavi Approved. -Aero Yassavi
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True Adamance
Praetoriani Classiarii Templares
Praetoria Imperialis Excubitoris
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Posted - 2015.06.22 00:50:00 -
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As usual it was very tastefully done and wonderfully written. I especially liked the insight into the darker part Galm's mind about the drugs that you and I discussed.
Also it's also very nice to hear more about Niina as a character. Sometime when reading through old posts I wondered to myself if I was missing half the story which this plot has done wonder's to rectify.
"Crush all who complain!"
- Arkena Wyrnspire
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