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ROEG X
Ahrendee Mercenaries
EoN.
27
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Posted - 2013.12.03 06:15:00 -
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As of 1700hrs," the Gallente Federation pushed back the Amarr war machine out of the Black Rise System," said Minmatar General Shot U Sam. The Gallente Federation Fleet along with 8 Minmatar Titans and 12 Capital ships had went on the offensive destroying over 3,000 Amarr warships within the Black Rise System, the Amarr heavy losts crippled their capability to operate within the system. Supply Ships, Freighters and Amarr research vessels were turned over to the Minmatar for intel on Amarr technology. With two massive Gallente fleets of over 8,528 Warships consisting of titans, capitals, fighters and drones were in the system along side with 2,000 Minmatar super battle cruisers, there was no way the Amarr could attack such a over whelming force. ''Captain James T Bone, We have a problem," said General Shot U Sam. Lunar 7 is the last Amarr super base located in the Alpha quadrant of the Black Rise System, the moon is located in the dark reach astriod belt which makes it difficult to send in huge battle cruisers." General we could easily destroy the planet," No Captain said General Shot U Sam," We will capture Lunar 7," Minmatar Intel has confirmed that Minmatar military scientists along with researchers had discovered a lost Sleeper City located within the core of the Moon, Intel has it that Sleepers technology is beyond anything they have ever seen.
"General why haven't the Sleepers destroyed the Amarr super base?" Captain there existence is a closely guarded secret and the Jove have been in contact with the Sleeper Colonies for centuries, The Sleepers have more kowledge on Space craft engineering and weaponry beyond the Jove. I had been contacted by the Jove through a brain wave comm link that instructed me to contact General Roeg X to seize the Amarr facility." said the general. " General, we have thousands of generals throughout the Gallente Federation, why Roeg X, " said Captain James T Bone." The general replied, Roeg X is one of the most feared Gallente in all of New Eden and the Jove have supplied him with the most sophisticated dropsuit technology and weapons that anyone could imagine. Roeg X has influences in the Caldari State and even within the Amarr Empire. General Roeg X Corporation wealth is within the Trillions. He has connections with New Eden's most elite mercenaries and no one would be in there right mind to dare start a war with a immortal who is protected by the Jove Empire. "Captain, make contact with Roeg X." "General Roeg X permission to board your ship, permission granted captain," what brings you out here in lost space captain," replied General Roeg. Well sir Lunar 7 without another word the General stood up and said ," I know, my team will seize control of the Amarr super base."
We attack within 72 hrs, I have been instructed to capture 3 Amarr engineers and top secret documents on the new Amarr pulse rifle technology as well as pulsar shield technology these engineers and the Amarr secret documents will be handed over to the Jove. I will also make sure that the Gallente Federation will be informed so we could somehow start to research ways to improve our existing weapons and dropsuit technology. Captain you are now here by under my command for Operation Apollo Blitz. TO BE CONTINUED.....................
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Leithe Askarii
Isuuaya Tactical
Caldari State
60
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Posted - 2013.12.03 10:38:00 -
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The Amarr have never been in Black Rise, which is a Caldari/Gallente System....and why would a minmatar general be telling Gallente about this?
They are allies....but they aren't that close.
I appreciate the attempt at lore.....but it really doesn't operate within the conventions of established cannon..... |
ROEG X
Ahrendee Mercenaries
EoN.
27
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Posted - 2013.12.07 13:47:00 -
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It's my story I write it how I want. It's called fiction for a reason noob. |
Denak Kalamari
Intaki Liberation Front
Intaki Prosperity Initiative
691
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Posted - 2013.12.07 15:22:00 -
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ROEG X wrote:It's my story I write it how I want. It's called fiction for a reason noob.
You don't have to go hostile about a simple notification. And CCP also writes fiction, as is my blog writing fiction, we non-CCP employees just happen to write fan-fiction. Our theorizing about the mechanics of equipment is fan fiction, and usually the fan fiction we write we incorporate into our own backstories. Because of this, we take great effort in making sure that the fan fiction we write makes sense in the New Eden lore. We also have this level of expectation for other people writing fan fiction of the same universe, so we notify when things don't make sense when reading the existing lore.
