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Thal Vadam
Praetoriani Classiarii Templares Praetoria Imperialis Excubitoris
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Posted - 2014.10.02 03:53:00 -
[181] - Quote
I'll get a post up sometime tomorrow
"The Enemy has no idea of your true power. Let us show them! Thal to his men during the siege of Huola
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Galm Fae
Eskola Ergonomics
330
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Posted - 2014.10.02 03:56:00 -
[182] - Quote
True, yeah, loading bay for freight. Really, I wouldn't if you diverted from that a bit though and just did what you wanted to. It's been a whole year afterall, things change.
Kirjuun! Uakan!
Teknikiara!
Kanpai kameitsamuu!
Ra ra ra!
> --Confirmed Badguy Cera YC116--
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True Adamance
Praetoriani Classiarii Templares Praetoria Imperialis Excubitoris
13397
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Posted - 2014.10.02 04:05:00 -
[183] - Quote
Galm Fae wrote:True, yeah, loading bay for freight. Really, I wouldn't if you diverted from that a bit though and just did what you wanted to. It's been a whole year afterall, things change.
Nah I prefer it this way to be honest.
"We were commanded to burn the system...We did. I mourn the loss of the innocents caught in our fires" -Kador Ouryon
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Galm Fae
Eskola Ergonomics
330
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Posted - 2014.10.03 04:52:00 -
[184] - Quote
Yikes, quiet. I hope I didn't scare CJ off.
Kirjuun! Uakan!
Teknikiara!
Kanpai kameitsamuu!
Ra ra ra!
> --Confirmed Badguy Cera YC116--
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Clockwork Jester
Namtar Elite Gallente Federation
60
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Posted - 2014.10.03 09:05:00 -
[185] - Quote
Galm Fae wrote:Yikes, quiet. I hope I didn't scare CJ off.
Nah still here, just had a busy day. I'll get a post up today though. |
Crownrule
Praetoriani Classiarii Templares Praetoria Imperialis Excubitoris
23
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Posted - 2014.10.04 05:27:00 -
[186] - Quote
Ok here we go....
Name: Crownrule
Callsign:CrackedSky
Features: medium brown hair which swerves to the right, a noticeable scar on his nose. Dark green eyes with a lighter shade inside of them. A groomed beard and a cybernetic eye. Is in overall great shape and is a good shot.
Outfit: baseliner is a black leather jacket with pouches on it, (has a hood inside of it too), Dark blue cargo pants and Brown knee high boots that are easy to run in and are very light, all clothes are somewhat tight but are free moving.
History: Crownrule had a rough life when his father died serving the Amarr on active duty, he was then determined to gai revenge and ended his childhood at the age of ten and rose through his academic career as one of the youngest graduating class members at the battle institute where he got top marks. Later he fought as lone mercenary hunting down his fathers assailants. Once they were all dead he decided to enlist in the amarr empires ranks and soon found himself with the classiari. Now he has learned more than capable of a templar his age and still urges to learn new things and struke down his lords enemies, but lately he has had some quesrions about his lord and the amarr (no one knows cause he hasnt told anyone yet, may reveal it here soon.)
"By His light, and His will"
- The Scriptures, Gheinok the First, 12:32
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Galm Fae
Eskola Ergonomics
331
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Posted - 2014.10.04 05:54:00 -
[187] - Quote
Crownrule wrote:Ok here we go....
Name: Crownrule
Callsign:CrackedSky
Features: medium brown hair which swerves to the right, a noticeable scar on his nose. Dark green eyes with a lighter shade inside of them. A groomed beard and a cybernetic eye. Is in overall great shape and is a good shot.
Outfit: baseliner is a black leather jacket with pouches on it, (has a hood inside of it too), Dark blue cargo pants and Brown knee high boots that are easy to run in and are very light, all clothes are somewhat tight but are free moving.
