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True Adamance Praetoriani Classiarii Templares Praetoria Imperialis Excubitoris 13269	Posted - 2014.09.11 23:04:00 - [1] - Quote I look forwards to the read. "We were commanded to burn the system...We did. I mourn the loss of the innocents caught in our fires" -Kador Ouryon
True Adamance Praetoriani Classiarii Templares Praetoria Imperialis Excubitoris 13270	Posted - 2014.09.12 03:07:00 - [2] - Quote Vyzion Eyri wrote: Name: Vyzion Eyri Age: 27 (became a clone soldier 2 years ago) Race: Half ethnic Gallentean, half Jin-Mei. Weight: 70kg Height: 183kg Appearance: Green eyes, black hair, big ears, small nose. Thin lips, usually turned upwards at the edges in a small smile. Lean physique, not massively muscled. Clothing: When not in a pilot dropsuit, he enjoys naked walks along beaches. Roles: Enjoys dropship piloting immensely even if he may not be the best pilot. Before the Prometheus logistics-class dropship was taken off the market for further research and development, it was his favourite vehicle. Recently he has been found begrudgingly flying the currently superior shield dropships, acknowledging that the breakthroughs in shield hardening have rendered them much more effective their their armoured counterparts. When not in dropship cockpit, he can be found on the ground with a repair tool in his hand, force multiplying for his team with whatever equipment he deems necessary to compensate for his horrible aim. Wow he is 183kg tall? "We were commanded to burn the system...We did. I mourn the loss of the innocents caught in our fires" -Kador Ouryon
True Adamance Praetoriani Classiarii Templares Praetoria Imperialis Excubitoris 13273	Posted - 2014.09.14 10:22:00 - [3] - Quote Could enter but don't want to. There's no plausible way for Kador to actively operate in Matari space at all given his works with the Imperial Guard and 24th Crusade. Also where/why/hen did everyone turn Intaki? WHERE aee the hot Jin Mei chicks like the stripper from The Second Hex that Leithe was dating. "We were commanded to burn the system...We did. I mourn the loss of the innocents caught in our fires" -Kador Ouryon
True Adamance Praetoriani Classiarii Templares Praetoria Imperialis Excubitoris 13274	Posted - 2014.09.14 20:50:00 - [4] - Quote Thal Vadam wrote: Hunter Junko wrote: Vyzion Eyri wrote: True Adamance wrote: Could enter but don't want to. There's no plausible way for Kador to actively operate in Matari space at all given his works with the Imperial Guard and 24th Crusade. Also where/why/hen did everyone turn Intaki? WHERE aee the hot Jin Mei chicks like the stripper from The Second Hex that Leithe was dating. Well considering your works in the IG and 24th are probably on hold since your immortality has just been taken from you... But then again if you don't want to 'break' your characters from official lore, you probably don't want to participate, since these black-clad super-strong seemingly unstoppable enemies out to erase our clones are all part of a speculative RP. Personally I'm not recording this against my guy's history; in future RP it'll be like this never happened unless the story progresses in a way that lets me do so. If this RP arc nakes it to the end( hopefully) we will be able to continue going about our lives free from these shadow warriors.. If we make it to the end. And I can say that the next location for the second part of the RP will take place in either a different section of empire space or in null sec( and given that the wildlands is null sec) not empire space Plus I'm still thinking on what the second part should be.... Any ideas? ( edit: The second part of said RP will take place some time after we escape.) Perhaps the second part could be our characters using their unique traits and skills to both avoid the shadow commandos (the name must stick) and figure out their weakness. Perhaps aboard the escape craft we'd get a little time to get to know each other sense we're probley going to be with each other a while. (Edit: I'm thinking part two would be more about espionage, infiltration, and stealth.) It's a good thing then..... all here know the horrible things I have happen to my characters..... they are too unlucky for stealthy, classy things like that. "We were commanded to burn the system...We did. I mourn the loss of the innocents caught in our fires" -Kador Ouryon
True Adamance Praetoriani Classiarii Templares Praetoria Imperialis Excubitoris 13278	Posted - 2014.09.15 00:54:00 - [5] - Quote NOOOOOOOOOOOO! SOMEONE HAS TO GO BACK FOR JOHNNY! HE WAS SUCH AS SWEET BOY! "We were commanded to burn the system...We did. I mourn the loss of the innocents caught in our fires" -Kador Ouryon
True Adamance Praetoriani Classiarii Templares Praetoria Imperialis Excubitoris 13278	Posted - 2014.09.15 01:34:00 - [6] - Quote Hawk-eye Occultus wrote: True Adamance wrote: NOOOOOOOOOOOO! SOMEONE HAS TO GO BACK FOR JOHNNY! HE WAS SUCH AS SWEET BOY! What's that Truey? Did Johnny fall down a well!? ==== \|EDIT\| ==== Smoothly slid in... Perfecto... ...................... RUFFFFF! points left fore paw at the nearby well. "We were commanded to burn the system...We did. I mourn the loss of the innocents caught in our fires"* -Kador Ouryon
True Adamance Praetoriani Classiarii Templares Praetoria Imperialis Excubitoris 13284	Posted - 2014.09.15 22:12:00 - [7] - Quote Hawk-eye Occultus wrote: Oppugnant OPPUGNANT COMES BOW BEFORE HIM! ((Is he the boss or something? I am imagining a massive 50 foot tall Mosquito wearing a suit)) "We were commanded to burn the system...We did. I mourn the loss of the innocents caught in our fires" -Kador Ouryon
True Adamance Praetoriani Classiarii Templares Praetoria Imperialis Excubitoris 13284	Posted - 2014.09.15 22:37:00 - [8] - Quote You know what to do Thal. Shake that hand and slip a collar around the neck. May look kinky at first but later it'll be much easier to catch em all! "We were commanded to burn the system...We did. I mourn the loss of the innocents caught in our fires" -Kador Ouryon
