DUST Search - HeadShot - [Montage]

Luka the otter wrote:

I think I'm going to go ahead and leave some criticism, as well. Much like your mass driver ragdoll video, this feels a lot like a killpad compilation. Three minutes in and nearly all of your headshots have been attributed to the heavy machine gun, meaning almost none of them have been skill shots. It's all been accidental or lucky head kills, which I guess can get a chuckle occasionally but when it's an entire five minute video? Ehh...

What made this, and also your ragdoll video, feel less like their intended purpose and more like killpad compilation is that there isn't any actual focus on the stated content. In your ragdoll video there weren't many funny shots of people being sent flying or even being knocked to the ground in awkward positions (although that first kill at the beginning where he slid through the gate when he landed was pretty good. Goooooaaaaal!). Instead the ragdoll video had just a bunch of mass driver kills, a small few of which were out of shot and entirely unseen when the clip ended. In this, there are very few clips where you get a good headshot in, but instead there are very many where you get one headshot in and then kill another guy normally, and another guy, and another guy... It lingers well past the actual headshot and so there isn't any focus on the headshots, and instead it feels more like 'hey, look at all these people I'm killing', which isn't as entertaining. At least to me.

Another criticism I have is, although I've only seen two of your videos, both times you've said 'I'm saving the best for later'. Why later? Why give us the not as good (Not necessarily bad, just not as good) content when you've apparently got better stashed away? Or why not mix in some of the best shots with the more subpar ones if you want to make two videos, so that there's really good content in both? If you give just the lesser quality and say you've got better, people will still judge your future content, or maybe not even bother with it at all, based on the not as good stuff.

As for the intro cinematic, that's actually mostly fine, but it is just a little too long. You could probably do with cutting it down to 14 or 15 seconds, rather than 17. Two or three seconds after the dominoes fade to form the square. I think it's actually really good except for the awkward ending length.

