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Ner'Zul Nexhawk
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Posted - 2013.02.17 23:45:00 -
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ColossusGÇÖ Deceit GÇô A Glimpse Into The Future
Region: Paragon Soul System: G-M4GK Planet VI, Moon II Litatia Immortalis Headquarters
GÇ£Commander, wake up.GÇ¥
Drake Fallax reluctantly opened his eyes and gazed at the soldier that disturbed his sleep. GÇ£Is it time?GÇ¥ he asked.
GÇ£Yes, Commander. The forces of Colossus Rapax are gathering in the system H8-ZTO of Paragon Soul. Specifically, they are targeting planet V, where our offices and factories are stationed,GÇ¥ the soldier quickly replied.
GÇ£Yeah, I know that. What presence do we have there now?GÇ¥
GÇ£The fleets of Litatia Immortalis are rapidly mobilizing, sir. The war barge will be heavily guarded along the entire journey to the system. Your MCC is ready and is currently en route to the station as we speak.GÇ¥
GÇ£Thank you, soldier. That will be all,GÇ¥ Drake dismissed the recruit. He checked his datapad for the announcements and made his way to the quartersGÇÖ exit.
In the hallway, he met the CEO of Litatia Immortalis, Mishitsu Omikro. Both men shook hands, and then Omikro spoke, GÇ£You know this to be extremely important, Fallax. Our corporationGÇÖs fate lies on that planet alone. Do not fail me, lest we all will crumble in dust.GÇ¥
Drake grinned. GÇ£Tell me about it. IGÇÖve paid tons of ISK for the MCC and installations, certainly there is no desire to lose any of it. DonGÇÖt worry, weGÇÖll be fine there. I will guide the troops to victory.GÇ¥
GÇ£I wouldnGÇÖt expect anything less from you, Drake. Good luck,GÇ¥ Mishitsu said and headed in the direction of his ship.
Drake stood for a moment, looked at leaving Omikro, and then headed to the airlock connecting the station and the MCC.
Region: Paragon Soul System: H8-ZTO Planet V District XIII Time after deployment: 02:23:49
From MCC GÇ£SicariusGÇ¥, Fallax overlooked the battle raging below. Both armies appeared to be in a deadlock over one crucial position, where Litatia Immortalis troops managed to hole up. Neither side could gain advantage and drive the enemies back, and DrakeGÇÖs comms were busting with requests for support. One of the squad leaders finally managed to break through the incessant noise, GÇ£Where are our reinforcements? We require two blaster installations in sectors D-4 and E-2, immediately! Without support weGÇÖll be stuck here for hours!GÇ¥
Drake replied calmly, GÇ£Noted.GÇ¥ And support you will get. His hands hovered over the MCC console before pressing several buttons.
***
On the ground, the captain of Colossus Rapax forces looked up. He smiled upon seeing that the enemy MCC started to slowly tilt forward.
***
Fallax waited until the tip of the Sicarius was perfectly leveled with the position of Litatia Immortalis soldiers. Once he was sure the MCC was tilted to the necessary extent, he ran a sequence of commands on the control panel. The alarm systems immediately sprang to life.
GÇ£Thirty seconds till impact.GÇ¥
Colossus Rapax troops were ordered to retreat. They hastily abandoned their positions and headed to the district boundary.
GÇ£Twenty seconds till impact.GÇ¥
Defenders from Litatia Immortalis started celebrating, seeing how the enemy forces began to retreat.
GÇ£Ten seconds till impact.GÇ¥
Retreating forces were quickly extracted from the battlefront by the newly arrived dropships. At the same time, mercenaries from Litatia Immortalis noticed the MCC quickly accelerating toward their position. Panic ensued on the ground. Drake frowned as comm channels exploded with enraged questions, orders, and swearing.
GÇ£Seven seconds till impact.GÇ¥
Up in space, capsuleers from both corporations were fighting for the system space as well. Mishsitsu Omikro could not believe what he saw on the feeds from his shipGÇÖs cameras, aimed at the place of battle. Mishitsu quickly ran the calculations necessary to determine estimated ISK losses from this battle, and pod fluid he was ensconsed in almost shivered with his anger.
GÇ£Four seconds till impact.GÇ¥
On the nearby station, the CEO of Colossus Rapax was smiling and nodding rhythmically as he watched through the camfeeds the events that unfolded at the battle for district XIII.