True Adamance Praetoriani Classiarii Templares Praetoria Imperialis Excubitoris 13285	Posted - 2014.09.15 23:02:00 - [9] - Quote Thal Vadam wrote: True Adamance wrote: You know what to do Thal. Shake that hand and slip a collar around the neck. May look kinky at first but later it'll be much easier to catch em all! I was thinking more of my usual shtick, you know. Swords, being awesome, Ect Fine but this weekend I am taking you out hunting with the Slaver's whether you like it or not well make a Reclaimer out of you! ((Says the Pro-Heideran Neo-Liberalist)) "We were commanded to burn the system...We did. I mourn the loss of the innocents caught in our fires" -Kador Ouryon
True Adamance Praetoriani Classiarii Templares Praetoria Imperialis Excubitoris 13288	Posted - 2014.09.16 02:08:00 - [10] - Quote Jonny D Buelle wrote: True Adamance wrote: You know what to do Thal. Shake that hand and slip a collar around the neck. May look kinky at first but later it'll be much easier to catch em all! I will travel across the system, searching far and wide! To enslave them is my test, for the Empress is my cause! Minmatar! Gotta catch em all! Minmatar! Damn straight! That was probably a song for a children's cartoon back during the time when the Amarr actually were taking slaves. "We were commanded to burn the system...We did. I mourn the loss of the innocents caught in our fires" -Kador Ouryon

True Adamance Praetoriani Classiarii Templares Praetoria Imperialis Excubitoris 13303	Posted - 2014.09.16 22:27:00 - [11] - Quote Hawk-eye Occultus wrote: sir RAVEN WING wrote: Hawk-eye Occultus wrote: sir RAVEN WING wrote: what is going on? I came back here to see if this was open for anyone or not and I am greeted by well I don't know, frankly. Welcome to our carnival of doom! I am here to be thrown into a station of doom, not a damned carnival! Hey Junko, is there any room for me? reading the previous posts by Hawk and true confused me a bit. Allow me to bring you up to speed on that. Ahem! Previously... On the Birth of the Legion OOC Thread Thal Vadam and True Adamance engage in conversations on their kinky desires True Adamance wrote: You know what to do Thal. Shake that hand and slip a collar around the neck. May look kinky at first but later it'll be much easier to catch em all! Thal points out he is half Matari, while still on the subject of capturing slaves... Probably part of some weird roleplay Everyone talks about how many of the mysterious shadow commandos they have killed/repped (yes, looking at you Vyzion Eyri) Hawkeye and Jester realize that their escape will be cutting it very close. And now the continuation. Whats a Templar supposed to do? https://forums.eveonline.com/default.aspx?g=posts&t=372017&find=unread I think lore wise I wrote Kador as the child of a domineering father who orchestrated his life around strict and rigid ideals of hyper conservative morality, high level education, etc as well as a political marriage. So lore wise he has gotten to a first name basis with about 5 women...... in all of New Eden. If he were a person he would hate me for the things I have written into his backstory. "We were commanded to burn the system...We did. I mourn the loss of the innocents caught in our fires" -Kador Ouryon
True Adamance Praetoriani Classiarii Templares Praetoria Imperialis Excubitoris 13324	Posted - 2014.09.18 02:45:00 - [12] - Quote Vysion is making snide comments about the Amarr. I demand he cease and desist or I shall start writing and publishing fanfiction spin offs. Currently I have ready to mass publish... ClockworkxHawkeye (very raunchy) Hya'salia Chronicles: Episode 1 Cold Void of Space and Episode 2: You may be Amarrian but you don't make my skin crawl...... (admittedly not my best work) Solitarium Templaris: Passion of the Angels...... (this one sparked a cult following with Amarrian heiresses all over Imperial Space. you have a lot of fans Thal and Crown some are more.....domineering than others) What Happens in Mac's Bar Stays in Mac's Bar.... (this was written from a dark place in my life and features Mac and Mr Buelle) "We were commanded to burn the system...We did. I mourn the loss of the innocents caught in our fires" -Kador Ouryon
True Adamance Praetoriani Classiarii Templares Praetoria Imperialis Excubitoris 13325	Posted - 2014.09.18 03:19:00 - [13] - Quote sir RAVEN WING wrote: True Adamance wrote: Vysion is making snide comments about the Amarr. I demand he cease and desist or I shall start writing and publishing fanfiction spin offs. Currently I have ready to mass publish... ClockworkxHawkeye (very raunchy) Hya'salia Chronicles: Episode 1 Cold Void of Space and Episode 2: You may be Amarrian but you don't make my skin crawl...... (admittedly not my best work) Solitarium Templaris: Passion of the Angels...... (this one sparked a cult following with Amarrian heiresses all over Imperial Space. you have a lot of fans Thal and Crown some are more.....domineering than others) What Happens in Mac's Bar Stays in Mac's Bar.... (this was written from a dark place in my life and features Mac and Mr Buelle as they invite Vysion over for a nice, no bondage, normal dinner..... or so he thinks) 1). those all sound **** 2).you are into some kinky *! Hey don't knock it until you have read it. I'm no Hynox but I think I did a good job capturing the love blossoming amongst the characters in here. Currently working on yours mate. 50 Shades of Blood..... about how Raven meets Anastasia the Blooder..... probably the most graphic of my works given I've seen what Blood Raiders do to their victims. (Do take this with a grain of salt) "We were commanded to burn the system...We did. I mourn the loss of the innocents caught in our fires"* -Kador Ouryon
