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Robert Conway
Concordiat Mercenaries
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Posted - 2015.06.21 00:48:00 -
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Coming SoonGäó.
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Galm Fae
Eskola Ergonomics
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Posted - 2015.06.21 07:10:00 -
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I would really love to read this, but sadly it seems that your link is broken. Whatever the reason, I can't seem to connect to your page.
Kirjuun! Uakan!
Teknikiara!
Kanpai kameitsamuu!
Ra ra ra!
> --Killer of Snowfall Station--
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Robert Conway
Concordiat Mercenaries
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Posted - 2015.06.21 15:15:00 -
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Galm Fae wrote:I would really love to read this, but sadly it seems that your link is broken. Whatever the reason, I can't seem to connect to your page.
Will work on this. I'm fairly new to the story side of Dust. What is a good website to post this to so i can create a link in the forums?
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Robert Conway
Concordiat Mercenaries
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Posted - 2015.06.21 18:44:00 -
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As promised, I have received 100 views and I have updated the OP with the link to Chapter One: The Academy.
DISCLAIMER: It's a little dry to read right now as it won't pick up until the end of Chapter Two, and Chapter Four being most action packed at this time.
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Robert Conway
Concordiat Mercenaries
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Posted - 2015.06.22 17:32:00 -
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Once again, you have all showed interest in my writing, as I have achieved over 200 views. As promised, Chapter Two: The Final Exam has been posted in the OP. Any feedback would be welcome.
DISCLAIMER: Chapters 2 and 3 (if it gets posted) are fairly short. Also, the Napanii I used in Chapter Two I had to improvise with, as the Napanii Primer didn't have all the exact words I needed. But I made do with what I had. Hope you enjoy it!
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Robert Conway
Concordiat Mercenaries
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Posted - 2015.06.23 18:18:00 -
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Congratulations! Your continued interest never ceases to amaze me. So for your reward (or punishment could be more like it) I have posted Chapter Three: Red Alert to the OP. And as ALWAYS, please feel free to give me ANY feedback you think could make this story line better. 
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Robert Conway
Concordiat Mercenaries
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Posted - 2015.06.25 07:50:00 -
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I apologize for the late post. Real life issues prevented me from getting to a computer. But as promised, chapter four part 1, has been posted to the OP. Hope you enjoy. Please post any feedback or inconsistencies you find when reading.
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Robert Conway
Concordiat Mercenaries
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Posted - 2015.07.26 16:02:00 -
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I apologize for this being so late, again, but Chapter Four Part 2 is here! The OP has been updated with the link! Have a read and get back to me with your comments and ideas! I think you will all enjoy this part of the Chapter. 
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Robert Conway
Concordiat Mercenaries
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Posted - 2015.08.26 06:22:00 -
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Chapter Five has been posted. It is a very short read.
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