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True Adamance
Scions of Athra
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Posted - 2013.12.11 20:41:00 -
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Another ....well unfortunately unbelievable section or lore. GIven that at the time of the first contact with the Minmatar the Amarr were confirmed to be the most power and technologically advanced (need dagger two on this) Empire around, it is highly unlikely that....your two system "Empire" could have done anything, let alone even made it to space.......
This God Modded Empire you have created is really bland.... could use some revision to make it more interesting and believable. Just my 0.02 ISK
"Shudder. Again another smart idea from an Amarr..."- Forlorn Destrier (11/12/13) LAWL
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True Adamance
Scions of Athra
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Posted - 2013.12.11 21:23:00 -
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Sorry I don't like coming in here and seemingly ragging on peoples hard work.... however New Eden doesn't have a big enough gap in lore to write in your own Empire sized super powers, nor does that fit in with the style of New Eden.
If you took the lore of the Scions of Athra, my current corp.
We styled the corp around a tradition of Athra familiies, extended to all of the Throne World during the reign of Emperor Heideran, where the lesser noble families would send their sons and daughters to fight on the frontlines of the Empires Imperial Guard. That's all they are, a noble tradition. The people in the group are nothing more and loyal men and women, all who happen to be skilled, but still nothing more special than normal humans/ immortals.
"Shudder. Again another smart idea from an Amarr..."- Forlorn Destrier (11/12/13) LAWL
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True Adamance
Scions of Athra
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Posted - 2013.12.11 21:57:00 -
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MRBH1997 wrote:Like I said me and my buddies are tweekig it as time goes to make it more sensible an realistic in he EVE universe. We are trying to make them like one of the many tribes, clans or races that the Amarr came across in space that were then enslaved but in this case were crushed for rebellion. We aren't original EVE players so we are still learning all of the original and non changing EVE story. If ya want feel free to provide links that are more helpful than the ones on the forum Dev post if they exist. We don't plan on mucking up the true EVE story :)
Ah well then, if you are supposed to me a lost civilisation don't make your people overly good at any one thing,or everything, give them smaller, less notable talents, build them up as the people who in their hour of need rose to the occasion and though they resisted, died honourably fighting a vaster, superior foe.
"Shudder. Again another smart idea from an Amarr..."- Forlorn Destrier (11/12/13) LAWL
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True Adamance
Scions of Athra
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Posted - 2013.12.11 22:27:00 -
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MRBH1997 wrote:Ya that's what we are trying to do with the technology aspect if them. Also the size of the. We aren't clear on the whole systems and clusters and such so sorry of system was to big we are a little lacking in the knowledge I the order from planet to galaxy as I what is in between.
Systems are tiny (in the grand scheme of new eden) , a couple of planets at most....that would be nothing to an Empire like the Amarr who could flood the systems with hundreds of cruisers, Battleships, and several titans....
I could see your people being armed with projectile weapons like combat rifles...the issue is that if they had that level of tech why were they not on the galactic scene.... its a tough one to compose.....
"Shudder. Again another smart idea from an Amarr..."- Forlorn Destrier (11/12/13) LAWL
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