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yep derrith again
Shining Flame
Amarr Empire
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Posted - 2014.04.15 21:29:00 -
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this is the opening scene for the epic movie, "Dust 51wars".
Brought to you by 843 Industries, in conglomoration with Shipley's Blue Donuts
From the famous Director KenKaniff69
Executive Producer 843 Bane
Opening scene:
The scene opens on a grassland, torn by craters, smoke and explosions. Two pythons are seen flying above the carnage, raining down hell on a squad of infantry sprinting to the city.
One of the soldiers is screaming into his comms in a French accent "Someone get those god-forsaken dropships off us!" The camera was shifted to him.
Soldier: Commander Traky! Our AV support is down! We can nothing about the vehicles for now!
Traky: Fine! but we need to set up a blockade! I will not allow the empire to retake this land!
As the rebel forces rush inside a nearby building, they run into a squad of DV forces. A gunfight ensues, Traky's soldiers frantically scrambling for cover as they get into position to fire back. One of the Traky's soldiers is thrown to the ground by a heavy that managed to flank, as the heavy prepares to unload his entire hmg clip into the unfortunate soul, a blade is found to be thrust through his stomach. As the sword is removed, the heavy falls down and land directly on top of the soldier, crushing him with over five hundred pounds.
The mysterious warrior then immediately cloaks and flanks the enemy, and begins to tear the entire unit to shreds. He starts by cleaving the back of one soldier, as the rest hear his scream, they all turn to see blood soaked blade in the warriors hand. The warrior then starts a short sprint to one of the gun men and cleaves his arm off, a second one attempts to bludgeon him from the side. The warrior dodges the initial hit, trips the soldier over and as the soldier began to fall, the warrior unsheathes a dagger and allows it to find the soldiers throat. Two more soldiers remain, and as the warrior begins sprinting towards the remainder, one attempts to lift his weapon, only to find the warriors boot in his face. The warrior then draws a pistol and nails both of them in the head.
As the warrior stands up, he turns to traky and takes off his mask.
Traky: Glad to see you decided to join us there.
Warrior: Of course, anything to kill these imperial scum. *the warrior spits on the face of one of the fallen*
Traky: Hah, of course that's your motivation. Either way, glad to have you on board. *extends hand.*
Warrior: *shakes hand* Good to be on board, now where is the rest?
Maniacal laughing can be heard as the scene fades off.
The scene changes to a woman rushing through the halls of a decorative palace. By the way she was dressed, she was clearly a secretary. As she flings open a set of double doors, she walks towards a desk with a man sitting behind it in a large, cushioned chair.
Secretary: Lord Spero, we just received a report from the defensive front! The rebels have seized control of a DV controlled city.
Spero: How many of our men were stationed there? how many made it out?
Secretary: We had approximately 16 thousand troops stationed there. No news of survivors, Lord Spero.
Spero: By god, could this get any worse?
Secretary: I think so sir. Among the wreckage in a building we found this. * the secretary presents to Spero a dagger*
Spero: *takes dagger, notices a chain attached to it. The chain holds a miniature compass, the trademark of a certain assassin* Well, what do you know, it can get worse. He's involved.
Secretary: What are your orders sir?
Spero: We have no choice if he's involved, we need to call him in for this. Assemble my royal guard as well.
Secretary: You don't mean, him, do you?
Spero: Yes.
The secretary hurries off with a worry of look on her face. If Spero was going to call him in, things were more dire than anticipated. As she gets to her office, she immediately picked up her holo-projector, and activated it.
Holo-projector: Welcome, please enter in the number of the person you wish to dial.
Secretary: 555-1643-245
Holo-projector: Understood, dialing now.
The holo-projector dialed and was answered after two rings. A scruffy man appeared inside the projection.
Man: Hello?
Secretary: Moochie, we need your help. It's about the war.
Moochie: I thought I told Kain I wasn't going to be involved this time.
Secretary: I know, but it's important. He's involved. Please, Moochie, we need you, besides you owe me.
Moochie: *sighs* Fine, give me twenty minutes.
Scene Ends.
Footnote: I didn't really do this for the Free Beers challenge. Another thing, congratulations Traky! you've been promoted in role to one of the main villains, I've decided to give your previous role to Stevilovitch. |
Games Haven
The Unholy Legion Of DarkStar
DARKSTAR ARMY
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Posted - 2014.04.15 21:46:00 -
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Is Hynox a nonchalant satan dressed in 1950's business wear? I, I mean Hynox would appreciate that.
*runs back into dark corner*
May or may not be not the guy you might be thinking of.
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VIRDJINN Rampage
Diaper Rash.