True Adamance Praetoriani Classiarii Templares Praetoria Imperialis Excubitoris 13325	Posted - 2014.09.18 03:34:00 - [14] - Quote sir RAVEN WING wrote: True Adamance wrote: sir RAVEN WING wrote: True Adamance wrote: Vysion is making snide comments about the Amarr. I demand he cease and desist or I shall start writing and publishing fanfiction spin offs. Currently I have ready to mass publish... ClockworkxHawkeye (very raunchy) Hya'salia Chronicles: Episode 1 Cold Void of Space and Episode 2: You may be Amarrian but you don't make my skin crawl...... (admittedly not my best work) Solitarium Templaris: Passion of the Angels...... (this one sparked a cult following with Amarrian heiresses all over Imperial Space. you have a lot of fans Thal and Crown some are more.....domineering than others) What Happens in Mac's Bar Stays in Mac's Bar.... (this was written from a dark place in my life and features Mac and Mr Buelle as they invite Vysion over for a nice, no bondage, normal dinner..... or so he thinks) 1). those all sound **** 2).you are into some kinky ! Hey don't knock it until you have read it. I'm no Hynox but I think I did a good job capturing the love blossoming amongst the characters in here. Currently working on yours mate. 50 Shades of Blood..... about how Raven meets Anastasia the Blooder..... probably the most graphic of my works given I've seen what Blood Raiders do to their victims. (Do take this with a grain of salt and a few bottles of liquor) ME! I have fallen prey too?!?! fine... just not bondage or kinky ** like that. Have you read 50 Shades of Grey? I have....... you wouldn't like it.......you know what blood raiders are like? You wouldn't like them either. "We were commanded to burn the system...We did. I mourn the loss of the innocents caught in our fires" -Kador Ouryon
True Adamance Praetoriani Classiarii Templares Praetoria Imperialis Excubitoris 13325	Posted - 2014.09.18 04:03:00 - [15] - Quote sir RAVEN WING wrote: maybe Hawk instead of me? So quick to throw him under the bus....... "We were commanded to burn the system...We did. I mourn the loss of the innocents caught in our fires" -Kador Ouryon
True Adamance Praetoriani Classiarii Templares Praetoria Imperialis Excubitoris 13331	Posted - 2014.09.19 03:52:00 - [16] - Quote Vyzion Eyri wrote: RIP Jonny, and I think I've removed my OOC stuff. True Adamance wrote: Vysion is making snide comments about the Amarr. I demand he cease and desist or I shall start writing and publishing fanfiction spin offs. Currently I have ready to mass publish... ClockworkxHawkeye (very raunchy) Hya'salia Chronicles: Episode 1 Cold Void of Space and Episode 2: You may be Amarrian but you don't make my skin crawl...... (admittedly not my best work) Solitarium Templaris: Passion of the Angels...... (this one sparked a cult following with Amarrian heiresses all over Imperial Space. you have a lot of fans Thal and Crown some are more.....domineering than others) What Happens in Mac's Bar Stays in Mac's Bar.... (this was written from a dark place in my life and features Mac and Mr Buelle as they invite Vysion over for a nice, no bondage, normal dinner..... or so he thinks) Also looking to do a spin off of the current RP "So my lover is a Shadow Warrior...." Hahah. I will counter with Kador: Behind Closed Doors, The Climactic Symposium: The Summit Gymnasium's Rapturous Counterpart and PCT PR Offices and the Holiest of its Dungeons. Besides, I was only thinking it to my character's self. :D Well played. I look forwards to reading all about Kador's off duty debauching..... good lord he had communion wine...... or noes he used a womans first name?! Oh the temptations. "We were commanded to burn the system...We did. I mourn the loss of the innocents caught in our fires" -Kador Ouryon
True Adamance Praetoriani Classiarii Templares Praetoria Imperialis Excubitoris 13359	Posted - 2014.09.23 22:21:00 - [17] - Quote Why are sarcastic comments about me being made here? "We were commanded to burn the system...We did. I mourn the loss of the innocents caught in our fires" -Kador Ouryon
True Adamance Praetoriani Classiarii Templares Praetoria Imperialis Excubitoris 13359	Posted - 2014.09.23 22:52:00 - [18] - Quote Jonny D Buelle wrote: True Adamance wrote: Why are sarcastic comments about me being made here? When are they not being made about you? I said nothing about mistresses. "We were commanded to burn the system...We did. I mourn the loss of the innocents caught in our fires" -Kador Ouryon
True Adamance Praetoriani Classiarii Templares Praetoria Imperialis Excubitoris 13359	Posted - 2014.09.23 23:15:00 - [19] - Quote Read the last few posts............. what in God's name..... "We were commanded to burn the system...We did. I mourn the loss of the innocents caught in our fires" -Kador Ouryon
True Adamance Praetoriani Classiarii Templares Praetoria Imperialis Excubitoris 13359	Posted - 2014.09.23 23:45:00 - [20] - Quote Thal Vadam wrote: We need activity...F**ing now How do you follow up ............ 1.) Rushing a Tank head on...... it would kill you...... and you are mortal 2.) 50 Mortals potinlessly attempting to silver bullet your RP by solving your problem fighting against hundred (quoted from one of the posts) of warriors immortals couldn't take down. 3.) During and escape leaping down without weapons and kills 20 or more shadow warriors in and instant when their primary purpose was to be an unstoppable force designed to make you feel fear. A combination of overzealous posts crippled the thread, all with great intentions as far as I can tell. From a readers perspective I loved the opening posts, they were great, I was even invested on what happened. Mid way through however someone said "screw it" and stepped it up a notch pushing what I was willing to believe of your characters. Now...... I don't believe a word of it and the RP has lost what was interesting about it. I hope Junko finds a way to resolve the RP rationally, and with out massacring them all or using a silver bullet on the situation. I think what players need to take out of Dust 514 lore is being a clone grants you nothing more than immortality and perhaps some experience......not supernatural skill. "We were commanded to burn the system...We did. I mourn the loss of the innocents caught in our fires"* -Kador Ouryon

