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Galm Fae
Guardian Solutions
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Posted - 2013.08.10 06:23:00 -
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Before I begin chronicling my life, I would like to share a quick warning that there are bound to be rampant grammatical errors that I, with time, shall correct. In addition, new segments will be added periodically until completion of this project. I am no scholar, but I hope that through my eyes the empires might see one field of view in a growing universe of immortals. Thank you for your support. Part One: Genesis Chapter One |
Galm Fae
Guardian Solutions
DARKSTAR ARMY
65
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Posted - 2013.08.22 05:34:00 -
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Part two is live. |
Jakar Umbra
Militaires-Sans-Frontieres
201
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Posted - 2013.09.07 23:26:00 -
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Read them. Love them. When's part 3? |
Galm Fae
Guardian Solutions
DARKSTAR ARMY
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Posted - 2013.09.08 03:21:00 -
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SoonGäó.
I need to ask myself what matters. Having long, drawn out chapters or providing high quality snapshots of experiences. Making a long novel like account would take much longer and be filled with a lot of fluff, but taking snapshots makes for melodramatic stories where only the most vital portions of tales are left in, which sometimes feels shallow or lazy to me. I suppose as long as readers don't mind sections only being five pages long I can have another chapter out by tomorrow. I already have most of part 3 done.
Still, thank you ever so much for you support! Seeing a comment makes my day. |
Galm Fae
Guardian Solutions
DARKSTAR ARMY
101
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Posted - 2013.09.16 02:04:00 -
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Part Three is live. |
Aria Gomes
DUST CORE
DARKSTAR ARMY
43
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Posted - 2013.09.16 02:17:00 -
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About to check out your story right now. I read part one a whioe back but never finished up, so I'm gonna read it all over again. |
Aria Gomes
DUST CORE
DARKSTAR ARMY
43
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Posted - 2013.09.16 03:02:00 -
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You're an extremely detailed writer Galm. I love how you describe your fight scenes and the enviroment around you. The fight scenes remind me of Spartacus which I'm a huge fan of. And your club scene was nicely done with the imagery. Not too much, just the right amount to make the reader see it all in their head.
Definitely a fan. Keep it up cause I can't wait for the next update. |
Galm Fae
Guardian Solutions
DARKSTAR ARMY
101
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Posted - 2013.09.16 03:30:00 -
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Always happy to hear someone is enjoying the story, thank you! ^_^ |
Denak Kalamari
Intaki Liberation Front
Intaki Prosperity Initiative
453
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Posted - 2013.09.16 08:33:00 -
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I really like your story too Galm and I agree with Aria, keep up the good work!
But as a mild curiosity, are you going to write anything of your IGS adventures? Those would be an interesting read as well. |
Galm Fae
Guardian Solutions
DARKSTAR ARMY
101
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Posted - 2013.09.16 21:59:00 -
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I would enjoy that a lot actually if people were apt to letting me use their characters.
Though I am getting really excited about the future of Warrior Nine. I just wish I had more time on my hands. |
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Denak Kalamari
Intaki Liberation Front
Intaki Prosperity Initiative
456
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Posted - 2013.09.17 03:50:00 -
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Well, you can certainly use my character for your stories, it would be a great honor in fact |
Galm Fae
Eskola Ergonomics
133
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Posted - 2013.11.03 21:24:00 -
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Part IV is in the works right about now. About time too I suppose. |
True Adamance
PIE Inc.
Praetoria Imperialis Excubitoris
3886
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Posted - 2013.11.03 22:03:00 -
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You've made me rewrite the entirety of Kador's lore. I like how you write and I think I can match you.
"All things were created by the Divine, and so the glory of our faith is inherent to us all"
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Galm Fae
Eskola Ergonomics
133
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Posted - 2013.11.03 22:24:00 -
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True Adamance wrote:You've made me rewrite the entirety of Kador's lore. I like how you write and I think I can match you.
You have no idea how much hearing things like that helps get me in the spirit to actually sit down and finish writing, thank you so much! I look forward to reading what you come up with too!
In the moment when I truly understand my enemy, understand him well enough to defeat him, then I also love him.
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True Adamance
PIE Inc.
Praetoria Imperialis Excubitoris
3887
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Posted - 2013.11.03 22:45:00 -
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Galm Fae wrote:True Adamance wrote:You've made me rewrite the entirety of Kador's lore. I like how you write and I think I can match you. You have no idea how much hearing things like that helps get me in the spirit to actually sit down and finish writing, thank you so much! I look forward to reading what you come up with too!
I used to want to be a professional writer for a very long time.... I still do. But this year personal things actually have stopped me...and somewhat given me a writers block. I think I want to work of Kador's lore as a way to get past that.
