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Illustrious Sword Baron
Caldari State
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Posted - 2015.05.12 06:09:00 -
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"You have only hardened our resolve. Every drop of blood you have taken from us will be repaid -- with interest."
We are a proud race, we have strived and surmounted treacherous paths. We have paved our foundation with steel, steel as hard as our resolve. And we shall stand the test of time, though our shields may falter and our armor crumble, we shall not stand down. There is only one way to exceed in anything, and that is to give everything. I do, and I demand that my people do too. It makes me sick to see cowards saunter away from the heat of battle. It burns the nanites deep inside me, it burns them with an unholy passion. I do not stand for treason. I shall not turn away from heresy. Any time I see a coward, I will gun them down.
We are a proud race. And we shall not run away. For the State.
Caldari Purist.
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Jonny D Buelle
Mors Effera
1392
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Posted - 2015.05.12 06:23:00 -
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Screw the state. Screw the federation. Screw the Empire. The Minmatar Republic is okay.
That being said I am obligated, as a Gallentean, to say this:
FREEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEDDDDDOOOOOOOOOOMMMMMM
Today's special:
PAIN
Comes with a side of salads and mash potatoes.
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Magewarlord
KILL-EM-QUICK Rise Of Legion.
80
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Posted - 2015.05.12 06:23:00 -
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Illustrious Sword Baron wrote:"You have only hardened our resolve. Every drop of blood you have taken from us will be repaid -- with interest."
We are a proud race, we have strived and surmounted treacherous paths. We have paved our foundation with steel, steel as hard as our resolve. And we shall stand the test of time, though our shields may falter and our armor crumble, we shall not stand down. There is only one way to exceed in anything, and that is to give everything. I do, and I demand that my people do too. It makes me sick to see cowards saunter away from the heat of battle. It burns the nanites deep inside me, it burns them with an unholy passion. I do not stand for treason. I shall not turn away from heresy. Any time I see a coward, I will gun them down.
We are a proud race. And we shall not run away. For the State. uuuh, so what faction are you arguing for? (j/k) |
Illustrious Sword Baron
Caldari State
2
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Posted - 2015.05.12 06:25:00 -
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Jonny D Buelle wrote:Screw the state. Screw the federation. Screw the Empire. The Minmatar Republic is okay.
That being said I am obligated, as a Gallentean, to say this:
FREEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEDDDDDOOOOOOOOOOMMMMMM
You disgust me.
Caldari Purist.
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Mrgugernaut
The Naughty Ninjas Smart Deploy
7
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Posted - 2015.05.12 06:31:00 -
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Death to the Caldari |
Jonny D Buelle
Mors Effera
1392
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Posted - 2015.05.12 06:34:00 -
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Illustrious Sword Baron wrote:Jonny D Buelle wrote:Screw the state. Screw the federation. Screw the Empire. The Minmatar Republic is okay.
That being said I am obligated, as a Gallentean, to say this:
FREEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEDDDDDOOOOOOOOOOMMMMMM You disgust me.
We seem to have that in common. I disgust my self.
Today's special:
PAIN
Comes with a side of salads and mash potatoes.
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KAGEHOSHI Horned Wolf
Dominion of the Supreme Emperor God-King KAGEHOSHI
12401
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Posted - 2015.05.12 06:35:00 -
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This speech is not that inspiring. I would give more detailed and constructive feedback if I could, but it's hard to pin down the problem with it, but I'll try anyway. I guess it just seems like a list of unconnected things with no focus; you're a proud race, overcame treacherous paths, won't give up, giving everything to achieve everything (you could have phrased it in a more poetic way), you don't like cowards and traitors, and an awkward part about nanites burning (doesn't need to be repeated). Needs a more central message in my opinion.
Caldari are essentially corporate fascists, so try emphasizing strength, unity, and patriotism.
Mentions of things being unholy or heresy doesn't really fit Caldari; sounds Amarr. Heresy is beliefs that are contrary to the approved religious doctrine, and your use of it doesn't really make sense.
