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Galm Fae wrote:

I'm no so sure there's much that you'd need to revise other than Galms reaction to the who event of being flashed by Mila. A huge part of the reason why Galm wants Snowfall Station to die is because it has a horrible habit of swallowing people up and gradually stripping them from any sort of humanity. Grabarc himself isn't even so much the problem, he just happens to be the man that the station chose to carry out its will. It's this living thing that corrupts over time and to him Mila just seems like another person corrupted by it's filth, and due in no small part to his own history as a fighter. Being flashed for him is tantamount to being sneezed on by a plague victim, it's just a symptom of a terminal affliction that will either leave her dead or something far worse.

Worse yet even Kador, the shining templar that he brought on board because he was so sure he'd burn away such a place without question, is falling for its charm. You can see where Galm would start to get frustrated.

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Thal Vadam Praetoriani Classiarii Templares Praetoria Imperialis Excubitoris 77	Posted - 2015.02.28 18:42:00 - [421] - Quote Waiting for Junko "I am your instrument my Lord, point me to the foes of our Empire." Thal's prayer after becoming a Immortal
Clockwork Jester Namtar Elite Gallente Federation 72	Posted - 2015.03.01 03:12:00 - [422] - Quote Sorry for bailing on this without saying anything. Things came up and events happened. Glad to see this is still going though.
True Adamance Praetoriani Classiarii Templares Praetoria Imperialis Excubitoris 17371	Posted - 2015.03.01 07:23:00 - [423] - Quote Clockwork Jester wrote: Sorry for bailing on this without saying anything. Things came up and events happened. Glad to see this is still going though. POST ME BUCKO! "This is the Usumgal boy, the exalted dragon, wreathed in the fires of heaven. He is a true symbol of God's majesty."
Clockwork Jester Namtar Elite Gallente Federation 73	Posted - 2015.03.01 09:24:00 - [424] - Quote True Adamance wrote: Clockwork Jester wrote: Sorry for bailing on this without saying anything. Things came up and events happened. Glad to see this is still going though. POST ME BUCKO! I don't even know what that means.
True Adamance Praetoriani Classiarii Templares Praetoria Imperialis Excubitoris 17371	Posted - 2015.03.01 09:29:00 - [425] - Quote Clockwork Jester wrote: True Adamance wrote: Clockwork Jester wrote: Sorry for bailing on this without saying anything. Things came up and events happened. Glad to see this is still going though. POST ME BUCKO! I don't even know what that means. Good because neither do I. "This is the Usumgal boy, the exalted dragon, wreathed in the fires of heaven. He is a true symbol of God's majesty."
Clockwork Jester Namtar Elite Gallente Federation 73	Posted - 2015.03.01 10:14:00 - [426] - Quote Good to know we are still on the same page.
Galm Fae Eskola Ergonomics 376	Posted - 2015.03.04 18:11:00 - [427] - Quote I'll get right back on this post just as soon as I can. A bit busy with midterms right now but I'll be on a minivacation this weekend and will have time to get a good post in this weekend. If we need to write some people out of the plot I can manage that, but now that we're all back WE. WILL. FINISH THIS. *Kirjuun! Uakan! Teknikiara! Kanpai kameitsamuu! Ra ra ra!* > --Confirmed Badguy Cera YC116--
True Adamance Praetoriani Classiarii Templares Praetoria Imperialis Excubitoris 17473	Posted - 2015.03.05 01:09:00 - [428] - Quote Galm Fae wrote: I'll get right back on this post just as soon as I can. A bit busy with midterms right now but I'll be on a minivacation this weekend and will have time to get a good post in this weekend. If we need to write some people out of the plot I can manage that, but now that we're all back WE. WILL. FINISH THIS. Damn straight I'm editing a posts worth of story right now. "This is the Usumgal boy, the exalted dragon, wreathed in the fires of heaven. He is a true symbol of God's majesty."
Galm Fae Eskola Ergonomics 376	Posted - 2015.03.10 08:20:00 - [429] - Quote True Adamance wrote: Galm Fae wrote: I'll get right back on this post just as soon as I can. A bit busy with midterms right now but I'll be on a minivacation this weekend and will have time to get a good post in this weekend. If we need to write some people out of the plot I can manage that, but now that we're all back WE. WILL. FINISH THIS. Damn straight I'm editing a posts worth of story right now. To clarify, I've been waiting on this post for a follow up. *Kirjuun! Uakan! Teknikiara! Kanpai kameitsamuu! Ra ra ra!* > --Confirmed Badguy Cera YC116--
True Adamance Praetoriani Classiarii Templares Praetoria Imperialis Excubitoris 17544	Posted - 2015.03.10 09:36:00 - [430] - Quote Galm Fae wrote: True Adamance wrote: Galm Fae wrote: I'll get right back on this post just as soon as I can. A bit busy with midterms right now but I'll be on a minivacation this weekend and will have time to get a good post in this weekend. If we need to write some people out of the plot I can manage that, but now that we're all back WE. WILL. FINISH THIS. Damn straight I'm editing a posts worth of story right now. To clarify, I've been waiting on this post for a follow up. **** okay lemme get it all together. "This is the Usumgal boy, the exalted dragon, wreathed in the fires of heaven. He is a true symbol of God's majesty."

