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Bright Steel
Horizons' Edge Proficiency V.
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Posted - 2014.09.25 16:18:00 -
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Trying to write a little short story in the new Eden universe based on dust characters and need a little help.
I need two large rival eve corps that would have enough money to pay radiculas amounts for special contracts.
And a dust corp that is large, powerful, and will to use cheap tactics. Such as trying to steal a contract out from under a smaller vet corp.
The Best Worst game you can't stop playing..... DUST
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Bright Steel
Horizons' Edge Proficiency V.
116
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Posted - 2014.09.25 16:22:00 -
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Also a planet is null sec and one in 4 sec
As well as a station controlled by one of the eve corps mentioned above that my small vet corp would be temperarly staying at.
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valad II
NoGameNoLife
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Posted - 2014.09.25 16:23:00 -
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Is Engrish your 2nd language too? OR do you have an editor that is going to check your grammar and spelling? Cuz holy smokes, it is terrible in your post. Stick to drawing picture books with stick figures. |
Dreis Shadowweaver
D.A.R.K L.E.G.I.O.N D.E.F.I.A.N.C.E
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Posted - 2014.09.25 16:43:00 -
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valad II wrote:Is Engrish your 2nd language too? OR do you have an editor that is going to check your grammar and spelling? Cuz holy smokes, it is terrible in your post. Stick to drawing picture books with stick figures. It's not that bad.
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Bright Steel
Horizons' Edge Proficiency V.
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Posted - 2014.09.25 18:00:00 -
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valad II wrote:Is Engrish your 2nd language too? OR do you have an editor that is going to check your grammar and spelling? Cuz holy smokes, it is terrible in your post. Stick to drawing picture books with stick figures. Let's judge your grammar skills in your text messages. It's a forum post, get over your self. Looking to do this for fun cause I like the idea. If you don't then go troll some one else.
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valad II
NoGameNoLife
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Posted - 2014.09.25 18:15:00 -
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Bright Steel wrote:valad II wrote:Is Engrish your 2nd language too? OR do you have an editor that is going to check your grammar and spelling? Cuz holy smokes, it is terrible in your post. Stick to drawing picture books with stick figures. Let's judge your grammar skills in your text messages. It's a forum post, get over your self. Looking to do this for fun cause I like the idea. If you don't then go troll some one else.
You don't even know the topic you wish to write about and ask the community for help? I gave you constructive criticism. Why do you think it would be fun to write about something you don't know about? What even makes you qualified to write about it?
You might as well ask for a job writing code for CCP. |
Bright Steel
Horizons' Edge Proficiency V.
118
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Posted - 2014.09.25 19:22:00 -
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valad II wrote:Bright Steel wrote:valad II wrote:Is Engrish your 2nd language too? OR do you have an editor that is going to check your grammar and spelling? Cuz holy smokes, it is terrible in your post. Stick to drawing picture books with stick figures. Let's judge your grammar skills in your text messages. It's a forum post, get over your self. Looking to do this for fun cause I like the idea. If you don't then go troll some one else. You don't even know the topic you wish to write about and ask the community for help? I gave you constructive criticism. Why do you think it would be fun to write about something you don't know about? What even makes you qualified to write about it? You might as well ask for a job writing code for CCP. So I'm a casual dust player that loves sci if military space operas. I don't get to PC because I'm not dedicated enough to get involved in the PC crowd.
I had an idea that I thought would be fun to entertain myself about the back story of a PC match and then I wanted to play with some strategy.
Then I thought others may enjoy it as something simple and entertaining but by no means professional sci fi. So I wanted to throw some real names in there and thought someone on the forums might be able to pull some out of their heads. But I guess that's not good enough.
ITS A GAME and I'm just trying to have fun with it.
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Dreis Shadowweaver
D.A.R.K L.E.G.I.O.N D.E.F.I.A.N.C.E
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Posted - 2014.09.25 19:31:00 -
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0uter.Heaven and Molon Labe. are two corps that spring to mind.
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Dreis Shadowweaver
D.A.R.K L.E.G.I.O.N D.E.F.I.A.N.C.E
206
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Posted - 2014.09.25 19:32:00 -
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Dreis Shadowweaver wrote:0uter.Heaven and Molon Labe. are two corps that spring to mind. Nvm, srry, I thought you said Dust corps...
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Omega Black Zero
Condotta Rouvenor Gallente Federation
120
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Posted - 2014.09.25 19:35:00 -
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If you want to write about something you have no knowledge about, get out there and research it. There are EVE wikis out there, and plenty of articles to describe the more intense events in EVE. If you are really interested in writing about EVE, then you need to know EVE first. |
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Bright Steel
Horizons' Edge Proficiency V.
120
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Posted - 2014.09.25 19:37:00 -
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Dreis Shadowweaver wrote:Dreis Shadowweaver wrote:0uter.Heaven and Molon Labe. are two corps that spring to mind. Nvm, srry, I thought you said Dust corps... Thanks. The thought was to have two competing eve corps. One contracts a small corp to secure some new proto weapons from a research complex on Planet X but the other eve corp contracted the other dust corp to steal the crates first.
The small corp arrives at the complex just as the other corp is mopping ip he local defense forces and now you have a PC battle....
The Best Worst game you can't stop playing..... DUST
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Kaze Eyrou
Molon Labe. General Tso's Alliance
662
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Posted - 2014.09.25 19:45:00 -
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Bright Steel: bit of advice, if you click on the name, you can hide any posts. valad is just a forum alt of a certain bad youtuber looking for attention.
