DUST Search - "The Ad" Giveaway [3x 100mil ISK] #1 (The Storyboard)

Derrith Erador wrote:

Arkena Wyrnspire wrote:

Marston VC wrote:

Add name: War..... War Never Changes

UNFORTUNATELY I AM UNABLE TO POST LINKS TO GOOGLE IMAGES FOR SOME REASON SO ILL JUST HAVE TO DESCRIBE THE PICTURES THAT NEED TO BE THERE :/

A 15 second video starting with scenes/clips/illustrations of battles throughout history. Ultimately leading up to the sales pitch of Fatal Absolution (a wonderful mercenary corp that kicks ass for a reasonable fee). Time is limited to 15 seconds and not 30 so that means the slides will be going very fast. This is how the video would play out.

Voice over: "War..... War Never Changes" (3 seconds to say)
Scene1: Picture of Roman battle
(1 second on screen(this is the opening picture/scene))

scene 2: Picture of medieval battle (with knights armor and all that)
(1 second on screen)

scene 3: Picture of knights Templar
(1 second on screen)

Voice over: The concept of war a millennia ago was hardly different then it is today. (3 seconds to say)
Scene 4: Revolutionary war battle, or any line formation battle with muskets
(2 seconds on screen, synchronized to pop up as the second voice over begins)

Video 1: world war 1 clip Skip to 6:35 on the video and take 1-2 seconds of the artillery being fired. (3 seconds of artillery footage)

Voice over: The only difference now is that some people are far better at it then others. (3 seconds to say)
Video 2: Nuclear detonation
(2 seconds on screen, synchronized to pop up as the voice over stats "is that some......."

Voice over: If you want a 100% chance of victory, hire Fatal Absolution today! (5 seconds to say)
Scene 5:Edit out the word "hitman" and replace it with "Fatal". Also, if its possible to do while making it look good, replace the hitman persona with a caldari logi dust merc. But only if that looks good, otherwise just keep the original dude there.
(Still frame of FA logo to continue going using the remaining time. The last scene is to be synchronized as the voice over says "hire Fatal........"

(ITS SO HARD TO FIT MEANINGFUL SENTANCES INTO A 15 SECOND ADD! But I tested the above lines just now and they fit so long as the speaker keeps up a relatively brisk pace). It was hard because of all the "link text" to fully make the math add up on all the timers I gave, but basically, just make sure the ones that need synchronized are synchronized, and the other filler clips can be whatever size they need to be (but no less the the minimum unless absolutely necessary).

The video is supposed to be simple and to the point, mostly because a 15 second time limit really makes it difficult to convey a meaningful message. I left a little breathing room for editing so yeah...... hopefully this wasn't so bad!

Confirming that FA are worth hiring. Pirate

blushes*, awwwww, that's so sweet, but don't talk like that please, you're going to make me go crazy.

