Hello Mercs Capital Monarchy is recruiting players with Full Proto Suit, 20 Million Isk (We don't pay for your stuff) 3.00 Weekly Kd Logis Need 1.50 Weekly Kd, Pc experience, Good Stalk of Imperial Guard Lp, 18 Years of age, Mature, No corp Hoppers. We qsnc daily, If u have a proto vehicle need a Adv suit but must use lp proto suit in pc. We do Ambush/Skirmish During day and FW at night. Once we have 50 Members we will get a alliance. No pc until 50 Members and we have to field 16 Members per pc. If u want to ring mail me in-game and we can work something out. Tax rate is 5%. We have a pub chat but it's for corp members and ringers only. If any corp wants to be our feeder corp mail me. this corp is for elite/Serious players. We do have fun though.

Sounds like fairly good parameters for a corporation, maybe a bit stringent. I would recommend maybe grouping the information in this thread better, maybe with the enter button as well as some bullets perhaps.