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sir ravenwing
BurgezzE.T.F
Public Disorder.
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Posted - 2014.01.19 05:55:00 -
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Ok this is the real backstory of my IGS caracter Sir Ravenwing and I'll make something like warrior nine by the same names so........
Raven is the son of a skilled sniper and shotguner, he is 1/2 Civre and 1/4 intaki and 1/4 khanid
His mother fights quick and relentlessly and passed it onto ravenwing who is small fast and agile
His father fights smart making each shot count same as mother passed it down to raven who is smart and pateint
During a battle on Caldari Prime he was killed and has started thinking he is from a planet in null-sec, and has a split personallity disorder, he is pissed at concord because his brother was killed Before being cloned for a unknown reason
He always carries a katana and a random weapon.
He fights for the Caldari and Amarr. He is sometimes suicidal and a died from an overdose of mindflood
He collects everything from swords to dropsuits.
He is a skilled assassin and relentlessly tries to avenge his brother's death.
Well that's raven
Does anyone know how to upload something to google docs perferibly from a android tablet, yes that's what I use to get on the forums
Tell me ideas for the rest of Raven's past
I do not fear my enemies, I fear the damn blueberries
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True Adamance
Kameira Lodge
Amarr Empire
5965
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Posted - 2014.01.20 18:59:00 -
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That's for you to decide but remember. Raven is not special, he is not something great and better than all others, he is immortal but he is weak, he is human, and is incredibly fallible. He will miss his shots, be beaten in fights, both verbal and physical. He'll be killed from time to time.
The worst kind of RPer is someone who doesn't want to admit this, and wont ever.
Make Raven human, not some alien monster we cannot comprehend.
"My Faith in you is absolute; my sword is Yours, My God, and Your will guides me now and for all eternity."
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sir ravenwing
BurgezzE.T.F
Public Disorder.
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Posted - 2014.01.20 21:28:00 -
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Raven isn't truely immortal and neither is anyone else in dust and he has fears and weakness, I know the kind who think their merc is invulnable, they are annoying to me. Galm has allowed me to use parts of warrior nine. And this fiction will cross paths with several others if I can find more as good as warrior nine
Do not think that I will make him anything over a human with a few not natural skills ex. He can remember every detail of important parts in his life.I'm starting it right now
I do not fear my enemies, I fear the damn blueberries
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Squagga
The State Protectorate
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Posted - 2014.01.20 23:34:00 -
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I think that what he meant was, besides dying, share your charecters feelings. His fears, doubts, concerns. Our charecters are immortal. Make him seem mortal. At least that's what I got out of it
Reloading, the silent killer.
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sir ravenwing
BurgezzE.T.F
Public Disorder.
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Posted - 2014.01.22 23:07:00 -
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[url]https://docs.google.com/document/d/1Ad-0rLu0UMPDAuwDu_QWWEIsoPZwH6dLkTOP0u_TOeE/mobilebasic[/url]
Hope you enjoy. Took about 1/2 an hour not including the whole week of setbacks
Hope you enjoy
I do not fear my enemies, I fear the damn blueberries
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sir ravenwing
BurgezzE.T.F
Public Disorder.
32
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Posted - 2014.01.22 23:08:00 -
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https://docs.google.com/document/d/1Ad-0rLu0UMPDAuwDu_QWWEIsoPZwH6dLkTOP0u_TOeE/mobilebasic
I do not fear my enemies, I fear the damn blueberries
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Hawk-eye Occultus
Omega Elite Mercs INC.
13
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Posted - 2014.01.23 00:08:00 -
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I can't read the story, you need to set it to public (or something).
Intelligence without ambition; is a bird without wings...
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sir ravenwing
BurgezzE.T.F
Public Disorder.
32
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Posted - 2014.01.23 00:16:00 -
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How? I'm new'to using google docs
I do not fear my enemies, I fear the damn blueberries
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sir ravenwing
BurgezzE.T.F
Public Disorder.
32
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Posted - 2014.01.23 00:41:00 -
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Did it bring you to a sign in thing?