True Adamance Praetoriani Classiarii Templares Praetoria Imperialis Excubitoris 13360	Posted - 2014.09.24 00:19:00 - [21] - Quote Hunter Junko wrote: True Adamance wrote: Thal Vadam wrote: We need activity...F**ing now How do you follow up ............ 1.) Rushing a Tank head on...... it would kill you...... and you are mortal 2.) 50 Mortals potinlessly attempting to silver bullet your RP by solving your problem fighting against hundred (quoted from one of the posts) of warriors immortals couldn't take down. 3.) During and escape leaping down without weapons and kills 20 or more shadow warriors in and instant when their primary purpose was to be an unstoppable force designed to make you feel fear. A combination of overzealous posts crippled the thread, all with great intentions as far as I can tell. From a readers perspective I loved the opening posts, they were great, I was even invested on what happened. Mid way through however someone said "screw it" and stepped it up a notch pushing what I was willing to believe of your characters. Now...... I don't believe a word of it and the RP has lost what was interesting about it. I hope Junko finds a way to resolve the RP rationally, and with out massacring them all or using a silver bullet on the situation. I think what players need to take out of Dust 514 lore is being a clone grants you nothing more than immortality and perhaps some experience......not supernatural skill. i have to agree with Adamance here, something happened midway: reading through the rp again, i felt like someone decided to make themselves overpowered or something, detract a bit from the inital running from a force you cant stop( noting the cuthulu mythos from lovecraft.) yes a character is now dead, and other mortals are fighting something even we couldnt fight, but we can have a chance to fight back but that was planned waaaay farther into the RP. ( im talking 2, 3 parts from now, if this can live that long) for now lets focus on getting back to the se'terra in one piece so i can bring up the second part of this rp, the next few posts i thought of are collecting dust in my harddrive :/ Mmmmm I only say this from experience. I've been in those shoe, making characters OP, and RPed with them. In my mind , again I say this only as advice and not a harsh critique, two things need to done to improve as RP is like a skill of sorts. First is a humanisation of characters. Yes you live in a futuristic society full of technological wonders and unnatural role and ideals....but fundamentally your character is human and as a human you are often no better or worse than anyone else. You are not a special mercenary and all you have over a regular soldier is experience borne of....well dying and even then this technology is new..... Secondly awareness is required. You have to be reading each other players RP for the changes in the plot that they make. You have to be aware of what they describe, and what their characters do so as not to create inconsistencies. E.G- relevant to this RP. Junko expressly said I believe at the start of this RP that you are likely to be in your leisure clones, these clones are the established equivalent lore wise to baselining. They have no superhuman attributes. Or if not you are in a stock clone, these are featureless clones with superhuman attributes. Additionally she established that Implants were down and that Shadow Warriors now hold all the power. Now I like the desperate struggle plotline as much as anyone else......but that's all it should have been. My personal choice for a play for this RP would have been to bugger off as fast as possible, barely controlling my fear of loosing...certain...characters..... only stopping if someone I had a duty to required my help. Screw the rest of you, it's not my job to baby sit you and I can't keep serving God if I am dead. Besides a few examples, and this is harsh critique, few characters present (from my perspective as a reader with high standards) seemed human to me or very aware of what was going on. Instead when all seemed hopeless everyone stepped up to another level, took action, and forced that action on everyone else. Please do Junko this plot line is interesting and has merit..... who wouldn't want to eliminate immortal clones in New Eden? But Shadow Warriors? What are they and who sent them for what reasons to a civilian station. Moreover how did they know you'd all be there/ how did they get you to show up to an obvious trap? "We were commanded to burn the system...We did. I mourn the loss of the innocents caught in our fires"* -Kador Ouryon
True Adamance Praetoriani Classiarii Templares Praetoria Imperialis Excubitoris 13364	Posted - 2014.09.24 00:33:00 - [22] - Quote Thal Vadam wrote: I'M SORRY I'M A FAILURE!!! T_T No its not about failure its about taking that advice/ experience from RP and applying it to your character. It was only 3 months ago I really took Kador to task and de-constructed him and built him up again as a more human character. Prior to this he was a soulless lump of muscle and faith. Now more than ever I am trying to express my original theme that birthed him. "Just a man with his gun and his faith." Now I drew Kador's skills directly out of what I can achieve on the battlefield. I'm not the best tanker but I was pretty good at it, and I am a **** poor rifle shot and have never scored a melee kill in my life (well maybe one). More so now than ever I try to put more emphasis on what my character is thinking and feeling. How he tends to be unlucky or make mistakes. I never did that before, and I think that's what makes Kador my current favourite character I have created yet. He's a dudebro, with access to the biggest guns in New Eden, and all the guides him is Faith. "We were commanded to burn the system...We did. I mourn the loss of the innocents caught in our fires" -Kador Ouryon
True Adamance Praetoriani Classiarii Templares Praetoria Imperialis Excubitoris 13364	Posted - 2014.09.24 00:34:00 - [23] - Quote Hunter Junko wrote: True Adamance wrote: Mmmmm I only say this from experience. I've been in those shoe, making characters OP, and RPed with them. In my mind , again I say this only as advice and not a harsh critique, two things need to done to improve as RP is like a skill of sorts. First is a humanisation of characters. Yes you live in a futuristic society full of technological wonders and unnatural role and ideals....but fundamentally your character is human and as a human you are often no better or worse than anyone else. You are not a special mercenary and all you have over a regular soldier is experience borne of....well dying and even then this technology is new.....Immortality does not impart talent....and even talent fails the over confident or terrified. No matter what you believe everyone knows fear. Secondly awareness is required. You have to be reading each other players RP for the changes in the plot that they make. You have to be aware of what they describe, and what