You can write whatever you want, it's your content. You just don't have to be hostile about it.
Grahisha of ILF // Writer of Thoughts of a Clone Soldier // Latest entry published 05/12/13
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True Adamance
Scions of Athra
4611
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Posted - 2013.12.07 23:59:00 -
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ROEG X wrote:It's my story I write it how I want. It's called fiction for a reason noob.
Fair enough but if it doesn't make sense or nobody wants to read it then the fiction is weak..... all I suggested was taking a look into the lore CCP has already made for us and putting a little bit more effort into the composition of an enthralling and enjoyable story.
As one who does know some bits of lore here and there I simply find it to be a work where the author is self aggrandising....such stories to me are pretty weak, they lacks significant character, and room for development because X character is already at near godhood.
These are my critiques, if you are going to write you have to be open to critique which is a lesson a published author of fiction books told me when I was working with him to develop my own writing.
Scale of conflict if fine, admittedly hundreds of supercapital and capital class ships are a massive force In their own right without support fleets and picket lines being set up as the fleet moves. Why not tone down some of the less (within context) believable aspects and focus on how you can make yourself, the character more meaningful.
"All things were created by the Divine, and so the glory of our faith is inherent to us all"
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ROEG X
Ahrendee Mercenaries
EoN.
27
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Posted - 2013.12.09 10:12:00 -
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Denak Kalamari wrote:ROEG X wrote:It's my story I write it how I want. It's called fiction for a reason noob. You don't have to go hostile about a simple notification. And CCP also writes fiction, as is my blog writing fiction, we non-CCP employees just happen to write fan-fiction. Our theorizing about the mechanics of equipment is fan fiction, and usually the fan fiction we write we incorporate into our own backstories. Because of this, we take great effort in making sure that the fan fiction we write makes sense in the New Eden lore. We also have this level of expectation for other people writing fan fiction of the same universe, so we notify when things don't make sense when reading the existing lore. You can write whatever you want, it's your content. You just don't have to be hostile about it.
Well notify me with a source of information on New Eden's History, I'm interested in the stories behind the factions of New Eden. I think it's rude and ignorant to notify someone about something without at least giving some sort of link on where I could read about all the history of the factions and the stories of the wars that occurred between the factions. Before your quick to correct someone be wise enough to provide some source of information so that if I ever decide to write something else I would be well informed on the correct lore of the factions of New Eden until then I'll take pleasure shooting you noobs in the face and creating my own wars in Dust 514. See you on the Battlefield. |
Agent Monroe
Namtar Elite
Gallente Federation
11
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Posted - 2013.12.09 10:28:00 -
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ROEG X wrote:Denak Kalamari wrote:ROEG X wrote:It's my story I write it how I want. It's called fiction for a reason noob. You don't have to go hostile about a simple notification. And CCP also writes fiction, as is my blog writing fiction, we non-CCP employees just happen to write fan-fiction. Our theorizing about the mechanics of equipment is fan fiction, and usually the fan fiction we write we incorporate into our own backstories. Because of this, we take great effort in making sure that the fan fiction we write makes sense in the New Eden lore. We also have this level of expectation for other people writing fan fiction of the same universe, so we notify when things don't make sense when reading the existing lore. You can write whatever you want, it's your content. You just don't have to be hostile about it. Well notify me with a source of information on New Eden's History, I'm interested in the stories behind the factions of New Eden. I think it's rude and ignorant to notify someone about something without at least giving some sort of link on where I could read about all the history of the factions and the stories of the wars that occurred between the factions. Before your quick to correct someone be wise enough to provide some source of information so that if I ever decide to write something else I would be well informed on the correct lore of the factions of New Eden until then I'll take pleasure shooting you noobs in the face and creating my own wars in Dust 514. See you on the Battlefield.