History: Crownrule had a rough life when his father died serving the Amarr on active duty, he was then determined to gai revenge and ended his childhood at the age of ten and rose through his academic career as one of the youngest graduating class members at the battle institute where he got top marks. Later he fought as lone mercenary hunting down his fathers assailants. Once they were all dead he decided to enlist in the amarr empires ranks and soon found himself with the classiari. Now he has learned more than capable of a templar his age and still urges to learn new things and struke down his lords enemies, but lately he has had some quesrions about his lord and the amarr (no one knows cause he hasnt told anyone yet, may reveal it here soon.)
Personality:is very perceptive at times and is very quick, has some mental problems that make him confused for a moment and cansometimes forget things. He has a wound on his chest (the wound he suffered from my last story) that can sometimes hurt time to time and is susceptible to more pain. He is somewhat shy at times but when he knows everyone he seems to take charge and tries to decide the best possible route to take. He is patient and a excellent shot. His hand to hand and sword skills are also excellent. He excells at a range of things but is not very good at letring himself rest and usually exhausts himself Sorry man, we are way too far into the RP to accept new members.
Kirjuun! Uakan!
Teknikiara!
Kanpai kameitsamuu!
Ra ra ra!
> --Confirmed Badguy Cera YC116--
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True Adamance
Praetoriani Classiarii Templares Praetoria Imperialis Excubitoris
13404
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Posted - 2014.10.05 19:34:00 -
[188] - Quote
Back with post in the works right now.
If you don't mind Galm I am going to send an outline of Kador's plot to your eve toon, that way you can advise if anything breaks canon.
"We were commanded to burn the system...We did. I mourn the loss of the innocents caught in our fires" -Kador Ouryon
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Galm Fae
Eskola Ergonomics
331
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Posted - 2014.10.05 22:14:00 -
[189] - Quote
Alright, I'll look into that. I'm going to be a bit swarmed with classwork this week but I'll try to stay on top of this. My eve toon is currently out of Plex though, so give me a bit to renew a subscription
Kirjuun! Uakan!
Teknikiara!
Kanpai kameitsamuu!
Ra ra ra!
> --Confirmed Badguy Cera YC116--
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True Adamance
Praetoriani Classiarii Templares Praetoria Imperialis Excubitoris
13404
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Posted - 2014.10.05 22:38:00 -
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Galm Fae wrote:Alright, I'll look into that. I'm going to be a bit swarmed with classwork this week but I'll try to stay on top of this. My eve toon is currently out of Plex though, so give me a bit to renew a subscription
Oh don't worry about that then might be some other way to get it to you.
"We were commanded to burn the system...We did. I mourn the loss of the innocents caught in our fires" -Kador Ouryon
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Vyzion Eyri
The Southern Legion Final Resolution.
2495
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Posted - 2014.10.06 12:51:00 -
[191] - Quote
Apologies if the setting around the arena isn't what you imagined it to be. I can edit it if you guys want. I avoided describing the arena itself though, so that's not too bad.
Also, 'peeping holder' is my New Eden-ised version of peeping Tom.
> Quis custodiet ipsos custodes?
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Galm Fae
Eskola Ergonomics
331
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Posted - 2014.10.06 15:04:00 -
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Post inbound today, which should mark a big shift in the RP as the action finally starts to heat up. Get ready everyone!
Kirjuun! Uakan!
Teknikiara!
Kanpai kameitsamuu!
Ra ra ra!
> --Confirmed Badguy Cera YC116--
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True Adamance
Praetoriani Classiarii Templares Praetoria Imperialis Excubitoris
13404
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Posted - 2014.10.06 19:39:00 -
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Galm Fae wrote:Post inbound today, which should mark a big shift in the RP as the action finally starts to heat up. Get ready everyone!
Sweet btw have you considered having this RP extend over days?
Also will be ready.
"We were commanded to burn the system...We did. I mourn the loss of the innocents caught in our fires" -Kador Ouryon
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Galm Fae
Eskola Ergonomics
331
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Posted - 2014.10.06 19:43:00 -
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True Adamance wrote:Galm Fae wrote:Post inbound today, which should mark a big shift in the RP as the action finally starts to heat up. Get ready everyone! Sweet btw have you considered having this RP extend over days? Also will be ready. When you say over days, you mean extending the time on the station for a while? I don't see why not, so long as people are still enjoying posting and aren't getting bored. I'm just so worried that this is moving too slow for everyone or it's not fun.