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jett it MONSTER SYNERGY 152	Posted - 2015.08.04 23:25:00 - [1] - Quote Saving all my best footage for a part 2 coming soon. http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=xSpTY7VD1R8 Enjoy. jettGaming - Youtube
Sardonk Eternia Tiny Universe 364	Posted - 2015.08.05 00:42:00 - [2] - Quote I've enjoyed your vids in the past but I have criticism for you here. First of all your intro is long and lame and I'm sick of it. Secondly this video isn't head shots. It's the ****** auto aim giving you accidental head shot kills. BORING. (Gê¬n+Ç-´)GèâGöüGÿån+ƒ.pâ+n+ín+ƒ. LASERS BTCH!!!!!! The Incursions are back... and they're golden baby!
jett it MONSTER SYNERGY 154	Posted - 2015.08.05 00:57:00 - [3] - Quote Sardonk Eternia wrote: I've enjoyed your vids in the past but I have criticism for you here. First of all your intro is long and lame and I'm sick of it. Secondly this video isn't head shots. It's the ****** auto aim giving you accidental head shot kills. BORING. Hahah so funny you say that about the intro I am actually making a sick new intro only 7 seconds as we speak, thanks very much for your advice I am working on fine tune tweaks that will make everything more enjoyable :) I actually have auto aim off on all my light weapons I change this regularly but enable auto aim on my heavies. So what you say about auto aim is not entirely true. I actually cant stand auto aim unless I am using a heavy as it really does benefit you anything else and it get super annoying. But seriously thanks for your advice on the intro I am making a better and shorter 1. o7 jettGaming - Youtube
Luka the otter Bragian Order Amarr Empire 77	Posted - 2015.08.05 01:40:00 - [4] - Quote I think I'm going to go ahead and leave some criticism, as well. Much like your mass driver ragdoll video, this feels a lot like a killpad compilation. Three minutes in and nearly all of your headshots have been attributed to the heavy machine gun, meaning almost none of them have been skill shots. It's all been accidental or lucky head kills, which I guess can get a chuckle occasionally but when it's an entire five minute video? Ehh... What made this, and also your ragdoll video, feel less like their intended purpose and more like killpad compilation is that there isn't any actual focus on the stated content. In your ragdoll video there weren't many funny shots of people being sent flying or even being knocked to the ground in awkward positions (although that first kill at the beginning where he slid through the gate when he landed was pretty good. Goooooaaaaal!). Instead the ragdoll video had just a bunch of mass driver kills, a small few of which were out of shot and entirely unseen when the clip ended. In this, there are very few clips where you get a good headshot in, but instead there are very many where you get one headshot in and then kill another guy normally, and another guy, and another guy... It lingers well past the actual headshot and so there isn't any focus on the headshots, and instead it feels more like 'hey, look at all these people I'm killing', which isn't as entertaining. At least to me. Another criticism I have is, although I've only seen two of your videos, both times you've said 'I'm saving the best for later'. Why later? Why give us the not as good (Not necessarily bad, just not as good) content when you've apparently got better stashed away? Or why not mix in some of the best shots with the more subpar ones if you want to make two videos, so that there's really good content in both? If you give just the lesser quality and say you've got better, people will still judge your future content, or maybe not even bother with it at all, based on the not as good stuff. As for the intro cinematic, that's actually mostly fine, but it is just a little too long. You could probably do with cutting it down to 14 or 15 seconds, rather than 17. Two or three seconds after the dominoes fade to form the square. I think it's actually really good except for the awkward ending length.
xavier zor Abyss of Universe 1	Posted - 2015.08.05 02:12:00 - [5] - Quote Luka the otter wrote: I think I'm going to go ahead and leave some criticism, as well. Much like your mass driver ragdoll video, this feels a lot like a killpad compilation. Three minutes in and nearly all of your headshots have been attributed to the heavy machine gun, meaning almost none of them have been skill shots. It's all been accidental or lucky head kills, which I guess can get a chuckle occasionally but when it's an entire five minute video? he's not a very good shot, give him a little credit for his HMG headshots Abyss of Universe
jett it MONSTER SYNERGY 155	Posted - 2015.08.05 03:06:00 - [6] - Quote Luka the otter wrote: I think I'm going to go ahead and leave some criticism, as well. Much like your mass driver ragdoll video, this feels a lot like a killpad compilation. Three minutes in and nearly all of your headshots have been attributed to the heavy machine gun, meaning almost none of them have been skill shots. It's all been accidental or lucky head kills, which I guess can get a chuckle occasionally but when it's an entire five minute video? Ehh... What made this, and also your ragdoll video, feel less like their intended purpose and more like killpad compilation is that there isn't any actual focus on the stated content. In your ragdoll video there weren't many funny shots of people being sent flying or even being knocked to the ground in awkward positions (although that first kill at the beginning where he slid through the gate when he landed was pretty good. Goooooaaaaal!). Instead the ragdoll video had just a bunch of mass driver kills, a small few of which were out of shot and entirely unseen when the clip ended. In this, there are very few clips where you get a good headshot in, but instead there are very many where you get one headshot in and then kill another guy normally, and another guy, and another guy... It lingers well past the actual headshot and so there isn't any focus on the headshots, and instead it feels more like 'hey, look at all these people I'm killing', which isn't as entertaining. At least to me. Another criticism I have is, although I've only seen two of your videos, both times you've said 'I'm saving the best for later'. Why later? Why give us the not as good (Not necessarily bad, just not as good) content when you've apparently got better stashed away? Or why not mix in some of the best shots with the more subpar ones if you want to make two videos, so that there's really good content in both? If you give just the lesser quality and say you've got better, people will still judge your future content, or maybe not even bother with it at all, based on the not as good stuff. As for the intro cinematic, that's actually mostly fine, but it is just a little too long. You could probably do with cutting it down to 14 or 15 seconds, rather than 17. Two or three seconds after the dominoes fade to form the square. I think it's actually really good except for the awkward ending length. Thanks for all your advice I appreciate it. You guys might like your criticism, but I really appreciate it as your basically giving me advice which i will take and use. Being a new YouTuber, it helps a lot so thanks. As for me saving the best for last, I feel your input on mixing it in but its too late for that now after I make my part two I will go ahead and start mixing it in as you suggest. So I now know never to post any HMG kills or Mass driver kills as I know you guys hate that from previous posts. What do you guys like to see? Please give me a some weapons you would like to see :) Thx, o7 jettGaming - Youtube
jett it MONSTER SYNERGY 155	Posted - 2015.08.05 04:26:00 - [7] - Quote xavier zor wrote: Luka the otter wrote: I think I'm going to go ahead and leave some criticism, as well. Much like your mass driver ragdoll video, this feels a lot like a killpad compilation. Three minutes in and nearly all of your headshots have been attributed to the heavy machine gun, meaning almost none of them have been skill shots. It's all been accidental or lucky head kills, which I guess can get a chuckle occasionally but when it's an entire five minute video? he's not a very good shot, give him a little credit for his HMG headshots Ill take criticism from everyone else but not you xavier, every time I come across you on the battlefield I end up dropping you with any weapon I am using even basic sidearms, thats how easy you are to kill its really funny how right after you die I look at the kill feed and see 'xavier zor has left the battle' LOL jettGaming - Youtube
Koldy Lyte Marven Vader's-Fist 120	Posted - 2015.08.05 04:49:00 - [8] - Quote Luka the otter wrote: I think I'm going to go ahead and leave some criticism, as well. Much like your mass driver ragdoll video, this feels a lot like a killpad compilation. Three minutes in and nearly all of your headshots have been attributed to the heavy machine gun, meaning almost none of them have been skill shots. It's all been accidental or lucky head kills, which I guess can get a chuckle occasionally but when it's an entire five minute video? Ehh... [etc,etc]. Go head and make a headshot montage with a sick intro... being a youtuber isn't easy, so instead of writing "criticism", give him (or her?) some constructive advices. There is a difference between "In your ragdoll video there weren't many funny shots of people being sent flying or even being knocked to the ground in awkward positions" and " I was expecting to see funny shots of people being sent flying or even being knocked to the ground in awkward position" because that dude spent a lot of time making that video. If someone spends hours or weeks to make something for you to enjoy, even if you don't like it, at least say thanks, but I would've preferred this and that, etc. This is my signature.
xavier zor Abyss of Universe 1	Posted - 2015.08.05 05:54:00 - [9] - Quote jett it wrote: xavier zor wrote: Luka the otter wrote: I think I'm going to go ahead and leave some criticism, as well. Much like your mass driver ragdoll video, this feels a lot like a killpad compilation. Three minutes in and nearly all of your headshots have been attributed to the heavy machine gun, meaning almost none of them have been skill shots. It's all been accidental or lucky head kills, which I guess can get a chuckle occasionally but when it's an entire five minute video? he's not a very good shot, give him a little credit for his HMG headshots Ill take criticism from everyone else but not you xavier, every time I come across you on the battlefield I end up dropping you with any weapon I am using even basic sidearms, thats how easy you are to kill its really funny how right after you die I look at the kill feed and see 'xavier zor has left the battle' LOL you have 2 days to upload footage of you killing me and me leaving battle, otherwise shut your scrub-ass mouth the fu*k up snd git gud Abyss of Universe
DRT 99 RAT PATROL INC. The Empire of New Eden 476	Posted - 2015.08.05 06:22:00 - [10] - Quote Sardonk Eternia wrote: First of all your intro is long and lame AND TOTALLY SKIPABLE fixed that for you. seriosuly the intro could have been 15 minutes long and nobody would care because everyone skips it. jett it wrote: So I now know never to post any HMG kills or Mass driver kills as I know you guys hate that from previous posts this isnt what is being said. the issue with the HMG is that it sprays bullets everywhere and headshots are mostly luck. even if you aim at the head youre likely not to get a headshot (i saw this in your vid a few times). HMG montages are fine, but headshots = luck. i suppose its like a montage of people playing bingo... its all luck The issue people had with your MD vid was: You were jumping, and some people dislike that (their preference though, i seriously dont see why this is a legitimate reson to dislike the vid) Some of the ragdolls werent amazing, as stated. wouldnt be a big deal if it werent in a ragdoll montage keep at it though