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Fire of Prometheus DUST University Ivy League 3062	Posted - 2014.01.20 21:40:00 - [31] - Quote Bump a lump a chump a.....I ran out of rhyming words.... Ps. Any limit to the # of entries? Commando 6 // A.R.C Commander // D-Uni instructor A Balac's and a Thale's.....What's on your commando? Forum warrior 3
Castor Crave Orbital Flares 289	Posted - 2014.01.21 15:04:00 - [32] - Quote Fire of Prometheus wrote: Bump a lump a chump a.....I ran out of rhyming words.... Ps. Any limit to the # of entries? No, feel free to submit as many as you like And buuuuuump!!! Come on guys, this isn't too hard. Easy money Trader (Templar Items, ISK & Mercs) Two full sets of Templar Gear & 1.118.400.000 ISK given to the community so far :3
KatanaPT Tech Guard RISE of LEGION 444	Posted - 2014.01.21 15:27:00 - [33] - Quote Something like our spot? https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=tf4_QwSad9s&list=UUhb6G5CzeBywv2NVsjwpyaQ Tech Guard Recruiting Spot
Castor Crave Orbital Flares 291	Posted - 2014.01.21 15:49:00 - [34] - Quote KatanaPT wrote: Something like our spot? https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=tf4_QwSad9s&list=UUhb6G5CzeBywv2NVsjwpyaQ Sure, but 15 seconds long :) Trader (Templar Items, ISK & Mercs) Two full sets of Templar Gear & 1.118.400.000 ISK given to the community so far :3
Kain Spero Imperfects Negative-Feedback 2669	Posted - 2014.01.21 16:40:00 - [35] - Quote Really great idea. May have to try and write something myself. Owner of Spero Escrow Services Follow @KainSpero for Dust and CPM news
Roy Ventus Foxhound Corporation General Tso's Alliance 938	Posted - 2014.01.21 19:44:00 - [36] - Quote [Logo on screen with static sounds] "Even when we're immortal, we crave for something. Everybody wants money, or fame, or power, or just to watch the world burn. But you know what we want? What Foxhound Corporation wants?" [Exact words appear along with static lines if possible] [Clips of a battle are then shown with music playing in the background.] "We just want a good battle." [A mercenary begins walking forwards towards a distant LAV as it speeds towards them. The mercenary takes aim and shoots out the driver.] --- I'll probably make a second one and then erase this. "There once was a time when there wasn't a Roy Ventus and it wasn't much of a time at all." Roy Ventus
DUST Fiend OSG Planetary Operations Covert Intervention 10229	Posted - 2014.01.22 01:46:00 - [37] - Quote I'm still juggling around ideas, I should have something up soon though. I'll provide a voice recording of the script as a kind of proof of concept, to show it will comfortably fit in 15 seconds. Videos / Fiction Closed Beta Vet; Incubus Pilot
Borne Velvalor Endless Hatred 2233	Posted - 2014.01.22 09:16:00 - [38] - Quote Does the ad have to be a generalized advertisement that could be used to advertise all of the services in the hub or can it target a specific one? Many suits I've worn, many burdens I've borne, for the oaths I've sworn. Panda.
Castor Crave Orbital Flares 302	Posted - 2014.01.24 03:25:00 - [39] - Quote BUMP Needs more entries!!! D: Trader (Templar Items, ISK & Mercs) Two full sets of Templar Gear & 1.118.400.000 ISK given to the community so far :3
ANON Cerberus Tiny Toons 130	Posted - 2014.01.24 09:02:00 - [40] - Quote Life of a new mercanary. Repetedly stomped by proto, over and over again. Basically just have a 15 second death screen. Life of a Dust 514 PC player Just have a really low fps slide show. Life of the average merc. Just have a wall hack that can shoot through walls shown with some aim assist magical bullet suction.


CCP Saberwing C C P C C P Alliance 1298	Posted - 2014.01.24 09:02:00 - [41] - Quote This is a very cool idea. Really looking forward to seeing the results! Decided to give you a little push over Social Media, see here: https://twitter.com/dust514/status/426640028643917824 :) CCP Saberwing // DUST 514 Community Manager // @kanafchian