their characters do so as not to create inconsistencies. E.G- relevant to this RP. Junko expressly said I believe at the start of this RP that you are likely to be in your leisure clones, these clones are the established equivalent lore wise to baselining. They have no superhuman attributes. Or if not you are in a stock clone, these are featureless clones with superhuman attributes. Additionally she established that Implants were down and that Shadow Warriors now hold all the power. Now I like the desperate struggle plotline as much as anyone else......but that's all it should have been. My personal choice for a play for this RP would have been to bugger off as fast as possible, barely controlling my fear of loosing...certain...characters..... only stopping if someone I had a duty to required my help. Screw the rest of you, it's not my job to baby sit you and I can't keep serving God if I am dead. Besides a few examples, and this is harsh critique, few characters present (from my perspective as a reader with high standards) seemed human to me or very aware of what was going on. Instead when all seemed hopeless everyone stepped up to another level, took action, and forced that action on everyone else. Please do Junko this plot line is interesting and has merit..... who wouldn't want to eliminate immortal clones in New Eden? But Shadow Warriors? What are they and who sent them for what reasons to a civilian station. Moreover how did they know you'd all be there/ how did they get you to show up to an obvious trap? it is harsh, but i completely accept your critique. (i've had harsher critiques before) i'll do my best to monitor the rp from now on. sucks to say it but thanks for pointing a few things out. as for the 'shadow warriors', it can be chalked up to a few certain answers. either someone was followed here, got a bit careless en route and the shadow warriors took notice. but as for now (rp-wise) we cant actively find that information out, as we are (or was) trying to flee from this area. initially i had planned to Rp as the shadow warriors myself (alt: Hjkkh) but as of now i cant. and thal your not a failure, just that everyone makes mistakes sometimes. lol Would you like me to RP a Shadow Warrior? I could play actor characters for your RP's. "We were commanded to burn the system...We did. I mourn the loss of the innocents caught in our fires" -Kador Ouryon
True Adamance Praetoriani Classiarii Templares Praetoria Imperialis Excubitoris 13364	Posted - 2014.09.24 00:36:00 - [24] - Quote True Adamance wrote: Thal Vadam wrote: I'M SORRY I'M A FAILURE!!! T_T No its not about failure its about taking that advice/ experience from RP and applying it to your character. It was only 3 months ago I really took Kador to task and de-constructed him and built him up again as a more human character. Prior to this he was a soulless lump of muscle and faith. Now more than ever I am trying to express my original theme that birthed him. "Just a man with his gun and his faith." Now I drew Kador's skills directly out of what I can achieve on the battlefield. I'm not the best tanker but I was pretty good at it, and I am a **** poor rifle shot and have never scored a melee kill in my life (well maybe one). More so now than ever I try to put more emphasis on what my character is thinking and feeling. How he tends to be unlucky or make mistakes. I never did that before, and I think that's what makes Kador my current favourite character I have created yet. He's a dudebro, with access to the biggest guns in New Eden, and all the guides him is Faith. It was also around that time I decided that I would make Kador and Satja's relationship more mature than the shy army nurse meets GI Joe. Was very interesting when I realised Kador was 6 years older than her when I put he rough age at about 28. "We were commanded to burn the system...We did. I mourn the loss of the innocents caught in our fires" -Kador Ouryon
True Adamance Praetoriani Classiarii Templares Praetoria Imperialis Excubitoris 13364	Posted - 2014.09.24 00:45:00 - [25] - Quote Guilt I like it. "We were commanded to burn the system...We did. I mourn the loss of the innocents caught in our fires" -Kador Ouryon
True Adamance Praetoriani Classiarii Templares Praetoria Imperialis Excubitoris 13366	Posted - 2014.09.24 01:26:00 - [26] - Quote sir RAVEN WING wrote: Thal, I was waiting and became confused (I'll have to re-read it, was rushing first time.) and thought that drop ship was the Se'erra. Junko and True, I too am disappointed. I thought the 'Voidwalkers' as I call them would be almost invincible, hell I even imaged a fight between Raven and an unarmed Voidwalker (this was before they became marshmallows protected by tin armour) and Raven wins after snapping it's neck, slitting it's throat and severing an arm, and Raven still could barely stand afterwards, but sadly it never happened and they became well marshmallows in tin armour. Regardless I'll be honest when I say, given the intent that Junko had for the character...... we would have tossed you around like a rag doll. Hell everyone should have been.... perhaps someone could have RPed being punched by one of them, perhaps breaking their ribs or spine or something and relying on another character to make the difficult to choice whether or not to save them...... it would have been really telling who would have saved who. There is a lot people can do to creatively form bonds between characters and advance plotlines while keeping to the Hosts RP themes. This is all a part of awareness that I mentioned. As I see it RP is not about exercising your freedom to write what you want, its about exercising creative freedom to write what you want within the guidelines. E.g- Classirarii PR Offices - I am a host. I am polite and refined. Doesn't stop me from thinking your character is a bastard. Birth of the Legion - You are mortals, you are afraid and running for your life. Choosing to stand at a pivotal moment is made more noble because of this even if you achieve nothing in the process. "We were commanded to burn the system...We did. I mourn the loss of the innocents caught in our fires" -Kador Ouryon