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True Adamance
Scions of Athra
4658
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Posted - 2013.12.09 22:32:00 -
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ROEG X wrote:Denak Kalamari wrote:ROEG X wrote:It's my story I write it how I want. It's called fiction for a reason noob. You don't have to go hostile about a simple notification. And CCP also writes fiction, as is my blog writing fiction, we non-CCP employees just happen to write fan-fiction. Our theorizing about the mechanics of equipment is fan fiction, and usually the fan fiction we write we incorporate into our own backstories. Because of this, we take great effort in making sure that the fan fiction we write makes sense in the New Eden lore. We also have this level of expectation for other people writing fan fiction of the same universe, so we notify when things don't make sense when reading the existing lore. You can write whatever you want, it's your content. You just don't have to be hostile about it. Well notify me with a source of information on New Eden's History, I'm interested in the stories behind the factions of New Eden. I think it's rude and ignorant to notify someone about something without at least giving some sort of link on where I could read about all the history of the factions and the stories of the wars that occurred between the factions. Before your quick to correct someone be wise enough to provide some source of information so that if I ever decide to write something else I would be well informed on the correct lore of the factions of New Eden until then I'll take pleasure shooting you noobs in the face and creating my own wars in Dust 514. See you on the Battlefield.
Lol that's how I felt about Dagger Two....until I realised he knows a **** ton.
EVElopedia is you best source. Each faction has its own racial bios starting with the EVE gate collapse and the Dark Ages, then the rise to power, followed by more modern military and political events.
I know plenty about the Amarr and Minmatar but not too much about the Cal Gallente.
Currently only two of the empires are in "open" war against one another at a time and they are the Amarr and Minmatar, and Gallente and Caldari.
Now while the Caldari and Amarr, Gallente Minmatar have alliances....it doesn't mean they like their allies all that much...
CONCORD is a police force using massively advanced ships to police and maintain the status quo as Massive scale Galactic war would be crippling to the universe as a whole, for this they regulate and ensure that war is conducted on small scales out in lowly populated systems, AKA FW systems. These are very separate and you rarely see open conflict between the Amarr and Gallente, or Caldari and Minmatar....
"All things were created by the Divine, and so the glory of our faith is inherent to us all"
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ROEG X
Ahrendee Mercenaries
EoN.
30
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Posted - 2013.12.10 11:53:00 -
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True Adamance wrote:ROEG X wrote:Denak Kalamari wrote:ROEG X wrote:It's my story I write it how I want. It's called fiction for a reason noob. You don't have to go hostile about a simple notification. And CCP also writes fiction, as is my blog writing fiction, we non-CCP employees just happen to write fan-fiction. Our theorizing about the mechanics of equipment is fan fiction, and usually the fan fiction we write we incorporate into our own backstories. Because of this, we take great effort in making sure that the fan fiction we write makes sense in the New Eden lore. We also have this level of expectation for other people writing fan fiction of the same universe, so we notify when things don't make sense when reading the existing lore. You can write whatever you want, it's your content. You just don't have to be hostile about it. Well notify me with a source of information on New Eden's History, I'm interested in the stories behind the factions of New Eden. I think it's rude and ignorant to notify someone about something without at least giving some sort of link on where I could read about all the history of the factions and the stories of the wars that occurred between the factions. Before your quick to correct someone be wise enough to provide some source of information so that if I ever decide to write something else I would be well informed on the correct lore of the factions of New Eden until then I'll take pleasure shooting you noobs in the face and creating my own wars in Dust 514. See you on the Battlefield. Lol that's how I felt about Dagger Two....until I realised he knows a **** ton. EVElopedia is you best source. Each faction has its own racial bios starting with the EVE gate collapse and the Dark Ages, then the rise to power, followed by more modern military and political events. I know plenty about the Amarr and Minmatar but not too much about the Cal Gallente. Currently only two of the empires are in "open" war against one another at a time and they are the Amarr and Minmatar, and Gallente and Caldari. Now while the Caldari and Amarr, Gallente Minmatar have alliances....it doesn't mean they like their allies all that much... CONCORD is a police force using massively advanced ships to police and maintain the status quo as Massive scale Galactic war would be crippling to the universe as a whole, for this they regulate and ensure that war is conducted on small scales out in lowly populated systems, AKA FW systems. These are very separate and you rarely see open conflict between the Amarr and Gallente, or Caldari and Minmatar....