The italicized quote was alright though.
Gû¦Supreme emperor god-kingpÇÉKAGEH¦PSHIpÇæ// Lord of threads // Forum altGû+
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VAHZZ
2013
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Posted - 2015.05.12 06:47:00 -
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KAGEHOSHI Horned Wolf wrote:This speech is not that inspiring. I would give more detailed and constructive feedback if I could, but it's hard to pin down the problem with it, but I'll try anyway. I guess it just seems like a list of unconnected things with no focus; you're a proud race, overcame treacherous paths, won't give up, giving everything to achieve everything (you could have phrased it in a more poetic way), you don't like cowards and traitors, and an awkward part about nanites burning (doesn't need to be repeated). Needs a more central message in my opinion.
Caldari are essentially corporate fascists, so try emphasizing strength, unity, and patriotism.
Mentions of things being unholy or heresy doesn't really fit Caldari; sounds Amarr. Heresy is beliefs that are contrary to the approved religious doctrine, and your use of it doesn't really make sense.
The italicized quote was alright though.
No, the reason it sucks is because it is Caldari.
"I bring nothing; I bless nothing, I save nothing, I just; erase. Completely. Shatter."
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Knightshade Belladonna
Kentucky Fried Clones
1487
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Posted - 2015.05.12 06:57:00 -
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You may not stand down, but the might of the Federation will PUT you down.
Freedom bruh , get some |
VAHZZ
2015
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Posted - 2015.05.12 06:58:00 -
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Knightshade Belladonna wrote:You may not stand down, but the might of the Federation will PUT you down.
Freedom bruh , get some
FREEEEEDOOOOOM!!!
"I bring nothing; I bless nothing, I save nothing, I just; erase. Completely. Shatter."
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Jonny D Buelle
Mors Effera
1393
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Posted - 2015.05.12 07:03:00 -
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VAHZZ wrote:Knightshade Belladonna wrote:You may not stand down, but the might of the Federation will PUT you down.
Freedom bruh , get some FREEEEEDOOOOOM!!!
FREEEEEDOOOM
Today's special:
PAIN
Comes with a side of salads and mash potatoes.
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VAHZZ
2017
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Posted - 2015.05.12 07:13:00 -
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Jonny D Buelle wrote:VAHZZ wrote:Knightshade Belladonna wrote:You may not stand down, but the might of the Federation will PUT you down.
Freedom bruh , get some FREEEEEDOOOOOM!!! FREEEEEDOOOM
Not green enough, but it is Matari lookin'.
"I bring nothing; I bless nothing, I save nothing, I just; erase. Completely. Shatter."
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KAGEHOSHI Horned Wolf
Dominion of the Supreme Emperor God-King KAGEHOSHI
12402
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Posted - 2015.05.12 07:13:00 -
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No glory for the State, all glory to the hypnotoad.
Gû¦Supreme emperor god-kingpÇÉKAGEH¦PSHIpÇæ// Lord of threads // Forum altGû+
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VAHZZ
2017
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Posted - 2015.05.12 07:15:00 -
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KAGEHOSHI Horned Wolf wrote:No glory for the State, all glory to the hypnotoad.
The hypnotoad ain't got a thing on the sunbro. Praise the Sun.
"I bring nothing; I bless nothing, I save nothing, I just; erase. Completely. Shatter."
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Jonny D Buelle
Mors Effera
1394
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Posted - 2015.05.12 07:20:00 -
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KAGEHOSHI Horned Wolf wrote:No glory for the State, all glory to the hypnotoad.
ALL GLORY TO HYPNOTOAD!
Today's special:
PAIN
Comes with a side of salads and mash potatoes.
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VAHZZ
2018
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Posted - 2015.05.12 07:26:00 -
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You bitches....
"I bring nothing; I bless nothing, I save nothing, I just; erase. Completely. Shatter."
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The Lion ElJonson
1st Legion The Dark Angels
213
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Posted - 2015.05.12 11:23:00 -
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when you write a great post, press 'post' and everything disappears
The chat channel 'player trade' is open for adding contacts and placing item advertisements in game.