Kirjuun! Uakan!
Teknikiara!
Kanpai kameitsamuu!
Ra ra ra!
> --Confirmed Badguy Cera YC116--
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Clockwork Jester
Namtar Elite Gallente Federation
60
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Posted - 2014.10.06 21:41:00 -
[195] - Quote
Galm Fae wrote:True Adamance wrote:Galm Fae wrote:Post inbound today, which should mark a big shift in the RP as the action finally starts to heat up. Get ready everyone! Sweet btw have you considered having this RP extend over days? Also will be ready. When you say over days, you mean extending the time on the station for a while? I don't see why not, so long as people are still enjoying posting and aren't getting bored. I'm just so worried that this is moving too slow for everyone or it's not fun.
I'm good and wouldn't mind extending it, but loosing people is a possibility you need to worry about. Honestly though as long as the quality remains where it is at that shouldn't be much of a problem. |
True Adamance
Praetoriani Classiarii Templares Praetoria Imperialis Excubitoris
13404
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Posted - 2014.10.06 22:22:00 -
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Clockwork Jester wrote:Galm Fae wrote:True Adamance wrote:Galm Fae wrote:Post inbound today, which should mark a big shift in the RP as the action finally starts to heat up. Get ready everyone! Sweet btw have you considered having this RP extend over days? Also will be ready. When you say over days, you mean extending the time on the station for a while? I don't see why not, so long as people are still enjoying posting and aren't getting bored. I'm just so worried that this is moving too slow for everyone or it's not fun. I'm good and wouldn't mind extending it, but loosing people is a possibility you need to worry about. Honestly though as long as the quality remains where it is at that shouldn't be much of a problem.
I meant in terms of expanding the and are I suppose markers for us RPers to progress out plots in prep for Act 1, 2, and finally 3.
I mean for example:
Galm talks to Gabrac....etc etc etc Gets wasted. Goes to sleep. Rpers find their own places to "bed down" as it were. Next day pit fights and more bars. Sleepy byes. We blow the hell out of the station.
Just a thought.
"We were commanded to burn the system...We did. I mourn the loss of the innocents caught in our fires" -Kador Ouryon
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True Adamance
Praetoriani Classiarii Templares Praetoria Imperialis Excubitoris
13418
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Posted - 2014.10.07 23:25:00 -
[197] - Quote
Bump
"We were commanded to burn the system...We did. I mourn the loss of the innocents caught in our fires" -Kador Ouryon
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Galm Fae
Eskola Ergonomics
331
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Posted - 2014.10.08 01:27:00 -
[198] - Quote
I don't think thats a bad idea honestly, but first we need to just make sure that this thing is moving. I'm still waiting for a quick response from CJ before posting again.
Kirjuun! Uakan!
Teknikiara!
Kanpai kameitsamuu!
Ra ra ra!
> --Confirmed Badguy Cera YC116--
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True Adamance
Praetoriani Classiarii Templares Praetoria Imperialis Excubitoris
13420
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Posted - 2014.10.08 01:41:00 -
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Galm Fae wrote:I don't think thats a bad idea honestly, but first we need to just make sure that this thing is moving. I'm still waiting for a quick response from CJ before posting again.
I only suggested it because.... IMO it really does present an opportunity we as RPers have not yet encountered. A Dead line to get out stories all progressed up to the same point again.
E.G- If you want to end the conversation with Gabrac and turn in, players know to get their characters through any additional content and ready for the next part.
I mean I am more than willing to keep posting content......I have pages of stuff if I am required to keep bumping this plot line inclusive of introductions, dialogues, and all the gribbly bits no one wants to read about.
