Maverick Hollms
State of Purgatory
General Tso's Alliance
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Posted - 2015.02.03 23:34:00 -
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This is is actually more information than story, but there will be story. >v>
Also, I may have missed something, but this is basically an in-depth description of characters, weapons, and other stuff in a fan-fiction story I'm making. I...don't know if this is considered a topic, but its vital.
Also I didn't know If I should do this in the Technology Forum thing or this one because of the huge amount of information...
CONFUSION.
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Squad Zero is a (fan-made :D) squad of mercenaries associated with the Black Eagles. Squad Zero only has 5 members, but is at most times, more powerful and effective than an entire team of mercenaries.
Squad Zero consists of one Leader, one Medic, two Cloakers and one hacker.*
:000: Vince Hollms - Squad Leader
:001: Soster Vilde - Squad Medic
:002: Atlas Cloas GÇ£Cloak DogGÇ¥ - Squad Lead Cloaker
:003: Terris Iovi - Squad Cloaker
:004: Kiskin Malis - Squad Hacking Specialist
*Squad Zero specializes in situations with high enemy security, and therefore has a squad member dedicated to hacking objectives, installations, vehicles, and null cannons
P) = Primary Weapon Slot
S) = Secondary Weapon Slot
E) = Equipment Slot
G) = Grenade Slot
:000: - Squad Lead
P) G.W0 Federation Prototype GÇ£Ion RifleGÇ¥
S) BE-G Silenced Tactical Assault Rifle
E) G.E0 Federation Prototype GÇ£Outrider DroneGÇ¥
:001: - Squad Medic
P) SosterGÇÖs C-MI Silenced Boundless Assault Combat Rifle
S) G.W0 Federation Prototype GÇ£Shock PistolGÇ¥
E) G.BM Wyrikomi Nanite Injector
E) BE-G Six Kin Triage Repair Tool
:002: - Squad Lead Cloaker
P) BE-G Creodron Breach Shotgun
S) BE-G Silenced Assault Rifle
E) BE-G GÇ£WraithGÇ¥ Cloak Field
:003: - Squad Cloaker
P) BE-G Creodron Breach Shotgun
S) BE-G Silenced Assault Rifle
E) BE-G GÇ£WraithGÇ¥ Cloak Field
G) G.W0 Federation Prototype GÇ£GÇÿCalidGÇÖ Overheat GrenadeGÇ¥
:004: - Squad Hacker
S) KiskinGÇÖs C-MI Boundless Breach Submachinegun
S) G.BM Nova Knives
E) G.E0 Federation Prototype GÇ£Hack BuddyGÇ¥
:More Information:
/BE-G\: Black Eagle Grade GÇ£BEGGÇ¥
GÇ£BEGGÇ¥ Weapons and equipment are specifically made for the Black Eagles in Squad Zero. All BE-G Issue weapons are better or equal to their prototype variants.
/G.BM\: Gallente Black Market
/C.MI\: Custom Minmatar Issued (weapons)
Some members of Squad Zero prefer Minmatar weapons, and have been allowed to create a custom weapon blueprint.
/Federation Prototypes\: Not available on the market
The Federation Prototypes are also specifically made for Squad Zero. But, unlike BE-G weapons and gear, these prototypes have no variants and are not available anywhere else.
G.W0 GÇ£Ion RifleGÇ¥:
The G.W0 Ion Rifle is a combination of the Ion Pistol and the Assault Rifle. It works much like the Scrambler Rifle, but has both an auto, and charge function.
G.W0 GÇ£Shock PistolGÇ¥:
The G.W0 Shock Pistol can penetrate through shields with almost unrealistic ease.
G.W0 GÇ£Overheat GrenadeGÇ¥:
The G.W0 Overheater is a special grenade that amazingly overheats weapons in its detonation radius. I also functions as a Flux Grenade, and can prolong the shield recharge delay.
G.E0 GÇ£Outrider DroneGÇ¥:
The G.E0 Outrider is a small deployable drone created specifically for Squad Zero. The Outrider has a simple** AI functionality that allows it to communicate with Squad Zero. The nickname GÇÿRyderGÇÖ was agreed on by the squad.
G.E0 GÇ£Hack BuddyGÇ¥:
The G.EO Hack Buddy is a special hud attachment that can make controlling hacked (or not hacked) Installations possible from as far as 150 meters.
**Simple, in the EVE world. As of now, in the real world, this would be an extremely complex AI
I feel like I missed something REALLY important. 
This has nothing to do with what you just read.
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True Adamance
Praetoriani Classiarii Templares
Praetoria Imperialis Excubitoris
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Posted - 2015.02.03 23:45:00 -
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Sounds interesting if you write more I'll be reading.
Just from a friendly advice perspective while I like the perspective of highly elite and well equipped Federal Spec Ops it could serve you will to make them powerful in moderation. It's sometimes very hard to sympathise and develop characters when you start a narrative off with them in a powerful position.
Good luck with it.
"This is the Usumgal boy, the exalted dragon, wreathed in the fires of heaven. He is a true symbol of God's majesty."
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Maverick Hollms
State of Purgatory
General Tso's Alliance
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Posted - 2015.02.03 23:54:00 -
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True Adamance wrote:Sounds interesting if you write more I'll be reading.
Just from a friendly advice perspective while I like the perspective of highly elite and well equipped Federal Spec Ops it could serve you will to make them powerful in moderation. It's sometimes very hard to sympathise and develop characters when you start a narrative off with them in a powerful position.
Good luck with it.
Thanks! And I did realize at a certain point that this might be a bit unrealistic even in Dust standards. I'd like to think that even though these are not your ordinary scouts and stuff, they are still very vulnerable to snipers, heavies...Maybe Nyain San...
Thanks for the tip :D
This has nothing to do with what you just read.
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