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Krixus Flux
Kang Lo Directorate Gallente Federation
643
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Posted - 2015.05.12 12:44:00 -
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Lol like I said in the other thread, no one likes Cal bro.
Saying what's on people's minds
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Michael Arck
6239
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Posted - 2015.05.12 12:58:00 -
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Do not be dismayed by such hostilities comrade. We are a driven force given a hand that beckons us to fight against the stacked deck. But look towards the dawn that approaches. Our light shall never fade or be doomed to be swallowed by the darkness surrounding us. To the very last breath, until my blood purifys the sands that I return unto, my faith and dedication belongs to the State. To the people of Caldari, I salute your pride and honor.
My ancestor once spoke to me in a vision. He said, "Many shall go to the valley, to the green hills and to the skies of picturesque hills of a dream desired. But I, I shall go to the wilderness and face my trials to construct the fortification of my destiny. I shall shed my old ways to take up armor fitting to the bloodline of our ancestors. With this honor, I shall purge my adversaries into the dark depths. I will write their names into the dirt to only blot them out from existence. For we are Caldari and we have chosen the path others are unwilling to take."
Archistrategos / The 7th Prime / Selah
*Where the fear has gone there will be nothing....only I will remain
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Illustrious Sword Baron
Caldari State
4
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Posted - 2015.05.12 16:02:00 -
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Michael Arck wrote:Do not be dismayed by such hostilities comrade. We are a driven force given a hand that beckons us to fight against the stacked deck. But look towards the dawn that approaches. Our light shall never fade or be doomed to be swallowed by the darkness surrounding us. To the very last breath, until my blood purifys the sands that I return unto, my faith and dedication belongs to the State. To the people of Caldari, I salute your pride and honor.
My ancestor once spoke to me in a vision. He said, "Many shall go to the valley, to the green hills and to the skies of picturesque hills of a dream desired. But I, I shall go to the wilderness and face my trials to construct the fortification of my destiny. I shall shed my old ways to take up armor fitting to the bloodline of our ancestors. With this honor, I shall purge my adversaries into the dark depths. I will write their names into the dirt to only blot them out from existence. For we are Caldari and we have chosen the path others are unwilling to take."
i shall never be daunted by such imbeciles, comrade. They will get their reckoning.
Caldari Purist.
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Joel II X
Bacon with a bottle of Quafe
7481
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Posted - 2015.05.12 16:05:00 -
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Obligatory FREEDOM post.
(Gê¬n+Ç-´)GèâGöüGÿån+ƒ.pâ+n+ín+ƒ. LASERS BTCH!!!!!!
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Talos Vagheitan
Ancient Exiles.
1243
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Posted - 2015.05.12 16:07:00 -
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Then get on Kirjuun and let's earn some LP!
!--CCP, let's push for the license of Dust on both current Gen consoles--!
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Ku Shala
PIanet Express
1440
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Posted - 2015.05.12 16:31:00 -
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* Ku Shala melees the thread with no effect due to poor hit detection
* Ku Shala proceeds to melee himself committing suicide
* Ku Shala is removed from battle
-¦a+ó a+ú-Æa+äla+ä (CK-0 Specialist x5)
Caldari Loyalist
22 230 780 sp in drop suit upgrades
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The Lion ElJonson
1st Legion The Dark Angels
213
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Posted - 2015.05.12 17:44:00 -
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Look as long as a certain person keeps slowly watering down cal and buffing gal then this is going end badly. isn't it Raattai?
The chat channel 'player trade' is open for adding contacts and placing item advertisements in game.
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VAHZZ
2043
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Posted - 2015.05.12 22:15:00 -
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The Lion ElJonson wrote:Look as long as a certain person keeps slowly watering down cal and buffing gal then this is going end badly. isn't it Raattai?
"Gallente Master Race" - CCP Rattata mr pokemon rat man
So much freedom.