Mahal Daj Mahal Tactical Enterprises 17	Posted - 2014.01.24 16:01:00 - [42] - Quote Music: Nightcall by Kavinsky http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=MV_3Dpw-BRY or Midnight City by M83 http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=9aZFcosBTaQ (my preference) Character Voices: Narrator Command Pointman Rattlesnake Scorpion Opens with a sniper scope observing a convoy of Federal Marines (2 Madrugars, 2 LAVs, 2 Dropships) travelling in an arc around a reseach compound. Comms: "Command, this is Pointman; area secure, no hostiles around." Comms: "Pointman, this is Command; nothing on Tacnet either, continue your patrol." Scene switches to a scout with Nova Knives in a shadowy doorway observing the convoy continue on the road Voiceover: "Your ground assets are valuable, and need constant protection from threats." Scene switches to overhead view from a dropship sitting hidden on top of a building observing the convoy continue the arc. multiple heavy suit mercenaries with forge guns board the dropship. Voiceover: "threats... known and unknown" Scene switches back to the sniper view of the original shot, and breaks after it goes through the orbital command sequence (ends before the map comes up) Comms: "Rattlesnake, this is Scorpion, please proceed." Comms: "This is Scorpion, all teams commence operation." Scene switches back to the scout in the shadow (convoy is very close where the road passes the covering-structure) Scout's view observes an orbital hit the convoy in the front, as soon as the VRROOMMM of the orbital starts, the scout sprints for the center jeep and the WOOOMMM of the hidden dropship pans in from behind/overhead. the heavy suits drop from the dropship and essentially create a lane of inertia dampener crashes as the scout continues to sprint through the charging forge guns. As the forge guns strike the convoy dropships, the scout leaps onto the hood of an LAV as knives charge and the screen fades to voiceover or text-titlecard: Voiceover: "Security comes at a price: INSERT MERCENARY CORP HERE. Protecting your most valuable assets." Boost your squad's points by 40%, learn to use the Squad Wheel! I provide training: 1M isk: 90 Minutes of Basic Command
Castor Crave Orbital Flares 312	Posted - 2014.01.24 20:27:00 - [43] - Quote CCP Saberwing wrote: This is a very cool idea. Really looking forward to seeing the results! Decided to give you a little push over Social Media, see here: https://twitter.com/dust514/status/426640028643917824 :) Thank you, I appreciate it! Monday comes closer Trader (Templar Items, ISK & Mercs) Two full sets of Templar Gear & 1.118.400.000 ISK given to the community so far :3
Fire of Prometheus DUST University Ivy League 3131	Posted - 2014.01.24 20:32:00 - [44] - Quote I'm looking at these other ads....man I'm out of my league Commando 6 // A.R.C Commander // D-Uni instructor A Balac's and a Thale's.....What's on your commando? Forum warrior 3
Lt Royal Subdreddit Test Alliance Please Ignore 2622	Posted - 2014.01.24 21:04:00 - [45] - Quote Awww yeh nice to see the old TEST Alliance advert there; destroying your ears with - WUB WUB WUBING Gÿ£GÿàGÿP Subdreddit Recruitment Video Gÿ£GÿàGÿP
Mc Ribwich Subdreddit Test Alliance Please Ignore 471	Posted - 2014.01.24 21:42:00 - [46] - Quote Does it count if I post the video of it not the idea? Dust 514 video maker Subdreddit EU director and co-director of propaganda Twitter
DUST Fiend OSG Planetary Operations Covert Intervention 10341	Posted - 2014.01.24 21:46:00 - [47] - Quote Fire of Prometheus wrote: I'm looking at these other ads....man I'm out of my league I'm looking at some of these ads and wondering how on earth they would fit in a 15 second slot lol This week has turned out to be very inconvenient, I probably won't even cap before my booster runs out, I really need to get this ad done so I can try to get some ISKies for Inci's Videos / Fiction Closed Beta Vet; Incubus Pilot
Castor Crave Orbital Flares 312	Posted - 2014.01.24 21:57:00 - [48] - Quote Mc Ribwich wrote: Does it count if I post the video of it not the idea? Right now I am only looking for the scripts. This giveaway is not for corp recruitment ads btw: Castor Crave wrote: I thought it would be nice to do something together from scratch. I want you to create a script/storyboard for what is going to be a 15 second long spot. The spot should be an advertisement for the services Viktor, JL3Eleven, Kane, Min Lo, myself and others provide (trading, mercenary work, district sales, currency exchange, escrow services, etc.). [...] The ad should be directed at EVE pilots and should spark interest in DUST, our services and our community. Trader (Templar Items, ISK & Mercs) Two full sets of Templar Gear & 1.118.400.000 ISK given to the community so far :3
Mc Ribwich Subdreddit Test Alliance Please Ignore 475	Posted - 2014.01.24 22:00:00 - [49] - Quote Castor Crave wrote: Mc Ribwich wrote: Does it count if I post the video of it not the idea? Right now I am only looking for the scripts. This giveaway is not for corp recruitment ads btw: Castor Crave wrote: I thought it would be nice to do something together from scratch. I want you to create a script/storyboard for what is going to be a 15 second long spot. The spot should be an advertisement for the services Viktor, JL3Eleven, Kane, Min Lo, myself and others provide (trading, mercenary work, district sales, currency exchange, escrow services, etc.). [...] The ad should be directed at EVE pilots and should spark interest in DUST, our services and our community. Fair enough I guess, my corp wanted me to make a video for the stream anyway so no worries. ^_^ Dust 514 video maker Subdreddit EU director and co-director of propaganda Twitter
Fire of Prometheus DUST University Ivy League 3133	Posted - 2014.01.24 22:11:00 - [50] - Quote DUST Fiend wrote: Fire of Prometheus wrote: I'm looking at these other ads....man I'm out of my league I'm looking at some of these ads and wondering how on earth they would fit in a 15 second slot lol This week has turned out to be very inconvenient, I probably won't even cap before my booster runs out, I really need to get this ad done so I can try to get some ISKies for Inci's Lol I'm supposed to be studying for exams but I got bored and came across this thread, so I let my mind go nuts Commando 6 // A.R.C Commander // D-Uni instructor A Balac's and a Thale's.....What's on your commando? Forum warrior 3