And yeah I know how much hearing you work is enjoyed helps the process.... I wish I could post it on the forums but prior to playing Dust I was heavily into the RP and User Created Covenants in Dark Souls, running one myself, as well as organising events and such.... but I was also the almost resident forum chronicler and did summaries of events, chronologies surrounding the events we had. I was always happy to hear people liked the way I was channelling their characters and linking the lore together.
"All things were created by the Divine, and so the glory of our faith is inherent to us all"
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CCP Mintchip
C C P
C C P Alliance
1762
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Posted - 2013.11.12 19:04:00 -
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Waiting patiently for part 4! :D No rush though! (hurry!) hahaha
CCP Mintchip
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True Adamance
PIE Inc.
Praetoria Imperialis Excubitoris
4109
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Posted - 2013.11.12 23:17:00 -
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Finally got through parts 2 and 3 at work during lunch. Damn I like this story.
"All things were created by the Divine, and so the glory of our faith is inherent to us all"
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Galm Fae
Eskola Ergonomics
140
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Posted - 2013.11.13 02:31:00 -
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CCP Mintchip wrote:Waiting patiently for part 4! :D No rush though! (hurry!) hahaha
You would not believe how happy I am that you like it! If this darn schoolwork wasn't in my way I would probably be typing until my fingers started cramping up.
In the moment when I truly understand my enemy, understand him well enough to defeat him, then I also love him.
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Galm Fae
Eskola Ergonomics
144
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Posted - 2013.11.17 09:10:00 -
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I'm really, really sorry about how long this chapter is taking guys. A local service project I've been working kind of put the whole story on ice until this week and chapter four is a comparatively long bit next to one through three. I promise you I'll get it out this week though.
In the moment when I truly understand my enemy, understand him well enough to defeat him, then I also love him.
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Galm Fae
Eskola Ergonomics
145
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Posted - 2013.11.19 08:12:00 -
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Part IV is online.
Hope you all enjoy it!
In the moment when I truly understand my enemy, understand him well enough to defeat him, then I also love him.
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Leithe Askarii
Isuuaya Tactical
Caldari State
39
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Posted - 2013.11.19 09:58:00 -
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Bloody good Galm as usual.
I really liked this one, probably my favourite part so far. |
Galm Fae
Eskola Ergonomics
146
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Posted - 2013.11.20 05:08:00 -
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Leithe Askarii wrote:Bloody good Galm as usual. I really liked this one, probably my favourite part so far.
Thanks! I had to omit a bit of what I wanted to write just to cut down on length, so I'm glad it still turned out alright.
In the moment when I truly understand my enemy, understand him well enough to defeat him, then I also love him.
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Ensar Cael
Svartur Bjorn
29
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Posted - 2013.11.25 04:17:00 -
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*applauds* That was a fine read. You should consider compiling it into a book and looking for a publisher. I look forward to more installments. |
Galm Fae
Eskola Ergonomics
228
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Posted - 2014.01.13 04:23:00 -
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Chapter Two part I is now active. Sorry it's so short, really needed to get a few important characters in before I can post part II.
"On the Leviathan's back will our civilization be carried home and the taint of the Enemy purged from our souls."
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Squagga
The State Protectorate
4
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Posted - 2014.01.19 02:41:00 -
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Just finished chapter two. Pretty awesome stuff. Can't wait to read the rest!
Reloading, the silent killer.
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emm kay
Chatelain Rapid Response
Gallente Federation
52
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Posted - 2014.01.19 19:51:00 -
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part IV
change
"YouGÇÖre with us now. Well take care of you,"
to
"YouGÇÖre with us now. We'll take care of you,"
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You called, sir?
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Galm Fae
Eskola Ergonomics
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Posted - 2014.01.19 20:46:00 -
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Thank you for alerting me about this. I'll make a habit of always giving a like to anyone who helps point out some editing issues that I missed.
"On the Leviathan's back will our civilization be carried home and the taint of the Enemy purged from our souls."
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sir ravenwing
BurgezzE.T.F
Public Disorder.
30
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Posted - 2014.01.20 00:15:00 -
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More............give me more LOL
Oh and certain parts of warrior nine will be in a raven's call for example the part 1 *spoiler* raven will be watching this fight calmly hidden and in lower pristicts behind a corner other places to ((I like putting other story parts in mine, makes it fun))
Also a question how do you put something on google docs?
I do not fear my enemies, I fear the damn blueberries
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Hawk-eye Occultus
Omega Elite Mercs INC.