I do not fear my enemies, I fear the damn blueberries
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sir ravenwing
BurgezzE.T.F
Public Disorder.
32
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Posted - 2014.01.23 00:44:00 -
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All Docs
aa"What was that?" "pixy just stuck him" "**** him up galm" Raven grined at these comments, because Galm Fae hasn't lost a match and seeing how the fight was going, he wasn't going to lose this one either. Raven's grin was short-lived as he knew he had to leave now, if he was to complete his task. "Watchdog, add Galm Fae to the watch list" said Raven into his Neocom "will do, hey uh are you after the target?" said a feminine voice on the other side. "In pursuit now... oh ****, he knows I'm after him got to go" said Raven now running with nova knives in hand. "Stop running" he called out to the man he was chasing, the man had a medium build and was said to have murdered a family of 7. Raven ran as fast as possible, pushing several people out of the way Before finally tackling his target to the ground with enough force to break his arm, Before the man could come out of shock, Raven unleshed a fury of slices from the Nova Knives putting his target into a deep sleep that he would not wake up from. "Target is dead" said Raven into his Neocom phanting from the running "good, you should return to HQ, we have a surprise for you" said watchdog. as Raven walk inside a rather small building a bunch of colorful paper bits flew into the air startling Raven "ah.. oh hey guys" Frost then shot him a Look saying and? "And girls" "happy birthday" the group of seven said. "Oh that uh why do we still celebrate those?" Asked Raven. Watchdog punched him in the gut not hard but enough to barely hurt Raven" because we do"
SORRY FOR THE SHORT CHAPTER KINDA RUSHED IT BECAUSE OF ALL THE SETBACKS I'VE HAD THIS WEEK AND ALSO HOPE YOU ENJOYED
Ok here simple tactics for now *sigh*
I do not fear my enemies, I fear the damn blueberries
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Hawk-eye Occultus
Omega Elite Mercs INC.
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Posted - 2014.01.23 01:22:00 -
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sir ravenwing wrote:How? I'm new'to using google docs
This is the answer: https://support.google.com/drive/answer/2494886
(Make sure the formatting is good and there are paragraph separations; makes it much easier to read).
Intelligence without ambition; is a bird without wings...
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sir ravenwing
BurgezzE.T.F
Public Disorder.
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Posted - 2014.01.23 21:03:00 -
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I use mobile version not desktop version
Errors everywhere when I use desktop version plus it won't let me change it on this mobile device I use
I do not fear my enemies, I fear the damn blueberries
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Denak Kalamari
Intaki Liberation Front
Intaki Prosperity Initiative
901
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Posted - 2014.01.23 21:13:00 -
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Get a PC, use a library computer if necessary. Google Drive seriously isn't as effective if you're using a mobile version, and it would do wonders to your grammar.
Grahisha of ILF // Writer of Thoughts of a Clone Soldier // Latest entry published Jan. 14th
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sir ravenwing
BurgezzE.T.F
Public Disorder.
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Posted - 2014.01.23 21:20:00 -
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Well I have a PC but it take 21.3 minutes (I timed it) to load basic google and barely have that time right now but I'll see what I can do
I do not fear my enemies, I fear the damn blueberries
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sir ravenwing
BurgezzE.T.F
Public Disorder.
36
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Posted - 2014.01.29 05:45:00 -
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I'm going to right the next chapter longer for the 2 or so people who will read my stuff *sigh* 
Author of A Raven's Call/ we fight for nothing but the almighty ISK- Sir Ravenwing
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deathgodofwar
The dyst0pian Corporation
Zero-Day
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Posted - 2014.02.01 15:30:00 -
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Lol relax brother. Many read the stories put on here.
Through the curse of slavery I have found damnation.
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Hawk-eye Occultus
Omega Elite Mercs INC.
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Posted - 2014.02.07 21:42:00 -
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sir ravenwing wrote:I'm going to right the next chapter longer for the 2 or so people who will read my stuff *sigh*
I would read it; but it's still not set to public view, so I cannot.
Here, just in case you need it...
Intelligence without ambition; is a bird without wings...
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