Castor Crave Orbital Flares 314	Posted - 2014.01.24 22:12:00 - [51] - Quote Mc Ribwich wrote: Castor Crave wrote: Mc Ribwich wrote: Does it count if I post the video of it not the idea? Right now I am only looking for the scripts. This giveaway is not for corp recruitment ads btw: Castor Crave wrote: I thought it would be nice to do something together from scratch. I want you to create a script/storyboard for what is going to be a 15 second long spot. The spot should be an advertisement for the services Viktor, JL3Eleven, Kane, Min Lo, myself and others provide (trading, mercenary work, district sales, currency exchange, escrow services, etc.). [...] The ad should be directed at EVE pilots and should spark interest in DUST, our services and our community. Fair enough I guess, my corp wanted me to make a video for the stream anyway so no worries. ^_^ Would be really happy if you submitted a script for this event. Nice editing skills btw, even though the footage and music are somewhat generic Now I feel like an ass for saying that Trader (Templar Items, ISK & Mercs) Two full sets of Templar Gear & 1.118.400.000 ISK given to the community so far :3
Aeon Amadi Ancient Exiles. Renegade Alliance 4743	Posted - 2014.01.25 10:28:00 - [52] - Quote Just spit-balling off the top of my head in between matches. Music something akin to this up until the one minute mark. Dialogue: (display animation New Eden galactic cluster) Looking up there, at all those dots... It's easy to forget how big it all is... so far away... Perspective... (various scenes of Dust 514 and Eve Online combat) In his haste, man found more ways to kill one another than any other purpose. Ending life to further goals, plans... agendas... But his greatest achievement... He developed a weapon with no bullets. A machine, with no parts...a bridge, with no anchorage... In the blink of an eye, mankind achieved immortality, and soon enough, that immortality came to me... (music escalating with more intense video clips playing in faster succession) One round in a magazine... One magazine in a gun... A gun in the hands of a soldier... A soldier in an army... (words rapidly being spoken with escalation) An army on one world, in one system, in one constellation, one region, one galaxy, one universe...in one war... Looking up there, at all those dots... (music ceases) ...Suddenly it doesn't look so big... Useful Links //forums.dust514.com/default.aspx?g=posts&t=133588 //forums.dust514.com/default.aspx?g=posts&t=134182
Marston VC SVER True Blood Public Disorder. 1518	Posted - 2014.01.25 11:57:00 - [53] - Quote There was an issue with parsing this post's BBCode Marston VC, STB Director
Marston VC SVER True Blood Public Disorder. 1518	Posted - 2014.01.25 12:09:00 - [54] - Quote Add name: War..... War Never Changes A 15 second video starting with scenes/clips/illustrations of battles throughout history. Ultimately leading up to the sales pitch of Fatal Absolution (a wonderful mercenary corp that kicks ass for a reasonable fee). Time is limited to 15 seconds and not 30 so that means the slides will be going very fast. This is how the video would play out. Voice over: "War..... War Never Changes" (3 seconds to say) Scene1: (1 second on screen(this is the opening picture/scene)) scene 2: (1 second on screen) scene 3: (1 second on screen) Voice over: The concept of war a millennia ago was hardly different then it is today. (3 seconds to say) Scene 4: (2 seconds on screen, synchronized to pop up as the second voice over begins) Video 1: world war 1 clip Skip to 6:35 on the video and take 1-2 seconds of the artillery being fired. (3 seconds of artillery footage) Voice over: The only difference now is that some people are far better at it then others. (3 seconds to say) Video 2: Nuclear detonation (2 seconds on screen, synchronized to pop up as the voice over stats "is that some......." Voice over: If you want a 100% chance of victory, hire Fatal Absolution today! (5 seconds to say) Scene 5:Edit out the word "hitman" and replace it