8
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Posted - 2014.01.20 01:13:00 -
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sir ravenwing wrote:More............give me more LOL
Oh and certain parts of warrior nine will be in a raven's call for example the part 1 *spoiler* raven will be watching this fight calmly hidden and in lower pristicts behind a corner other places to ((I like putting other story parts in mine, makes it fun))
Also a question how do you put something on google docs?
First make a Gmail account (if you don't have one), then go to Google Docs/Drive and sign in.
Also, you might want to ask galm's permission before you include any of his material in your story.
Intelligence without ambition; is a bird without wings...
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Galm Fae
Eskola Ergonomics
237
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Posted - 2014.01.20 06:36:00 -
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sir ravenwing wrote:More............give me more LOL
Oh and certain parts of warrior nine will be in a raven's call for example the part 1 *spoiler* raven will be watching this fight calmly hidden and in lower pristicts behind a corner other places to ((I like putting other story parts in mine, makes it fun))
Also a question how do you put something on google docs?
I can't stop you from writing what you want, but I might not consider it canon to Galm's story just for the fact that everything that happens in Warrior Nine happens for a specific reason and I'm always a bit worried about throwing off the dynamic that I want to fit into the narrative.
So feel free to involve my story if you want to, it would be flattering. Just please try your best to limit the impact on the plot. Warrior Nine is in a lot of ways a story about growing up, so it'd be a good idea to remember that Galm is only a teenager back in YC110. As in, barely 17.
"On the Leviathan's back will our civilization be carried home and the taint of the Enemy purged from our souls."
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Denak Kalamari
Intaki Liberation Front
Intaki Prosperity Initiative
876
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Posted - 2014.01.20 07:01:00 -
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Galm Fae wrote:sir ravenwing wrote:More............give me more LOL
Oh and certain parts of warrior nine will be in a raven's call for example the part 1 *spoiler* raven will be watching this fight calmly hidden and in lower pristicts behind a corner other places to ((I like putting other story parts in mine, makes it fun))
Also a question how do you put something on google docs? I can't stop you from writing what you want, but I might not consider it canon to Galm's story just for the fact that everything that happens in Warrior Nine happens for a specific reason and I'm always a bit worried about throwing off the dynamic that I want to fit into the narrative. So feel free to involve my story if you want to, it would be flattering. Just please try your best to limit the impact on the plot. Warrior Nine is in a lot of ways a story about growing up, so it'd be a good idea to remember that Galm is only a teenager back in YC110. As in, barely 17.
So, right now Galm would be 22 to 23 years old? I learn something new every day!
Anyway, I sent you a mail in-game about a thing I want to discuss Galm. Since I can't really call you about it any other way, I'll poke you here.
Grahisha of ILF // Writer of Thoughts of a Clone Soldier // Latest entry published Jan. 14th
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True Adamance
Kameira Lodge
Amarr Empire
5935
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Posted - 2014.01.20 07:06:00 -
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Hmmmm that make me older than Galm.
"My Faith in you is absolute; my sword is Yours, My God, and Your will guides me now and for all eternity."
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Galm Fae
Eskola Ergonomics
237
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Posted - 2014.01.20 07:10:00 -
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Denak Kalamari wrote:Galm Fae wrote:sir ravenwing wrote:More............give me more LOL
Oh and certain parts of warrior nine will be in a raven's call for example the part 1 *spoiler* raven will be watching this fight calmly hidden and in lower pristicts behind a corner other places to ((I like putting other story parts in mine, makes it fun))
Also a question how do you put something on google docs? I can't stop you from writing what you want, but I might not consider it canon to Galm's story just for the fact that everything that happens in Warrior Nine happens for a specific reason and I'm always a bit worried about throwing off the dynamic that I want to fit into the narrative. So feel free to involve my story if you want to, it would be flattering. Just please try your best to limit the impact on the plot. Warrior Nine is in a lot of ways a story about growing up, so it'd be a good idea to remember that Galm is only a teenager back in YC110. As in, barely 17. So, right now Galm would be 22 to 23 years old? I learn something new every day! Anyway, I sent you a mail in-game about a thing I want to discuss Galm. Since I can't really call you about it any other way, I'll poke you here.
Yeah. That's actually a pivotal part of his character that I'd really like to build on. I know most people think Galm acts like a moody teenager but that's because he pretty much is STILL a teenager compared to most other people. His clones are aged slightly to full maturity, but he still never mentally matured. Especially since his childhood was kind of taken from him.
I might not be able to speak on my DUST account at the moment, so consider sending the message to my EVE character Morgan Wulver if you want to talk OOC. Otherwise I will make sure to check that out as soon as possible on Playstation.
"On the Leviathan's back will our civilization be carried home and the taint of the Enemy purged from our souls."
