Exodeon Salviej
the third day
Public Disorder.
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Posted - 2013.12.20 06:00:00 -
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Write your own story, and enjoy the makings of your punctuation, grammar, spelling, and entertainment. Or...the opposite if you're not so great. Here's mine:
Book 1, Reaper, Excerpt of Chapter 1, "Flashback" (I have been working on this for a while now.)
A marble, a blue marble that floats in a black place with nothing surrounding it for light years, Now, imagine what would happen to that picture in your head if I said, 'A big blue marble.' It got bigger didn't it? Well, letGÇÖs add some detail to it, white tufts of color on the circumference and surface of this blue marble, and green to brown hues that are barely visible underneath the white tufts. Got a good picture yet? I suppose not, let me give you a bit more of a description; How's about that blue color is water, the green and brown is land, and the white tufts are clouds, figure it out yet? Yeah, now you got it; Planet Earth. The one and only place for light years within the universe with actual life on it...so far. LetGÇÖs get a closer look, bringing your view down on a city, if not bringing, then pulling you down because you can't see otherwise, is a city named New York. It sits on Long Island, just off the coast of the USA. Getting in a little closer is a street, and just off to the left is a project building. Walk in through the door, go down the hallway, ignoring the other doors with 115, 317, and any other number you can possibly think of, going to the mid-section of this hallway. Now, you look at the number on the door with the little eyehole underneath it and it says, '515.' You grab the handle, turn it, and open it up with a creak of sound, taking a foot and placing it within the door. The instant your foot touches the hardwood floor; you make a thump, a light one that's barely audible to your ears. Looking in through this door is yet another hallway, that's fairly short, only going about five to six feet ahead in front of you on the left wall, and going another couple more feet on the right wall. You walk down the hallway and you come into the living to your couch. At the sight of what you see, you raise an eyebrow at first, and when it finally hits you, you begin to realize that this isn't normal. Another thing I forgot to mention, you have boobs; About a B or C cup, wait, why am I explaining this? Getting back to the point, you're looking at your shoddy couch in your living room, and there's an indent along all three cushions, as well as both arm rests. You scan your eyes over a bit more, realizing the remote to the TV is floating in the air, buttons being pushed down repeatedly, and the TV is of course, on and changing channels. Carrying your computer bag on your right side, you part your lips to simply say, "What the ****...?" That's all you ever needed to say, and without further hesitation, it all stops. Remote drops to the floor with a clack and the backing popping off to release the batteries across the hardwood floor, and the indent on the couch cushions and arm rests disappear. You're shocked, unable to move at all, and your eyes are wide. Want to know what happened? LetGÇÖs look at someone elseGÇÖs point of view.
"Ugh, by the disciples there's nothing to watch on the TV..." Comes from Exodeon's lips as he's lying on the couch, his left arm rested nicely behind his head in a relaxing pose while his right leg is dangling off the edge of the couch, foot flat against the floor and the other leg rested on the opposite of his head, his foot being closest to you, the witness.
A voice inside of ExodeonGÇÖs' head pops up, "Well, of course you dipshit, humans are boring now-a-days anyways!" Atlas retorts in an evil manner, his voice being a bit higher pitched than ExodeonGÇÖs.
"Oh, shut up, Atlas...you curse too much." He growls a bit, finally hearing a "What the ****...?" behind him. And turning around to see a beautiful young lady, carrying a computer bag, immediately dropping the remote, and standing up on the floor quietly. Making no sound at all, he stares at her face. First thing that he notices is her long blonde hair that goes down to her shoulders, being angel hair, truly beautiful. Her skin is soft and pale, just as Exodeon's is, and her eyes are a pure green, deep and light with a closer shading to brown towards the pupil. She wears a leather collar around her neck with fake diamonds embedded into dog bones that go the circumference of the collar around her neck, a silver chain cross that hangs on her collar bone just below the collar itself, being a totally separate necklace. She has a fake lip ring placed on her bottom lip with a loose chain looped through the ring, so it dangles and curves its way upwards to her ear.
Now the best part is, "Damn she some nice boobs...and you forgot to pull yourself into reality and out of purgatory, dipshit..." Coming from the one and only, Atlas. ExodeonGÇÖs' instant reply being, "Really, Atlas?! Is that all you can bloody think about when she just saw an apparition on her damned couch?! I mean come on! And the cursing, again! I swear, wait, no...I don't swear to god-damned it all to hell...I am going to kill you someday, Atlas!"
"Well, you could have at least had yourself in reality...it's that simple, avoids less trouble." He snickers quietly in ExodeonGÇÖs head.
"True...I know how she gets when I'm making her think her house is haunted..." He laughs a bit and pulls himself into reality, showing himself to Inna, keep in mind that this is only her nickname, and was temporarily yours. You looked pretty damn hot there for a second, enjoy it?
Now, you can either continue this story, or write your own. Keep in mind though, if you continue THIS story, you MUST, and I must stress it very much, MUST continue the story based on the person who continued it before you. So if someone makes a continuation of this, and you come in after, you MUST continue the story based on what the last person said.
Your face is something to shoot, so I will shoot. Don't be offended, I do it to everyone.
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