with "Fatal". Also, if its possible to do while making it look good, replace the hitman persona with a caldari logi dust merc. But only if that looks good, otherwise just keep the original dude there. (Still frame of FA logo to continue going using the remaining time. The last scene is to be synchronized as the voice over says "hire Fatal........" (ITS SO HARD TO FIT MEANINGFUL SENTANCES INTO A 15 SECOND ADD! But I tested the above lines just now and they fit so long as the speaker keeps up a relatively brisk pace). It was hard because of all the "link text" to fully make the math add up on all the timers I gave, but basically, just make sure the ones that need synchronized are synchronized, and the other filler clips can be whatever size they need to be (but no less the the minimum unless absolutely necessary). The video is supposed to be simple and to the point, mostly because a 15 second time limit really makes it difficult to convey a meaningful message. I left a little breathing room for editing so yeah...... hopefully this wasn't so bad! Marston VC, STB Director
Arkena Wyrnspire Fatal Absolution Covert Intervention 8360	Posted - 2014.01.25 15:29:00 - [55] - Quote Marston VC wrote: Add name: War..... War Never Changes UNFORTUNATELY I AM UNABLE TO POST LINKS TO GOOGLE IMAGES FOR SOME REASON SO ILL JUST HAVE TO DESCRIBE THE PICTURES THAT NEED TO BE THERE :/ A 15 second video starting with scenes/clips/illustrations of battles throughout history. Ultimately leading up to the sales pitch of Fatal Absolution (a wonderful mercenary corp that kicks ass for a reasonable fee). Time is limited to 15 seconds and not 30 so that means the slides will be going very fast. This is how the video would play out. Voice over: "War..... War Never Changes" (3 seconds to say) Scene1: Picture of Roman battle (1 second on screen(this is the opening picture/scene)) scene 2: Picture of medieval battle (with knights armor and all that) (1 second on screen) scene 3: Picture of knights Templar (1 second on screen) Voice over: The concept of war a millennia ago was hardly different then it is today. (3 seconds to say) Scene 4: Revolutionary war battle, or any line formation battle with muskets (2 seconds on screen, synchronized to pop up as the second voice over begins) Video 1: world war 1 clip Skip to 6:35 on the video and take 1-2 seconds of the artillery being fired. (3 seconds of artillery footage) Voice over: The only difference now is that some people are far better at it then others. (3 seconds to say) Video 2: Nuclear detonation (2 seconds on screen, synchronized to pop up as the voice over stats "is that some......." Voice over: If you want a 100% chance of victory, hire Fatal Absolution today! (5 seconds to say) Scene 5:Edit out the word "hitman" and replace it with "Fatal". Also, if its possible to do while making it look good, replace the hitman persona with a caldari logi dust merc. But only if that looks good, otherwise just keep the original dude there. (Still frame of FA logo to continue going using the remaining time. The last scene is to be synchronized as the voice over says "hire Fatal........" (ITS SO HARD TO FIT MEANINGFUL SENTANCES INTO A 15 SECOND ADD! But I tested the above lines just now and they fit so long as the speaker keeps up a relatively brisk pace). It was hard because of all the "link text" to fully make the math add up on all the timers I gave, but basically, just make sure the ones that need synchronized are synchronized, and the other filler clips can be whatever size they need to be (but no less the the minimum unless absolutely necessary). The video is supposed to be simple and to the point, mostly because a 15 second time limit really makes it difficult to convey a meaningful message. I left a little breathing room for editing so yeah...... hopefully this wasn't so bad! Confirming that FA are worth hiring. Level 5 Proficiency 3 Forum Warrior Lenin of the glorious armoured revolution