jett it MONSTER SYNERGY 157	Posted - 2015.08.05 11:36:00 - [11] - Quote xavier zor wrote: jett it wrote: xavier zor wrote: Luka the otter wrote: I think I'm going to go ahead and leave some criticism, as well. Much like your mass driver ragdoll video, this feels a lot like a killpad compilation. Three minutes in and nearly all of your headshots have been attributed to the heavy machine gun, meaning almost none of them have been skill shots. It's all been accidental or lucky head kills, which I guess can get a chuckle occasionally but when it's an entire five minute video? he's not a very good shot, give him a little credit for his HMG headshots Ill take criticism from everyone else but not you xavier, every time I come across you on the battlefield I end up dropping you with any weapon I am using even basic sidearms, thats how easy you are to kill its really funny how right after you die I look at the kill feed and see 'xavier zor has left the battle' LOL you have 2 days to upload footage of you killing me and me leaving battle, otherwise shut your scrub-ass mouth the fu*k up snd git gud Wow you need to learn how to spell or do you normally mumble jumble your words like a toddler? Sure i have the proof but why the heck would I upload it and waste my time on such a troll? Plus I am sure other people have killed you enough times to already know what I am talking about. That's about as much time I am willing to waste on such a tird. jettGaming - Youtube
jett it MONSTER SYNERGY 157	Posted - 2015.08.05 11:44:00 - [12] - Quote I also think you are all overlooking my title, not to be rude but its says NOTHING SPECIAL and it seems all of you are expecting SOMETHING SPECIAL?? I put that in my title for a reason so after watching you would not be let down. If I make a killer headshot montage I will call it just that o7. jettGaming - Youtube


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