On topic: Some EVE corps that were powerful that come to mind are Goonswarm and Pandemic Legion. There more you can draw from, just look up the EVE tournaments. However, would they CARE about special contracts would be a different question altogether. (From my knowledge, EVE pilots see Dust as a nuisance - taking away from development on EVE - and a failure.)
Side note: Wouldn't this be better in Dust 514 Fiction section?
Closed Beta Vet // Logi Bro // @KazeEyrou
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CommanderBolt
KILL-EM-QUICK RISE of LEGION
1767
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Posted - 2014.09.25 19:47:00 -
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Two EVE corps that certainly fit the bill are
BOB (Band Of Brothers / Kenzoku) And Goonswarm.
You will be able to find a ton of material on google or something to get a feel of what happened.
"Also I think knives are a good idea, big f**k-off shiny ones"
"Guns for show, Knives for a pro"
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valad II
NoGameNoLife
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Posted - 2014.09.25 19:50:00 -
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Kaze Eyrou wrote:Bright Steel: bit of advice, if you click on the name, you can hide any posts. valad is just a forum alt of a certain bad youtuber looking for attention. On topic: Some EVE corps that were powerful that come to mind are Goonswarm and Pandemic Legion. There more you can draw from, just look up the EVE tournaments. However, would they CARE about special contracts would be a different question altogether. (From my knowledge, EVE pilots see Dust as a nuisance - taking away from development on EVE - and a failure.) Side note: Wouldn't this be better in Dust 514 Fiction section? LOL there ya go thinking I am KTB. Do your research. Find the truth before you speak so you don't look like a fool. Which makes it even funnier that it is still believed. |
valad II
NoGameNoLife
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Posted - 2014.09.25 19:51:00 -
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Bright Steel wrote:Dreis Shadowweaver wrote:Dreis Shadowweaver wrote:0uter.Heaven and Molon Labe. are two corps that spring to mind. Nvm, srry, I thought you said Dust corps... Thanks. The thought was to have two competing eve corps. One contracts a small corp to secure some new proto weapons from a research complex on Planet X but the other eve corp contracted the other dust corp to steal the crates first. The small corp arrives at the complex just as the other corp is mopping ip he local defense forces and now you have a PC battle....
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=CfW4XBP7A7c&list=UUlbc3XILbKpyQGjsH9pgOgw
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Iron Wolf Saber
Den of Swords
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Posted - 2014.09.25 21:42:00 -
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Duvolle and Rhoden has under dealings before but both are pretty large and rhoden done cleaned up since then.
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True Adamance
Praetoriani Classiarii Templares Praetoria Imperialis Excubitoris
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Posted - 2014.09.25 21:57:00 -
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Bright Steel wrote:Trying to write a little short story in the new Eden universe based on dust characters and need a little help.
I need two large rival eve corps that would have enough money to pay radiculas amounts for special contracts.
And a dust corp that is large, powerful, and will to use cheap tactics. Such as trying to steal a contract out from under a smaller vet corp.
Why not just make those up?
New Eden is a big place. Doesn't matter what the corporation names are...in fact it wouldn't even matter, you could set this in High Sec and it would still be as good any anything else.... Null is a stagnating pit of opportunism.
Well Providence is heating up for CVA a Provibloc and Hero.....but that's about it.
Hell the other day I hear about a Dreadnought being built in a wormhole (5-6 Billion ISK Investment) to destroy a Large Control Tower in order to salvage an Extra Large Maintenance Array (10+ Billion ISK item). These guys also made off with another 15 Billion in Assets and Ships.
"We were commanded to burn the system...We did. I mourn the loss of the innocents caught in our fires" -Kador Ouryon
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Bright Steel
Horizons' Edge Proficiency V.
123
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Posted - 2014.09.26 13:23:00 -
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Kaze Eyrou wrote:Bright Steel: bit of advice, if you click on the name, you can hide any posts. valad is just a forum alt of a certain bad youtuber looking for attention. On topic: Some EVE corps that were powerful that come to mind are Goonswarm and Pandemic Legion. There more you can draw from, just look up the EVE tournaments. However, would they CARE about special contracts would be a different question altogether. (From my knowledge, EVE pilots see Dust as a nuisance - taking away from development on EVE - and a failure.) Side note: Wouldn't this be better in Dust 514 Fiction section? Foregot about that forum.... Thanks
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Bright Steel
Horizons' Edge Proficiency V.
123
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Posted - 2014.09.26 13:26:00 -
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True Adamance wrote:Bright Steel wrote:Trying to write a little short story in the new Eden universe based on dust characters and need a little help.
I need two large rival eve corps that would have enough money to pay radiculas amounts for special contracts.
And a dust corp that is large, powerful, and will to use cheap tactics. Such as trying to steal a contract out from under a smaller vet corp. Why not just make those up? New Eden is a big place. Doesn't matter what the corporation names are...in fact it wouldn't even matter, you could set this in High Sec and it would still be as good any anything else.... Null is a stagnating pit of opportunism. Well Providence is heating up for CVA a Provibloc and Hero.....but that's about it. Hell the other day I hear about a Dreadnought being built in a wormhole (5-6 Billion ISK Investment) to destroy a Large Control Tower in order to salvage an Extra Large Maintenance Array (10+ Billion ISK item). These guys also made off with another 15 Billion in Assets and Ships. I suck at making up names... Took me weeks to name my dog and ended up with bruster... Not very original LOL.
I can think of story lines that would be cool and half way express them in words but suck at names.
Thanks for the help
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