Thank you, I appreciate you taking the time to share some info on the lore of the Eve universe I'm so interested in, I'm sorry if I came off mean but there are some really rude people in our Dust / EvE community thanks so much True Adamance. : )
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True Adamance
Scions of Athra
4727
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Posted - 2013.12.10 17:35:00 -
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ROEG X wrote:True Adamance wrote:ROEG X wrote:Denak Kalamari wrote:ROEG X wrote:It's my story I write it how I want. It's called fiction for a reason noob. You don't have to go hostile about a simple notification. And CCP also writes fiction, as is my blog writing fiction, we non-CCP employees just happen to write fan-fiction. Our theorizing about the mechanics of equipment is fan fiction, and usually the fan fiction we write we incorporate into our own backstories. Because of this, we take great effort in making sure that the fan fiction we write makes sense in the New Eden lore. We also have this level of expectation for other people writing fan fiction of the same universe, so we notify when things don't make sense when reading the existing lore. You can write whatever you want, it's your content. You just don't have to be hostile about it. Well notify me with a source of information on New Eden's History, I'm interested in the stories behind the factions of New Eden. I think it's rude and ignorant to notify someone about something without at least giving some sort of link on where I could read about all the history of the factions and the stories of the wars that occurred between the factions. Before your quick to correct someone be wise enough to provide some source of information so that if I ever decide to write something else I would be well informed on the correct lore of the factions of New Eden until then I'll take pleasure shooting you noobs in the face and creating my own wars in Dust 514. See you on the Battlefield. Lol that's how I felt about Dagger Two....until I realised he knows a **** ton. EVElopedia is you best source. Each faction has its own racial bios starting with the EVE gate collapse and the Dark Ages, then the rise to power, followed by more modern military and political events. I know plenty about the Amarr and Minmatar but not too much about the Cal Gallente. Currently only two of the empires are in "open" war against one another at a time and they are the Amarr and Minmatar, and Gallente and Caldari. Now while the Caldari and Amarr, Gallente Minmatar have alliances....it doesn't mean they like their allies all that much... CONCORD is a police force using massively advanced ships to police and maintain the status quo as Massive scale Galactic war would be crippling to the universe as a whole, for this they regulate and ensure that war is conducted on small scales out in lowly populated systems, AKA FW systems. These are very separate and you rarely see open conflict between the Amarr and Gallente, or Caldari and Minmatar.... Thank you, I appreciate you taking the time to share some info on the lore of the Eve universe I'm so interested in, I'm sorry if I came off mean but there are some really rude people in our Dust / EvE community thanks so much True Adamance. : )
Yeah I'm one of those people.....
"All things were created by the Divine, and so the glory of our faith is inherent to us all"
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Jacques Cayton II
Providence Guard
Templis Dragonaors
307
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Posted - 2013.12.14 15:36:00 -
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ROEG X wrote:It's my story I write it how I want. It's called fiction for a reason noob.
Yes but it's based of off eve therefore you must abide by the rules
We fight for the future of the State not our
personal goals
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ROEG X
Ahrendee Mercenaries
EoN.
35
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Posted - 2013.12.15 16:51:00 -
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Jacques Cayton II wrote:ROEG X wrote:It's my story I write it how I want. It's called fiction for a reason noob. Yes but it's based of off eve therefore you must abide by the rules
I apologize and will abide by the rules of Eve, Sorry Guys |
Dagger-Two
Gespenster Kompanie
Villore Accords
168
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Posted - 2013.12.16 05:35:00 -
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True Adamance wrote:
Lol that's how I felt about Dagger Two....until I realised he knows a **** ton.
I DO appologize for the times I may have seemed like a total ****, haha. |
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