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Enkidu Camuel
Ahrendee Mercenaries
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Posted - 2013.11.16 10:16:00 -
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Alright, I decided to post the profile of my character, sorry for my english:
Name: Enkidu Camuel
Age: 22
Sex: Female
Race: Caldari
Bloodline: Deteis
Appearance:
-Civilian clothes / corporative: http://imgur.com/2EJbYY1
-Dropsuit: http://i.imgur.com/OyPhQVV.jpg (I made the mistake of drawing her with long hair, I'll fix it when I can)
Hair color: White
Eyes color: Blue
Skin tone: Light tan
Personality: Cheerful spirit, intelligent and a little light headed, can get very angry easily and tends to be hostile towards another person before gradually showing her warm side over time (tsun tsun...)
Backstory: (part 1)
Enkidu is or was a member of the Camuel family, owners of the Camuel Shipyard Company (CSC) which is part of the many Caldarian military contractors responsable for the creation of battleships for the state, due to her important bloodline she grew up surrounded by luxury in the middle of a cold family which cared only for money and social status, when she was an adolescent she realized that she was a bird living in a golden cage, she didn't wanted to be another boring Caldari citizen but she didn't had much of a choice, much less when his father told her that he arranged her marriage with a total stranger, a convenient economic union between families... she didn't wanted to suffer the same the fate of her three elder sisters, being using as a mere social and politic tool was an insult for her, so that's why she planned her escape.
One night, using her hacking skills she managed to steal near three hundred million ISK, mere pocket change for her family but it was enough for her to start a new life, gathering her stuff she lied to her mother telling that she was going to buy new clothes at the local shopping mall, there she managed to decieve her bodyguards and finally without being watched, she took a taxi to the nearest spaceport.
Finally she was all alone in the huge terminal, but she knew that her father had enough power to close the entire area to cut off her escape, but soon fate was on her side when she met a Capsuleer, it was her first encounter with one of those immortal pilots outiside the inner circles of her family... after talking with him, he accepted to help her in the escape and before the orders of her father reached the spaceport, she was already in high orbit of her home planet aboard of a Tengu.
Days passed before she was dropped in a big space station close to the Sisters of Eve territory, that place was filled with many people from different races, she grew up knowing the fact the Amarrians were equals and allies for her, while Gallenteans and Minmatars were the enemy, she spend her first weeks in the space station among Amarrians and other Caldarians, but soon she realized that the groups were also getting along with the Gallenteans and Minmatars, there were problems every now and then but the atmosphere was nice enough for her and she decided to make that place her new home.
Major DUST fact.
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Enkidu Camuel
Ahrendee Mercenaries
EoN.
135
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Posted - 2013.11.16 10:16:00 -
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Backstory: (part 2)
She knew that she could live perfectly with all the stolen money from her family, but she wanted to have an actuall job for the first time of her life and earn money with her own efforts, soon she discovered that a Coporation was hiring new personel and she got a spot inside as a secretary, her job wasn't that exciting but it was well payed and everyone was friendly around her, she enjoyed peace for a while when one day she got called to a meeting in a space factory over a planet.
The meeting was going as expected when suddenly the factory was attacked by Sansha's Nation forces, the defense forces didn't had a chance against the soldiers of the True Power faction, most of the delegates died and just when everything was lost for her, she saw in the distance a group of soldiers wearing strange armors in the middle of a fierce battle against the invaders, the deadly spray of the enemy weapons was a mere summer rain for those warriors, there was just six of them... six of them were able to stop an invading force of elite soldiers from Sansha's Nation, their armors didn't had a single scratch and Enkidu was able to smell the smoke from their heated weapons... back at home, she heared rumors about the rise of the immortal mercenaries, the so called gods of the battlefield without fear of death, she was a witness of their power and flame was ignited inside her... then one of the soldiers walked towards her and extended his hand to get her up from the ground, when she touched the metal of his armor, her destiny was sealed.
Back at her home, she studied the mistery mercenaries in detail, she wanted to become one of them, she used her money for information about them and finally, she managed to contact one of the soldiers that helped her out, the young man was a little bit uncomfortable with the whole situation, but Enkidu was determined, he didn't wanted to help her and he closed the door of his house several times in front of her face, but she visited his house again and again untill one day...
-Seriously... this girl *he said while making a deep sigh* she just shows up and knocks my door... waiting for me to get out, it's been a week now since this started...
The man was watching Enkidu from the screen of his tv, hearing the sounds of the knocks and the door bell from his couch.
-I can kill her easily but... her eyes, she's full of determitation isn't? *he asked to himself*
The man scratched his cheeck and he looked to the ceiling of his house, then he made another deep sigh.
-Good grief...
After saying that, he stood up an walked to the door, then he opened it.
-Alright, I'm starting to get tired of this... but I know that you're not going to give up, damn, it's like that you have a crush on me or something.
After hearing that, Enkidu Blushed.
-You... you idiot! I'm not here because I like you, don't get the wrong idea! I'm here because I want to be a mercenary!
She was angry, but the man smiled, then he opened his door.
-Alright, let's talk.
-Part 3 comming soon-
Major DUST fact.
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Enkidu Camuel
Ahrendee Mercenaries
EoN.
145
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Posted - 2013.12.17 07:37:00 -
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Demel Derpovsky wrote: Love your character's bio and story, however, your description's a bit lengthy and I don't know.... Keep it though, It's not gibberish and I feel like this is a good story, just... one more part so we don't have to hunt everything down.
Thanks! I'll be sure to work on the third part soon, then I'll merge all the parts in a single googledoc, I'm pretty impressed that someone actually liked the bio of my character... just a heads up, don't pay attention to some typos and other mistakes, it's a bit hard for me to write a full story in english.
Major DUST fact.
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