Derrith Erador Fatal Absolution Covert Intervention 704	Posted - 2014.01.25 15:48:00 - [56] - Quote Arkena Wyrnspire wrote: Marston VC wrote: Add name: War..... War Never Changes UNFORTUNATELY I AM UNABLE TO POST LINKS TO GOOGLE IMAGES FOR SOME REASON SO ILL JUST HAVE TO DESCRIBE THE PICTURES THAT NEED TO BE THERE :/ A 15 second video starting with scenes/clips/illustrations of battles throughout history. Ultimately leading up to the sales pitch of Fatal Absolution (a wonderful mercenary corp that kicks ass for a reasonable fee). Time is limited to 15 seconds and not 30 so that means the slides will be going very fast. This is how the video would play out. Voice over: "War..... War Never Changes" (3 seconds to say) Scene1: Picture of Roman battle (1 second on screen(this is the opening picture/scene)) scene 2: Picture of medieval battle (with knights armor and all that) (1 second on screen) scene 3: Picture of knights Templar (1 second on screen) Voice over: The concept of war a millennia ago was hardly different then it is today. (3 seconds to say) Scene 4: Revolutionary war battle, or any line formation battle with muskets (2 seconds on screen, synchronized to pop up as the second voice over begins) Video 1: world war 1 clip Skip to 6:35 on the video and take 1-2 seconds of the artillery being fired. (3 seconds of artillery footage) Voice over: The only difference now is that some people are far better at it then others. (3 seconds to say) Video 2: Nuclear detonation (2 seconds on screen, synchronized to pop up as the voice over stats "is that some......." Voice over: If you want a 100% chance of victory, hire Fatal Absolution today! (5 seconds to say) Scene 5:Edit out the word "hitman" and replace it with "Fatal". Also, if its possible to do while making it look good, replace the hitman persona with a caldari logi dust merc. But only if that looks good, otherwise just keep the original dude there. (Still frame of FA logo to continue going using the remaining time. The last scene is to be synchronized as the voice over says "hire Fatal........" (ITS SO HARD TO FIT MEANINGFUL SENTANCES INTO A 15 SECOND ADD! But I tested the above lines just now and they fit so long as the speaker keeps up a relatively brisk pace). It was hard because of all the "link text" to fully make the math add up on all the timers I gave, but basically, just make sure the ones that need synchronized are synchronized, and the other filler clips can be whatever size they need to be (but no less the the minimum unless absolutely necessary). The video is supposed to be simple and to the point, mostly because a 15 second time limit really makes it difficult to convey a meaningful message. I left a little breathing room for editing so yeah...... hopefully this wasn't so bad! Confirming that FA are worth hiring. blushes*, awwwww, that's so sweet, but don't talk like that please, you're going to make me go crazy. beatin' slaves and whippin' knaves All in a days work for an Amarrican!
Marston VC SVER True Blood Public Disorder. 1520	Posted - 2014.01.25 17:53:00 - [57] - Quote Derrith Erador wrote: Arkena Wyrnspire wrote: Marston VC wrote: Add name: War..... War Never Changes UNFORTUNATELY I AM UNABLE TO POST LINKS TO GOOGLE IMAGES FOR SOME REASON SO ILL JUST HAVE TO DESCRIBE THE PICTURES THAT NEED TO BE THERE :/ A 15 second video starting with scenes/clips/illustrations of battles throughout history. Ultimately leading up to the sales pitch of Fatal Absolution (a wonderful mercenary corp that kicks ass for a reasonable fee). Time is limited to 15 seconds and not 30 so that means the slides will be going very fast. This is how the video would play out. Voice over: "War..... War Never Changes" (3 seconds to say) Scene1: Picture of Roman battle (1 second on screen(this is the opening picture/scene)) scene 2: Picture of medieval battle (with knights armor and all that) (1 second on screen) scene 3: Picture of knights Templar (1 second on screen) Voice over: The concept of war a millennia ago was hardly different then it is today. (3 seconds to say) Scene 4: Revolutionary war