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921. Crucible (Dust 514 Fiction) - in DUST 514 Fiction [original thread]
Reserved
- by True Adamance - at 2013.07.30 03:08:00
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922. Crucible (Dust 514 Fiction) - in DUST 514 Fiction [original thread]
Reserved
- by True Adamance - at 2013.07.30 03:07:00
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923. Crucible (Dust 514 Fiction) - in DUST 514 Fiction [original thread]
Truth As the rock lizard crested the dune it let out a long ghostly howl across the desert, it echoes penetrating miles of barren rocky out cropping and wind blasted desert. Below it the featureless dunes fell away into the deep craggy valley, ad...
- by True Adamance - at 2013.07.30 03:06:00
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924. Skymother- Act one: Conversion - in DUST 514 Fiction [original thread]
Hunter Junko wrote: True Adamance wrote: Good stuff.... just one niggling this as an lore fanatic..... as much as unholy light fits better in this sentence.... " A glowing flash of unholy light rained down, blinding his vision, sending his ...
- by True Adamance - at 2013.07.13 23:30:00
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925. Skymother- Act one: Conversion - in DUST 514 Fiction [original thread]
Good stuff.... just one niggling this as an lore fanatic..... as much as unholy light fits better in this sentence.... " A glowing flash of unholy light rained down, blinding his vision, sending his body flying out of the hill. " .... if the ama...
- by True Adamance - at 2013.07.13 01:09:00
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926. Crucible (Dust 514 Fiction) - in DUST 514 Fiction [original thread]
Reserved for Part II
- by True Adamance - at 2013.07.10 22:37:00
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927. Crucible (Dust 514 Fiction) - in DUST 514 Fiction [original thread]
Daedric Lothar wrote: I like it, It feels visceral, instinctual and emotional. In places the story feels clipped, but I still like it. Clipped how I would like to expand on that?
- by True Adamance - at 2013.07.10 20:45:00
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928. Crucible (Dust 514 Fiction) - in DUST 514 Fiction [original thread]
Just moving this into the Fiction Section, I'll try to update this will the continued story of Kador as I go along.
- by True Adamance - at 2013.07.04 23:08:00
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929. Crucible (Dust 514 Fiction) - in DUST 514 Fiction [original thread]
Explosions The thought passed through his head only a second before a red hot piece of shrapnel scored a bloody line across his face. The wound stung painfully, and with every beat his heart pumped more blood from the wound which soon got into his...
- by True Adamance - at 2013.07.04 23:06:00
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930. Crucible (Dust 514 Fiction) - in DUST 514 Fiction [original thread]
The first thing he thought he noticed was that his section of the over pass had not collapsed, and for that he thanked the Empress and God himself. The second thing was that whenever he opened his mouth no words came out. Perhaps it was the thic...
- by True Adamance - at 2013.07.04 23:06:00
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931. Crucible (Dust 514 Fiction) - in DUST 514 Fiction [original thread]
The wind howled beneath the eaves of the great overpass, a number of guttering fires down the line winked out, extinguished not by the sudden gust but the oppressive pall of tension. The silence of the abandoned industrial zone was permeated by t...
- by True Adamance - at 2013.07.04 23:05:00
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