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The Infected One
CrimeWave Syndicate
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Posted - 2013.03.08 02:47:00 -
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As I'm reading your work I've noticed that the time stamps are more or less 1 hour apart. This suggests to me hat you already have this story planned out in at least some rough fashion. I've written some medieval fiction while going through school but not only was that years ago, it took me quite a while to develop a base story line for myself to expand upon. That being said, I am personally more intrigued with your vision for this unknown new mercenary. Please continue, I highly doubt many if any others would find anything wrong with your interpretation of how events should unfold. Who knows, it could inspire a whole forum based lore section with some rather exciting and interesting outcomes. |
The Infected One
CrimeWave Syndicate
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Posted - 2013.03.08 04:57:00 -
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I'm finding it very interesting, please don't leave it unfinished. |
The Infected One
CrimeWave Syndicate
141
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Posted - 2013.03.08 14:05:00 -
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hermin hermit wrote:Lore, short stories? Lol get some sun ppl
lol if you don't like it, don't read it. This gives me something to do while waiting for engineers to do their testing at work, interesting story, passes the time. What's wrong with lore short stories? You have a problem? Do you find it difficult to read? I recommend Curious George, or Clifford the big red dog for you because they are even shorter stories with less big words to confuse and anger you. Lets start with small words: Cat. Sound it out ....C......A.....T. Makes the sound Kat. |
The Infected One
CrimeWave Syndicate
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Posted - 2013.03.08 23:03:00 -
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Fraceska wrote:Sooo I am now approaching the 10th and final act of the story of a mans journey from being mortal to become an immortal. Anything special that would like to happen?
Should I continue with character in future stories?
This is your story, any ending you see fit will be fine. I'm sure we would agree that we who have been reading each post are now involved with the unnamed merc in this story. If you chose to continue with this character in the future stories you write, it would only serve to bring us readers who have followed it "further down the rabbit hole". I would be interested to find out how our unnamed merc reacts to the first contract issued, and if there are any personal opinions that might come into play before fully surrendering to the life of an immortal clone forever fighting wars for clients who's ideas and values might conflict with whatever shred of humanity this character is so valiantly trying to hold on to. |
The Infected One
CrimeWave Syndicate
146
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Posted - 2013.03.09 01:28:00 -
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Very well done, I look forward to reading any other stories that you see fit to share with us. I have saved this story under your name to be shared with those in my corporation who are interested in fan based lore. On our website one of ours takes events from our games and corp matches and turns them into short stories with his own artistic twist. Very much enjoyed the read. |
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