Galm Fae Eskola Ergonomics 378	Posted - 2015.03.25 01:23:00 - [431] - Quote I'll try to pick up the pace this week everyone. Expect another fight sequence once Thal is finished. This on is going to be bloody. *Kirjuun! Uakan! Teknikiara! Kanpai kameitsamuu! Ra ra ra!* > --Confirmed Badguy Cera YC116--
True Adamance Praetoriani Classiarii Templares Praetoria Imperialis Excubitoris 17847	Posted - 2015.03.27 00:52:00 - [432] - Quote Been I'll the last few days but watching the thread come back to life. Have a piece to put in but I've been reading Lovecraft recently and am somewhat influenced by it. Raphael: I'm warning you. Do not leave me here. I will find you. Castiel: Maybe one day. Today you're my little bitch
Galm Fae Eskola Ergonomics 381	Posted - 2015.05.07 20:50:00 - [433] - Quote I has literally been five weeks since I've done something even remotely Dust related. It might be time to fix that now that I'm done with finals. *Kirjuun! Uakan! Teknikiara! Kanpai kameitsamuu! Ra ra ra!* > --Confirmed Badguy Cera YC116--
True Adamance Praetoriani Classiarii Templares Praetoria Imperialis Excubitoris 19	Posted - 2015.05.25 04:20:00 - [434] - Quote Oi Galm bruv. U wot m8? Get your post done or I'mma go get some Fruit Loops and you won't like how they are used. "Crush all who complain!" `- Arkena Wyrnspire`
Galm Fae Eskola Ergonomics 395	Posted - 2015.05.25 06:23:00 - [435] - Quote True Adamance wrote: Oi Galm bruv. U wot m8? Get your post done or I'mma go get some Fruit Loops and you won't like how they are used. I'll see what I can get done right quick, but I'm a little stuck if I'm being honest. I guess a quick 'hello Kador' post will suffice. *Kirjuun! Uakan! Teknikiara! Kanpai kameitsamuu! Ra ra ra!* > --Confirmed Badguy Cera YC116--
Ralden Caster Random Gunz Rise Of Legion. 241	Posted - 2015.05.27 02:41:00 - [436] - Quote To be brutally honest, outside of what we learn from Dust, I know very little of the lore. Can someone give me a bit of background on the different bloodlines of the races? (Preferably the Gallente ones) Have you ever looked up at the stars and realize that somewhere, out there, there is always something ON FIRE?
Galm Fae Eskola Ergonomics 403	Posted - 2015.06.09 08:31:00 - [437] - Quote Sorry for the slight delay, another post will be up in the next few hours. *Kirjuun! Uakan! Teknikiara! Kanpai kameitsamuu! Ra ra ra!* > --Confirmed Badguy Cera YC116--
True Adamance Praetoriani Classiarii Templares Praetoria Imperialis Excubitoris 19	Posted - 2015.06.10 23:01:00 - [438] - Quote Galm Fae wrote: Sorry for the slight delay, another post will be up in the next few hours. Might want to read that edit to the Makoai post. I think you'd like it. PIXIE merchandising at it's finest. "Crush all who complain!" `- Arkena Wyrnspire`
Galm Fae Eskola Ergonomics 408	Posted - 2015.06.11 04:53:00 - [439] - Quote Words can not describe how happy that made me. *Kirjuun! Uakan! Teknikiara! Kanpai kameitsamuu! Ra ra ra!* > --Killer of Snowfall Station--
Galm Fae Eskola Ergonomics 410	Posted - 2015.06.12 00:43:00 - [440] - Quote If I need to, I can retcon part of my last post to make the story flow better. Especially since when I wrote it I had missed the whole part about Mila. *Kirjuun! Uakan! Teknikiara! Kanpai kameitsamuu! Ra ra ra!* > --Killer of Snowfall Station--

