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181. The Pain of a Mercenary - in DUST 514 Fiction [original thread]
SIN Sleeth wrote: sir ravenwing wrote: Great story and about the "most everyone has a sob story about their whole family dying" my character has only lost his brother My character too has a similar story which shall probally never be reveale...
- by Denak Kalamari - at 2014.01.29 19:06:00
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182. Thoughts of a Clone Soldier - in DUST 514 Fiction [original thread]
A proper entry is out finally, which largely discusses the humanity of dusters and capsuleers alike, and some of its defining traits. I hope you like it!
- by Denak Kalamari - at 2014.01.29 18:39:00
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183. The Pain of a Mercenary - in DUST 514 Fiction [original thread]
It's a good story, and definitely with a unique approach. Just as a small notification, which many can get wrong, is that this father figure can't have been a clone soldier for no more than three years at best, and that's if you were part of the v...
- by Denak Kalamari - at 2014.01.29 07:55:00
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184. A day in the life - in DUST 514 Fiction [original thread]
There's several programs on your computer and in the internet you can use to save any stories you have in your mind without having to publish it for everyone. Google Drive, Pastebin, Notepad, Microsoft Word etc.
- by Denak Kalamari - at 2014.01.27 12:17:00
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185. A day in the life - in DUST 514 Fiction [original thread]
Welp. Your idea is neat, but execution is ****-poor. There's no clear separation between dialogue and actions, no paragraphs at all, things are left unexplained, not to mention you're making quite a few discrepancies with the lore. I suggest you ...
- by Denak Kalamari - at 2014.01.27 11:57:00
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186. special character bios - in DUST 514 Fiction [original thread]
Why does there need to be a separate thread for this? The original thread is just fine, we don't need to suddenly highlight people who don't just happen to be purely of one race.
- by Denak Kalamari - at 2014.01.26 15:49:00
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187. Thoughts of a Clone Soldier - in DUST 514 Fiction [original thread]
New entry out, finally! . It's simply highlighting the project that I've revived again, which I hope will get some activity soon. I'll try to push a proper entry out next time!
- by Denak Kalamari - at 2014.01.25 13:39:00
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188. Yulai III Ground Facility OOC Thread - in DUST 514 Fiction [original thread]
Hawk-eye Occultus wrote: On the subject of the weaponry rule: * Would pistols count as being "concealable" on par or approximately the same ease of hiding as a knife? * What about carrying a larger weapon in dissembled form, as hiding a lot ...
- by Denak Kalamari - at 2014.01.24 21:36:00
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189. Yulai III Ground Facility OOC Thread - in DUST 514 Fiction [original thread]
Link to the IC thread can be found here . First of all, welcome to the Summit! This concept was originally designed to have a hub area for all the different physical venues that started popping up in the IGS many months ago. I created a channel ...
- by Denak Kalamari - at 2014.01.24 20:25:00
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190. Shyeer Alvarin: Origins- Traitor to the State - in DUST 514 Fiction [original thread]
Gave it a read, it isn't too bad, it definitely has promise and a good start. Your first two entries are quite neat as well. The layout of the blog is also clearly constructed, and the color scheme is consistent and fits well. But if I were to giv...
- by Denak Kalamari - at 2014.01.24 19:08:00
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191. Warrior Nine:: A Personal Account of New Eden - in DUST 514 Fiction [original thread]
Hawk-eye Occultus wrote: Galm Fae wrote: As a bit of a spoiler I'd like you all who don't know to know that Morgan is my current EVE character. He's a few years older now than in Warrior Nine, and you can bet he didn't have those scars back ...
- by Denak Kalamari - at 2014.01.24 11:23:00
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192. a raven's call - in DUST 514 Fiction [original thread]
Get a PC, use a library computer if necessary. Google Drive seriously isn't as effective if you're using a mobile version, and it would do wonders to your grammar.
- by Denak Kalamari - at 2014.01.23 21:13:00
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193. Failure - in DUST 514 Fiction [original thread]
I wasn't really planning to make any following parts to this, it was just a random burst of creativity that tied into the report I made earlier. But when you mention it, making this an overarching storyline would actually be quite interesting. I'l...
- by Denak Kalamari - at 2014.01.22 21:46:00
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194. Our Blog would like to highlight your stories! - in DUST 514 Fiction [original thread]
If any, Galm's Warrior Nine stories definitely deserve highlighting!
- by Denak Kalamari - at 2014.01.21 22:09:00
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195. Warrior Nine:: A Personal Account of New Eden - in DUST 514 Fiction [original thread]
Galm Fae wrote: Yeah. That's actually a pivotal part of his character that I'd really like to build on. I know most people think Galm acts like a moody teenager but that's because he pretty much is STILL a teenager compared to most other people...
- by Denak Kalamari - at 2014.01.20 07:18:00
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196. Warrior Nine:: A Personal Account of New Eden - in DUST 514 Fiction [original thread]
Galm Fae wrote: sir ravenwing wrote: More............give me more LOL Oh and certain parts of warrior nine will be in a raven's call for example the part 1 *spoiler* raven will be watching this fight calmly hidden and in lower pristicts behi...
- by Denak Kalamari - at 2014.01.20 07:01:00
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197. Failure - in DUST 514 Fiction [original thread]
So, after another spur of inspiration I have written my first, actual story for the DUST 514 Fiction community to read, and I dubbed it Failure. It ties in with the report I made previously, so I recommend you read it first before this. But in a...
- by Denak Kalamari - at 2014.01.19 15:54:00
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198. Not too long ago - in DUST 514 Fiction [original thread]
Squagga wrote: Thank you. A bit unsure of myself intially lol. I do have a few more I plan on sharing with you guys. Most of them based on actual events. I have to admit I have been truely inspired to put these stories into actual words because...
- by Denak Kalamari - at 2014.01.19 05:53:00
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199. What about our real lore? - in DUST 514 Fiction [original thread]
This has already been done . And you're free to write down stories about corporations and characters, nothing's stopping you
- by Denak Kalamari - at 2014.01.18 07:56:00
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200. Looking for writers and video editers - in DUST 514 Fiction [original thread]
I'm interested, but I have a few questions. What dust merc? What do you mean with from implant onwards? Would this character have a story arc? What kind of a character is s/he? How much control would we have over the creation and modification of ...
- by Denak Kalamari - at 2014.01.17 17:42:00
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