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Denak Kalamari
Intaki Liberation Front
Intaki Prosperity Initiative
878
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Posted - 2014.01.20 07:18:00 -
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Galm Fae wrote:Yeah. That's actually a pivotal part of his character that I'd really like to build on. I know most people think Galm acts like a moody teenager but that's because he pretty much is STILL a teenager compared to most other people. His clones are aged slightly to full maturity, but he still never mentally matured. Especially since his childhood was kind of taken from him.
I might not be able to speak on my DUST account at the moment, so consider sending the message to my EVE character Morgan Wulver if you want to talk OOC. Otherwise I will make sure to check that out as soon as possible on Playstation.
Alright, sent a mail to your EVE character now. Hopefully we can get this started quick!
Grahisha of ILF // Writer of Thoughts of a Clone Soldier // Latest entry published Jan. 14th
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Hawk-eye Occultus
Omega Elite Mercs INC.
12
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Posted - 2014.01.21 22:29:00 -
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Love it! Beautifully written.
It's the kind of story that gives me a luscious hunger for more...
Intelligence without ambition; is a bird without wings...
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Galm Fae
Eskola Ergonomics
240
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Posted - 2014.01.22 02:10:00 -
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Hawk-eye Occultus wrote:Love it! Beautifully written.
It's the kind of story that gives me a luscious hunger for more...
I've got finals all these week, but you can believe that I want to make some serious progress this weekend.
I'm so glad you enjoy it!
"On the Leviathan's back will our civilization be carried home and the taint of the Enemy purged from our souls."
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Galm Fae
Eskola Ergonomics
240
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Posted - 2014.01.24 05:57:00 -
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As a bit of a spoiler I'd like you all who don't know to know that Morgan is my current EVE character. He's a few years older now than in Warrior Nine, and you can bet he didn't have those scars back in YC110.
CLICK FOR SEXINESS AND ROBOTIC PARTS!
"On the Leviathan's back will our civilization be carried home and the taint of the Enemy purged from our souls."
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Hawk-eye Occultus
Omega Elite Mercs INC.
14
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Posted - 2014.01.24 11:15:00 -
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Galm Fae wrote:As a bit of a spoiler I'd like you all who don't know to know that Morgan is my current EVE character. He's a few years older now than in Warrior Nine, and you can bet he didn't have those scars back in YC110. CLICK FOR SEXINESS AND ROBOTIC PARTS!
Mmm... Yeah... So sexy.
Intelligence without ambition; is a bird without wings...
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Denak Kalamari
Intaki Liberation Front
Intaki Prosperity Initiative
907
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Posted - 2014.01.24 11:23:00 -
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Hawk-eye Occultus wrote:Galm Fae wrote:As a bit of a spoiler I'd like you all who don't know to know that Morgan is my current EVE character. He's a few years older now than in Warrior Nine, and you can bet he didn't have those scars back in YC110. CLICK FOR SEXINESS AND ROBOTIC PARTS! Mmm... Yeah... So sexy.
Pfffffft, mine is way better.
Now with 20% more scarring and shadows!
Grahisha of ILF // Writer of Thoughts of a Clone Soldier // Latest entry published Jan. 14th
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Hawk-eye Occultus
Omega Elite Mercs INC.
14
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Posted - 2014.01.24 11:53:00 -
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Denak Kalamari wrote:Hawk-eye Occultus wrote:Galm Fae wrote:As a bit of a spoiler I'd like you all who don't know to know that Morgan is my current EVE character. He's a few years older now than in Warrior Nine, and you can bet he didn't have those scars back in YC110. CLICK FOR SEXINESS AND ROBOTIC PARTS! Mmm... Yeah... So sexy. Pfffffft, mine is way better.Now with 20% more scarring and shadows!
Pah! Your scarring pales in comparison. I didn't even need to seek therapy.
Although it does make me wonder how creepy Morgan would be with 20% more shadow...
Intelligence without ambition; is a bird without wings...
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emm kay
Federal State Marines
Canis Eliminatus Operatives
75
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Posted - 2014.04.07 18:09:00 -
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any chance this is still being authored?
I love it thus far!
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You called, sir?
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Galm Fae
Eskola Ergonomics
264
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Posted - 2014.04.08 03:16:00 -
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emm kay wrote:any chance this is still being authored?
I love it thus far!
Glad you like it! Life has kept me busy, but I have currently decided that the rest of Construct will be written in a different format than every other chapter so far. I am writing a crossover between Warrior Nine and Denak's own history and weaving them together to try and form a story comprised of several large pieces. The first should be out soon.
"On the Leviathan's back will our civilization be carried home and the taint of the Enemy purged from our souls."
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