"We were commanded to burn the system...We did. I mourn the loss of the innocents caught in our fires" -Kador Ouryon
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Galm Fae
Eskola Ergonomics
331
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Posted - 2014.10.08 01:53:00 -
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True Adamance wrote:Galm Fae wrote:I don't think thats a bad idea honestly, but first we need to just make sure that this thing is moving. I'm still waiting for a quick response from CJ before posting again. I only suggested it because.... IMO it really does present an opportunity we as RPers have not yet encountered. A Dead line to get out stories all progressed up to the same point again. E.G- If you want to end the conversation with Gabrac and turn in, players know to get their characters through any additional content and ready for the next part. I mean I am more than willing to keep posting content......I have pages of stuff if I am required to keep bumping this plot line inclusive of introductions, dialogues, and all the gribbly bits no one wants to read about. As long as everyone keeps bringing content, I am behind this idea 110%, honestly. It even gives me a few ideas of how to progress the plot. Afterall, the whole point of Alcyone was more to be a psychological exploration than a straight brawl. It'd love to see how people can dissect their own characters if given enough time and a setting like Snowfall.
Kirjuun! Uakan!
Teknikiara!
Kanpai kameitsamuu!
Ra ra ra!
> --Confirmed Badguy Cera YC116--
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True Adamance
Praetoriani Classiarii Templares Praetoria Imperialis Excubitoris
13420
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Posted - 2014.10.08 02:17:00 -
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Galm Fae wrote:True Adamance wrote:Galm Fae wrote:I don't think thats a bad idea honestly, but first we need to just make sure that this thing is moving. I'm still waiting for a quick response from CJ before posting again. I only suggested it because.... IMO it really does present an opportunity we as RPers have not yet encountered. A Dead line to get out stories all progressed up to the same point again. E.G- If you want to end the conversation with Gabrac and turn in, players know to get their characters through any additional content and ready for the next part. I mean I am more than willing to keep posting content......I have pages of stuff if I am required to keep bumping this plot line inclusive of introductions, dialogues, and all the gribbly bits no one wants to read about. As long as everyone keeps bringing content, I am behind this idea 110%, honestly. It even gives me a few ideas of how to progress the plot. Afterall, the whole point of Alcyone was more to be a psychological exploration than a straight brawl. It'd love to see how people can dissect their own characters if given enough time and a setting like Snowfall.
I hope people do continue..... otherwise its just hyper religious GI Joe goes to Vegas.
"We were commanded to burn the system...We did. I mourn the loss of the innocents caught in our fires" -Kador Ouryon
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Clockwork Jester
Namtar Elite Gallente Federation
60
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Posted - 2014.10.08 02:27:00 -
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True Adamance wrote:Galm Fae wrote:True Adamance wrote:Galm Fae wrote:I don't think thats a bad idea honestly, but first we need to just make sure that this thing is moving. I'm still waiting for a quick response from CJ before posting again. I only suggested it because.... IMO it really does present an opportunity we as RPers have not yet encountered. A Dead line to get out stories all progressed up to the same point again. E.G- If you want to end the conversation with Gabrac and turn in, players know to get their characters through any additional content and ready for the next part. I mean I am more than willing to keep posting content......I have pages of stuff if I am required to keep bumping this plot line inclusive of introductions, dialogues, and all the gribbly bits no one wants to read about. As long as everyone keeps bringing content, I am behind this idea 110%, honestly. It even gives me a few ideas of how to progress the plot. Afterall, the whole point of Alcyone was more to be a psychological exploration than a straight brawl. It'd love to see how people can dissect their own characters if given enough time and a setting like Snowfall. I hope people do continue..... otherwise its just hyper religious GI Joe goes to Vegas.
That sounds like the plot of a horrible action movie... |
True Adamance
Praetoriani Classiarii Templares Praetoria Imperialis Excubitoris
13420
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Posted - 2014.10.08 02:37:00 -
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Clockwork Jester wrote:True Adamance wrote:Galm Fae wrote:True Adamance wrote:Galm Fae wrote:I don't think thats a bad idea honestly, but first we need to just make sure that this thing is moving. I'm still waiting for a quick response from CJ before posting again. I only suggested it because.... IMO it really does present an opportunity we as RPers have not yet encountered. A Dead line to get out stories all progressed up to the same point again. E.G- If you want to end the conversation with Gabrac and turn in, players know to get their characters through any additional content and ready for the next part. I mean I am more than willing to keep posting content......I have pages of stuff if I am required to keep bumping this plot line inclusive of introductions, dialogues, and all the gribbly bits no one wants to read about. As long as everyone keeps bringing content, I am behind this idea 110%, honestly. It even gives me a few ideas of how to progress the plot. Afterall, the whole point of Alcyone was more to be a psychological exploration than a straight brawl. It'd love to see how people can dissect their own characters if given enough time and a setting like Snowfall. I hope people do continue..... otherwise its just hyper religious GI Joe goes to Vegas. That sounds like the plot of a horrible action movie...