GÇ£One second till impactGÇ¥
Just before the MCCGÇÖs tip touched the ground, Drake grinned with a sense of grim satisfaction.
GÇ£Zero.GÇ¥
The MCC drove itself into the planet, momentarily engulfing the entire district in a tremendous fireball. Cries of Litatia troops were quickly suffocated by the lack of oxygen, just as their armor and skin were seared immediately by the inferno. When the explosion died out, the entire district was burning. The Colossus dropships, which already were a safe distance away from the ill-fated district, turned around and carried their troops back to the battlefield. The fate of district XIII was determined.
***
Drake Fallax woke inside his clone vat with a cruel smile on his face. He looked around and saw the CEO of Colossus Rapax, standing next to the vat and smiling as well. The latter extended his hand in a warm greeting.
GÇ£Welcome back, Drake.GÇ¥ |
Ner'Zul Nexhawk
Talos Incorporated
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Posted - 2013.02.18 00:13:00 -
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charlesnette dalari wrote:Nice short story I wish more threads were like this rather than the incessant whining we see most of the time.
Thanks! I've been thinking about this idea of future Dust features for a long time, and finally decided to get it together and post on the forums. Definitely agree with your last statement as well. |
Ner'Zul Nexhawk
Talos Incorporated
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Posted - 2013.02.18 00:57:00 -
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Zat Earthshatter wrote:Another day in New Eden - great story.
It would be interesting for the MCC pilot to deliberately crash it to wipe the base - the explosion in Skirmish looks oddly similar to the Russian meteor, and probably has a similar yield (half-megaton TNT equivalent). An MCC hitting the ground would probably have enough force to obliterate the facility it crashed into and severely damage those near it, but wouldn't set the entire District on fire. Final tidbit: all New Eden power cores use aneutronic fusion. This means that, if they explode like the MCC, they wouldn't irradiate the area as intensely as 21st Century fission and fission-powered fusion nuclear weapons.
Thanks for the heads-up! I wasn't really into the really deep technical role at the time of writing, and also, will admit, used a bit of exaggeration. |
Ner'Zul Nexhawk
Talos Incorporated
153
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Posted - 2013.02.18 00:58:00 -
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Dusters Blog wrote:we love dust fiction and highlight it on our blog as much as we can. let us know if you would be interested in writing regularly for our blog.
I'll consider your offer, thank you very much! By the way, are we talking about regular basis being any topics, or lore-specific stories like this? |
Ner'Zul Nexhawk
Talos Incorporated
153
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Posted - 2013.02.18 02:09:00 -
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Dusters Blog wrote:we love dust fiction and highlight it on our blog as much as we can. let us know if you would be interested in writing regularly for our blog.
Oh, and by the way, in case you need my permission in order to highlight the story, I'd gladly give it. |
Ner'Zul Nexhawk
Talos Incorporated
153
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Posted - 2013.02.18 03:06:00 -
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Paran Tadec wrote:no gay vampire drama? bad fanfic is bad
Oh Paran. At least you tried.
Anyways, I just hope more stories actually appear on the forums, right now they are kinda rare. Part of the reason I wrote mine is because I'm always entertained by reading others' works. |
Ner'Zul Nexhawk
Talos Incorporated
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Posted - 2013.02.18 12:20:00 -
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I'm just curious, what do people actually think about the Commander feature and future MCC interactions? Do you think MCC will be fully controllable in movement? Should it be fully controllable? Personally, I say why not, because I doubt there would be many people who'd let their corporation lose 120 mil ISK plus the price of installations and district infrastructure just for the sake of griefing. |
Ner'Zul Nexhawk
Talos Incorporated
153
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Posted - 2013.02.18 13:27:00 -
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Dusters Blog wrote:Ner'Zul Nexhawk wrote:Dusters Blog wrote:we love dust fiction and highlight it on our blog as much as we can. let us know if you would be interested in writing regularly for our blog. Oh, and by the way, in case you need my permission in order to highlight the story, I'd gladly give it. we will then. and to answer ur previous question? both. we dont censor our writers and they have the option to write as much or little as they like.
I see. Once again, I'll consider the option, but I won't write often, most likely. Will send you an email if I decide to be a part of your blog. |
Ner'Zul Nexhawk
Talos Incorporated
153
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Posted - 2013.02.18 16:23:00 -
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Would be very nice to have a dev also chime in on the topic and offer some potential confirmation.