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Posted - 2014.04.15 22:01:00 -
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CTRL + F
Kobrah
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Did not read
I failed English as a 2nd Language and wear a seatbelt on the shortbus.
don't laugh.. I only have 1 eye
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yep derrith again
Shining Flame
Amarr Empire
89
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Posted - 2014.04.15 22:02:00 -
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VIRDJINN Rampage wrote:CTRL + F
Kobrah
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Did not read
You don't make your cameo yet. Gosh, you're so impatient. |
Palatinate
Fatal Absolution
Dirt Nap Squad.
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Posted - 2014.04.15 22:48:00 -
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How often are you gonna release these? I like your Storytelling's Proficiency V.
"Hiding will be seen as an act of aggression!" - Battlefield 3
Me: lol what?
Fatal Absolution Director #10
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yep derrith again
Shining Flame
Amarr Empire
89
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Posted - 2014.04.15 22:50:00 -
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Palatinate wrote:How often are you gonna release these? I like your Storytelling's Proficiency V.
I think, unless I have a crapton of homework to do, I'll release them once a week, then we'll have a good screenplay eventually. |
KenKaniff69
Fatal Absolution
2336
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Posted - 2014.04.15 23:57:00 -
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Can I have some say in this since I am the director?
The problem with tanks
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yep derrith again
Shining Flame
Amarr Empire
91
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Posted - 2014.04.15 23:59:00 -
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KenKaniff69 wrote:Can I have some say in this since I am the director?
well, here's the thing. Production has seen fit to make a few "modifications" to the movie. |
Foolish Nalelmir
Amarr Templars
Amarr Empire
20
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Posted - 2014.04.15 23:59:00 -
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these are kinda fun. when are us evil space mercs going to be involved in your imaginings. Feel free to depict me as a bloodthirsty bastard with no morals... I think that's pretty close to the reality :P Regardless props for the creativity. If you do more story form there are places for it also. https://truestories.eveonline.com/truestories/index.html check it out. some one should be documenting all this stuff.
EVE - Fool Nalelmir TSOF-Director / DNS
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Traky78
What The French
Red Whines.
1014
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Posted - 2014.04.16 00:19:00 -
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Really good read, i'm now one of the main vilains !
Ps : Stevilovich is amazing
What The French CEO
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Mr Machine Guns
Nyain San
Dirt Nap Squad.
674
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Posted - 2014.04.16 00:22:00 -
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i provide the music to this |
yep derrith again
Shining Flame
Amarr Empire
93
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Posted - 2014.04.16 00:37:00 -
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Mr Machine Guns wrote:i provide the music to this
Well, okay, but follow a good theme.
something like this.
or
this, during epic flight scenes. |
Mr Machine Guns
Nyain San
Dirt Nap Squad.
675
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Posted - 2014.04.16 00:42:00 -
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Im the equivalent to a John Williams or Hans Zimmer so i know whats up |
Moochie Cricket
Fatal Absolution
Dirt Nap Squad.
674
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Posted - 2014.04.16 03:28:00 -
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Two things:
1.) Try not to repeat words in consecutive sentences, it takes away from the story and is a pet peeve of mine.
2.) Where is the sex scene between Zaria and I? I need something to **** to while my wife is at work.
Edit: w.a.n. k is censored? Really ccp?
"Military training is preferable, but anyone who can fly a plane would be useful."
"I can fly. I'm pilot."
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yep derrith again
Shining Flame
Amarr Empire
97
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Posted - 2014.04.16 03:30:00 -
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Moochie Cricket wrote:Two things:
1.) Try not to repeat words in consecutive sentences, it takes away from the story and is a pet peeve of mine.
2.) Where is the sex scene between Zaria and I? I need something to **** to while my wife is at work.
1) Thanks for the tip, will remember next time
2) I'll have to let Hynox write that one. He seems more adept at that kind of stuff. |
Lunatic Kota
TeamPlayers
Dirt Nap Squad.
148
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Posted - 2014.04.16 06:42:00 -
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I just want a room lined in RE's while I sit in the middle of it staring at the only door giddy with my finger on the detonator.
If you find yourself in a fair fight, you didn't plan your mission properly.
-David Hackworth
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General John Ripper
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Posted - 2014.04.16 07:17:00 -
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I want to see what happens with zatara and his wife.
Everytime I get a like, another bug is fixed.
Everytime I get a like, Two more bugs are born.
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General John Ripper
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Posted - 2014.04.20 20:45:00 -
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Need an update on Patrick and Zatara
Everytime I get a like, another bug is fixed.
Everytime I get a like, Two more bugs are born.
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