battle, or any line formation battle with muskets (2 seconds on screen, synchronized to pop up as the second voice over begins) Video 1: world war 1 clip Skip to 6:35 on the video and take 1-2 seconds of the artillery being fired. (3 seconds of artillery footage) Voice over: The only difference now is that some people are far better at it then others. (3 seconds to say) Video 2: Nuclear detonation (2 seconds on screen, synchronized to pop up as the voice over stats "is that some......." Voice over: If you want a 100% chance of victory, hire Fatal Absolution today! (5 seconds to say) Scene 5:Edit out the word "hitman" and replace it with "Fatal". Also, if its possible to do while making it look good, replace the hitman persona with a caldari logi dust merc. But only if that looks good, otherwise just keep the original dude there. (Still frame of FA logo to continue going using the remaining time. The last scene is to be synchronized as the voice over says "hire Fatal........" (ITS SO HARD TO FIT MEANINGFUL SENTANCES INTO A 15 SECOND ADD! But I tested the above lines just now and they fit so long as the speaker keeps up a relatively brisk pace). It was hard because of all the "link text" to fully make the math add up on all the timers I gave, but basically, just make sure the ones that need synchronized are synchronized, and the other filler clips can be whatever size they need to be (but no less the the minimum unless absolutely necessary). The video is supposed to be simple and to the point, mostly because a 15 second time limit really makes it difficult to convey a meaningful message. I left a little breathing room for editing so yeah...... hopefully this wasn't so bad! Confirming that FA are worth hiring. blushes*, awwwww, that's so sweet, but don't talk like that please, you're going to make me go crazy. lol forward this to zatara and he may tear up again! Marston VC, STB Director
Ansiiis The Trustworthy Mocking Bird Inc. 658	Posted - 2014.01.25 18:36:00 - [58] - Quote Reserved. Will use Bolt Pistol even if it's OP or bad.
Arkena Wyrnspire Fatal Absolution Covert Intervention 8419	Posted - 2014.01.26 00:55:00 - [59] - Quote Marston VC wrote: Derrith Erador wrote: Arkena Wyrnspire wrote: Confirming that FA are worth hiring. blushes*, awwwww, that's so sweet, but don't talk like that please, you're going to make me go crazy. lol forward this to zatara and he may tear up again! Z cries every time he sees this. Level 5 Proficiency 3 Forum Warrior Lenin of the glorious armoured revolution
Fire of Prometheus Alpha Response Command 3164	Posted - 2014.01.26 01:09:00 - [60] - Quote Alright I got another idea for an ad. Title: the commando Song: another one bites the dust (by queen) # of people-4 (1 commando, 2 soldiers, 1 scout) Scene opens to a lone commando heading towards the entrance of the orbital bombardment facility. * cuts to a group of redberries, "sir, we have a tango on scans" "Take him out" a few soldiers run off one of them a scout. As the commando reaches the entrance and is walking up the steps, the scout rounds the corner and charges the commando. commando starts into a sprint! and stiff arms the scout into the ground (pulls a move like the orange guy 15 seconds into this clip) second soldier rounds the corner from behind the commando, gets a shot off and hits the commando. commando ducks into cover soldier 2 advances slowly on the commandos position. soldier 3 (captain redberry) rounds corner and follows behind soldier, stopping halfway to the commandos position. Commando rushes out and puts a few rounds into soldier 2. Then uses soldier 2 as a "shield" and takes out soldier 3. "Start your training today. Join Alpha Response Command today." flashes on screen and logo appears beside it. END scene I will edit this post and add pics/ links to music/clips of inspiration to help with my vision. Commando 6 // A.R.C Commander // C.E.O of Alpha Response Command A Balac's and a Thale's.....What's on your commando?



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