Probably not going to happen, though, but one can dream. |
Ner'Zul Nexhawk
Talos Incorporated
153
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Posted - 2013.02.19 22:52:00 -
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Still interested to see other people's opinion on the matter of controllable MCCs.
P.S. Sorry for the bump, but I kinda don't want to create a separate thread since the question is already posed here. |
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Ner'Zul Nexhawk
Talos Incorporated
153
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Posted - 2013.02.23 12:42:00 -
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Colossus' Deceit has been published on Dusters Blog: http://dustmercs.blogspot.com/2013/02/dust-fiction-colossus-deceit.html?m=1 |
Ner'Zul Nexhawk
Talos Incorporated
153
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Posted - 2013.02.23 21:30:00 -
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Acnologia X wrote:good read indeed, thanks Nex
Thanks Acnologia! |
Ner'Zul Nexhawk
Talos Incorporated
153
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Posted - 2013.02.23 22:53:00 -
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General Tiberius1 wrote:Ner'Zul Nexhawk wrote:ColossusGÇÖ Deceit GÇô A Glimpse Into The Future
Region: Paragon Soul System: G-M4GK Planet VI, Moon II Litatia Immortalis Headquarters
GÇ£Commander, wake up.GÇ¥
Drake Fallax reluctantly opened his eyes and gazed at the soldier that disturbed his sleep. GÇ£Is it time?GÇ¥ he asked.
GÇ£Yes, Commander. The forces of Colossus Rapax are gathering in the system H8-ZTO of Paragon Soul. Specifically, they are targeting planet V, where our offices and factories are stationed,GÇ¥ the soldier quickly replied.
GÇ£Yeah, I know that. What presence do we have there now?GÇ¥
GÇ£The fleets of Litatia Immortalis are rapidly mobilizing, sir. The war barge will be heavily guarded along the entire journey to the system. Your MCC is ready and is currently en route to the station as we speak.GÇ¥
GÇ£Thank you, soldier. That will be all,GÇ¥ Drake dismissed the recruit. He checked his datapad for the announcements and made his way to the quartersGÇÖ exit.
In the hallway, he met the CEO of Litatia Immortalis, Mishitsu Omikro. Both men shook hands, and then Omikro spoke, GÇ£You know this to be extremely important, Fallax. Our corporationGÇÖs fate lies on that planet alone. Do not fail me, lest we all will crumble in dust.GÇ¥
Drake grinned. GÇ£Tell me about it. IGÇÖve paid tons of ISK for the MCC and installations, certainly there is no desire to lose any of it. DonGÇÖt worry, weGÇÖll be fine there. I will guide the troops to victory.GÇ¥
GÇ£I wouldnGÇÖt expect anything less from you, Drake. Good luck,GÇ¥ Mishitsu said and headed in the direction of his ship.
Drake stood for a moment, looked at leaving Omikro, and then headed to the airlock connecting the station and the MCC.
Region: Paragon Soul System: H8-ZTO Planet V District XIII Time after deployment: 02:23:49
From MCC GÇ£SicariusGÇ¥, Fallax overlooked the battle raging below. Both armies appeared to be in a deadlock over one crucial position, where Litatia Immortalis troops managed to hole up. Neither side could gain advantage and drive the enemies back, and DrakeGÇÖs comms were busting with requests for support. One of the squad leaders finally managed to break through the incessant noise, GÇ£Where are our reinforcements? We require two blaster installations in sectors D-4 and E-2, immediately! Without support weGÇÖll be stuck here for hours!GÇ¥
Drake replied calmly, GÇ£Noted.GÇ¥ And support you will get. His hands hovered over the MCC console before pressing several buttons.
***
On the ground, the captain of Colossus Rapax forces looked up. He smiled upon seeing that the enemy MCC started to slowly tilt forward.
***
Fallax waited until the tip of the Sicarius was perfectly leveled with the position of Litatia Immortalis soldiers. Once he was sure the MCC was tilted to the necessary extent, he ran a sequence of commands on the control panel. The alarm systems immediately sprang to life.
GÇ£Thirty seconds till impact.GÇ¥
Colossus Rapax troops were ordered to retreat. They hastily abandoned their positions and headed to the district boundary.