True Adamance Praetoriani Classiarii Templares Praetoria Imperialis Excubitoris 13375	Posted - 2014.09.24 20:58:00 - [27] - Quote sir RAVEN WING wrote: Jonny D Buelle wrote: Hawk-eye Occultus wrote: sir RAVEN WING wrote: Crown, do you want Crown to survive or die? I just so happen to be about to run out of the lift towards the dropship (cause I love the prospect of dying in a fiery crash); so I guess I could shoot him a few times, get brutally beaten, run away with my tail between my legs... If you want, of course... It seems us Gallenteans are getting all the abuse in this rp... I'm calling CONCORD to arrest these people and put us in witness protection. Edit: Also have an idea to make the Shadow Warriors a bit more fear inspiring. Path One: Undying - Unless dismembered or blown to bits, they can regenerate at an alarming rate and come back faster and stronger. Path Two: Ranks - Currently we are facing 'Cannon Fodder'. Marked ones are higher ranked, and are generally faster, stronger, and harder to kill. The more marks, the more powerful. (Keep in mind Jonny only killed a Marked One with 1 Mark). Path Three: Both! Edit 2: Please don't implement these in your posts until Junko gives the yay or nay. Path 4: Mutating - (this goes with #1) after losing a limb, the limb regenerates extremely fast but is stronger, faster, tougher, and most importantly looks creepy as hell. Claws at face..... You are being sarcastic right? "We were commanded to burn the system...We did. I mourn the loss of the innocents caught in our fires"* -Kador Ouryon
True Adamance Praetoriani Classiarii Templares Praetoria Imperialis Excubitoris 13375	Posted - 2014.09.25 04:32:00 - [28] - Quote 1 = You fail miserably splattering the main against the side of your dropship in a shower of gore. Not only this but your thruster is damaged and you are visibly shocked. 2-3= You Fail the man dives out of the way in time to be set upon later by the Shadow Warriors. 4-5= You succeed scooping the man to the dropship but injure him severely (roll on the Crippling Injury Table to see if he lives). Your thrusters are damaged. 6-8= You manoeuvre succeeds and the man is scooped the the ship (roll on the Lasting Injury Table). Your thrustersno noticeable damage. 9= You perfectly execute the manoeuvre, saving the man, and suffering no damage. It is a bloody miracle. These tables are single dice rolls only. Crippling Injury Table 1-2 Agonising Death 3-4 Swift Death 5-6 Survived with Crippling Injury (roll on the Lasting Injury Table) Lasting Injury Table 1-2 Crippled. Your character suffers lasting physical disabilities that cannot be healed conventionally. 3 Nerve Damage. Character suffers lasting damage to their body. They can still function, but not well. 4-5 Debilitating Injury. Nothing Time and Intense Physiotherapy will not Fix. 6- Scarring. Some look rather dashing......most do not. Suffer a permanent -1 to the Beauty Statistic. "We were commanded to burn the system...We did. I mourn the loss of the innocents caught in our fires" -Kador Ouryon
True Adamance Praetoriani Classiarii Templares Praetoria Imperialis Excubitoris 13376	Posted - 2014.09.25 04:48:00 - [29] - Quote I have the black humour...... I actually wrote the vastly more positively than I had intended. If it hadn't been apparent you want him on the crew every roll would have ended with some form of grisly or crippling injury as punishment for being noble. If modern media tells you anything nobility ends up with you being alone, tortured brutally, at the grave of all of your allies, and wishing you were dead too. Which makes keeping to it such engrossing story telling when its punished appropriately. Now get in Galms thread tOO! "We were commanded to burn the system...We did. I mourn the loss of the innocents caught in our fires" -Kador Ouryon
True Adamance Praetoriani Classiarii Templares Praetoria Imperialis Excubitoris 13376	Posted - 2014.09.25 04:57:00 - [30] - Quote Hunter Junko wrote: True Adamance wrote: I have the black humour...... I actually wrote the vastly more positively than I had intended. If it hadn't been apparent you want him on the crew every roll would have ended with some form of grisly or crippling injury as punishment for being noble. If modern media tells you anything nobility ends up with you being alone, tortured brutally, at the grave of all of your allies, and wishing you were dead too. Which makes keeping to it such engrossing story telling when its punished appropriately. Now get in Galms thread tOO! Ok ma, man i can't do nothing around here!! lol ((jokes jokes xD)) If forget that just because I like punishing Kador for trying to do the right thing doesn't mean everyone else does. "We were commanded to burn the system...We did. I mourn the loss of the innocents caught in our fires" -Kador Ouryon

True Adamance Praetoriani Classiarii Templares Praetoria Imperialis Excubitoris 13385	Posted - 2014.09.29 01:04:00 - [31] - Quote Jonny D Buelle wrote: Hawk-eye Occultus wrote: Jonny D Buelle wrote: She also finds it easy to pay and manipulate the weak, poor and the desperate to get her way. By the way I feel her presence is nesscessary, too many people willing to sacrifice themselves for others. Yeah, all those dammed dirty selfless people! Caring about the welfare of others above their own spits. Like it's their business! I know right! I mean what's wrong with selling out a few of your mates for a handful of isk! I don't know why Johnny but from that description of your new character I just imagine fishnets and whips....... scares me too...... "We were commanded to burn the system...We did. I mourn the loss of the innocents caught in our fires" -Kador Ouryon
True Adamance Praetoriani Classiarii Templares Praetoria Imperialis Excubitoris 13431	Posted - 2014.10.10 00:24:00 - [32] - Quote Nice plotlines...... you could also work in Carrier Kills since Carriers are a massive vessel and a power in their own right. "We were commanded to burn the system...We did. I mourn the loss of the innocents caught in our fires" -Kador Ouryon
True Adamance Praetoriani Classiarii Templares Praetoria Imperialis Excubitoris 16851	Posted - 2015.01.28 03:54:00 - [33] - Quote Thal Vadam wrote: Well I am Amarr Batman The Amarr we deserve not the Amarr we want? "This is the Usumgal boy, the exalted dragon, wreathed in the fires of heaven. He is a true symbol of God's majesty."