True Adamance Praetoriani Classiarii Templares Praetoria Imperialis Excubitoris 19	Posted - 2015.06.17 22:55:00 - [441] - Quote Galm Fae wrote: If I need to, I can retcon part of my last post to make the story flow better. Especially since when I wrote it I had missed the whole part about Mila. Nope it leads on well I think. Could I perhaps trouble you for a short dialogue puppetmastering? Just to make the conversation flow slightly better? "Crush all who complain!" `- Arkena Wyrnspire`
Galm Fae Eskola Ergonomics 419	Posted - 2015.06.18 00:04:00 - [442] - Quote True Adamance wrote: Galm Fae wrote: If I need to, I can retcon part of my last post to make the story flow better. Especially since when I wrote it I had missed the whole part about Mila. Nope it leads on well I think. Could I perhaps trouble you for a short dialogue puppetmastering? Just to make the conversation flow slightly better? Go for it. I trust you well enough with Galm as a character. *Kirjuun! Uakan! Teknikiara! Kanpai kameitsamuu! Ra ra ra!* > --Killer of Snowfall Station--
True Adamance Praetoriani Classiarii Templares Praetoria Imperialis Excubitoris 19	Posted - 2015.06.18 01:36:00 - [443] - Quote Galm Fae wrote: True Adamance wrote: Galm Fae wrote: If I need to, I can retcon part of my last post to make the story flow better. Especially since when I wrote it I had missed the whole part about Mila. Nope it leads on well I think. Could I perhaps trouble you for a short dialogue puppetmastering? Just to make the conversation flow slightly better? Go for it. I trust you well enough with Galm as a character. I'm not completely satisfied with it but what are your thoughts? "Crush all who complain!" `- Arkena Wyrnspire`
Galm Fae Eskola Ergonomics 419	Posted - 2015.06.18 03:08:00 - [444] - Quote Honestly, it's done relatively well but it places me at an awkward point of what to right next. I have to seriously thing about how much of a jerk I want Pixy to be. *Kirjuun! Uakan! Teknikiara! Kanpai kameitsamuu! Ra ra ra!* > --Killer of Snowfall Station--
True Adamance Praetoriani Classiarii Templares Praetoria Imperialis Excubitoris 19	Posted - 2015.06.18 03:16:00 - [445] - Quote Galm Fae wrote: Honestly, it's done relatively well but it places me at an awkward point of what to write next. I have to seriously think about how much of a jerk I want Pixy to be. Lemme do some revisions then. "Crush all who complain!" `- Arkena Wyrnspire`
Galm Fae Eskola Ergonomics 419	Posted - 2015.06.18 04:31:00 - [446] - Quote I'm no so sure there's much that you'd need to revise other than Galms reaction to the who event of being flashed by Mila. A huge part of the reason why Galm wants Snowfall Station to die is because it has a horrible habit of swallowing people up and gradually stripping them from any sort of humanity. Grabarc himself isn't even so much the problem, he just happens to be the man that the station chose to carry out its will. It's this living thing that corrupts over time and to him Mila just seems like another person corrupted by it's filth, and due in no small part to his own history as a fighter. Being flashed for him is tantamount to being sneezed on by a plague victim, it's just a symptom of a terminal affliction that will either leave her dead or something far worse. Worse yet even Kador, the shining templar that he brought on board because he was so sure he'd burn away such a place without question, is falling for its charm. You can see where Galm would start to get frustrated. This is all just Galm's opinion of course, and I actually find it very interesting how seemingly ever character that entered this RP found themselves slowly coming to like life in Snowfall. *Kirjuun! Uakan! Teknikiara! Kanpai kameitsamuu! Ra ra ra!* > --Killer of Snowfall Station--
True Adamance Praetoriani Classiarii Templares Praetoria Imperialis Excubitoris 19	Posted - 2015.06.18 04:35:00 - [447] - Quote Galm Fae wrote: I'm no so sure there's much that you'd need to revise other than Galms reaction to the who event of being flashed by Mila. A huge part of the reason why Galm wants Snowfall Station to die is because it has a horrible habit of swallowing people up and gradually stripping them from any sort of humanity. Grabarc himself isn't even so much the problem, he just happens to be the man that the station chose to carry out its will. It's this living thing that corrupts over time and to him Mila just seems like another person corrupted by it's filth, and due in no small part to his own history as a fighter. Being flashed for him is tantamount to being sneezed on by a plague victim, it's just a symptom of a terminal affliction that will either leave her dead or something far worse. Worse yet even Kador, the shining templar that he brought on board because he was so sure he'd burn away such a place without question, is falling for its charm. You can see where Galm would start to get frustrated. Consider it revised. Thing is even if this wasn't Snowfall this would be happen, as it has been for months prior to this point in Kador's plotline. Which I was going to explain at the end is what Satja doesn't even speak to him any more. Basically being someone who has given up hope. Was partially thrown for a loop with the whole Niina thing. "Crush all who complain!" `- Arkena Wyrnspire`
Galm Fae Eskola Ergonomics 419	Posted - 2015.06.18 04:44:00 - [448] - Quote Interesting when you put it that way, I really do love a lot of the character development got a chance to advance through this setting. Sorry if the whole 'looks just like Niina' thing messed up your plans in any way, I can retcon it if it's a problem. I mean yes, they both have short hair, but I didn't mean for it to be taken literally. It was more in the way that she was looking at Galm, and the way that she stood next to Kador. *Kirjuun! Uakan! Teknikiara! Kanpai kameitsamuu! Ra ra ra!* > --Killer of Snowfall Station--
True Adamance Praetoriani Classiarii Templares Praetoria Imperialis Excubitoris 19	Posted - 2015.06.22 04:33:00 - [449] - Quote Any better? "Crush all who complain!" `- Arkena Wyrnspire`
Galm Fae Eskola Ergonomics 423	Posted - 2015.06.22 07:25:00 - [450] - Quote Yeah. Sorry I haven't replied yet, I've just been busy as of late between Father's Day and rolling out my fic. *Kirjuun! Uakan! Teknikiara! Kanpai kameitsamuu! Ra ra ra!* > --Killer of Snowfall Station--



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