Yeah by the way guys since you two are pretty good at it. Let me know if my dialogues suck. I'd say depending on the situation it's the weakest aspect of my writing.
"We were commanded to burn the system...We did. I mourn the loss of the innocents caught in our fires" -Kador Ouryon
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True Adamance
Praetoriani Classiarii Templares Praetoria Imperialis Excubitoris
13426
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Posted - 2014.10.08 23:49:00 -
[204] - Quote
Ugh I have 20000 characters of plot driven content set to go......
"We were commanded to burn the system...We did. I mourn the loss of the innocents caught in our fires" -Kador Ouryon
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Clockwork Jester
Namtar Elite Gallente Federation
62
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Posted - 2014.10.09 00:01:00 -
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True Adamance wrote:Yeah by the way guys since you two are pretty good at it. Let me know if my dialogues suck. I'd say depending on the situation it's the weakest aspect of my writing.
I have 20000 characters of plot driven content set to go......
Dialogue is hard. For the most part its the only way others know what a character is thinking. It can also be hard at times to keep it in character in certain situations. Managing to keep a character consistent is difficult, but you are doing fine.
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Mex-0
G0DS AM0NG MEN General Tso's Alliance
76
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Posted - 2014.10.09 00:19:00 -
[206] - Quote
What is this section for? Die hard dust addicts?
Dedicated Scout and Nova Knifer.
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True Adamance
Praetoriani Classiarii Templares Praetoria Imperialis Excubitoris
13427
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Posted - 2014.10.09 00:38:00 -
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Clockwork Jester wrote:True Adamance wrote:Yeah by the way guys since you two are pretty good at it. Let me know if my dialogues suck. I'd say depending on the situation it's the weakest aspect of my writing.
I have 20000 characters of plot driven content set to go...... Dialogue is hard. For the most part its the only way others know what a character is thinking. It can also be hard at times to keep it in character in certain situations. Managing to keep a character consistent is difficult, but you are doing fine. That is a bad thing?
Especially when that character is lying through his teeth/regressing to how he was 10 years prior.
Kador was a real ******* back then.
"We were commanded to burn the system...We did. I mourn the loss of the innocents caught in our fires" -Kador Ouryon
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Thal Vadam
Praetoriani Classiarii Templares Praetoria Imperialis Excubitoris
36
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Posted - 2014.10.09 00:48:00 -
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Mex-0 wrote:What is this section for? Die hard dust addicts?
No, Just people who enjoy another side of it
"The Enemy has no idea of your true power. Let us show them! Thal to his men during the siege of Huola
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True Adamance
Praetoriani Classiarii Templares Praetoria Imperialis Excubitoris
13427
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Posted - 2014.10.09 01:15:00 -
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Thal Vadam wrote:Mex-0 wrote:What is this section for? Die hard dust addicts? No, Just people who enjoy another side of it
Your turn Thal!
"We were commanded to burn the system...We did. I mourn the loss of the innocents caught in our fires" -Kador Ouryon
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Thal Vadam
Praetoriani Classiarii Templares Praetoria Imperialis Excubitoris
36
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Posted - 2014.10.09 04:22:00 -
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True Adamance wrote:Thal Vadam wrote:Mex-0 wrote:What is this section for? Die hard dust addicts? No, Just people who enjoy another side of it Your turn Thal!
I'll get something up tomorrow. Got to get to bed.
"The Enemy has no idea of your true power. Let us show them! Thal to his men during the siege of Huola
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