True Adamance Praetoriani Classiarii Templares Praetoria Imperialis Excubitoris 16851	Posted - 2015.01.28 04:02:00 - [34] - Quote Jonny D Buelle wrote: True Adamance wrote: Thal Vadam wrote: Well I am Amarr Batman The Amarr we deserve not the Amarr we want? But... I want him... ...For my sex dungeon! He IS your Dark Knight........... tall,imposing,and wearing skin tight latex....... "This is the Usumgal boy, the exalted dragon, wreathed in the fires of heaven. He is a true symbol of God's majesty."
True Adamance Praetoriani Classiarii Templares Praetoria Imperialis Excubitoris 16856	Posted - 2015.01.28 20:23:00 - [35] - Quote Thal Vadam wrote: Jonny D Buelle wrote: True Adamance wrote: Thal Vadam wrote: Well I am Amarr Batman The Amarr we deserve not the Amarr we want? But... I want him... ...For my sex dungeon! ...How much? Thal Vadam who have you become? "This is the Usumgal boy, the exalted dragon, wreathed in the fires of heaven. He is a true symbol of God's majesty."
True Adamance Praetoriani Classiarii Templares Praetoria Imperialis Excubitoris 16861	Posted - 2015.01.28 21:43:00 - [36] - Quote Thal Vadam wrote: A very poor man who does too much FW You might as well have my ISK since I'm not using it. "This is the Usumgal boy, the exalted dragon, wreathed in the fires of heaven. He is a true symbol of God's majesty."
True Adamance Praetoriani Classiarii Templares Praetoria Imperialis Excubitoris 16872	Posted - 2015.01.29 02:28:00 - [37] - Quote sir RAVEN WING wrote: Thal Vadam wrote: True Adamance wrote: Thal Vadam wrote: A very poor man who does too much FW You might as well have my ISK since I'm not using it. As long as it gets me out of prostitution (for the empress of course) Perhaps you can bring my loyalty back to the Empire. Not with ISK, I may be losing it fast in FW, but I am in no need of it! Squading anytime soon? Might do for Vehicle Rebalance to see what what..... but after that I'm probably leaving True to amass SP passively. Currently I don't think the content of the rebalance will be all that interesting to me. I kinda feel like I've graduated from "rapid fire" turrets and am just moving into other games with more "conventionally operated" vehicles. "This is the Usumgal boy, the exalted dragon, wreathed in the fires of heaven. He is a true symbol of God's majesty."
True Adamance Praetoriani Classiarii Templares Praetoria Imperialis Excubitoris 16925	Posted - 2015.02.02 19:54:00 - [38] - Quote Juro Hyrashak wrote: Hunter Junko wrote: well, one week. on the dot. the second part will begin in one week fellow RP'ers. Raven, you can bring another character into the rp its like adamance and satja, or hya'salia and issac lol @Juro Hyrashak welcome, is this your first rp? No, I am the alt of the most well educated, skilled, handsome, amazingly badass Amarrian Templar. You know him! You love him! True Adamance The crowd goes wild Awww thanks buddy "This is the Usumgal boy, the exalted dragon, wreathed in the fires of heaven. He is a true symbol of God's majesty."
True Adamance Praetoriani Classiarii Templares Praetoria Imperialis Excubitoris 17112	Posted - 2015.02.11 22:20:00 - [39] - Quote Jonny no offence by your IC daughter sounds like a ****. "This is the Usumgal boy, the exalted dragon, wreathed in the fires of heaven. He is a true symbol of God's majesty."*
True Adamance Praetoriani Classiarii Templares Praetoria Imperialis Excubitoris 18037	Posted - 2015.04.08 05:04:00 - [40] - Quote Marcy....... still a *****. I love her character. And Junko now you have a lot to live up to. I am a huge Tali fanboi. Dibs on Garrus or Adrien Victus! GÇ£That is not dead which can eternal lie, And with strange aeons even death may die.GÇ¥ -The Nameless City

True Adamance Praetoriani Classiarii Templares Praetoria Imperialis Excubitoris 18040	Posted - 2015.04.08 06:28:00 - [41] - Quote Thal Vadam wrote: True Adamance wrote: Marcy....... still a *****. I love her character. And Junko now you have a lot to live up to. I am a huge Tali fanboi. Dibs on Garrus or Adrien Victus! I feel like Kador's more of a Kaidan Well that's assuming I survived Virmire. And in my ME he rarely does since I am a Sentinel. GÇ£That is not dead which can eternal lie, And with strange aeons even death may die.GÇ¥ -The Nameless City
True Adamance Praetoriani Classiarii Templares Praetoria Imperialis Excubitoris 18049	Posted - 2015.04.08 11:10:00 - [42] - Quote Jonny D Buelle wrote: True Adamance wrote: Marcy....... still a psychotic *****. I love her character. And Junko now you have a lot to live up to. I am a huge Tali fanboi. Dibs on Garrus or Adrien Victus! Fixed it for ya! No I fixed it for you! However you have a point. She has issues and if Johnny won't discipline his wayward kid I know people who will. GÇ£That is not dead which can eternal lie, And with strange aeons even death may die.GÇ¥ -The Nameless City
True Adamance Praetoriani Classiarii Templares Praetoria Imperialis Excubitoris 18060	Posted - 2015.04.08 20:23:00 - [43] - Quote Hawk-eye Occultus wrote: Does this sound like the kind of woman you can simply punish? I thought not. Yeah I think we can work something out. How would she like to be locked in a cage full of pink Furriers repeating the phrase "Daddy wuvz u Marcy"? GÇ£That is not dead which can eternal lie, And with strange aeons even death may die.GÇ¥ -The Nameless City