GÇ£Twenty seconds till impact.GÇ¥
Defenders from Litatia Immortalis started celebrating, seeing how the enemy forces began to retreat.
GÇ£Ten seconds till impact.GÇ¥
Retreating forces were quickly extracted from the battlefront by the newly arrived dropships. At the same time, mercenaries from Litatia Immortalis noticed the MCC quickly accelerating toward their position. Panic ensued on the ground. Drake frowned as comm channels exploded with enraged questions, orders, and swearing.
GÇ£Seven seconds till impact.GÇ¥
Up in space, capsuleers from both corporations were fighting for the system space as well. Mishsitsu Omikro could not believe what he saw on the feeds from his shipGÇÖs cameras, aimed at the place of battle. Mishitsu quickly ran the calculations necessary to determine estimated ISK losses from this battle, and pod fluid he was ensconsed in almost shivered with his anger.
GÇ£Four seconds till impact.GÇ¥
On the nearby station, the CEO of Colossus Rapax was smiling and nodding rhythmically as he watched through the camfeeds the events that unfolded at the battle for district XIII.
GÇ£One second till impactGÇ¥
Just before the MCCGÇÖs tip touched the ground, Drake grinned with a sense of grim satisfaction.
GÇ£Zero.GÇ¥
The MCC drove itself into the planet, momentarily engulfing the entire district in a tremendous fireball. Cries of Litatia troops were quickly suffocated by the lack of oxygen, just as their armor and skin were seared immediately by the inferno. When the explosion died out, the entire district was burning. The Colossus dropships, which already were a safe distance away from the ill-fated district, turned around and carried their troops back to the battlefield. The fate of district XIII was determined.
***
Drake Fallax woke inside his clone vat with a cruel smile on his face. He looked around and saw the CEO of Colossus Rapax, standing next to the vat and smiling as well. The latter extended his hand in a warm greeting.
GÇ£Welcome back, Drake.GÇ¥ CCP needs to add this to the lore
Haha, thanks, lol. However, we don't know if this somehow intersects with the actual role, since MCc might not be this controllable in-game. |
Ner'Zul Nexhawk
Talos Incorporated
153
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Posted - 2013.02.24 01:00:00 -
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Evan Terkanian wrote:This was very nice. I quite liked the writing, and now I know that I'm not alone in the writers' brotherhood.
On a side note, this is my first Dust forum post. I hope to stay here a while.
Yeah, writing such short stories has always catered to me for some reasons. Thanks!
And welcome to the forums. Hope your stay here will be a positive one, and you won't come face to face with too many trolls. While you're at it, have a first like. |
Ner'Zul Nexhawk
Talos Incorporated
153
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Posted - 2013.02.24 04:17:00 -
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John Surratt wrote:Ner'Zul Nexhawk wrote:I'm just curious, what do people actually think about the Commander feature and future MCC interactions? Do you think MCC will be fully controllable in movement? Should it be fully controllable? Personally, I say why not, because I doubt there would be many people who'd let their corporation lose 120 mil ISK plus the price of installations and district infrastructure just for the sake of griefing. People regularly riskalot more in EVE all the time. People throw away heaps of ISK for a gank, if the stakes and odds are right.
I understand your point. But wouldn't it be a little harder for Dust mercs to catch up with such losses? And, even if they are backed up by an opulent EVE corporation, such self-destruction would most likely mean an ignominious loss of the district, along with potential crucial infrastructure standing on it.
What I mean is, I would outright love to see such stories actually unfold in the game as we get the Commander feature. However, grief just for the sake of grief would be highly unlikely, especially if the person who blows up the MCC paid for it in the first place (which we can only speculate on atm). |
Ner'Zul Nexhawk
Talos Incorporated
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Posted - 2013.02.26 20:54:00 -
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*bumping this in secret hopes that a certain extremely active dev would read the story and comment * |
Ner'Zul Nexhawk
Talos Incorporated
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Posted - 2013.02.26 20:59:00 -
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CCP FoxFour wrote:This is AWESOME! Passing on to some of our story guys, I know they love reading this stuff. If you have an EVE account the fiction portal on the EVE forums would probably really enjoy this as well.
This is great! And no, unfortunately I don't have an EVE account, but seriously hoping to start playing at some point. |
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Posted - 2013.03.20 11:11:00 -
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Getting this story out of oblivion. |
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