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Revenant Scourge
Revenant Reavers
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Posted - 2013.11.15 05:11:00 -
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The history of the Revenant Reavers began thousands of years ago in the past, to the time when the JovianGÇÖs at the height of their power had created and embraced super human genetic engineering.
Unfortunately though; when the prosperous JovianGÇÖs exited an era known as the GÇÿShrouded daysGÇÖ they were overrun by a disease, which had coded itself into the Jove DNA structure causing wide spread depression resulting in death.
The disease is believed to have been caused by the JoveGÇÖs excessive experiments in bioengineering, bought on in their pursuit of perfecting their own gene-seed to extreme degrees.
In the shrouded days era the JoveGÇÖs had ties to different warring factions; some of these power hungry factions namely the Amarr took advantage of the JoveGÇÖs ill fate and deemed it fit to strike out at the severely weakened Jove forces, In an attempt of obtaining control of the JoveGÇÖs superior technology and sacred secrets.
GǣIt is my sacred duty to save your soul from the corruption within hereticGǪGǪ and I will save your soul, even if you die in the process.Gǥ
In their plight the Jove turned to our faction, the renown patriotic Caldari State in their time of dire need. To commission an impenetrable force of highly acclaimed Caldari Chapters known as the GÇÿinner sectGÇÖ to aid the Jove in safeguarding their technology and secrets. We also took an oath to condemn all who threaten the keeping of the Jove secrets, most often resolved in an act of war smiting the perpetrators commonly known as the GÇÿScornGÇÖ from New Eden.
The Jove bestowed the gift of their gene-seed upon the prim arches of the inner sect Chapters, granting them brute strength and inhuman skill transforming them from mere mortals into superhuman killing machines. This gene-seed although watered down over the millennia has been passed down from the Chapter founders onto their devout followers.
GÇ£The Revenant Reavers fear no evil for we are fear incarnate!GÇ¥
The revered founding father Revenant Scourge prim arch of the Revenant Reavers hails from the Civire Caldari bloodline. He has lead his battle brothers (Legionnaires) into countless battles whilst following the hearsay into the far reaches of New Eden in the hunt of the Scorn, for the greater good honouring the Jove thus annihilating the Scorn and all others who oppose us.
Not much is known about the rest of the inner sect chapters except for the Sisters Of Slaughter, who have been known to assist the Revenant Reavers in periods of substantial conflict.
GÇ£Forget your past life, From this day on you are simply a Revenant Reaver-nothing else is of consequence. The Chapter is all that matters.GÇ¥
The Revenant Reavers legionnaires are fearless in the face of death, relentless and stoic on the battlefield. Hunting down the foe of the Jove.
GÇ£You have proved yourselves to be worthy of the status you now hold. Everyone of you standing here, all of whom have declared allegiance to the Revenant Reavers and the Jove, have shown your courage and dedication on the battlefield. Those that stand before me Revenant Scourge force commander and prim arch, I charge you now, go forth and vanquish the foe!GÇ¥
Revered Revenant Scourge; Force Commander and Prim-Arch of the Revenant Reavers.
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Dagger-Two
Villore Joint Task Force
Villore Accords
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Posted - 2013.11.15 07:36:00 -
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Aww don't put yourself down like that (your title). It's hard coming up with backstories and fiction, especially in a game world like EVE. I know you got sone feedback on the original post.
EVE lore is massive, and I mean MASSIVE. It is one of the most fleshed out sci-fi universes out there, and that makes writing within the lore a daunting task since there are lots of boundaries to work within. Many people on the forums can answer lore related questions to help you out with any writing you want to do, and there's even a thread I started on this page for asking just thise types of questions. |
Denak Kalamari
Intaki Liberation Front
Intaki Prosperity Initiative
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Posted - 2013.11.15 08:00:00 -
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It isn't bad writing, or even bad fiction. You write really well, and you obviously have some knowledge of the EVE lore. And as Dagger said, EVE lore is massive and it's not that hard to make contradictions to the lore in your writings. Again, you write really well, but the only problem is that involving Jove in your backstory is difficult to pull off without breaching PF.
My advice is keep writing, read into the EVE lore and ask questions here. We're more than happy to help!
Grahisha of ILF // Writer of Thoughts of a Clone Soldier // Latest entry published 09/11/13
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Jakar Umbra
Militaires-Sans-Frontieres
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Posted - 2013.11.15 11:36:00 -
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Welcome to the fiction section. Do not be disheartened, at least you took the time to post it, and it is an interesting read. If I say anything more I'll just be repeating what Denak and Dagger said so I won't. Just enjoy yourself and keep posting. We're all here to help.
Every now and then I read a comment on the internet and then I realise something very important...
We're boned...
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