"I bring nothing; I bless nothing, I save nothing, I just; erase. Completely. Shatter."
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Genral69 death
Random Gunz Rise Of Legion.
250
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Posted - 2015.05.12 23:19:00 -
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You have 2 options 1) stand your ground and be torn down by my federation specialist plasma cannon 2) run and hid ( but know this, when I find you. You will wish you took option 1 ) In short: http://www.google.co.uk/search?q=explosion&safe=off&tbm=isch&revid=1072185260&oq=exsplo&gs_l=mobile-heirloom-serp.1.0.0i10l5.6591.14612.0.15940.22.20.0.0.0.6.507.3093.8j9j0j1j1j1.20.0.msedr...0...1c.1.34.mobile-heirloom-serp..10.12.2189.qEHNMutxzDg#mhpiv=2
General limited: warming failure to pay, may lead to death,massive amount of pain or even lose of family. Since 1995
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Robert Conway
Concordiat Mercenaries
257
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Posted - 2015.05.12 23:47:00 -
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Too bad your home is under OUR authority. Caldari Prime is OURS! Your presious titan is in ruins on your homeworld and your fleet destroyed. Should you try such a daring attempt at taking Gallente Prime, we would laugh at you.
Idea for player driven marketing and videos
Link
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True Adamance
Praetoriani Classiarii Templares Praetoria Imperialis Excubitoris
18987
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Posted - 2015.05.13 00:17:00 -
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Jonny D Buelle wrote:Illustrious Sword Baron wrote:Jonny D Buelle wrote:Screw the state. Screw the federation. Screw the Empire. The Minmatar Republic is okay.
That being said I am obligated, as a Gallentean, to say this:
FREEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEDDDDDOOOOOOOOOOMMMMMM You disgust me. We seem to have that in common. I disgust my self.
You also disgust me in the best possible way.
"That is not dead which can eternal lie,
And with strange aeons even death may die."
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True Adamance
Praetoriani Classiarii Templares Praetoria Imperialis Excubitoris
18987
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Posted - 2015.05.13 00:20:00 -
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Robert Conway wrote:Too bad your home is under OUR authority. Caldari Prime is OURS! Your presious titan is in ruins on your homeworld and your fleet destroyed. Should you try such a daring attempt at taking Gallente Prime, we would laugh at you.
Sadly it is not. While the titan itself no longer holds sway over the Gallentean populous the agreements reached by the Federation and Ishukone, an arm of the State governing Megacorporations, a demilitarized zone has been formed and the Caldari secured the rights to rebuild on their homeworld.
This being leveraged by the successes of Caldari aligned mercenaries whose boots were on the ground.
For the price of a Titan that is a tactical victory well worth celebrating.
"That is not dead which can eternal lie,
And with strange aeons even death may die."
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Jonny D Buelle
Mors Effera
1405
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Posted - 2015.05.13 01:10:00 -
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True Adamance wrote:Jonny D Buelle wrote:Illustrious Sword Baron wrote:Jonny D Buelle wrote:Screw the state. Screw the federation. Screw the Empire. The Minmatar Republic is okay.
That being said I am obligated, as a Gallentean, to say this:
FREEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEDDDDDOOOOOOOOOOMMMMMM You disgust me. We seem to have that in common. I disgust my self. You also disgust me in the best possible way.
I take that as a compliment!
Today's special:
PAIN
Comes with a side of salads and mash potatoes.
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VAHZZ
2053
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Posted - 2015.05.13 02:25:00 -
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True Adamance wrote:Jonny D Buelle wrote:Illustrious Sword Baron wrote:Jonny D Buelle wrote:Screw the state. Screw the federation. Screw the Empire. The Minmatar Republic is okay.
That being said I am obligated, as a Gallentean, to say this:
FREEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEDDDDDOOOOOOOOOOMMMMMM You disgust me. We seem to have that in common. I disgust my self. You also disgust me in the best possible way.
What about me True?
"I bring nothing; I bless nothing, I save nothing, I just; erase. Completely. Shatter."
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