True Adamance Praetoriani Classiarii Templares Praetoria Imperialis Excubitoris 18163	Posted - 2015.04.11 12:02:00 - [44] - Quote Hey..... I always wanted to ask this and its not to be derogatory to anyone specifically. But what does everyone in this RP besides Junko walk around as if they are carrying ten buckets of swagger and wearing the iconic NCI Miami pair of shades for every event? GÇ£That is not dead which can eternal lie, And with strange aeons even death may die.GÇ¥ -The Nameless City
True Adamance Praetoriani Classiarii Templares Praetoria Imperialis Excubitoris 18314	Posted - 2015.04.17 04:49:00 - [45] - Quote Johnny while I'd normally approve of being a **** to ones characters what you just done is........ even I wouldn't force a combat sadomasochist to go through real, meaningful, non-physical emotional trauma after killing her husband. That's just plain mean. GÇ£That is not dead which can eternal lie, And with strange aeons even death may die.GÇ¥ -The Nameless City
True Adamance Praetoriani Classiarii Templares Praetoria Imperialis Excubitoris 18401	Posted - 2015.04.21 02:20:00 - [46] - Quote Vash Warren wrote: I got something that will shock Marcy down a peg or two. Or get me kill. Or maybe both... I am going to bet both... Taking her our back behind the shed? GÇ£That is not dead which can eternal lie, And with strange aeons even death may die.GÇ¥ -The Nameless City
True Adamance Praetoriani Classiarii Templares Praetoria Imperialis Excubitoris 18403	Posted - 2015.04.21 10:00:00 - [47] - Quote Jonny D Buelle wrote: Hunter Junko wrote: Jonny D Buelle wrote: Hunter Junko wrote: Lol a month of work and busy craziness with my girlfriend and i come back to see this haha ahhhh i missed you all :3 post is up, lets continue where we left off EDIT: holy sh*t, never thought marcy to be the Yandere type O.o Glad to have you back Junko! And yeah Marcy is a bit crazy hmm... i wonder if she has any far off relations with Gasai Yuno lmao Don't know who that is lol. She was actually inspired by Azula from Avatar the Last Airbender (think Sozin Comets Azula when she loses the plot) as well as a twisted creation of my own. That's kinda hot..... wait no. YOU DID NOT HEAR KADOR SAY THAT! GÇ£That is not dead which can eternal lie, And with strange aeons even death may die.GÇ¥ -The Nameless City
True Adamance Praetoriani Classiarii Templares Praetoria Imperialis Excubitoris 19013	Posted - 2015.05.14 04:32:00 - [48] - Quote Ralden Caster wrote: Hawk-eye Occultus wrote: Ralden Caster wrote: Hawk, are you still here? I have a question. Why is the Khanid Kingdom's symbol just a silver, upside down Amarr symbol? Coz of the power of YOLO. Also I think it might be related to the fact that it originated due to Khanid breaking away from the Empire to make an independent kingdom. In that respect, why isn't the Caldari logo an upside down Gallente logo? Because the Khanid symbol as it is now was a message King Khanid sent the Theology Council. There are six meanings to the Imperial Crest and the inverted Kings Sigil. Onlty five of which are spoken about freely and it is inferred in Signs of Faith that it is the inversed meaning of the Imperial Seal which represents Man's imperfect unity with God with the Divine being in primacy. The inverse of that would infer...... never mind. There is no sixth symbol. "That is not dead which can eternal lie, And with strange aeons even death may die."
True Adamance Praetoriani Classiarii Templares Praetoria Imperialis Excubitoris 19013	Posted - 2015.05.14 04:33:00 - [49] - Quote Jonny D Buelle wrote: Oh you would love to take her behind the shed wouldn't you True. Thinking about it yes....yes Kador would but it wouldn't be a healthy relationship for either of them. "That is not dead which can eternal lie, And with strange aeons even death may die."
True Adamance Praetoriani Classiarii Templares Praetoria Imperialis Excubitoris 20	Posted - 2015.08.09 23:50:00 - [50] - Quote Satja Askarin wrote: I can see that Kador is subscribed to this thread and currently watching it now. Why are you not rushing to my defence here? More importantly you should be on your way home now that your job is complete done. I find this more amusing that you know. Either way Lady Rebbeca's appearance has been postponed 24 hours so the security detail is required to stay until her address to the Holdership has been completed. I won't be able to get back until some time tomorrow night. Em shah tey et naGÇÖemsaer ek rahvi, amarr osedah gasi ubday pahk. Ekin tey vahka ijed div ema ziel. Et tey vamatal em.

True Adamance Praetoriani Classiarii Templares Praetoria Imperialis Excubitoris 20	Posted - 2015.08.11 04:53:00 - [51] - Quote Hunter Junko wrote: D'weu Adamance! how goes the Amarrian life?? Didn't choose it. It chose me. Em shah tey et naGÇÖemsaer ek rahvi, amarr osedah gasi ubday pahk. Ekin tey vahka ijed div ema ziel. Et tey vamatal em.

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